FAN FIC: The Avengers Help/Opinions

FAN FIC: The Avengers Help/Opinions

Check out my short Avengers story. It isn't finished, because I need your help & opinions. To find out exactly what, check it out!

By DCMarvelFreshman - Feb 05, 2010 01:02 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

If you don't know by now, I have been working on my own Avengers story. It is based on the confirmed info for the actual 2012 film, and a little made up by me.

I had a full story, but I have doubts about the direction I could go with the main characters: Nick Fury, Steve Rogers, Tony Stark, Thor, and Bruce Banner.

INTRODUCTION
SHIELD find Captain America's body with the new products from Stark Industries. After SHIELD finds the body, they take it as a sign to reopen the Super Soldier Program, as a Sub-Initiative for the Avenger Initiative. The Avenger Initiative was government official, but was unstable.

Before SHIELD can reopen the Super Soldier Program, they must recieve approval from the government, and an investor. The last two attempts at the serum was privatly done by the military, both times involving General Ross. Both also failing, creating a fugitive of Bruce Banner as Hulk. And a prisoner of Emil Blonsky as Abomination.

THE PRESENTATION
Director of SHIELD, Nick Fury is giving the presentation to reopen the SSP, to the government. In his presentation he explains why the program is needed for todays society. The SHIELD members attending the presentation alongside Fury are: Deputy director of SHIELD, Maria Hill & Agent Coulson. General Ross, quiet, is also attending.

RICK JONES
In the beginning of the presentation, a mysterious guy claiming to be a Rick Jones, a Gamma Radiation scientist, interupts. (Secretly, this is Loki in disguise) His personality is very trippy. He presents himself as a smart mouth, know it all type of character. And when Nick Fury gives a small description of Thor, Rick Jones(Loki), unable to control himself, blurts out how he truly feels about Thor.

When Hulk & Abomination was brought up, Rick(Loki), would always ask questions he had no right to know, because they were government covered. (He wants to use the Hulk to go after Thor.) Secretly he didn't need answers because he was reading everyone's minds. (But we don't know this until the middle of the film)

Soon, after the government approves SHIELD at recreating the Super Soldier Serum, Rick Jones(loki) realizes he must get in good terms, with SHIELD, to get close to Thor, without Thor figuring him out. So he uses the lie of being a scientist of Gamma Radiation, to his advantage, and offers himself to SHIELD to help recreate the serum



The way I planned on introducing Tony Stark & Thor, is by Nick Fury going to see them. He would go to Tony to get investment in the Super Soldier Program, and discuss Captain America. And he would go to Thor to do the same, besides getting investment. What I need help with is:

-What could Tony & Thor be doing, when Nick Fury goes to meet them?

-Should it be as Iron Man or Tony Stark, that Nick goes to see?

-When Loki is claiming to be Rick Jones, should it be as the same actor, who portrays Loki in Thor 2011 dressed as a human, or should it be another actor overall?



MarvelFreshman: What I have above so far, is the direction I want to start off. I know what I want to do with Hulk & Cap. I think you can figure out both, but What do you think?
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