Read: The Man Without Fear!...the entire script.

It'll take me a day or two. Trying not to spoil the ending for myself, now.

It is a very good origin story, I wouldn't mind if the new film is like that. It sticks to the original, and it looks like an amusing and entertaining film, and doesn't fall in the action or character development scenes ;)

I'm not a big fan, I'm sorry I know this must've taken a lot of work and I commend you for that. However I don't feel like you ever nailed truly nailed the characters voices. Matt Murdock seems more like Peter Parkers wisecracking, Foggy seems nothing more than a comic relief character, who you keep going to the fact that he's a little overweight as the source of the jokes. Also I felt like at least the first half of this story doesn't do enough to set it apart from the first movie, let alone surpass it in quality. Almost every scene you wrote followed the same general arc as was already established in the first movie that was produced without bringing anything new to the table. I hate to be so critical, because as I stated earlier I appreciate the immense amount of work you put into this...but if you want to get better just saying "good job" won't help you at all. Only constructive criticism will. If you have any further questions I'd be more than happy to answer them and I hope that you're able to get picked up by Marvel. With some work I think you could be.

While I appreciate that this is an origin story, I feel like too much time was given to elements we had already seen in the previous movie. Not that they weren't important but I would've liked to see more of Stick than you presented, more of the journey taking him from a blind boxer's son to the Man Without Fear. Able to take out a half dozen ninja's without breaking a sweat. In my opinion less focus on before he got his powers, and even more focus given to his development of his radar sense and abilities would've been a good idea. I see the Man without Fear similarities but the tone of your Matt Murdock being light hearted etc. to me doesn't fit with the revenge motivated reason you made him eventually become Daredevil. I feel that this character much like batman never really found his footing until Frank Miller took him into darker territory and made him a more tormented character. If we were to see an adaptation of the 60's version of Batman we'd cry foul as well because honestly the most similar to that tone movie that was ever created was Batman and Robin...which we know how that worked out. That said I really liked the Karen Page aspect of your film and I thought you wrote her quite well. And as I posted on your second script, I felt that that one was much stronger. As I said you have skill don't take my critiques as a put down of what you wrote or the story you told. I'm just trying to help another passionate Daredevil fan write the best story he can. I like a lot of what you've done and I'm excited to see the final part of the trilogy, though I'm a little disappointed that with Bullseye dead Karen will not be killed by him. A defining character moment for all those involved, however I understand why you took it the direction you did.

Love this so much