Fan-Fic: The Shadow of the Bat

Fan-Fic: The Shadow of the Bat

This is my version of how to do the third Batman film. Its short because I abandoned it months ago and Im not planning on continuing because im doing other fan projects. Enjoy everyone

By OriginalPhysco - Mar 07, 2010 09:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Message to reader;
This fan-made story takes place as the third movie; following from Batman Begins and the Dark Knight. The sequel to Batman Begins is the greatest Batman movie of all time but there were two things wrong. Batman was getting a little sloppy. He wasn’t using stealth and the baddies always knew he was there. He just walked in battle; not trying to sneak as a ninja like he did in Batman Begins. He looked more human than he did in Batman Begins. Take when he uses his grappler for example. In batman Begins, he put it on his belt and used it to look like he was flying without using the cape. In the Dark Knight, he was jus using it with his hand and not even try to look like he was flying. Looked like a normal guy holding the grappler. The second mistake was the death of Two Face/Harvey Dent. He wasn’t supposed to die but they did it in a way that was kind of a good move. They made it better off for him to be dead. Any good person could see that. They couldn’t let The Joker win anyway. But there still might be a tiny chance that he survives because we all seen the coin flip on heads. Or it might be for Gordon to survive. If it was for Gordon to survive, then Batman wouldn’t have to jump in the way and kill Two Face. So the way they did it, you can’t be mad kind of, lol. Hope you enjoy :)

Shadow of the Bat

Now that Batman is a fugitive, it is harder for him to fight against corruption. He adopts a young boy and trains him to help protect Gotham city. Batman must use his detective skills to figure out riddles from a villain known as The Riddler that was trained by the Joker years ago. When most dangerous criminal master mind known as The Joker escapes from Arkham Asylum with a love interest, things get even worse for the whole city. That isn’t the only thing Batman has to deal with. A scientist that is a huge Batman fan is accidentally turned into a giant bat like creature from a failed riddle. Blaming Batman and The Joker for his condition, he sets out to murder them.

The movie starts with The Joker in Arkham Asylum. He is strapped in a stray jacket. He has restraints on his neck and legs that are connected to the wall. He says, “They think they’ve won; ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha.” A nurse comes in and says that it is sad what they do to him.
The nurse is very beautiful. Most likely she is the most beautiful girl in the movie. After she gives him his medicine, she unlocks him. She then says, “Um, hi Mr. Joker. My name is Harleen Quinzel.
Just telling you that if you ever need me. A package came in the mail for you.” She checks her watch and says that the medicine should have kicked in. Harleen then unwraps the stray jacket; looking into his eyes with loving affection. When she leaves in a sexy way, The Joker looks in his package.
He laughs when he opens the box. He then yells, “Harleen, I need you.” Harleen comes running in and The Joker grabs her by the neck. The Joker comes out his cell holding a gun to her head. The cops see this on this on the security camera.
They come running to him and say, “What do you want? You aint escaping you clown.” The Joker says, “Oh no. I don’t want to escape yet. I just wanted to have some fun; ha, ha, ha, hah.” Harley grabs The Joker’s pants and whispers in a sexy voice, “Oh please Mr. J, Please don’t kill me. I’ve been a very naughty girl but I don’t wanna die.
Can you punish me another way?” The Joker starts laughing and as he clicks the gun, she closes her eyes. He says that it’s going to be quick and funny. He shoots the gun and out comes party string. She faints and he drops her. The security tackles him and brings him back to his cell.
The Joker laughs and says, “That was so fun. Did you guys see your faces? Y’all were like “is he really going to shoot her;” ha, ha, ha, ha, he, ho, ha.” The movie shifts to a woman walking in a store. Batman is across the street on top of a building. He then see’s a man walking behind her.
Batman says in his head, “This man is stalking this woman. The way he walks behind means that she is on his mind. He looks predatory. The way he holds one hand in his pocket; looks like he’s holding something. Now he stops like he doesn’t really want to do it and gets that serious look on his face.
He goes in the store like he has no choice. He is working for someone and I’m going to find out whom.” When the store door opens, the guy turns around nervously and doesn’t see anything. He turns back to finish the job.
He pulls the gun out and before she screams, Batman comes from the ceiling and snatches him. Batman flies out the store and flies on a building with him. He drops him and asks who he is working for. The guy says, “Oh, please no. I’ll tell you everything. Just don’t hurt me.
I work for a guy named Rafael Satini. He’s the new crime boss. There’s even a rumor that he’s working for someone; someone worse. Girl finds out that he whacked her uncle and she dumps him hard; in front of everyone. He tells me to kill her.
Please let me go.” The police get to the store and batman drops him on a cop car. The cops look up and don’t see anything. While Batman is looking down at them, he gets a call from Commissioner Gordon. He says, “Batman, I think you need to come and take a look at this.
I never saw anything like this in my life or career.” When Gordon tells him the location, Batman says that he is on his way. At this very beautiful home, Gordon orders his men to wait outside the house. When Gordon reenters the house, you see the inside is way different that the outside.
There is blood and dead bodies everywhere; bodies coming out the wall; dishes everywhere; there’s newspapers tapped to the wall that looks to be written and colored on; question marks written in blood. The question marks were written on the ceiling, walls and floor. When Gordon turns around, Batman is right behind him. Batman says, “Do you have any leads of who this maniac might be.” Gordon tells him no.
Batman reads the words written on the wall. It says, “Riddle me this; riddle me that. Why didn’t u find out that WBUARNEECY is the identity of the bat?” All of Sudden, Gordon gets knocked out. A cop wakes him up and he sees the jumbled words are gone.
The press asks what happened to the rest of the riddle. Gordon says, “Batman knocked me out before I could read it and my guess is that he got rid of the words.” The camera shows a dead guy with a paint brush in his body. The reporters say, “Do you think this has to do with the rumors about the guy wit an “S” on his chest? The one that can leap tall buildings in a single bound.”
Gordon says no and that he doesn’t think he exists. The movie shifts to Bruce Wayne and Alfred watching the news. Alfred says, “Master Wayne, how are you supposed to be a hero when you constantly keep making them think of you as a villain? It was a good thing you did for mister Dent but that's enough.
Batman can only take so much. You need to save yourself from turning into an enemy. Do you hear me?” Bruce says, “You’re not Batman. You don’t go out every night beating up criminals. You don’t have to go through the pain I do to protect Gotham.
You’re just the butler.” Alfred turns Bruce’s chair around and slaps him in the face. As Bruce looks surprised, Alfred says, “But I know when a man is heading for greet doom. I’m not just the Butler Master Wayne. Have you forgotten who’s been taking care of you since your parents died?”


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OriginalPhysco
OriginalPhysco - 3/7/2010, 9:28 PM
One of my ideas was for Rafael Satini to work for the Penguin. Yea, he wasnt to be seen til the last scene of the movie. Another one of my ideas was for Gordan to have already have a sheet with the jumbled words and finds out who batman is at the end. Oh and I didnt know rather to make Riddler as the trainer or as the protege. Wats a more good idea to u?
Vafrous
Vafrous - 3/8/2010, 4:27 AM
I like it...But a giant bat? Nolan is about realism...
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 3/8/2010, 11:33 AM
Promorus @ Great man, hey i titled my BATS 3 as SHADOW OF THE BAT too, very cool!

Do you remember the comic? Loved that comic!

I like man, but wheres DEADSHOT, DEATHSTROKE hunting BATS on-the-run and wheres BLACK MASK (in the background)???

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