H20 Superman | Episode 1 "Krypton | By Mickeus | A H20 World Series

H20 Superman | Episode 1 "Krypton | By Mickeus | A H20 World Series

Superman comes bursting into the world of H20 World.
His first adventure begins in this exciting first chapter!

By DCMickeus - Apr 17, 2016 11:04 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

H20 SUPERMAN EPISODE 1 "KRYPTON"
Superman has years into fighting for Metropolis, until one day a mysterious new Kryptonian pod comes to Earth, and Superman finds out it's from a family of evil Kryptonian survivors called The Seven Deadly Sins.

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kong
kong - 4/17/2016, 12:48 PM
YES!!! HE GOT SOFTWARE!!!!
kong
kong - 4/17/2016, 3:13 PM
Pretty good but some glaring problems.
1) Why are there no government officials at the site of the pod.
2) How did they take a helicopter from Metropolis to Alabama.
3) Where did Lita come from, does she just appear?
4) (and this is more of a personal preference thing) why limit Superman to Metropolis. If he's gonna only protect one city, why is his base halfway across the world in the arctic. I think his monitor should track major events around the world. Limiting Superman to one city is like putting the entire NYPD in patrol in Times Square instead of throughout all the boroughs and the rest of Manhattan.

Some of the dialogue is sketchy, and you have a tendency to explain things through comparison. Take the time to describe something instead of just saying "It's like alien" or "He's like C3-PO".

Pretty good, interested in where this is going and how the Apokolips connection ties with Lust and Lita.
TheRedRobin
TheRedRobin - 4/22/2016, 2:11 PM
Pretty great in my opinion! I hope there is a lot of Jimmy in this! Is this a younger Superman?
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