Robin - Official Teaser (Brand New Fan Series Focusing on Jason Todd)

Hey, man. I'll offer critiques and compliments.

CRITIQUES
- The Robin costume is pretty bland. The trailer gives off a grungy, gritty sort of feel, so readapting the costume to fit the aesthetic would help it be less jarring.
- The Riddler's voice is too Jigsaw. I don't know, man. It fits with the direction you're taking this, but next to that cartoonish Robin, it just feels out of place.
- Those budget fonts though. Could've been spiced up or stylized just a touch.
- The dialogue could certainly use a bit of work. Maybe spruce it up with some more abstract wordplay. Colorful language is key to making your work stand out.

COMPLIMENTS
- Good cinematography/lighting for a low-budget production.
- Perfectly fine editing.
- Good music choice for what I think this trailer was trying to accomplish.

All in all, for a homemade effort, it's fine! Hopefully the final product is a success. As an aspiring filmmaker myself, I'm 100% supportive here! And hey, after this, why not an original product? Cheers!

~Tom