The In-Humans

In the future, I will post a full screenplay for a film I would like to create myself called THE IN-HUMANS. Please tell me your thoughts on the story I am planning, and please make suggestions for me to make it better. This is not based on any comic or graphic novel. Thanks in advance for your hep

By DannRamm113 - May 04, 2013 12:05 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The In-Human
Plot
In Dann Aier’s world, everything is perfect. He is handsome, in top physical shape, and has the cleanest medical records. This attracts a secret sector in the government, Section IH113’s attention. The goal of Section IH113 is to hunt down and capture In-Humans, which are humans born with natural battle reflexes, potential, and brain waves, basically, natural born killing machines. However, Dann doesn't find out until after Section IH113 sends hunters after him, led by the most dangerous hunter, Theodore Barkly.
Protagonist
Dann Aier- A teenage In-Human. He has a strong disliking of himself after finding out what he is, as he was always taught that IH’s (In-Humans) were born evil. However, after realizing this to be propaganda, he starts to embrace the power. His most developed ability is with a staff.
Antagonist
Theodore Barkly- A Section IH113 Hunter, and the most dangerous at that. He is an unregistered IH, and claims to have gained his abilities naturally. Unlike Dann, who struggles with his power, Theodore embraces the evil side of his abilities, killing those who go against him. He is mainly against Dann because he is a mercenary. His most developed ability is with a sniper rifle.
In-Humans and Their Powers
Besides reflexes, IH’s have the natural ability to heal bodily wounds and regain adrenaline. Because of their healing powers, their outward appearance is of the most handsome people ever just naturally. Each IH has a developed ability, also known as a SA (Special Attack), such as marksmanship, staff fighting, skills with blades etc. Other powers include the natural ability to fight. Main fighting abilities stem from the Ancient Roman and Greek soldiers. Although they have healing abilities, they can be killed. No known cause of how they came into existence (not a heredity trait though).

Please share your thought on my idea, or criticisms!! Thank You.

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DannRamm113
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