THOR PART 3 [MY VERSION]

THOR PART 3 [MY VERSION]

Thor must face many threats. And find out the true about Balder´s true lineage. With some friendly help , he must defeat some deadly foes. The end is near.

By comics56 - Aug 21, 2010 03:08 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The first act of Thor when he gets to Central Park is the throw his hammer him in a group of dark elves stained with blood. Some elves die, others depart. Loki watches Thor fight the elfs.

THOR: What are you doing here?

The dark elves throw daggers and arrows at Thor. An arms race is launched by bombing SHIELD.Thor quickly deflects the bullets, which do not seem to affect the Elves. Thor stands one of the elves high in the clouds. The dark elf's scared. Thor is angry.

Thor: Loki brought them here? ANSWER ME!

Dark Elf: He promised us the blood of the princes of Asgard. The biological children of Odin.

THOR: The only biological son of Odin is me! He fooled you all!

Dark Elf: For the story told to us ... thy father deceived.

Thor is paralyzed by the words of the elf. He did not want to believe that he lied to Odin. But suddenly everything starts making sense. He understands why Odin gave a seat on the throne at Balder. Thor is feeling betrayed and becomes more furious. He throws the Dark Elf with all his forces to the ground.

THOR: Still ...

Thor flies to the multitude of nefarious creatures. He attacks the monster with his hammer. He cashes his anger on the creatures. He raises his hammer to the sky in lightning strikes various creatures.



The SHIELD just evacuate the Central Park. Several bodies of civilians and creatures can be seen on walks. Clint Barton aiming at the head of an ogre and hits. Thor is happy to fight the same side of Cint. The two are fighting hard against various creatures. Thor finds love a bucket trunk. The creatures feel threatened and try to return to the Nine Kingdoms. The passage is fechda. The creatures are, moments later, killed by agents of SHIELD.

THOR: Destroy those bodies! They can become acidic after a few minutes.

Thor flies way up in New Mexico. He takes in his arms Balder fainted. When he reaches the SHIELD´s base is surprised by Nicholas Fury. Phil Coulson takes Balder to the special hospital. Thor remains in a wing of interrogation with Donald Blake and Nick Fury.

THOR: You know what this was all your fault? KNOWS IT!?

NICK: Calm down! It's okay now!

THOR: You caused the death of many!

NICK: That's not unusually so in my job.

THOR: Humans are dead!

NICK: He would die sooner or later.

Donald: We want to know if you can tell us who is behind this.

THOR: I know ... my brother ...

NICK: He's a hell of a m!&$#%f@#$%@! I want his head!

THOR: This is no longer my problem! You brought this on yourself.

NICK: He is an asgardian!

THOR: I have nothing to do with what comes from Asgard. Not anymore!

Donald: You have to help us!

THOR: I don´t. I don´t anything to do with Asgard!

Phil Coulson enters the room. Thor rises and go on Nick Fury direction. Thor looks angry to Fury. Donald makes a signal to Phil Coulson. Phil stops Thor with his arm nicely.

PHIL: Your friend is dead!

THOR: Balder…?

PHIL: I´m sorry.

THOR: This is your fault!

NICK: You´ll help us now?

THOR: No! I just want to take Jane out of here!

Thor leaves the room. He see Jane outside. She run to hug him. Thor is very happy to see that Jane is safe. Thor grab Jane´s hand. They both walk away from SHIELD´s base. Nick Fury walk to the special hospital. He sees Balder waking up from on the bed. Nick gives Balder a paperwork.

SIX MONTHS LATER

Thos and Jane Foster are outside a little hotel. They´re hugging. Jane looks passionate to Thor. They kiss.
Loki watch everything in his throne. It isn´t explained how he get the throne or it that is actually Odin´s throne.



THOR: Do you really have to go?

JANE: I still a nurse.

THOR: So I have to go back to the books.

JANE: I told you that being a human was hard.

THOR: I can take it.

JANE: Good bye!

Jane kiss Thor lightly on the lips. Thor kiss her passionately. They heard a big noise. A shining light hits the forest behind the hotel. Thor grabs his hammer and flies to the forest. He see a big crater and four Asgardians in it.

THOR: I can´t believe!

Thor is surprised to see The Warrior Three and Sif in that crater. Thor runs to them. Volstagg hugs Thor. Fandral and Hogun shake his hands. Sif ignores Thor.



THOR: What you do in here?

FANDRAL: We had to run.

THOR: Run from what?

FANDRAL: Thy brother mass destruction.

THOR: Loki…?

HOGUN: Odin is missed and he has became the king.

THOR: I won´t believe! That bastard!

FANDRAL: We didn´t also. But he has toke over the throne.

THOR: This is why he has killed Balder.

FANDRAL: And why he has made you being banished.

THOR: This was what Fenris has talked about.

HOGUN: There´s nothing we can do.

THOR: I may know some guys that do.

Thor take the Warriors Three and Sif to the hotel. Janes hugs Thor and they kiss. Sif is jealous and angry but nothing can ruin the chance of free Asgard from Loki´s hands.

THOR: Those are my allies from Asgard. Volstagg ,Fandral, Hogun and Sif.

JANE: This is Sif.

Jane gets close from Sif. The shake hands. Jane doesn´t feel angry or anything for Sif. But Sif feels betrayed by Thor.

JANE: Nice to meet you.

SIF: Shall I say the same.

JANE: What brings you here?

FANDRAL: We had to run of Asgard.

THOR: I´ll have to ask for SHIELD´s help.

JANE: Are you sure?

THOR: I can´t let my stepmother be one of Loki´s victims.

JANE: I have Blake´s phone if you need.

THOR: Give him a call.

Some hours later, Phil Coulson, Donald Blake and Clint Barton arrive at the hotel. Volstagg IS eating a turkey on the dinner table. Fandral and Hogun are both sit in the dinner table watching Volstagg destroying the turkey as a hungry bear. Sif is looking herself at the mirror. Jane gives Phil and Clint a cup of tea. Thos is impatient, he wants to kill Loki fast as he can.

PHIL: What you want us to do?

THOR: I want you to go to Asgard!

PHIL: You could´ve helped us six months ago!

THOR: You don´t understand! He will send troops to Earth!

PHIL: We can protect ourselves!

THOR: Not only Frost Giants and Dark Elves! He will send you Fire Demons and Trolls.

PHIL: How can we get there?

THOR: You can´t. But you can bring Loki here.

PHIL: How?

THOR: Giving him something he wants.

PHIL: That would be…?

THOR: My dead body.

Jane and Sif are both surprised. Donald Blake is angry, he doesn´t want to give up Thor before he can study him. Phil is very unemotional. Clint make Thor´s head a target with his bow and arrow.

CLINT: We can do this now.

JANE: You can´t do that!

SIF: Your life is to worthy to be killed!

PHIL: This won´t be needed. Can we put his brother as the new king?

THOR: I was banished!

PHIL: I mean the another son of Odin.

THOR: He was killed.

PHIL: No. He wasn’t.

THOR: YOU TRICKED ME?!

PHIL: You didn´t want to give us answers. We needed someone else to do it.

THOR: I shouldn´t give you a call.

JANE: Stop it! You did, so now, explain them how to go to Asgard!

THOR: What?!

JANE: You say that you don´t want anything to do with Asgard, but is everything you´ve been talking about during this six months.

THOR: You´re right. Mr Coulson…

PHIL: Yes…

THOR: You need a electro-magnetic machine. A strong one.

PHIL: One of Stark´s work can help us.

CLINT: You mean the Ark Reactor?

PHIL: Mister Fury has acess to a upgraded version.

THOR: What is that machine you are talking about?

CLINT: Is a ultra-powerful electro-magnetic reactor.

THOR: This may open the rainbow bridge.

PHIL: In two days it will be done.

THOR: But I don´t want any Asgardian dying.

PHIL: We´ll do what we can.

TWO DAYS LATER

Thor and The Warriors Three are in front of the Arc Reactor Platform. Clint Barton is observing from a safe distance. Phil Coulson arrives with Balder. Balder seems happy to see Sif. They hug. Jane Foster is worried for Thor. Phil Coulson starts the Platform. Thor use his hammer electric energy.



THOR: Get ready!

A giant rainbow bridge is created by the platform. Before Balder can use the bridge to go to Asgard. A giant lighting hits him. Loki lands and destroys the platform. He stand in front of Thor.



LOKI: You actually thing I would let a bastard take over the throne?!

THOR: This is not your decision!

LOKI: Our father tricked us!

THOR: You have will not rule Asgard!

LOKI: This isn´t you to choose!

Loki raises his hand. A gigantic explosion take Loki and Thor out of Midgard. They are now in Jotunheim. Lots of giants are around them. Loki smile and the Giants attack Thor. Utgard-Loki leads the attack. He shoots a rock in Thor. Thor breaks the rock with his hammer. Thor hits Utgard-Loki with his hammer.

UTGARD-LOKI: You shall die!

Utgard-Loki tries to smash Thor with his fists. Thor flies and throws his hammer in the giant leader. The another giants attack Thor. A lighting kills all the other giants. But this lighting wasn´t shoot by Thor´s hammer.

THOR: What?!

LOKI: Next fun place!

Thor and Loki are teleported to the Fire Demons home. They´re now in Muspelheim. Thor flies for don´t be killed in the magma. Loki also flies. Thor hits Loki with his hammer. Loki creates a giant magma monster. Thor attacks the monster with a tornado created by his hammer. Magma flies everywhere.

LOKI: I can´t play fare!

Loki teleports themselves to Hel. In there, some skeletons attack them both. Thor destroy the skeletons with his hammer and protect Loki from them. A fire tiger attacks them both. Hela appears in front of them. Thor is surprised to see Hela. Loki is happy to see that his daughter honored them with her presence. Hela smile when she see Thor.



HELA: Your soul shall be mine!

THOR: I won´t give up so easily!

HELA: It´s not a fight question. You´re in my realm!

LOKI: Keep him…

Thor raises his hammer to fight Hela. A flame hits Hela´s body and gives her a suit of armor. A silver and red armor. A sword is on her hand as well. They start to fight. Loki teleports himself to Midgard, while the two are fighting. Thor hits Hela several time with his hammer. After a few minutes, Hela see that her realm is being destroyed by the fight. Hela hits Thor with a flame blast. Thor see himself back to Midgard. Loki has hurt The Warriors Three and Phil Coulson. He is holding Clint Barton by his throat. Sif is protecting Jane from a giant serpent. Thor throws his hammer in his brother direction. Balder and Thor fight against Loki. Clint Barton shoots a arrow in the serpent head. Sif shake Clint´s hand. Loki capture Jane Foster.

LOKI: I will destroy the most precious thing for you!

THOR: If you hurt her I´ll cut your throat.

LOKI: This is no problem for me!

Clint Barton shoots at Loki´s hand. He let Jane fall. Donald Blake grabs Jane. Loki launch a sword in Donald´s chest. Donald dies slowly. Jane get up and look at Donald. She feels that is her fault. A shinig explosion happens, when the light comes down Loki is tied up. The Warrior Three are healed and Donald Blake is live again. Odin is in the center of everything.

ODIN: Of all my sons, you disappointed me the most , Loki.

LOKI: I told you I was going to rule Asgard.

ODIN: You tried to kill me with Frost Giants help!

LOKI: It was fun…

Loki brakes the metal that is tying him up. He disappear in the air. Balder and Thor knees before Odin. The Warriors Three and Sif do the same. An helicopter lands in their side. Nick Fury leaves the helicopter and walk in Odin´s direction.

NICK: I suppose you´re Odin.

ODIN: Shall you tell me your name.

NICK: Nicholas Fury. Director of SHIELD.

ODIN: I dowant to know what your agents were doing in here.

NICK: I like to know what happen in this planet.

ODIN: I understand it. Why you gave my three sons so much attention.

NICK: They were from a different race. I like to know what happen in other dimensions as well.

ODIN: You know that Loki still in here, right?

NICK: My agents are searching for him right now.

ODIN: You are blaimed by Loki´s actions.

NICK: I´m fine with that. But are you?

ODIN: What do you mean?

NICK: You was stupid enought to let the boy take over Asgard. Wasn´t you?

ODIN: How dare you talk to me like this?!

NICK: In here, I have more power than you. Sorry.

ODIN: I see...

Thor put his arms on odin´s shoulders. Odin turn to Thor. He give Thor a smile. Thor is confused.

THOR: Where were you?!

ODIN: I were trapped in Jotunheim.

THOR: Why?!

ODIN: Loki requested some giants to kill me. Who do you think killed those giants?

THOR: I didn´t need to be saved!

ODIN: Allways arrogant. I want you to know that I want you back in Asgard at my side. You and your brother.

THOR: I won´t be back. Not because of your lies, but because in here I´ve found a bigger reason to fight for. I found my humanity.

Thor look at Jane Foster. He is passionated, she is the one that make him gave up of his throne and his people.



She is walking to him. They both hug each other. Odin is happy to see that his son is worthy once again. Sif looks sadly to Thor and Jane. Balder conforts her with a one arm hug.

ODIN: You gave away your family and your people for a human?

THOR: Not for a human. For what all those humans in here have make me learn.

ODIN: I ´m proud of you.

THOR: Thanks for my banishment.

ODIN: You´re welcome.

THOR: I won´t dissapoint you.

Odin and the others Asgardians vanishes in a light explosion. Nick Fury walk in Thor´s direction. Jane Foster is afraid of what Fury will ask of her love. Thor have a debit with SHIELD now. He will help Fury in what way he need.

THOR: You may ask anything of me.

NICK: You say that you consider yourself a human.

THOR: Where are you going with this?

NICK: I am recruiting you to be a part of a super human team. Created to protect the world from dangerous threats.

THOR: Whenever you need me to assemble the team, give me a call.

PROLOGUE
A man is walking in front of a construction. He walks over a construction manager. The construction manager is a strong man. The construction manager is called Carl Creel.

CARL: Can I help you?

MAN: I think you can. I really think so.



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Enchantress is in a giant castle in Svartalfheim. She looks to a mirror and see Thor in Midgard and Odin in his throne. She is angry. A man stand behind her. He is big and looks angry.

AMORA: I shall have my revenge against the son of Asgard. Am I right, Skurge?

SKURGE: Yes you are ,my queen.

Amora smile. She pretend to have her revenge against Odin and Thor. She pretend to ake over Asgard.

AMORA: Thor will perish at my hands! Asgard will be mine to rule!



CAST :
CHRIS HEMSWORTH AS THOR
ANTHONY HOPKINS AS ODIN
JAIMIE ALEXANDER AS SIF
TOM HIDDLESTON AS LOKI
ZACHARY LEVI AS BALDER
ALICE EVE AS ENCHANTRESS
JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN AS HEIMDALL
WOODY HARRELSON AS VOLSTAGG
CLIFTON COLLINS JR. AS HOGUN
ALEZANDER SKARSGARD AS FANDRAL
MARYL STREEP AS FRIGGA
NATALIE PORTMAN AS JANE FOSTER
CRIS PINE AS HAWKEYE
CLARK GREGG AS PHIL COULSON
JESSE SPENCER AS DONALD BLAKE
COLM FEORE AS UTGARD LOKI
SAMUEL L. JACKSON AS NICK FURY
JOSEPH GATT AS YMIR
ROBERT AILLET AS SKURGE, THE EXECUTIONER
KAT DENNINGS AS HELA
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Ryden
Ryden - 8/21/2010, 5:17 PM
Has to face many "threads"? Um don't you mean THREATS? Sorry man I don't like it, just some of the dialouge is a bit strange...like "Loki have requested to some giants to kill me." it should be "Loki has requested that frost giants come and kill me" and even then it's just kinda over-the-top dialouge....
comics56
comics56 - 8/21/2010, 6:11 PM
@Ryden - I have changed some things. I´m not an english expert. Sorry. And what you mean wit over-the-top dialogue?
Ryden
Ryden - 8/21/2010, 7:38 PM
@comics- Well it's like, it's not very realistic dialouge if you know what I mean....you'd probably get away with it in animation or a comic but in a live action film you need to imagine actors actually saying what you're writing. And you'll find that some things just seem a little silly or unrealistic.
comics56
comics56 - 8/21/2010, 7:48 PM
@Ryden - Oh, I understand. Hope you like my next one. I´m sorry if you didn´t liked this one.
Ryden
Ryden - 8/21/2010, 8:44 PM
@comics- Hey its cool man, learning curve ;) It's not bad at all plot wise, it's just that you need to tidy up the dialouge a bit that's all :).
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 8/22/2010, 1:00 PM
comics56 @ RYDEN don't like nothing lol (jk). : D

Well done man, your getting real good at this thumbs up from me!
comics56
comics56 - 8/22/2010, 7:10 PM
@LEEE777 - Thanks man! I kind of understand him, always helping me getting better. It´s always god getting god critics.
BrotherQStark
BrotherQStark - 8/23/2010, 10:39 AM
we all want Kat to be Hela so bad
comics56
comics56 - 8/23/2010, 10:54 AM
@MrAnonymous - I know. In my idea of the movie she will be ,and she will have her human disguise. Not the gnome, she will be a Cassino owner. In Vegas, The City of the Lost Souls.
Ryden
Ryden - 8/26/2010, 12:47 PM
@comics- Seriously dude you're doing a good job, like I said it just needs to have a bit more realistic dialouge and then you've cracked it ;)

Keep it up man, you may just have a future in this.
comics56
comics56 - 8/27/2010, 1:18 PM
@Ryden - Thanks a lot. I have a target in my mind: Director Chair in Thor Reboot (2025)! That´s kinda of a joke, but it´s my dream.
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