What The Empire Strikes Back could've been

What The Empire Strikes Back could've been

Lucas may have ruined your childhood with the prequels, but it could've been a WHOLE LOT worse

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By scoopz - May 16, 2010 01:05 PM EST
Filed Under: Sci-Fi
Source: geektyrant.com



The Empire Strikes Back is one of the most beloved films of all time. Many think of the film as a masterpiece, but recently,the first draft of the script was released to the public.

According to geektyrant.com "The first draft of the script was simple titled "Star Wars Sequel,” it was completed on February 23, 1978. The writer of the script Leigh Brackett died of cancer on March 18, 1978, and she never got a chance to do any rewrites. George Lucas ended up doing various drafts before Lawrence Kasdan got involved with the film."

Here's how the film would've been different:

-Luke's twin sister might have been named Nellith rather than Leia, and Darth Vader might not have fathered them.

-The native inhabitants of what we know of as Bespin, the Cloud People, seem to resemble the Kaminoans in Attack of the Clones.

-They're tall, “white-skinned and white-haired” and ride on flying manta-rays.

-Lando admits to being a clone, and that his family were refugees of the Clone Wars. He further explains that his great-grandfather was cloned because he wanted sons.

-Leia talks to Han Solo about his stepfather on the Rebel base. His step father was an extremely powerful man named Ovan Marekal.

-Obi-Wan doesn’t appear to Luke Skywalker with the message to see Yoda on Dagobah after Luke escapes the Wampa cave.

-While Luke is in sick in the sick bay, he describes the snow creatures that attacked him (Wampas); One of the commanders asks him if he thinks the snow creatures pose a threat to the Rebel base. As this is going on the Wampas are attacking the base.

-It's revealed that the snow creatures are making a deliberate attempt to rid their world of the outsiders.

-Chewbacca goes gets in a fight with a Wampa!

-Leia never kisses Luke but later on in the script there is a scene where we see them “in the midst of a tentative, and very tender love scene.” Hello!
The center of the Empire is an Imperial city called Ton Muund. The first time we see Darth Vader is in the city trying to find the location of the Rebel Base.
Vader mentions Luke by name and acknowledges the fact that he used the Force to help him make his shot that took out the Death Star.

-When Vader tries to entice Luke to the dark side of the Force, he mentions that the dark side can protect loved ones from harm.

-Dagobah is referred to as the Bog planet. This was a training ground from young Jedi. It here he meets Yoda, but in this draft of the script he is called Minch.
Minch shows Luke a Jedi duel, and calls upon Obi-Wan to be his opponent. He say's ”By the Force, I call you!”

-Luke is told by his elders that the only way he can master the Force is to face Vader and the dark side of the Force. He doesn't acquire it by hard cardio workouts with Yoda strapped to his back.

-Darth Vader has pet gargoyles. Yeah... I know.
Luke eventually calls upon Obi-Wan like Minch did. And here's a big change... this time Obi-Wan has got Luke’s father with him. His father asks if him if he knows about his sister whose name is Nellith in this version of the script. His father says he can’t tell him her name because Vador would read Luke’s mind and find out about her.

-Luke takes the oath of the Jedi Knight.

-Remember that scene where Luke and Vader have their lightsaber battle? Well in this version Luke actually uses the Dark side of the Force to fight back.

-We don't have any surprise of "Luke I am your father." because he's not. Luke doesn't get his hand sliced off. Vader's just trying to get Luke to join him to rule the galaxy because he sees his potential as a powerful Jedi.

-In the end, Leia loves Han, Luke's in love with Leia, Han leaves with Chewbacca to meet with Ovan Marekal, and Luke salutes the Millennium Falcon with his Lightsaber as it fly's away.

as you can see, It would've been COMPLETELY different! Even "I AM YOUR FATHER" didn't have a place in the script! I would take the prequels over this any day!

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AshleyWilliams
AshleyWilliams - 5/16/2010, 2:02 PM
All of this sucks except "Chewbacca goes gets in a fight with a Wampa!" That's pretty awesome.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 5/16/2010, 2:23 PM
WHAT IF?

Lol! : P

Interesting find though!!
Denn1s
Denn1s - 5/16/2010, 4:23 PM
well i love the prequels no matter what most crybaby fanboys say. think about how much they contributed to the overall mythology of star wars. one word:sith...
scoopz
scoopz - 5/16/2010, 4:47 PM
@Denn1s - I COMPLETELY AGREE! besides, I'm only 16. The prequels were a giant part of my childhood
BryEL
BryEL - 5/16/2010, 4:56 PM
@Denn1s - Admit it, Attack of the Clones rotted your brain just like all of ours. Lol, Episode 1 and 3 were just fine.
ViperXX79
ViperXX79 - 5/16/2010, 5:15 PM
The gargoyles thing is really a stretch. The Sith of old have always used Sith magic to bring forth evil creatures to do their will.
FrankDrebin
FrankDrebin - 5/16/2010, 6:11 PM
the whole love scene would have been AWKWARD later on and probably put luke in space therapy
flames809
flames809 - 5/16/2010, 7:09 PM
scoopz- the prequels are also a big part of my childhood cause thats how i found out of starwars and i like them they showed vadar origin and it was nice to see how he became evil.
YogiDonnie
YogiDonnie - 5/16/2010, 7:20 PM
Who knows, it might have been good. IN some parallel universe this is how the movie was made, and your double is reading about how it "could" have been made, which is our universe's version. He is saying it sucks right now too.
supermarioworldE
supermarioworldE - 5/16/2010, 9:17 PM
Wow. If this is how bad the first draft of Empire is, I can't imagine how much worse the first draft of Jedi would be.
astromerc
astromerc - 5/16/2010, 11:18 PM
Wow! Thank You Lawrence Kasdan! ”By the Force, I call you!”
We speak your name!
Bamf7
Bamf7 - 5/17/2010, 10:38 AM
I'm not gonna lie...I would have liked to have seen Chewbacca fight a Wampa...haha. Everything else...crap.
scoopz
scoopz - 5/17/2010, 12:55 PM
Can someone write a fan fic about Chewy fighting the Wampa! Plz!! That would be EPIC!!!!
rolanddeschain
rolanddeschain - 5/18/2010, 1:06 PM
this is a classic example of hindsight being 20/20. everything about star wars was brand new in 1978, so it's not like we would've been able to determine which ideas were good, or sucked. none of us knew what the hell a wampa, or an ewok, or a chewbacca was, so what's the point of critiquing it? it's like those flash sideways views in "Lost", just an alternate universe version
BillyBlack
BillyBlack - 5/18/2010, 1:29 PM
Thank heavens! The force was with us on that one my friends.

The prequels were terrible.

I'm glad a new generation of kids got to experience star wars and all that, but if you weren't an 8 year old when Episode 1 came out, you could see what a massive train wreck it was. And Attack of the Clones? Well...

http://www.earthsmightiest.com/fansites/CassidysCorner/news/?a=6816
Denn1s
Denn1s - 5/18/2010, 5:06 PM
well as for episode II... i didn't like it at first. but if you think about it you will agree it was actually good. not as good as III or I but... it had action, romance, and funny moments. it's role is vital to the overall saga. think about it: the clone wars started, which led to the creation of clones, who eventually exterminated the jedi, became stormtroopers and gave birth to the empire. we see anakin's first steps to the dark side, we learn of boba fett's origin, see how life is going on coruscant, we see for the first time jedis fighting in their prime and yoda in a lightsaber duel. i watched episode I when i was 9 when it first came out and was blown away. i loved it and got me hooked in the star wars mythos. and i was lucky enough to watch every episode for the first time in the correct chronological order (I at 9, II at 12 and III at 15 and then i watched IV-VI for the first time when they came out on dvd) so i have an overall opinion about the saga. stop being purists, crybabys, fanboys and just enjoy the movies for what they are and not what you'd like them to be. after all I-VI was lucas' vision all allong. he just couldn't make I-III at the time...
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