Dragonball Redemption
Act 1 scene 1
Piccolo looks week, a small green egg comes out of Piccolo’s mouth. Egg grows
larger and larger. The Egg Cracks. Small green boy with antennae comes out of
the Egg. The Boy looks like a miniature version of Piccolo.
King Piccolo: Son Goku’s won for now, but my legacy on this planet will survive. Good luck, my son. Get revenge for my demise. Destroy all of my enemies.
Piccolo disintegrates leaving only his Cloths. Piccolo Jr picks up Piccolo’s
shirt that he was wearing under his armor. He gets a sharp rock and cuts the
bottom of it and he cuts the sleeve’s the boy wear’s it as a robe. Piccolo Jr.
walks off. The Screen then says Dragonball Redemption. The screen then says one
year later. Piccolo Jr has grown immensely fast he looked like a 4 year old when
he hatched but he now looks like a 14 year old. Piccolo Jr is walking in the
woods. Piccolo Jr comes to a street and a 16 wheeler comes around the corner.
Piccolo Jr uses a kai blast on the truck. The kai blast kills the driver of the
16 wheeler and engulfs the truck into flames.
Piccolo Jr: Hmph that monster tries to defeat the mighty reincarnation of King
Piccolo the lord of all demons? Well none ever will, even the power of Son Goku.
I seek revenge on you Son Goku, and my revenge will succeed eventually.
Piccolo Jr walks off. Screen says 4 years later. Master Roshi invites Goku over
cause he wants to show Goku his new student. Goku shows up in a capsule corps
motorcycle whit Chi Chi with him. Goku knocks on the door
Act 1 scene2
Goku: Hello. Master Roshi, are you there? Muten Roshi
Master Roshi is behind Goku and Chi Chi he taps them on the shoulder and says
Roshi: Hi
Goku and Chi Chi scream. They both turn around.
Chi Chi: Don’t ever scare us like that again.
Goku: Master Roshi (Gives Roshi a hug) how have you been doing the past few
years?
Roshi: (who now is bald) I’ve been good.
A short bald guy walks up to the door
Krillin: Master Roshi who are they?
Roshi: Goku this is my new student I wanted you to meet, his name is Krillin
Goku: Hi Krillin I’m-
Krillin: (Krillin interrupts Goku) Yeah, Yeah I know who you are. Master Roshi
barely stops talking about you when we’re in training sessions if I’m not good
enough he says ‘feel the Goku inside of you’, and I get sick and tired off him
saying that. So that’s why I challenge YOU Son Goku to a battle.
Goku: Well before we battle-
Krillin :( interrupts Goku) What? Are you to chicken to fight me? You don’t look
like you like to fight.
Goku: I like meatballs.
Krillin: what does that have to do with anything?
Goku: Nothing Really I’m just hungry and your big round bald head looks like a
meatball
Krillin: Don’t you know that everyone that takes martial arts seriously shaves
their heads. Look at Master Roshi.
Roshi: Oh! I just did it because “Men that like woman” magazine said that girls
dig the bald look
Goku: Well like I was saying, why did Master Roshi except you as a student?
Krillin: Well…
Roshi: I’ll tell it, but first come inside, sit down and have some chicken
Goku: CHICKEN!!
Chi Chi: Goku, be a gentlemen and wait
Goku: Ok
They all walk into master Roshi’s house Goku get some chicken out of the fridge
and sits on the couch with them and eats it.
Roshi: Well it all started when Krillin walked up the pathway up my house. I was
watching him through the window by my hammock upstairs. (Shows what happened a
year ago)
Act 1 scene 3
Krillin: (knocks on the door) Oh Great Master Roshi, are you there? (Knocks
again) Oh Muten Roshi
Krillin here’s a thud behind him. He thinks someone trying to attack him so he
gets his signature move ready the Kienzan (Destructo Disc). Krillin made it
small so that the person behind him couldn’t see it. When he turned around he
instantly threw it. The man behind him was bald had white beard wore a Hawaiian
Shirt on and he had khaki shorts on with a back pack that looked like a turtle.
The man dodged it like it was nothing. Krillin charged at him and lunged for his
face. The man dodged it. Krillin made a kick for his feet to trip him and then
tackle him. The man dodged that and lunged for Krillin stomach he hit Krillin.
Krillin went flying into the wall behind him.
Krillin: Who are you?
Roshi: I’m Muten Roshi greatest martial artist in the world (Says the wrest
softly) well former martial artist
Krillin: OH! Muten Roshi I’m so very sorry
Roshi: Were you trying to break into my house?
Krillin: No! I’m Krillin and I came here so that you could train me (bows on one
knee)
Roshi: Well Krillin, I don’t just train everyone that comes to my door.
Krillin: Well maybe some quiet reading will change your mind
Krillin pulls out of his backpack a magazine titled Barely Legal Busty Broads
with a picture of a girl in a bikini on the front. Roshi Snatches it out of
Krillin’s hands.
Roshi: OOH! OOH! AH! AH! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Krillin: Well?
Roshi: Krillin after careful consideration
Krillin: Yeah?
Roshi: I’ve decided to take you in as my student
Krillin: YES!!
Goes back to present
Chi Chi: WHAT!!! YOU MEAN TO TELL ME YOU TOOK HIM IN AS A STUDENT BEACAUSE HE
FEEDED YOUR PERVERTEST NEEDS!?!?
Roshi: That’s wright
Chi Chi: you make me sick
Krillin: So Goku will you fight me?
Goku: Only if Master Roshi gives me my old GI to wear
Krillin: Master Roshi, give him his GI
Roshi: Ok I’ll go get it
Krillin: Get prepared Goku because you are going down!
Goku: Says the guy that’s 3 feet tall
Krillin: I’ll have you know that I’m 4’1
Goku: Whatever. Let’s do it!
Goku and Krillin go to the backyard to fight.
Act 1 scene 4
Krillin: Are you sure that you’re ready?
Goku: I’m positively sure
Krillin and Goku get in their fighting stances. Krillin Jumps up in the air and
tries to kick Goku from above. Goku blocks it with his arm. The force of Goku’s
arm sends Krillin flying backwards. Krillin gets up and charges towards Goku.
Krillin tries to paralyze Goku by breaking his collar bone but Goku (slow
motion) Goku doges Krillin’s attack and flips over Krillin’s head. As he’s
flipping he kicks Krillin to the ground from behind him. Goku lands his flip
perfectly and then puts his foot down on Krillin’s stomach.
Goku: You’ve had enough?
Krillin: Absolutely
Goku: Ok then
Goku steps off of Krillin
Krillin: Not
Krillin flips up and Gets his Destructo disc ready.
Goku: Really
Goku gets his Kamehameha ready
Goku: Kame…
Krillin: Kien
Goku: Hame
Krillin: Zen
Goku/Krillin: HA!
Goku’s Kamehameha overpowers Krillin’s Kienzan and the Kamehameha sends Krillin
into the river
Krillin: Help, I can’t swim
Krillin goes under the water
Goku: Krillin!
Goku dives into the water and saves Krillin. Goku takes Krillin back up to the
backyard
Krillin: You saved my life
Goku: What else would I do stand there while you drown cause went a little
overboard on the Kamehameha?
Krillin: well I thought we were enemies
Goku: We were enemies
Krillin: Maybe we were but now we’re friends
Goku: Friends
To be continued