GALACTIC EARTH A.D (part 1)

Hey guys, first part of my private graphic novel mini series (SCRIPT!) is complete. Please give it a read and tell me what you think, and FYI-I do take healthy criticism well, I mean, there's no other way to learn unless you have someone tell you what kind of dumba++ you really are am I right?? I hope you guys enjoy it.

By Tylerman - Feb 20, 2016 11:02 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Hey everyone, sorry this took soooooo long, I know. Some of you have been waiting for this since 2014. And before I show you I just wanna' say "Personally" that I am very sorry. I was going through some serious family issues, and I needed to sort that out before I got back to this. And sorry!

Like I said it has been a while and I'm sure some of you don't remember this, or even know what the hell! I'm talking about. But I have put out a synopsis and some artwork which you can catch up and view at, here:


http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fan_fic/galactic-earth-ad-synopsis-a98093<> />

Are we all caught up??? 

Are we all not ignorant to what this is about? or why they hell your here???
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So, ladies and Gentleman. Here we go. I give you, Galactic Earth A.D part 1...

I hope you enjoy and please like always comment below (Even if your criticizing!!!!) It's all constructive and healthy opinions.

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Galactic Earth A.D part 1
Creator: Tyler Goldie
 
SECTOR 7
One of the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Underground Cities
2512 A.D 
6:00am
“500 Year Commemoration.”
 
SETTING: 
IT IS 500 YEARS AFTER THE LAST WAR ON EARTH. THE SURFACE HAS BEEN WIPED OUT, CONQUERED, AND REBUILT IN THE WRAITHIANS IMAGE. THE LAST EXISTENCE OF THE HUMAN RACE HAS BEEN FORCED TO START A NEW CIVILIZATION DEEP UNDERGROUND WITH A PROTECTIVE SCREEN OFF OF THE WRAITHIANS RADAR. THIS MORNING IS THE START OF THE 500TH YEAR ANNIVERSARY SINCE THE WRAITHIANS CONQUERED OVER THE EARTH. ALL OF THE HUMANS IN SECTOR 7 ARE HUDDLED IN A LARGE CROWD AROUND THE S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. TOWER HOLDING CANDLES AND PRAYING AND CHANTING.
 
PANEL:
THE HUMANS ARE HOLDING EACH OTHER’S HANDS, PRAYING, AND CHANTING. EVERYONE IS REASSURING EACH OTHER THAT EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK.
 
PANEL:
A SPEAKER GETS OUT OF THE CROWD AND STANDS UP ON A STAND PREPARED TO SAY A FEW WORDS IN REGARDS OF TODAY. HE PUTS HIS HANDS IN THE AIR AND SAYS:
 
SPEAKER
Everyone! We are gathered here to commemorate the 500th year of our 
exile from the surface. It is also 
not to our surprise that we wake 
up this morning without the sun 
again.
 
PANEL:
Side shot of the speaker looking out at the crowd. The speaker responds as to something he’s never noticed before by saying:
 
SPEAKER
And when I think about it, none 
of us here know what it’s like to 
wake up to the sun
 
PANEL: 
Shot of the crowd holding their candles. The Speaker tells the crowd now with disgust:
 
SPEAKER: 
To wake up and walk out the door 
and feel the air or rain, or possibly 
even a snow storm.
 
PANEL: 
Another shot of the crowd.
 
SPEAKER 
No, we don’t know what it is to 
feel basic human moralities that 
we should be able to feel on a daily bases, but there is something that
we do have...
 
PANEL: 
The speaker tells the crowd as to uplift their spirits.
 
SPEAKER
Faith...faith in ourselves, and 
most importantly faith in the 
future...
 
PANEL: 
Shot of the crowd, when the speaker says:
 
SPEAKER 
The future that is in store for 
us is a future above the surface. 
One without poverties and dictatorships.
 
PANEL: 
Faraway shot of the speaker and the crowd.
 
SPEAKER
Believe me when I say that our S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Resistance has 
big plans for our salvation.
 
PANEL: 
Closer shot of the Speaker.
 
SPEAKER
Their plans will ultimately win 
us back! the surface.
 
PANEL:
Shot of the crowd.
 
SPEAKER
So before we go on with our own 
private methods of mourning today, 
keep this in mind every time you 
feel that hope is diminished.
 
PANEL: 
Close up shot of the speaker.
 
SPEAKER
This will be the last! time we 
mourn ever again.
 
PANEL: 
Far away shot of the crowd of people still there.
 
PANEL: 
The shot pulls away from the crowd of people in the street and we see the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. tower at the middle of Sector 7. 
 
COMMANDER
Do you see what I see sergeant?
 
SERGEANT
What?
 
PANEL: 
The shot zoom’s in on the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. tower:
 
COMMANDER
I see only a memory.
 
SERGEANT
I know commander; in a few short 
weeks this all will become the past.
 
PANEL: 
The shot zoom’s in a little more.
 
COMMANDER 
Yes, and we will be watching over a 
city from this terrace with a sky 
over our head
 
SERGEANT 
Soon we’ll be able to commence 
forward to ensure this dream happens.
 
PANEL: 
Zoom’s in all the way.
 
COMMANDER
More than we think, just as soon 
as the biochemist arrives.
 
 
 
 
 
S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R. Tower
“The Bio-chemist"
 
PANEL: 
The commander and the sergeant are looking out at the city leaning up against the terrace railing.
 
COMMANDER
How soon can we expect his 
arrival?
 
SERGEANT
As soon as the SRF squad team extracts him from the Wraithian city, We uploaded the coordinates to his exact pinpointed location in the squad teams’ gauntlet data input devices.
 
COMMANDER 
Excellent work Sergeant.
 
PANEL: 
A side shot of their faces looking out at the city. With great depth and importance the commander says:
 
COMMANDER 
I was earlier informed that he is needed for a great importance; he is the last piece of the puzzle.
 
SERGEANT 
That’s true commander, which is why I’ve picked one of the top ranked SRF squad teams to carry out this rescue mission. 
 
PANEL: 
Other side shot of the Commander and the Sergeant looking out at the city.
 
COMMANDER
And their definitely needed to carry it out. Ensuring the safety of that biochemist is everything, without him you can forget this dream we have. 
 
PANEL: 
The sergeant looks at him and says:
 
SERGEANT
That dream will come true commander; we just have to have faith.
 
PANEL: 
The commander is looking at his watch when he says’s:
 
COMMANDER
True we need faith, but the commanding board also wants to see results in the process.
 
PANEL: 
At that moment the Commander says that remark the Director of technology and the Head of the Science division walk in to the meeting room. They walk through the door when the Director of technology says:
 
D.O.T
And they will commander…
 
PANEL: 
The Commander turns around with relief to see them standing in the double door way. 
 
HEAD OF SCIENC DIVISION
Forgive our absence, we would have gotten here sooner but we’ve both been just extremely busy…
 
PANEL: 
The commander and the sergeant step off the terrace and into the meeting room. The meeting room is a mediocrely large room with a cliché like table with chairs all around it. The commander puts his hand up at them and says:
 
COMMANDER
Save it, your absence is understood and very respected at that matter. 
 
PANEL: 
The Commander and the Sergeant are walking closer to the table.
 
PANEL: 
They pull out the chairs and sit down.
 
COMMANDER 
I’ve just been waiting to see the final designs of the components and the research report on the Wraithians bio-energy breakdown. We need to make sure everything is perfect before we share this information with the Commanding board.
 
PANEL: 
The D.O.T moves to the other side of the table. While he’s walking to the other side of the table he says:
 
D.O.T 
Very well Commander, as you were told a few weeks ago, we had some redesigning to do to correct the triggering mechanism malfunction. 
 
Panel 29: The Commander and the sergeant are sitting on the other side of the table waiting to see the final designs.
 
D.O.T: And just recently we were able to come up with a concept that is finally complete.
 
Panel 30: The D.O.T sticks the Chip in the side of the table and gets ready to make the announcement and introduce the final concept idea for the components by saying:
 
(He says while he’s stick the chip in the side of the table.)
D.O.T: I believe your gunna’ love this sir.
 
Panel 31: The D.O.T gets ready to make the announcement and introduce the final concept idea for the components by saying:
 
(He says as an announcement.)
D.O.T: Commander…Sergeant. The final components, for project “take down”.
 
Panel 32: Once the D.O.T clicks the button on the remote, a holographic projection comes up above the table’s center core. It shows the component that attaches to the Wraithians core generator, and next to the component it gives off arithemia’s and engineering calculations regarding the component.
 
Panel 33: The Commander and the Sergeant rise from their chairs and looks at it closer. As their getting a closer look at the holographic projection, the D.O.T is explaining the finally features of the Component and saying:
 
(He explains the corrections the tech division made to the component.)
D.O.T: The triggering mechanism wasn’t fully operational to perform its purpose. To trigger off the Wraithians bio-energy and reverse the particle output to an input flow, we needed to recog the sensors double the original amount.
 
Panel 34: The Commander and the Sergeant are listening carefully as the D.O.T is explaining the new component.
 
D.O.T: Also, the latch device is multiplied its clink exponentially. Making it virtually impossible for any! one to pull it off once the component starts draining the Wraithians bio-energy from their core generators. 
 
Panel 35: Once the D.O.T turns off the holographic projection, the commander and sergeant look straight at him.
 
D.O.T: Once the bio-energy starts its flow into the component, the component will have the power to drain out entire cities in a matter of seconds…
 
Panel 36: The commander looks at the sergeant with a smirk and the sergeant looks down and smiles, the D.O.T is still talking to them.
 
D.O.T: Without their energy, they won’t stand a chance against our SRF’s.
 
Panel 37: The commander starts a small clap. And with a seriously pleased smile on his face he says:
 
Commander: Outstanding work, from hearing this, it kind of sounds like project “take down” is almost ready. But, even with all this outstanding work the tech division has provenly preformed…
 
Panel 38: The Commander looks directly at the Head of S.D and says very curiously:
 
Commander: There’s other intel we need to inform the commanding board about as well.
 
Panel 39: The Head of S.D is standing on the other side of the table and says:
 
Head of S.D: Absolutely commander, the bio-energy is a lot more complex that we even realized.
 
Panel 40: The Head of S.D pulls out the tech’s chip and puts in the research report chip to present to the commander and the sergeant.
 
Head of S.D: Commander, I’ve explained to you that the bio-chemist is needed to regulate a certain particle; well this should help you to visualize what I’m talking about.
 
Panel 41: The Head of S.D pushes the button on the remote and a holographic projection appears again in the middle of the table. The holographic projection is showing is the Wraithians bio-energy as a molecular ever changing substance with cosmic currents running through it. On the sides shows calculations and schematic charts of its extreme toxicity. As the Commander and the sergeant are looking at the holograph, the Head of S.D opens and says:
 
Head of S.D: Our team of leading experts in molecular and chemical research and developers has found many different cosmic particles that are manageable to control from our side. 
 
Panel 42: The Commander looks over at the Head of S.D and says:
 
Commander: The bio-energy particles that are needed to trigger the reversing effect on the component?
 
Panel 43: The Head of S.D points the remote at the Holographic projection.
 
Head of S.D: No sir, that’s the bio-chemists expertise, which starts here.
 
Panel 44: The holographic projection zoom’s in a little more into the bio-energy’s formation and reveals the inside of the bio energy.
 
Head of S.D: As you can see Commander, the particle that ultimately gives the Wraithians their energy supply possessed a staggeringly uncontrollable dose of an energy source that we have never came across before. 
 
Panel 45: The head of S.D pushes the button on the remote again and the holographic projection zoom’s in a more into the bio-energy’s formation to reveal the unknown particle that the bio-chemist is needed for.
 
Head of S.D: As you can see, this particle is combined with an unknown cosmic energy source that is impossible to uncalculate.
 
Panel 46: The Commander looks at the Head of S.D and says:
 
Commander: How impossible?
 
Head of S.D: The calculations are so complex that even some interdimensional beings couldn’t even crack it. 
 
Panel 47: Shot of the Head of S.D talking back to the commander:
 
Head of S.D: There’s only being known that was able to uncalculate it, and he did so from inside enemy territory. He’s still there right now.
 
Panel 48: Shot of the commander.
 
Commander: The bio chemist.
Head of S.D: Precisely, without the bio chemist the particles won’t coexist with the component. 
 
Panel 49: Shot of the Head of S.D:
 
Head of S.D: We need his help in harnessing the particle or else the results won’t only co side a failure with project “take down”, but the results can also be catastrophic.
 
Panel 50: The Sergeant immediately jumps into the conversation curiously saying:
 
Sergeant: How catastrophic?
 
Panel 51: The D.O.T looks at the Head of S.D with seriousness.
 
Panel 52: The Head of S.D looks at the D.O.T as if to say I know, he puts his head slightly down and rubs his eyes. Then immediately looks at the commander and says in a soft voice:
 
Head of S.D: The bio-energy also possess’ enormous! amounts of plutonium. 
 
Panel 53: After hearing this, the Commander looks at the bio-energy holographic projection and puts his hand over his mouth worried and curious. The Head of S.D further explains and says:
 
Head of S.D: If one little miss calculation is put into the process of draining out the bio-energy through the component…It can activate the plutonium causing a big enough nuclear blast to destroy everything above and below.
 
Panel 54: The Sergeant looks at the commander and waits to hear what he has to say.
 
Panel 55: The commander walks away from the table and heads back out to the terrace.
 
Panel 56: The Sergeant follows behind him saying:
 
Sergeant: The commanding board is going to want to hear about this. We should inform them of the urgency of…
 
Panel 57: The Commander looks back and responds back at him before he can finish the sentence saying:
 
Commander: Not yet, the commanding board has been waiting for a reason to pull themselves away from project "Take Down". We must keep this under wraps until the squad team makes contact with the biochemist.
 
Sergeant: Commander, maybe they can help assist on his rescue?
 
Panel 58: The commander is now leaning over the terrace looking back out at the underground city, takes a long sigh and then looks at the sergeant anxiously waiting for his response and says to him:
 
Sergeant: Ye of little faith my friend, one SRF squad team is enough.
 
 
 
 
Wraithian Capital
2512 AD
6:45 am
 
 
PANEL:
 The Wraithian city is surrounded by tall black futuristic and savage like skyscrapers with red beaming lights at the top of various buildings, and red lights surging through every building showing that the bio-energy is empowering their entire existence. Outside the sun is covered in dark grey and white clouds and rain falls heavily down upon their sinful parties in the streets.
 
PANEL:
 At the lower leveled buildings, Wraithian guards are mandating the perimeter watching over the festivities, and watching out for any human detection. One of the Wraithian guards standing watch atop the corner of one of the buildings, contact another guard:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
See anything?
 
WRAiTHIAN GUARD
Nope, everything’s clear, just keep an eye out for…
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard on the communicator goes out; the other wraithian guard atop the building curiously tries to get him to respond and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
Hello? Hello, what happened?
 
ARGH!!!
 
PANEL:
 The both of the wraithian guards have been ghosted by the team leader of the  SRF’s using his grappling hooks to drag them over the side of the building.
 
Panel 62: The team leader, Jeremy Bowen of the SRF squad team, hops over on top of the building, and calls in through his gauntlet to check for the other SRF’s to validate the perimeter’s conditions. He asks:
 
Jeremy: What’s the situation like over there F-2?
 
Panel 63: F-2 on the other side of the Gauntlet is dangling on the top of the building.
 
Panel 64: F-2 that’s dangling from the side of the building notices two guards across from him about 4 floors lower than him. He tells Jeremy:
 
F-2: I’ll tell ya’ in a second.
 
Panel 65: F-2 that was dangling off the rim of the building flips on top of the roof. Runs back from away from the edge heading in one direction and the moves faster towards the edge of the building and leaps off into an aerial face first dive and darts straight down fists forward on top of the wraithian guards, grabs them by their shoulders, flips with the guards, and launches them into 2 other wraithian guards on the other side of the building. F-2 gets on his communicator and says:
 
F-2: East of the perimeter is contained, waiting your next move Jeremy.
 
Panel 66: Jeremy calls in to check on F-3 of the squad team to check the west of the perimeter.
 
Jeremy: What’s it like on the west F-3…
 
Panel 67: Jeremy is getting no response. Jeremy speaks deeper into the gauntlet with more intensity:
 
Jeremy: Talk to me F-3 dammit, what’s it like on the west perimeter?!
 
 
Panel 68: F-3 is running along the side of the building, flip dives off landing and sliding on a railing facing on a slant downward. When he reaches the end of the railing he launches himself forward over the Wraithians celebrating in the streets. F-3 still flying forward is looking backwards and instantly shoots out his grappling hook zipping himself the opposite direction barely missing the Wraithians below him, ofcourse they don’t detect him.
 
Panel 69: F-3 who just shot out his grappling hook zipping himself swiftly and fast the opposite direction is now darting the other direction through the air face first.
 
Panel 70: Two Wraithian guards not knowing what’s coming gives thumbs up that everything is ok on their watch. 
 
Panel 71: F-3 spirals down and lands on top of the one Wraithian guards, flips and shoots his grappling hook from his other Gaunlet at the other Guard. He reels him in and hangs both of them off the building.
 
Panel 72: F-3 gets on his communicator and responds to Jeremy:
 
F-3: West of the perimeter is contained Jeremy, waiting for your next call.
 
Panel 73: Jeremy checks on F-4 who’s securing the south of the Perimeter. 
 
Jeremy: What’s going on down there F-4?
 
Panel 74: F-4 is Running on a roof that’s about 6 stories high.
 
Panel 75: F-4 leaps face first with his hands spread out free falling at least 4 stories before shooting his grappling hook behind him.
 
Panel 76 Inside the building F-4 shot his grappling hook into has a large opening through the building leaving at least 2 to 3 floors open for him to swing straight through the building before releasing his grappling hook.
 
Panel 77: F-4 is flung across the way feet first kicking two of the Wraithian guards on top of 4 story building off across from the building he just swung off of.
 
Panel 78: F-4 still flying through the air performs an aerial back flip and crashes on top of another wraithian guard feet first on top of another 2 story building across from the 4 story building.
 
Panel 79: After taking out the three Wraithian guards, F-4 opens up his right gauntlet and a holographic projection opens up with a holographic layout of the whole perimeter they just contained surrounding the bio-chemists whereabouts inside the watch tower in the middle of the city within a 900 ft. radius. In red it shows the 9 only Wraithian guards within the perimeter that were taken out. On the side of the perimeters layout in the holographic projection, a light grid goes from red to green giving that the entire perimeter has been contained. Once F-4 see’s that the perimeter has been contained. He contacts Jeremy on the gauntlet communication saying:
 
F-4:  South of the perimeter is contained; we have the green light to move in on the extraction point. 
 
Panel 80: Jeremy is still atop the roof on his communicator inside his gauntlet. Jeremy contacts F-5 to gain further information and says:
 
Jeremy: Stand by F-4…
Jeremy: F-5, give me the ground up structure reading on the watch tower, locate the extraction point. 
 
Panel 81: F-5 is crouched inside a corner atop one of the buildings closest to the watch tower. 
 
Panel 82: F-5 opens up his right gauntlet and immediately a holographic projection appears in blue of the watch tower and a few surrounding lower leveled buildings. Within the watch tower appearing in blue in the holographic projection, 100’s upon 100’s of Wraithian Guards are patrolling through the watch tower appearing in glowing red. While F-5 is searching through the structure reading of the watch tower, he cannot locate the extraction point of the bio chemist. 
 
Panel 83: F-5 flicks his fingers upwards above the structure reading of the watch tower and the building scrolls up, we get a view of the big underground core generator room unit along with other underground basements of the surrounding the watch tower. Again in the core generator room, F-5 see’s Wraithian guards surrounding the generator room in glowing red, Wrathian scientists are glowing in green, and the biochemist is inside the core generator room is glowing in bright yellow.  Once F-5 locates the biochemist and the extraction point, he picks up his other gauntlet on the other forearm and uses his communicator device to contact team leader Jeremy, he says to him:
 
F-5: Located the extraction point in the core generator room under the structure, the watch tower is also heavily sedated with Wrathian guards. 
 
Panel 84: Jeremy is contacting his entire squad team saying: 
 
Jeremy: Alright everyone, the precious cargo is being held captive in there. We have only a few minutes to get ‘em out before Wraithian warriors in the streets are alerted. 
 
Panel 85: F-4 is on his communicator device and asks Jeremy:
 
F-4: What’s the plan? You wanna’ take the roof?
(On the communicator device)
Jeremy: Absolutely, we take to the roof, continue with stealth.
 
Panel 86: F-4 is pauses for a second and looks at his Gauntlet communicator device curiously, he picks it back up to his mouth and says:
 
F-4: You sure ‘bout this? F-5 just gave us the word that the watch tower is crawling with guards.
Jeremy: Exactly, guards not warriors. Their much easier to handle. Besides you don’t really have to worry about the Guards.
 
Panel 87: Jeremy is talking to F-4 on his Gauntlet communicator device: 
 
Jeremy: While were containing each floor from the roof down, your objective is to override and gain access to the elevation shaft taking it to the extraction point, its smooth sailing.
 
Panel 88: F-4 is shaking his head and perching his mouth saying:
 
F-4: Ya’ that sounds a little better.
Jeremy: Once F-4 has a grasp on the precious cargo…
 
Panel 89: Shot of Jeremy on his gauntlet communication device saying:
 
Jeremy: we reconvene on the roof and make our way back to SECTOR 7.
 
Panel 90: F-2 is waiting for the next word from Jeremy: 
 
Jeremy: Ok, let’s move.
 
Panel 91 F-2 get’s up and starts charging for the edge of the building, he reaches the end and leaps off and grabs a hold of the next building about 20 feet across and about 2 stories higher. Once grabs hold of the rim of the buildings and right on contact flips over it and charges for the next edge of the building.
 
Panel 92: He leaps atop a stepping pedestal about 15 ft. high and leaps off again and shoots his grappling hook across from him into a building about 4 to 5 stories higher. Once he shoots out his grappling hook, he starts zipping himself upward towards the top.
 
Panel 93: He hits the building and as he’s zipping himself up he’s running to the left of the building. Right before he reaches the top of the building he leaps forward on top of a building about 10 ft. across and is running along the side of the roof towards the watch tower.
 
Panel 94: F-3 is running across the roof and dives forward and does a frog flip over a hump and then flips again off the side of the building and free falls about 3 stories. 
 
Panel 95: F-3 hits the ground hard and runs alongside of the building until he reaches the edge, shoots out his grappling hook and zips himself up a 5 story building.  
 
Panel 96: Once F-3 hits the top of the building he continues to be shot up about 15 ft. and flips on top of the building and is running towards the watch tower. 
 
Panel 97: F-4 is running along the roof of a building. Once he reaches the edge of a building, another building stands about 5 ft. in front of him and the building itself is only about 20 ft. long. He leaps off the side of the building totally clearing the building in front of him and dives straight down about 9 stories. 
Panel 98: Once F-4 reaches a free fall about 4 stories down, he shoots out his grappling hook and swings right over the Wrathian warriors partying in the streets. 
 
Panel 99: He flies through the air only about 3 seconds and tucks and rolls across the roof of a building about 8 stories. He’s running in the direction of the watch tower. 
 
Panel 100: Jeremy and F-5 are running side by side next to eachother leaping over buildings and heading towards the watch tower. 
 
Panel 101: Right from Jeremy and F-5 running towards the watch tower, we see a full shot of the watch tower. 
 
Panel 102: The shot zoom’s in on the watch tower. 
 
Panel 103: The shot zoom’s in a little more.
 
Panel 104: The shot zooms in all the way.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
The Watch tower
2512 AD
6:59 am
“Death is the only Dominance!”
 
SETTING: 
The Sovereign Commander and ruler of the Wraithian nation is standing at the large window looking down at the streets as the Wraithian Warriors are celebrating their 500th anniversary. His hands are folded behind his back as he stands in his royal interstellar garments. 
 
PANEL: 
As the Sovereign commander is looking out the window at the festivities in the streets, his second in command and warlord to the Wraithian army and Armada comes walking in the door on the other side of the room expectingly. The Warlord hesitantly says:
 
WARLORD
Permission to enter Sovereign?
 
PANEL: 
The Sovereign commander turns only his head half way behind him and replies: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER 
If you didn’t have the permission, I wouldn’t have called you up here.
 
WARLORD
Forgive me your excellence…
 
PANEL: 
The warlord is walking through the dark and grim room with red bio energy surging lights running through the walls, floor, and ceiling. He says to him as he’s walking:
 
WARLORD 
I was merely representing respectfulness. 
 
PANEL: 
The Sovereign Commander is still looking to the side waiting for him to attend to the window and stand next to him. The Sovereign commander smirks and replies: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Something I can never deserve enough of.
 
PANEL: 
The Warlord comes and is now standing next to him. He now folds his hands and joins him in looking down at the streets, he replies to him: 
 
WARLORD
And that you have deserved it, today is the day of recognizing not only our superiority over the humans, but your tenacity and perseverance.
 
PANEL: 
After the warlord of the army finishes his kiss up comment, the Sovereign commander replies back saying: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Yes, and as the humans use to say, actions speak louder than words; I mean just look ‘em.
 
PANEL: 
The Wraithian warriors are in the streets consuming alcoholic and drug based substances, dancing around, laughing and joking, performing sinful sexual activities right out in the open to show their freedom to do as they please. The Sovereign commander finishes what he was saying: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Hungry for flesh and thirsty for blood. And all of us, no matter the rank, are bread to strive for one thing.
 
PANEL: 
As the Sovereign commander is giving his honorably horrid speech, the Wraithian warriors are carrying out skulls and dead SRF bodies they have been keeping for this particular occasion and sticking them on spikes in the ground. The sovereign commander continues onward saying:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
The dominance over life. 
 
PANEL:
Another shot of the Wraithians just going crazy in the streets as the Sovereign commander narrates over the panel:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
All life everywhere. Throughout every galaxy, every dimension, every universe. 
 
PANEL: 
Another shot of the Wraithians just going crazy in the streets as the Sovereign commander narrates over the panel:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Putting an end to life is our code of conduct, which brings only one thing to mind.
 
Panel 116: The Sovereign commander and his second in command warlord are standing next to each other looking down at the streets filled with Wrathian warriors. The Sovereign commander goes on saying:
 
Sovereign Commander: The war for this planet is still not over. 
 
Panel 117: After the sovereign commander finishes his statement, the warlord looks over at him curiously and responds:
 
Warlord: Sovereign, the war is over and the humans have lost, we have the dominated the surface. 
 
Panel 118: The Sovereign commander looks over at him and questions him saying: 
 
Sovereign commander: Do you even not know what true dominance is?
 
Panel 119: The warlord pauses for a minute to hesitant to respond back to the sovereign commander.
 
Panel 120: The Sovereign commander walks away from the window and back deeper into his dark and grim chambers, as he’s walking on the floor glowing red surging lights are pressing down as he walks. While the Sovereign commander is walking away from the window, he begins to explain to the warlord still standing at the window looking back at him what his idea of dominance is by saying:
 
Sovereign commander: You have said it yourself a few moments ago my friend, we only contain superiority over them. 
 
Panel 121: The Sovereign commander is still walking away from the window. 
 
Sovereign Commander: But in truth, if we really! dominated this planet. There shouldn’t be anything to have superiority over! right now.
 
Panel 122: The Warlord is walking away from the window and following him to his watch chair. The Sovereign commander continues on saying:
 
Sovereign commander: The humans remain breathing below the surface, meaning our victory only forced them into self enslavement. 
 
Panel 123: The Sovereign commander sits in his watch chair that surges with bio energy. The sovereign sits down and leans forward. He continues to talk saying: 
 
Sovereign Commander: Slavery is a sign of weakness, and an inability to fully defeat the enslaved. Death is the only defeat…
 
Panel 124: The Sovereign pauses for a second and sits all the way back and looks at him with a weird and sadistically happy look and says: 
 
Sovereign commander: Death is the only dominance. 
 
Panel 125: The SRF squad team is zip lining up the side of the watch tower. The warlord responds to the sovereign commander saying: 
 
Warlord: That would only be possible if we were able to pinpoint their exact locations to their underground sectors. 
 
Panel 126: The SRF squad team is running up the side of the building and zipping up, the SRF squad team is 100’s of feet above the surface towards the top. The sovereign commander understandably says to the warlord:
 
Sovereign commander: Yes I have noticed that…
 
Panel 127: The Sovereign commander is still sitting back in his bio energy charged watch chair and the warlord is standing in front of him with his arms folded behind his back, the Sovereign commander finishes his sentence saying:
 
Sovereign commander: they have proven themselves a far less primitive race than we could’ve known. They’ve been able to accomplish keeping us unaware of their whereabouts for 500 years. 
 
Panel 128: The warlord is standing and listening carefully.
 
Sovereign commander: But there’s a reason I have called you up here. I may have found someone to help us with that problem. 
 
Panel 129: The warlord begins to get curious and responds:
 
Warlord: Who?
 
INT. - THE ROOF OF THE WATCHTOWER.
 
Panel 130: The SRF squad team is on the roof checking the coast of Wraithian guards on their Structure reading
 
Sovereign Commander: Step up, I’ll show you.
 
INT. - THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER'S ROYAL CHAMBERS.
 
Panel 131: The Sovereign commander sitting in his watch chair pulls up a holographic key pad and uploads a screen that surrounds them with stars, and radiation clouds, the warlord is walking around the chair looking at the stars curiously.
 
Sovereign commander: For quite some time I have been searching through the stars for someone we can use to our advantage.
 
Sovereign Commander: From distance dimensions from quadrant zelpha to galaxies throughout the rephet. 
 
INT. - WATCHTOWER HALLS.
 
Panel 132: The SRF’s are inside the Watch tower, F-2 and F-3 override the Wraithians Security scanner radar’s and switch on their protective fields making them invisible to their screenings. 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
(Narration) 
The being that I speak of is a spy for hire. Very skilled and very dangerous! 
 
INT. - SOVEREIGN COMMANDER'S ROYAL CHAMBERS.
 
Panel 133: The sovereign commander is sitting in his chair talking to the warlord as the he’s walking around looking at the holographic stars.
 
Sovereign Commander: Rumor has it that he actually was paid to have two planets fight with eachother, he succeeded by having them destroy themselves in a matter of a few week loads.
 
Panel 133: F-4 is ghosting everyone on the other side of the top floor making his way to the Elevation shaft.
 
Warlord: And where does this inter being hail from?
 
Panel 134: F-4 is standing at the Elevation shaft; he uses his decoder on his gauntlet to gain access to the Elevation shaft.
 
Sovereign commander: I wasn’t able to locate his place of origin; it’s nowhere to be found in any archive throughout any! galaxy.
 
Panel 135: The SRF squad team is ghosting everyone throughout the floors and halls.
 
Warlord: So he’s a nobody?
 
Panel 136: F-4 is hovering above in the elevation shaft, he shoots his grappling hook above in the ceiling and starts his decent, the Sovereign commander explains to the warlord:
 
Sovereign commander: He may not have a set history but he has developed a name for himself. The only collective information I was able to pull was his crime records, get this.
 
Panel 137: The sovereign commander and the warlord are looking at his holographic crime reports and mugshots:
 
Sovereign commander: He doesn’t have a birth name; he only goes by his Alias: The Chameleon.
 
Sovereign Commander: 
Over 40 counts of 3rd degree murder, multiple vehicular theft through 12 different planets from quadrants Rellick to bodaiga. And this one really caught my eye; he was able to impersonate the warden of one of the most heavily guarded prisons throughout the stars to gain access to their most dangerous prisoner’s profiles. 
 
PANEL 138: THE SRF’S ARE STILL GHOSTING WRAITHIAN GUARDS:
 
Warlord: 
Sounds like we should have him start effective immediately.
 
PANEL 139: F-4 CUTS AN OPENING IN THE AIR DUCT INSIDE THE ELEVATION SHAFT AND ENTERS IN IT.
 
Sovereign commander: 
Now’s not the time…
 
PANEL 140: F-4 IS IN THE AIR DUCT LOOKING THROUGH AN OPENING. HE RUNS A PERIMETER CHECK TO SCAN FOR WRAITHIAN GUARDS. HE LOCATES THE BIO CHEMIST IN YELLOW, 
 
Sovereign Commander: 
We need to ensure a combination of perfection and cunningness to prevent suspicion from our enemy. 
 
(He says to himself.)
F-4: 
There he is.
 
PANEL 141: F-4 IS GHOSTING GUARDS DOWN CORE GENERATOR ROOM GHOSTING EVERYONE STICKING TO THE SHADOWS.
 
Warlord: 
What do you have in mind?
 
PANEL 142: A WRAITHIAN GUARD IS WALKING THROUGH THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM.
 
PANEL 143: HE NOTICES A HAND STICKING OUT OF ONE OF THE SHADOWS, WALKS OVER TO IT.
 
PANEL 144: HE NOTICES IT’S A WRAITHIAN GUARD.
 
Sovereign commander: 
We wait for a loophole. 
 
PANEL 145: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD TURNS AROUND AND SCREAMS:
 
Wraithian Guard: 
HUMANS!!!!!!!! 
 
PANEL 146: THE GUARDS PREPARE THEMSELVES LOOKING AROUND THE ROOM.
 
PANEL 147: F-4 IS HIDING IN THE SHADOWS LOOKING OVER.
 
PANEL 148: HE LAUNCHES HIMSELF ABOUT 20 FEET IN THE AIR AND LANDS ON TOP OF TWO WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
 
PANEL 150: A WRAITHIAN GUARD HAS SPOT’S F-4:
 
Wraithian Guard: 
There’s one! HOLD IT RIGHT THERE!
 
PANEL 151: F-4 SHOOTS HIS GRAPPLING HOOK INTO HIS FACE AND SWINGS HIM HARD INTO 3 OTHER WRAITHIAN GUARDS. 
 
PANEL 152: F-4 STARTS RUNNING TOWARDS THE BIO CHEMIST, WHILE THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS ARE RUNNING AND BLASTING AFTER HIM.
 
PANEL 153: F-4 HEADING UP THE MIDDLE WHEN A BUNCH OF WRAITHIAN GUARDS STOP IN FRONT OF HIM. 
 
PANEL 154: F-4 GET’S SURROUNDED BY THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
 
Wraithian Guard: 
Don’t move! Stay right where you are!
 
PANEL 155: F-4 PUTS HIS HANDS BEHIND HIS HEAD. ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS SPEAKS UP:
 
Wraithian Guard:
You think your race is so incredible and great?
 
PANEL 156: F-4 MOVES HIS HANDS OVER HIS BODY SYMILTANIOUSLY; THE WRAITHIAN GUARD SPEAKS UP AGAIN:
 
Wraithian Guard: 
I don’t see anything worthy of greatness. 
 
PANEL 157: F-4 MOVES HIS HANDS OUT TO HIS SIDES WITH HIS EYES CLOSED; THE WRATHIAN GUARD SPEAKS UP ONCE AGAIN:
 
Wraithian Guard:
Let’s see your greatness!!
 
PANEL 158: F-4 STILL WITH HIS HANDS, PULLS HIS HANDS INTO HIS FACE WHILE HIS FISTS ARE FACED IN THE AIR AND RECTRACTS HIS GAUNTLET BLASTERS. 
 
PANEL 159: EVERYONE CROUCHES DOWN AND AIMS THEIR BLASTERS AT HIM MORE INSTENSLY.
 
PANEL 160: F-4 LOOKS AT THEM COCKILY AND SAYS:
 
F-4: 
Ok.
 
Panel 161: F-4 STANDS UP AND AIMS HIS GAUNTLET BLASTER AT THE WRAITHIAN, A LIGHT HIGH PITCHED SOFT CHARGE UP SOUND COMES FROM THE GAUNTLET.
 
PANEL 162: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD GETS HIS HEAD BLOWN OFF BUT NOT BY F-4. 
 
PANEL 163: JEREMY AND THE OTHER SRF’S LEAP ABOUT 15 FEET IN THE AIR BLASTING AWAY AND LAND RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
 
PANEL 164: THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS AND THE SRF’S ARE FIGHTING EACHOTHER IN AN ALL OUT BATTLE.
 
PANEL 165: UP IN THE ROYAL CHAMBERS, A WRAITHIAN GUARD COMES RUSHING INTO THE ROOM OUT OF BREATHE TO ALERT THEM OF THE SITUATION: 
 
Wraithian guard: 
Downstairs! In the core generator room! S.U.V.I.V.O.R.S.! 
 
PANEL 166: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER AND THE WARLORD BECOME ALERTED BY THE NEWS. THE WARLORD SPEAKS UP AND SAYS:
 
Warlord: 
Do we have confirmation of their reasons for recon?!
Wraithian Guard: 
No sir.
 
PANEL 167: THE WRAITHIAN GUARD IS STILL OUT OF BREATHE.
 
Wraithian Guard: 
They shot first, didn’t have time to ask questions.
 
PANEL 168: THE WARLORD GIVES HIM INSTRUCTIONS:
 
Warlord: 
Get the word to the warriors, have them prepared to…
(He cuts him off.)
Wraithian Guard: 
We tried that, our security systems have already been compromised.
 
PANEL 169: THEY SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SITS BACK IN HIS CHAIR AND TRIES TO OPEN UP THE SECURITY RADAR SCREENS.
 
Sovereign Commander: 
Exactly what I am talking about warlord, they put their fields over our security mainframes. We lost contacts and visuals
 
PANEL 170: THE WARLORD SPEAKS UP URGENTLY:
 
Warlord:
Can we over ride it?! 
Sovereign commander:
No, they would succeed they’re mission before we can break through their protective fields. 
 
PANEL 171: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS TO THE WARLORD:
 
Sovereign commander: 
You better get down there. Your gunna’ have to contain the situation yourself.
(He says smiling.)
Warlord: 
Sovereign, it would be my personal pleasure.
 
PANEL 172: THE WARLORD CHARGES OUT OF THE ROYAL CHAMBERS AND DOWN THE HALL.
 
PANEL 173: DOWN IN THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM, THE SRF’S AND THE GUARDS ARE STILL FIGHTING.
 
 
 
PANEL 174: JEREMY IS LOOKING AROUND AND CAN’T SPOT THE BIO CHEMIST, HE SCREAMS TO F-4:
 
Jeremy: F-4, locate the biochemist!
 
PANEL 175: F-4 LEAPS IN THE AIR AND HIDES IN THE SHADOWS ON A CAT WALK.
 
PANEL 176: F-4 OPENS HIS GAUNTLET AND RUN’S A PERIMETER CHECK BUT HE CAN’T SEE THE
 BIOCHEMIST IN YELLOW. HE CONTACTS JEREMY ON HIS GAUNTLET AND SAY’S:
 
F-4: The precious cargo has left the extraction point, I don’t have a lock on ‘em.
 
PANEL 177: JEREMY RUNS TAKES OUT A FEW GUARDS AND HIDES BEHIND AN ELECTRICAL PANEL, JEREMY RESPONDS:
 
Jeremy: Get a lock on ‘em! We can’t lose ‘em!
 
PANEL 178: F-4 IS ON HIS GAUNTLET SEARCHING THROUGH IT WHEN HE SAYS:
 
F-4: Ten steps ahead of ya’.
 
PANEL 179: JEREMY IS FIGHTING OFF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS WHEN HE SAYS INTO HIS GAUNTLET COMMUNICATOR:
 
Jeremy: Do we have a visual confirmation?!
F-4: I got ‘em! He’s heading up to the…
 
PANEL 180: JEREMY IS WAITING FOR F-4 TO FINISH WHAT HE WAS SAYING BUT HE DOESN’T, JEREMY RESPONDS:
 
F-4: F-4?! F-4 are you there?!
 
PANEL 181: AS JEREMY IS TRYING TO GET F-4 TO RESPOND, THE WARLORD HAS F-4 IN THE AIR WITH A KNIFE IN HIS BACK. 
 
(On the communicator.)
Jeremy: F-4 what’s the status on the precious cargo?!
 
PANEL 182: JEREMY IS STILL TRYING TO A GET A RESPONSE FROM F-4:
Jeremy: F-4 respond!
(On the communicator)
 
PANEL 183: JEREMY LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM AND STARTS FIGHTING OFF WRAITHIAN GUARDS.
 
PANEL: THE WARLORD TAKES DOWN F-2
 
PANEL 186: F-4 COMES UP BEHIND F-5 AND GHOSTS HIM:
 
PANEL 187: JEREMY IS FIGHTING THE GUARDS WHEN THE 3 HEADS OF HIS SQUAD TEAM HITS HIM ALL OVER HIS BACK AND BODY.
 
PANEL 188: EVERYONE STOPS SHOOTING AND STANDS AS GUARDS IN THEIR SPOTS, JEREMY TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS ON THE FLOOR TO SEE HIS DECAPITATED BROTHERS IN ARMS LIEING ON THE FLOOR. 
 
Jeremy:
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
PANEL 189: THE WARLORD IN THE NEAR DISTANCE SPEAKS OUT SAYING:
 
Warlord: Seize him.
 
PANEL 190: THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS PUT THEIR BLASTERS FACING HIM.
 
PANEL 191: JEREMY PULLS OUT A PICTURE OF HIM AND HIS BROTHER DAVID WHEN THEY WERE KIDS.
 
PANEL 192: THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER ENTERS THE ROOM AND IS STANDING ON THE CATWALK WATCHING THE WHOLE THING WITH HIS HANDS FOLDED BEHIND HIS BACK.
 
PANEL 193: THE WARLORD IS WALKING TOWARDS JEREMY, AS THE WARLORD IS WALKING TOWARDS JEREMY THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS TALKING TO HIMSELF:
 
Sovereign commander: 
One thing will always remain a certainty.
 
PANEL 194: THE WARLORD IS STANDING OVER JEREMY AND PUTS HIS BIO BLASTER TO HIS HEAD.
 
PANEL 195: JEREMY TAKES ONE LAST BREATHE AND SAYS:
 
Jeremy: 
I’m sorry David…
 
PHING BLOOM!
 
PANEL 196: JEREMY LAYS THEIR DEAD WITH A HOLE IN HIS HEAD. THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER FINISHES:
 
Sovereign Commander:
Death is the only dominance.
 
 
 
David, Ethan, Virgil, Scarlet, and Yang
2512 ad
11:25am
"The Missing Brother"
 
 
SETTING: David and his SRF team have just takin’ down an entire Wraithian hoard, and now another has come. 
 
PANEL 197: SCARLET, VIRGIL, YANG, AND ETHAN ARE FINISHING OFF THE WRAITHIANS.
 
Yang: 
David went awall!
Ethan:
Again!
 
PANEL 198: SCARLET TAKES OUT THE LAST WRAITHIAN BY FLIPPING OVER HIM AND BLASTING AWAY HIS BIO PACK AND THEN SNAPPING HIS NECK.
 
PANEL 199: SCARLET TURNS AROUND WITH CURIOUSITY AND SEE’S ANOTHER WRAITHIAN HOARD TRANSPORT COMING FROM OUT OF THE DISTANCE.
 
PANEL 200: THE TRANSPORT IS LOCKING IN ON THEIR CURRENT LOCATION.
 
PANEL: THE WRATHIANS FALL STRAIGHT OUT OF THE BOTTOM OF THE TRANSPORT LAND ABOUT 20 FEET AWAY FROM THEM.
 
PANEL: ETHAN, VIRGIL, YANG, AND SCARLET ARE IN FORMATION SURROUNDED BY WRAITHIANS.
 
Yang:
Shit, there’s more this time.
Scarlet:
Watch each other’s 6’s.
Ethan:
This is only gunna’ work if David is here.
Virgil:
Where the hell did he go?
 
PANEL 198: A WRAITHIAN FALLS OUT OF NOWHERE RIGHT INFRONT OF THEM.
 
PANEL 199: DAVID FALLS RIGHT BEHIND HIM.
 
PANEL 200: DAVID STANDS UP AND LOOKS AT THE WRAITIAN WARRIORS WITH VICIOUSNESS
 
DAVID GETS BACK INTO FORMATION.
 
Ethan: 
Glad ta’ have ya’ back buddy, what’s the gameplan?
 
PANEL 201: DAVID BRAKES RANK AGAIN AND LEAPS INTO ACTION BY SPIRALING AT THEM BLASTING AWAY.
 
Virgil: 
What da’ hell are you doin’?
 
PANEL 202: THE REST OF THEM LEAP INTO ACTION AND ARE FIGHTING OFF THE WRAITHIANS, YANG LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
 
Yang: 
Ya’ know, a heads up would’ve been nice!
 
PANEL 203: ETHAN IS BLASTING AT THEM AND RUNS OUT OF PLASMA. HE ASK’S DAVID FOR ASSISTANCE.
 
Ethan: 
David I’m running dry here throw me a plasma cartridge!
 
PANEL 204: DAVID IGNORES HIM AND THE WRAITHIANS ARE CLOSING IN ON ETHAN.
 
PANEL 205: DAVID IS GOING BESERK ON THE WRAITHIANS. 
 
PANEL 206: THEN WRAITHIANS ARE CLOSING IN ON ETHAN A LITTLE MORE.
 
Ethan: David?!
 
PANEL 207: THEY’RE ABOUT TO ATTACK. 
 
PHING!
Ethan:
DAVID!!!!
 
PANEL 208: THE WRAITHIANS BLASTING ETHAN AWAY AND THE BLASTS GO RIGHT THROUGH HIM WITHOUT HURTING HIM. ETHAN SAYS:
 
Ethan: 
Well, there goes our record.
 
PANEL 209: DAVID IS STANDING THERE LOOKING AT THE REST OF THEM. 
 
PANEL 210: THE REST OF THEM ARE LOOKING AT HIM WITH CURIOUSITY: 
 
PANEL 211: THEN SIRENS GO OFF AND THE SCENERY AND WRAITHIANS DISOLVE AWAY UNVEILING A BIG FUTURISTIC TRAINING ROOM. 
 
PANEL 212: THE DRILL SERGENT COMES WALKING QUICKLY AT THEM:
 
Drill sergeant: 
What the hell! was that?
 
PANEL 213: DAVID, ETHAN, VIRGIL, SCARLET, AND YANG STAND IN A LINE WITH THE HANDS FOLDED IN FRONT OF THEM. 
 
PANEL 214: THE DRILL SERGEANT IS LOOKING AT THEM UP AND DOWN WALKING BACK AND FORTH.
 
Drill sergeant: 
What do you guys think were doin’? tryin’ out for the cheerleading squad?
 
PANEL 215: THE SRF TRAINEE’S LOOK AT EACHOTHER. 
 
Drill sergeant: 
10 years ago, you were all assigned to eachother to form a squad team.
 
PANEL 216: THE DRILL SERGEANT IS STILL WALKING UP AND DOWN.
Drill sergeant: 
And throughout these 10 years of training, we’ve trained you to work together as a team to ensure mission success and a chance at our survival for just one more day. That was the major focus of concern.
 
PANEL 217: THE SQUAD TEAM IS STANDING UP STRAIGHT AS A BOARD LISTENING TO WHAT THE DRILL SERGEANT IS SAYING:
 
DRILL SERGEANT:
You all must stand, together!...Fight as one!
 
PANEL 218: DAVID IS STANDING THERE MOTIONLESS IN THE LINE AND THE DRILL SERGEANT IS WALKING TOWARDS HIM:
 
DRILL SERGEANT:
In the heat of battle, each of you must protect the SRF on your right and on your left. And unless absolutely necessary…
 
PANEL 218: THE DRILL SERGEANT COMES AND STOPS IN FRONT OF DAVID. HE STARES HIM DOWN IN THE FACE AND SAYS:
 
DRILL SERGEANT:
You should never! Break rank…That might be last thing you ever do.
 
DAVID LOOKS SLIGHTLY AWAY AND THEN AT THE REST OF THEM.
 
PANEL 219: THE DRILL SERGEANT WALKS AWAY, TURNS AROUND AND MAKES ONE MORE REMARK:
 
Drill sergeant: 
And for [frick] sake, don’t lose focus. 
Drill sergeant:
Cause’ when project “take down” goes into effect, its gunna’ turn a lot! of Wrathian heads…and When we go to war you may be the last ones standing, and ever decision you guys make will change the course of our future.
 
 
 
 
David's Training quarters
2512 AD
12:20 PM
 
 
PANEL 220: DAVID IS LYING IN HIS BED IN HIS PRIVATE QUARTERS LOOKING AT A PICTURE OF HIM AND HIS BROTHER WHEN ETHAN WALKS IN:
 
Ethan: 
Hey. 
David: 
Hey.
 
PANEL 221: ETHAN LEANS UP AGAINST THE WALL AND JUST GET’S DOWN TO THE POINT.
 
ETHAN: 
Hey David umm. What happened with ya’ back in the simulation chamber, everyone’s curious. 
DAVID: 
I don’t know. 
 
PANEL 222: ETHAN PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN AND SAYS THE OBVIOUS:
 
ETHAN: 
Does this have to do with Jeremy?
 
(he fires right back)
DAVID: 
He didn’t make it back yet from the rescue mission...It's not like him.
 
NEL 223: ETHAN GETS UP FROM THE WALL AND PULLS OUT THE CHAIR AND SITS DOWN ON IT THE OPPOSITE WAY:
 
ETHAN: 
Have you just met your brother? He’s always on missions and sometimes he doesn’t make it back for a few days.
 
DAVID: 
You don’t understand this is different.
 
PANEL 224: DAVID IS LAYING ON THE BED HOLDING A PICTURE OF HIM AND JEREMY: 
 
DAVID:
He never broke his promise and he promised he’d be back an hour ago. Something’s not right...I'm telling you something's wrong.
 
ETHAN: 
Davy you have nothing to worry about.
 
PANEL 225: ETHAN IS SITTING ON THE CHAIR BACKWARDS: 
 
ETHAN:
Jeremy once took on 2 squad teams leading up to the drill sergeant! I’m sure he take care of himself.
DAVID: 
If only there was a way ya’ know?
 
PANEL 226: DAVID IS LOOKING AT THE PICTURE IN HIS HAND:
 
DAVID:
A way where I can pinpoint his exact location and radio him to see if he’s okay?
 
PANEL 227: ETHAN IS SITTING ON THE CHAIR: 
 
ETHAN:
David I’m sure he’ll be back soon.
DAVID: 
Easy for you to stay calm about this.
 
PANEL 228: DAVID SITS UP ON THE EDGE OF THE BED LEANING FORWARD:
 
DAVID: 
You still have a family out in sector 7.
DAVID: 
I lose Jeremy I have no one. I’ll be alone.
 
PANEL 229: ETHAN TAKES A PAUSE LOOKING AT DAVID BEFORE HE SAYS:
 
ETHAN:
Your wrong ya’ know.
ETHAN:
I’ve been your brother since before we started SRF training 10 years ago. 
 
PANEL 230: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM SLIGHTLY SMILING.
 
PANEL 231: ETHAN SMILES BACK REASSURING. 
 
PANEL 232: ETHAN HITS THE TOP OF THE BACK END OF THE CHAIR AND GETS UP HAPPILY SAYING: 
 
ETHAN:
And as your brother, it is my duty to ensure you say goodbye to this worry and hello to goodtimes.
 
PANEL 233: DAVID LOOKS UP AT HIM AND SAY’S: 
 
DAVID:
Now?
ETHAN:
That’s right, and there’s only way to do this
 
PANEL 234: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
 
ETHAN:
Boys night out!
 
PANEL 237: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM THINKING HE’S CRAZY AND SMILING:
 
DAVID: 
It’s only 12:30?
 
PANEL 236: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SHRUGS:
 
ETHAN: 
So were startin’ early.
 
PANEL 237: DAVID SAYS: 
 
DAVID:
We have class in 15 minutes.
 
PANEL 238: ETHAN REPLIES BACK: 
 
ETHAN:
Haven’t you ever heard of “senior ditch day”?
 
PANEL 239: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM GIGGLING:
 
DAVID: 
How does that even apply to us?
 
PANEL 240: ETHAN SAY’S BACK GIGGLING:
 
ETHAN:
Were technically seniors.
 
PANEL 241: DAVID PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN AND STARTS TO LAUGH:
 
DAVID: 
You’re insane you know that?
 
PANEL 242: ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM STILL GIGGLING:
 
ETHAN: 
Insane but right…
 
PANEL 243: ETHAN POINTS AT DAVID STILL GIGGLING AND SAYS:
 
ETHAN: 
And don’t deny it you know I’m right.
 
PANEL 244: DAVID STOPS LAUGHING AND JUST SITS THERE FOR A MINUTE, ETHAN SAYS:
 
ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS:
 
ETHAN: 
Where’s the David I know that’s up for anything?
 
PANEL 245: DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN SMIRKING:
 
PANEL 246: ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID SHRUGING HIS SHOULDERS AND PUTTING HIS HANDS IN THE AIR WITH HIS HEALD TILTED:
 
PANEL 247: DAVID LOOKS AT HIM SMIRKING AND SAYS:
 
DAVID:
Could be fun.
 
PANEL 248: ETHAN SLAPS HIS HANDS TOGETHER AND SAYS SMILING:
 
ETHAN:
Let the games begin!
 
PANEL 249: DAVID STARTS TO LAUGH AGAIN.
 
SECTOR 7 
Virgil’s private quarters
2512 AD
12:27 PM
 
SETTING: Virgil is knelt over on his bed praying with a candle and a rosary praying. 
 
PANEL 250: VIRGIL SIGNS ACROSS AND OPENS UP WITH A PRAYER:
 
VIRGIL:
Lord, even with the horrific meaning of this anniversary I thank you for this day. Thank you for allowing me to walk, talk, see, touch, and feel this morning
 
PANEL 251: VIRGIL PUTS HIS HEAD DOWN TO HIS FISTS:
 
VIRGIL:
I would also like to take the honor in thanking you for our current situation. Guide yo’ children into the light to see that all of dis is just a test of faith. And when we climb over to the other side, we will see nothing but yo’ everlasting and powerful grace. In Jesus’ glorious name I pray. Amen.
 
(Pause)
 
PANEL 252: YANG IS STANDING IN THE BACK LEANING IN THE DOORWAY WATCHING VIRGIL PRAY.
 
YANG:
How can belief in someone you can’t see help us see the good to come?
 
Panel 253: VIRGIL LOOKS SLIGHTLY OVER HIS SHOULDER TRYING TO GET A MESSAGE ACROSS: 
 
VIRGIL:
It’s called faith, Yang. Sometimes da’ best outcomes come from the things we can’t see.
 
Panel 254: YANG REPLIES:
 
YANG:
Sometimes we have to just settle with what we can see in front of us.
 
Panel 255: VIRGIL RESPONDS:
 
VIRGIL:
Miraculous things can happen when ya’ have faith in a higha’ power. 
 
PANEL 256: YANG SHRUGS AND SAYS WHILE GIGGLING:
 
YANG:
Look around you Virg, you call this miraculous?
VIRGIL:
Ya’, actually I do.
 
PANEL 257: VIRGIL SAYS:
 
VIRGIL:
I believe it’s a miracle how we were able to survivor for 500 years, it’s a miracle that the enhancement gene was found, thus creating all of us SRF’s. 
 
PANEL 258: YANG IS LOOKING AT VIRGIL CURIOUSLY:
 
VIRGIL:
Miracles can easily remain unveiled by those who refuse to open deir eyes brotha.
 
PANEL 259: VIRGIL SAYS SMIRKING:
VIRGIL:
  If you open yo’ eyes, You’ll see ‘dem to.
 
YANG’S COMMUNICATOR RINGS IN HIS POCKET. HE PULLS IT OUT AND SMILES:
 
PANEL 260: VIRGIL LOOKS AT YANG CURIOUSLY WITH A SMILE:
 
VIRGIL:
I know dat’ look, what’s up?
 
 
PANEL 261: YANG THROWS VIRGIL HIS COMMUNICATOR SMILING:
YANG:
Open your eyes to this.
 
 
VIRGIL LOOKS AT YANG WITH A SMILE AND SAYS:
 
VIRGIL:
Dats’ what I’m talkin’ bout’, after all dis’ trainin’ an what not I’m in brotha’, 
 
VIRGIL GLANCES AT YANG STILL HOLDING THE COMMUNICATOR AND SAYS WITH A SMILE:
 
YANG:
You down?
 
YANG SHAKES HIS HEAD AND RAISES HIS EYEBROWS AND SAYS:
 
YANG:
Oh, I’m down
 
(both giggling)
 
YANG COMMUNICATOR RINGS AGAIN, THE MESSAGE READS:
 
MESSAGE:
Ethan – Do NOT! Tell Scarlet. 
 
VIRGIL:
Uh-oh.
 
 
A/P Gauntlet and Vehicle Training Class
2512 AD
12:45 pm
 
 
SETTING: THE PROFESSOR IS STANDING AT THE FRONT OF THE CLASSROOM WRITING IN THE HOLOGRAPHIC BOARD. THE CHAIRS ARE FILLED INSIDE THIS ROUND FUTURISTIC CLASSROOM. 
 
SCARLET IS SITTING IN THE CLASSROOM LOOKING AT THE DOOR AWAITING FOR THE DAVID, VIRGIL, ETHAN, AND YANG TO WALK THROUGH THE DOOR. 
 
THE PROFESSOR TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS AT SCARLET AND SAYS:
 
PROFESSOR: 
Ms. Scarlet?
 
SCARLET TURNS AROUND ABRUPTLY AND REPLIES:
 
SCARLET:
Yes sir?
THE PROFESSOR SAY:
 
PROFESSOR:
Are you a one woman squad team, or do the rest of them just not wanna’ pass this class?
SCARLET:
I’m sorry professor.
 
SCARLET CONTINUE’S BY FINISHING:
 
SCARLET:
They’ll be here soon, I’m sure they’re just getting their reports ready.
PROFESSOR:
We’ll I hope so…
 
THE PROFESSOR IS STANDING IN FRONT OF THE CLASSROOM WITH HIS HANDS IN HIS POCKETS:
 
PROFESSOR:
Without all passing grades this last semester, I’m afraid your squad team will not be graduating…I’ll give them 10! minutes...
SCARLET:
Thank you sir.
 
SCARLET LOOKS FURIOUSLY AT THE DOOR:
SHE PULLS OUT HER COMMUNICATOR FROM HER POCKET AND TEXT’S DAVID:
MESSAGE:
Where the [frick]! Are you guys?!
 
ON DAVID’S COMMUNICATOR IT SHOWS THE MESSAGE “Where the [frick]! Are you guys?!”. DAVID PUTS HIS COMMUNICATOR BACK IN HIS POCKET.
 
DAVID LOOKS UP AND SAY’S:
 
DAVID: 
Well, it’s official. Scarlet is going to murder us. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
SECTOR 7
Jackson’s Pub. 
2512 AD
1:31 PM
“Early Boy’s Night Out!”
 
ETHAN, DAVID, YANG, AND VIRGIL ARE SITTING AT A TABLE IN VIRGIL’S OLDER BROTHER’S PUB. ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID AND SAYS: 
 
ETHAN: 
That’s just like her, tryin’ to control every little situation possible. She needs ta’ learn ta relax.
 
DAVID PICKS UP HIS DRINK AND SAYS BEFORE HE TAKES A DRINK:
 
DAVID: 
We should’ve told her we were gunna’ be here, maybe she’d like to share a few drinks with us to.
 
ETHAN LOOKS AT DAVID CURIOUSLY AND SARCASTICALLY:
 
ETHAN:
Do I sense secretive emotions arising from one’s veins?
 
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SAYS:
 
DAVID: 
What the hell are you talkin’ about?
ETHAN:
Oh, come off it already.
 
ETHAN SAYS WITH A SMILE:
 
ETHAN:
It hasn’t been a secret since 3rd year.
 
YANG JOINS THE CONVERSATION AND SAYS:
 
YANG:
Technically 4th when you consider the “almost attempt.”
 
DAVID SHAKES HIS HANDS AND LOOKS AT THEM LIKE THERE CRAZY AND SAYS: 
 
DAVID:
What the [frick] is everyone talkin about?
 
VIRGIL JOINS IN SAYING:
 
VIRGIL: 
Talkin’ ‘bout Scarlet brotha’, we all wonderin’ when you gunna’ make da’ first move.
 
DAVID LOOKS AT THEM WITH A SMIRK, AND SAYS BEFORE LOOKING DOWN AT THE BEER MUG AND SAYS:
 
DAVID:
I think those training exercises are startin’ to get to you guys.
ETHAN:
Oh, I don’t think we’ve been hitting the exercises that hard…
 
ETHAN IS SITTING THERE SMILING AND TALKING DIRECTLY TO DAVID:
 
ETHAN:
8th year when the guards were doing an update training session, me and you went up to the 10th year trainee quarters to meet those chicks I snag in 2nd period lunch. 
 
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SHRUGS SLIGHTLY:
 
DAVID:
So?
 
ETHAN SHRUGS BACK AND SAYS GIGGLING:
 
ETHAN:
During your little make out session you called her “Scarlet”!
 
YANG AND VIRGIL START GIGGLING.
 
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN AND SAYS WITH A GIGGLE:
 
DAVID: 
That never happened.
ETHAN:
  Oh, yes it did.
DAVID LOOKS AT ETHAN WITH AN UNBELIEVED LOOK:
 
DAVID:
No it didn’t come on.
 
ETHAN STARTS POINTING AT DAVID AND GIGGLING SAYING:
 
ETHAN:
Yes it did! I also remember you not sleepin’ that night.
 
EVERYONE GIGGLES:
 
DAVID LOOKS AT THEM GIGGLING AND SAYS:
 
DAVID:
You guys are cut off.
ETHAN:
Oh on contraire
 
ETHAN RAISES HIS ARMS OUTWARD SLOWLY AND LEANS BACK SAYING:
 
ETHAN: 
We just getting’ started.
 
AT THAT MINUTE AN A MAN IN HIS MID 20’S WALKS IN THE PUB DOORS AND HUGS HIS BROTHER, YOU CAN HEAR THEIR CONVERSATION IN THE BACKGROUND:
 
BROTHER: 
When did you get back from Sector 12?
BROTHER:
Just now!
BROTHER:
It’s good ta’ have ya’ back man.
 
DAVID IS TURNED AROUND LOOKING BACK AT THE BROTHERS.
 
HE TURNS AROUND AND LOOKS DOWN AT THE BEER MUG FEELING SCARED, WORRIED, AND CURIOUS.
 
ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM STUCK NOT KNOWING WHAT TO SAY
 
YANG IS LOOKING AT HIM SILENTLY AND VIRGIL’S HEAD IS DOWN. BEFORE VIRGIL LOOKS UP AT DAVID HE SAYS:
 
VIRGIL:
He didn’t make it back from Wraithian Capital yet huh?
 
VIRGIL LOOKS OVER AT DAVID:
 
DAVID SHAKES HIS HEAD NO WITHOUT UTTERING A WORD:
 
YANG ASKES CURIOUSLY:
 
YANG: 
I thought he was supposed to be back already?
 
DAVID REPLIES STILL LOOKING DOWN AT THE BEER SAYING:
 
DAVID:
Well he isn’t! so. 
 
ETHAN LOOKS AT HIM AND REASSURES ‘EM.
 
ETHAN:
Ya’ know I think that a boys night is not gunna be enough, I think you might need something else.
 
DAVID SAYS STILL LOOKING AT THE BEER MUG:
 
DAVID: 
I need what that guy at the bar just felt.
 
VIRGIL LOOKS AT DAVID AND REPLIES TO HIM:
 
VIRGIL:
2 Corinthians 5:7 “For we walk by faith, not by sight.”
DAVID:
Ya well, I would never insult you regarding your faith Virg’ but…
 
DAVID PICKS UP THE BEER MUG HOLDS IT IN FRONT OF HIS FACE. AS HE’S LOOKING IN THE GLASS BEFORE TAKING A GULP, HE SAYS:
 
DAVID: 
I’ll feel better when he’s in front of me.
 
DAVID TAKES A SIP OF THE BEER.
 
 
 
 
 
 
WRAITHIAN CAPITAL CITY
The Watchtower
2516 AD
1:35 pm
“The Loophole.”
 
SETTING: 
The Sovereign Commander and the Warlord are down in the Core Generator Room. TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT THE REASON WAS FOR THEIR INFILTRATION.
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander is standing over Jeremies dead body
with his hands behind his back. He says:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
They have never infiltrated inside the watch tower since our rise over them.
 
WARLORD:
Yes, well we need to find out why.
 
THE SOVEREIGN LOOKS DOWN AT JEREMY’S GAUNTLET WITH CURIOUSNESS.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TRYS TO PULL IT OFF BUT IT WON’T BUDGE.
 
THE WARLORD LOOKS OVER AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER CURIOUSLY AND SAYS:
 
WARLORD: 
What are you doing?
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER PUTS OUT HIS HAND AT THE WARLORD AND SAYS:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Throw me a blade.
 
THE WARLORD THROWS HIM THE BLADE THAT HE USED TO SLAUGHTER THE SQUAD TEAM:
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER CHOPS JEREMIES ARM OFF.
 
HE TURNS AROUND HOLDING JEREMIES ARM WITH HIS GAUNTLET ATTACHED TO IT, HE LOOKS AT THE WARLORD AND SAYS:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
It’s been a almost 10 cycles since we had one of the humans weapons  in grasps, they store everything in here. Let’s take a look inside shall we?
 
THE WARLORD LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WITH OBVIOUSNESS:
 
WARLORD:
Sovereign, we have tried numerous times to activate their gauntlet weapons. They’re! weapons, 
like ours, can only be activated by a human.
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Yes, that’s true…
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS WITH COUNTERACTION:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
But we have had a human with us for the last few cycles.
 
WARLORD LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN LIKE HE HAS ALL THE ANSWERS. HE PUTS HIS WRIST BY HIS MOUTH AND SAYS:
 
WARLORD: 
Bring us the biochemist.
 
THE BIOCHEMIST IS BEING ESCORTED THROUGH THE CORE GENERATOR ROOM BY TWO WRAITHIAN WARRIORS. HIS HANDS ARE CONTAINED IN A BIO ENERGY CHARGED LOCK GRIP.
 
THEY PUSH THE FLITY DIRTY BIO CHEMIST TO THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER.
 
ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN GUARDS PUSHES HIM TO HIS KNEES AND SAYS: 
 
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR: 
Kneel!
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LEANS DOWN AND LOOKS AT HIM WITH DISGUST:
 
THE BIO CHEMISTS’ HEAD IS DOWN WHEN THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Do you know how many planets are great race has conquered.
 
THE BIOCHEMIST CONTINUES TO SIT THERE SILENTLY WITH HIS HEAD DOWN:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
1,000’s… ten’s of thousands.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Guess what?
 
THE BIO CHEMIST SITS THERE: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Your kind, would give me the most astounding! pleasure in watching you all burn to ashes. 
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER STANDS UP STRAIGHT AND PUTS OUT JEREMIES ARM WITH THE GAUNTLET ATTACHED TO IT AND SAYS:
 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Put it on, and locate the answers we seek.
 
THE BIOCHEMIST IS STILL SITTING THERE WITH HIS HEAD DOWN.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS OVER AT ONE OF THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS AND KNODES AT HIM:
 
THE WRAITHIAN WARRIOR PUSHES A BUTTON ON A REMOTE AND ZAPPES THE BIOCHEMIST:
 
ZZZZCAACZZZCACCAACZZZCACACCZZZZ!
 
BIOCHEMIST:
ARRRRGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!
 
THE OTHER WRATHIAN WARRIORS GRABS THE BIO CHEMIST BY HIS DIRTY SHIRT AND PICKS HIM UP BY ONE HAND AND HOLDS HIM FACING TOWARDS THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER, THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER SAYS: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Look! At me…when I’m talking! To you scum!
 
THE BIOCHEMIST LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Now, I will say this one last time.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS AT HIM WITH ANGER:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Put it on!
 
THE BIOCHEMIST PUTS HIS HAND OUT FOR THE ARM, HE OPENS IT AT PUTS IT ON HIS ARM. 
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER LOOKS AT THE BIOCHEMIST AND SAYS WITH SLIGHT ENTHUSIASM:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Now we need to know what was there reason for being here.
 
THE BIOCHEMIST LOOKS AT THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WITH DISGUST AND THEN DOWN AT THE GAUNTLET, HE SLOWLY OPENS THE HOLOGRAPHIC SCREEN. 
 
HE BEGINS TO ACTIVATE THE DATA INPUT DEVICE INSIDE THE GAUNTLET AND OPENS THE MISSION OBJECTIVE SCREEN. THE MISSION OBJECTIVE SCREEN APPEARS AND IT SAYS WITH A BULLET POINT.
 
MISSION OBJECTIVE:
Locate the extraction point
Retrieve the bio chemist.
 
THE BIOCHEMIST’S EYES OPEN AND HE BEGINS TO GO BESERK WITH DEPRESSION AND HEARTACHE. 
 
NO!!! NOOO!! NO!! NOOO!!!!
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TELLS THE WRAITHIAN WARRIOR:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Shut him up!
 
ZZZZCAAACACZZZCACAAAZZZZACACAA
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TURNS AROUND WITH ASTOUNDMENT AND THE WARLORD IS RIGHT NEXT TO HIM. AS THEIR TALKING QUIETLY IN THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN SEE THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS BEATING THE BIO-CHEMIST: 
 
WARLORD: 
Sovereign, what do we do now?
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Well, first things first.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER TURNS AROUND AND SAYS TO THEM CALMLY:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Kill him. 
 
THE WRAITHIAN WARRIORS PULL OUT THEIR BIO BLASTERS AND:
 
PHING BOOM!
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WALKS AWAY CALMLY AND THE WARLORD STANDS THERE FOR A SECOND CURIOUS AS TO WHY HE JUST DID THAT, THE WARLORD FOLLOWS THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
 
Sovereign commander’s royal chambers:
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER WALKS INTO THE ROOM FOLLOWING THE WARLORD: 
 
WARLORD:
Sovereign, permission to speak out of term.
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
I already know what you are going to say warlord.
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER ACTIVATES HIS CHAIR AND SAYS: 
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER; 
Yes, it was absolutely necessary.
 
THE WARLORD STANDS THERE SLIGHTY SHOUTING:
 
WARLORD: 
You have appointed! me warlord over our armies not! because I am your closest friend and ally! but because of my knowledge of war and combat! And what! You have just done was obliterate our only chance at actually wiping out the humans!
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS SEARCHING THROUGH HIS HOLOGRAPHIC PROJECTIONS WHEN HE SAYS:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER:
Have you forgotten what I have told you earlier today?
 
THE WARLORD PAUSES FOR A SECOND AND THEN SAYS:
 
WARLORD: 
A loophole?
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
Correct! And you are right my friend, the bio chemist is our way in at fully! Dominating the humans for good. 
 
THE SOVEREIGN COMMANDER IS STILL SEARCHING THROUGH THE HOLOGRAPHIC PROJECTION:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER: 
We needed to originally locate their sectors whereabouts, and those answers will come in time. But when someone with great attributes as those of the biochemists are needed, they are usually needed for a great importance. It is our job and top priority as to figuring out what he is so desperately needed for by his kind.
 
THE WARLORD CURIOUSLY SPEAKS UP:
 
WARLORD
I think it's time that we call in the spy?
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander is still searching through the holographic image surrounding, He finds what he was looking for and moves his hands out in a spreading motion:
 
PANEL:
The shot turns around and shows a  pinpointed planet in the holographic star projection in red with scannings on the side of it:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Absolutely.
 
 
 
 
 
SECTOR 7
Telecommunications Division
2512 ad
2:25pm
"Meeting with the Commanding Board"
 
 
PANEL:
The Telecommunications Division is a slightly futuristic yet very technical room inside the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R Tower with holographic screens and control panels scattered all over the place without order. All over the place are Telecommunications workers walking around and working on multiple daily tasks. In the dead center of the room is the commander standing there with his arms folded looking at 10 holographic screens with the Commanders of all the SECTOR's around the planet. The Commander of SECTOR 7 is doing everything in his power to try and keep the Commanding Board at bay and unaware of the squad teams rescue mission and the biochemist:
 
COMMANDER 7
Ladies and Gentlemen, rest assure every effort surrounding "Project Takedown" is being handled with outstanding attendance. It will not! be long now before you receive a full frontal demonstration.
 
COMMANDER 3
And, just how! long is "Not long" Commander 7.
 
COMMANDER 7
Sooner than you expect...
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls in closer at the Commander of SECTOR 7 as he further explains in detail of what's going on, he says:
 
COMMANDER 7
...Our Science and Tech Division have found a gliche within' the components. After said gliche is brought up to procedural code of the highest standard I assume.
 
PANEL:
On one of the screens shows the Commander of SECOT 6 leaning in curiously as to finding out what the gliche is, he says:
 
COMMANDER 6
What kind of Gliche??
 
COMMANDER 7
Nothing major Commander 6, as to our understanding it's very! minor...
 
PANEL:
The Commander of SECTOR 7 describes the details of what the gliche is, he says:
 
COMMANDER 7
...the module that's connected to the triggering Mechanism wasn't strong enough to withstand the power of the Wraithian's bio energy. But, Luckily for for us this problem is easily! fixable. A different metallic alloy should! do the trick.
 
COMMANDER 2
The metals being used for the components are already some of the strongest metals we know of?
 
COMMANDER 7
This is true Commander 2, but there are other types of metals that seem to deem themselves more longer lasting than the one's currently used! for the components...
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls away and shows the Commander with his arm's still folded explaining the details of the efforts down in the Science and Tech Division. He finishes by saying:
 
COMMANDER 7
...As we speak SECTOR 7's leading experts are testing some of these metallic alloys on the components. And in their lies the demonstration problem...
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls back to a closer shot of the Commander of SECTOR 7 as he further explains saying:
 
...this process must! be handled with extreme! care and it's going to take some extra time.
 
PANEL:
On the holographic screens the Commanding Board pauses and looks around at eachother for a moment. The Commander of SECTOR 10 responds back to the Commander of SECTOR 7 and says:
 
COMMANDER 10
We are running out of patience Commander 7...We need a specific time before we can move forward.
 
COMMANDER 7
I understand your concern's with this, believe me I do...
 
PANEL:
The Commander of SECTOR 7 finishes by saying:
 
COMMANDER 7
...like I said, it shouldn't be long before a demonstration is givin'...Everything should be ready by the end of the anniversary today. I can promise you that.
 
COMMANDER 10 
Then it's settled...
 
PANEL:
The Commander of SECTOR 10 relaxly continues on:
 
COMMANDER 10
...the Commanding Board gives SECTOR 7 until the end of the anniversary for a full demonstration on "Project Takedown".
 
PANEL:
The Commander of SECTOR 7 smirks at Commander 10 and says:
 
COMMANDER 7
And it shall be done Commander 10.
 
COMMANDER 10
Well let's hope so...
 
PANEL:
On the holographic screen, the Commander of SECTOR 10 leans in and says with a serious tone in his voice:
 
COMMANDER 10
Or were pulling out...
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls out showing the Commander standing there with his arms still folded and the 10 holographic screens of the Commanding Board. The Commander of SECTOR 10 speaks out to everyone saying:
 
COMMANDER 10
...I call this meeting ajurned, everyone second it?
 
COMMANDING BOARD
I.
 
 
PANEL
All 10 of the holographic screens turn off simultaniously leaving the Commander standing there starring at blank screens:
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls to a close shot of the Commander as he puts his head down, closes his eyes, and rubs his face:
 
COMMANDER
Sigh...What's taking them so long...Where are they?
 
 
 
 
 
 
Loading Dock
 
      
PANEL:
Down in the Loading Dock all the LD workers are running around and working diligently on Force Hovers trying to move them around and put them in the accorded places. The room is a large indoor landing strip like dock space where all the Force Hovers are stored and ready for bot arrival and departure:
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD is down in the lower part of the Loading Dock directing a few of the LD workers operating some large crane like devices to move some Force Hovers in their rightful places:
 
HEAD OF LD
Okay, a little higher! store in cargo area 54-1. You,
store these here in cargo area 55-9. Now, these need
to...
 
PANEL:
Before the Head of LD can finish what he was about to say, the big Loading Dock entry way decompresses and smoke flies in every direction. The big metal rusty doors begin to slide open with a noise exposing how big and heavy they are:
 
PANEL:
Everyone stops what they are doing and curiously looks at the big rusted main entry doors slowly opening. The last one to look is the head of LD standing in the front of everyone:
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls to the doors now fully open. The entire Loading dock stands there silently waiting to see who comes in:
 
PANEL:
The shot shows all the way down the Landing strip past the big loading main entry way. All the way down as far as the eye can see is a Force Hover coming towards them, and we can hear the high pitched thruster engine very lowly:
 
PANEL:
The head of LD see's the Force Hover coming in for arrival. He gets relieved and excited at the same time. He turns around to look at everyone else. Everyone else is clapping and slightly cheering them on:
 
HEAD OF LD
It's them! It's the SQUAD TEAM MAKING CONTACT WITH THE BIOCHEMIST!!!
 
LD WORKER'S
YA!!! YES!!!! YA!!! YES!!!
 
PANEL:
The show goes back inside the ever long landing strip on the other side of the main entry door. The Force Hover is a little closer unveiling that there's only one coming, the high pitched engire is getting louder:
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD and the other LD workers slowly stop chanting and get a little worried and curious. One of the LD workers in the background says:
 
LD WORKER
Where's the rest of them??
 
 
PANEL:
The Force hover is getting a little closer. The high pitched engine is getting louder:
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD is very worried and curious, another LD worker speaks up and says:
 
LD WORKER
Sir, he's not slowing down?
 
PANEL:
The Shot shows the force hover with the survivor from the rescue mission back at Wrathian Capital. He sits there barely holding on for dear life riding his Force Hover:
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD gets wide eyed. He turns around and screams out alerting everyone to clear the way:
 
HEAD OF LD
GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!
 
PANEL:
Everyone jumps out of the way in a panic as the Force Hover comes flying into the Loading Dock full speed and crashes into everything hitting other Force Hovers, control panels, cranes, etc.:
 
PANEL:
The Force Hover finally crashes into the wall half destroyed:
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD and everyone else slowly gets up to look at the wreckage along with everyone else:
 
HEAD OF LD
Jesus...
 
PANEL:
The shot moves to the Wreckage for a second or two before we hear the SRF in the background gasping and moaning for dear life:
 
F3
Gasp! Gasp!
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD looks over at the SRF lying on the floor half dead, he hurries to his feet and screams out in a panic:
 
HEAD OF LD
GET A MEDIC!!!
 
PANEL:
Everyone hurries to their feet and rushes over to him:
 
PANEL:
The LD's all suround him worried and in a panic. The Head of LD pushes his way to the front of the crowd:
 
HEAD OF LD
Move! MOVE!!!
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD is kneeling over him and just stands there in a panic and shocked of what he see's:
 
PANEL:
F3 lyies there on the floor half dead trying to breathe for air:
 
HEAD OF LD
Hey, HEY! stay with me...Come on stay with me!
 
PANEL: 
The shot moves back to the Head of LD kneeling over him looking down at F3 in worry:
 
PANEL:
The LD workers surround the Head of LD kneeling over the half dead SRF lying in the middle of the Load Dock, as the shot is from a bird's eye view the Head of LD says in a very serious tone:
 
HEAD OF LD
Get this to the Commander...Tell him...we've made contact.
 
 
TELECOMMUNICATIONS DIVISION
 
 
PANEL:
On the other side of the Telecommunications Division shows double steel main doors leading in and out of the Telecommunications Division. The main doors have small windows on them and surrounded by a steel like frame. The main door's decode and slide open unveiling the Sergeant entering the Telecommunications Division: 
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP!
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant is making his way through the Telecommunications Division past all the Control panels and Telecommunications workers towards the Commander:
 
SERGEANT
Did they buy it?
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant is now standing a few feet behind the Commander. The Commander turns his head slightly and responds back:
 
COMMANDER
You can say that.
 
SERGEANT
Thank God, everything from here on out should be just fine now. 
 
PANEL:
The Commander turns his attention back to the blank holographic screens and says:
 
COMMANDER
Well, that definitely should buy us sometime but it's not gunna' be perminate...
 
PANEL:
The Commander turns around half way to look at the Sergeant. He continues on by saying:
 
COMMANDER
...If the Commanding board finds out the truth of why were stalling them, were through.
 
SERGEANT
Don't worry Commander...
 
PANEl:
The switches over to the Sergeant who is trying to put the Commander at ease:
 
SERGEANT
...Sooner or later the SRF squad team carrying out this rescue mission will be making contact, and a future above the surface will be well! on it's way.
 
PANEL:
Immediately after the Sergeant finishes trying to make the Commander at ease. One of the holographic control panels starts to beep indicating an urgent message coming through:
 
(BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!)
 
PANEL:
The Telecommunications worker stationed at the holographic control panel see's it beeping. He curiously leans in for a closer look to read the message coming through:
 
PANEL:
He realizes what the message is and the archive codings and it hit's him like a bullet train:
 
TELECOMMUNICATIONS WORKER
My God...
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls back over to the Commander and the Sergeant. They immediately look over at the Telecommunications worker after he grabs their attention:
 
TELECOMMUNICATIONS WORKER
I wouldn't say that just yet! Sergeant.
 
SERGEANT
And why is that?
 
PANEL:
The Telecommunications worker is pointing at the holographic control panel and looking at the Commander and Sergeant curiously. He says:
 
TELECOMMUNICATIONS WORKER
I'm picking up a Level 5 urgency message over here.
 
PANEL:
The Commander moves past the Sergeant a little towards the Telecommunications worker with serious concern. As the Sergeant looks at the Commander, the Commander says to the Telecommunications worker with a serious tone:
 
COMMANDER
From where exactly??
 
PANEL:
The Telecommunications worker still pointing at the holographic control panel looks at the Commander and tries to break it to him easily by saying:
 
TELECOMMUNICATIONS WORKER
From the Loading Dock sir.
      
 
PANEL:
Inside the Loading Dock down in the lower quadrant shows the SRF still laying in the middle of what now looks like crash landing site with all the LD workers still surrounding him:
 
HEAD OF LD
Where's the Medic!?
 
PANEL:
One of the LD workers is stationed at one of the holographic control panel on the upper quadrant floor screams back down at the Head of LD:
 
LD WORKER
Medical deployment 4.6 minutes ago! expected wait
time 9 minutes sir!
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls to all the LD workers surrounding him trying to contain him until the Medic arrives. The SRF lays on the floors gasping for air and moaning and groaning from the pain:
 
F3
Gasp! Gasp! ARGHHH!!! GASP!! Ahh...
 
LD WORKER
Just hold on! alright, medic's on their way.
 
PANEL:
The main Loading Dock entry way exactly the same as the one in the Telecommunications Division decodes and slides open. The Commander and the Sergeant rush through it in a panic:
 
PANEL:
The Commander and the Sergeant make it to the end of the upper quadrant and is now looking down over a railing on the lower quadrant at the LD workers surrounding the SRF laying on the floor in the middle of the crash site:
 
PANEL:
The Commander and the Sergeant stand side by side looking down at the mess on the lower quadrant in aww and horrific shock:
 
SERGEANT 
God help us.
 
PANEL:
The Commander and the Sergeant rush down the stair way leading to the lower quadrant and is now pushing their way through the crowd of LD workers:
 
COMMANDER 
Move...OUT OF MY WAY!!!
 
SERGEANT
You heard the Commander MOVE!!!
 
PANEL:
The Commander makes his eay through the hectic crowd and kneels down over the SRF still gasping for air on the ground. All the LD workers move out of the way and form a circle around them. The Commander turns his head and looks up at the Head of LD still in shock and says:
 
COMMANDER
What happened?
 
SERGEANT 
He hasn't said much. He tried to draw some 
Wraithians away...
 
PANEL:
The Shot pulls close to the Commander looking over the SRF in shock:
 
HEAD OF LD
...He got cornered and...Well.
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls over to the Sergeant standing in the front of the crowd of LD workers looking down at the SRF in concern:
 
SRF
Gasp! Gasp! Gasp!!! Cough!! Cough!
 
COMMANDER
Shh...calm down...where's the rest of your team?
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls to a bird's eye view of the SRF laying on the ground gasping for air in a puddle of his own blood. He grabs the Commanders hand and struggles to explain everything through the gasping and pain:
 
SRF
Gasp! Gasp! Gasp! Surrounded...Wraithians...Everywhere...Don't know, if...Anyone..Made it out alive.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant still looking down at the SRF on the floor, puts his fist over his mouth in shock hearing what the SRF is saying:
 
SRF
I did my...best, to...Agh! Get them away...
 
COMMANDER
Shh, don't over exert yourself, relax...It's okay now.
 
PANEL:
The SRF shakes his head as he understands. He closes his eyes and tills his head to the right and relaxes:
 
SRF
Gasp! Gasp! Gasp! Gasp! Gasp!
 
PANEL:
The Commander gets up slowly and looks over at the Head of LD. He says:
 
COMMANDER
Have you contacted a medic for immediate evac?
 
HEAD OF LD
Ofcourse, Commander...
 
PANEL:
The Head of LD stands there in the middle of the crowd of LD workers: 
 
HEAD OF LD
...Estimated arrival time in approximately 8 minutes.
 
COMMANDER
Good, let's try and keep him alive long enough for 
medics to get 'em to ICU care. Do not! log this report in any! archive unless on my command.
 
HEAD OF LD
Yes, sir.
 
PANEL:
The Commander walks out of the crowd of LD workers and pauses for a second and stares into nothingness:
 
PANEL:
As the Commander stands starring into nothingness trying to take in what just happened, the Sergeant comes walking out of the crowd following him and is standing a few feet behind him:
 
SERGEANT
Commander?...What do we do?
 
PANEL:
The Commander takes a minute before he turns his body around half and looks at the Sergeant:
 
PANEL:
The Shot pulls away to a birds eye view of the Commander and the Sergeant starring at eachother, and right next to them is the LD workers and Head of LD trying to keep the SRF alive until the Medic arrives. The shot is pulled away so much that it shows the entire crash site including a good majority of the Loading dock:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R Tower
Training Halls
2512 AD
3:35pm
"Boys Return From Jackson's Pub"
 
PANEL:
The boys are walking through the filled up Training halls. Their wobbly and disoriented:
 
PANEL:
A closer shot of the boys as their trying to make it through the crowd. Ethan speaks up saying:
 
ETHAN
Oh my God, Everyone is leaning the room.
 
YANG
Hiccup! What did you expect? To have 10 beers without a consequence. 
 
DAVID
Shh! Just relax and follow my lead. We just gotta' get to our next class and everything will be okay. 
 
VIRGIL
I pray to God yo' right.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is storming through the halls looking for the boys on a rampage as she's grunting under her breath:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the boys from behind as their trying to maintain themselves. David asks curiously:
 
DAVID
I wonder where Scarlet is??
 
ETHAN
Haha...BURP! Probably already! at our next class, that pyshcopath.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stops dead in her tracks and spots them walking down the hall. She stands there with fury in her eyes. She looks over to the side and over hears two SRF's talking about these new gauntlets they just got:
 
SRF TRAINEE 1
When did you get that??
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks over at them:
 
SRF TRAINEE  2
Last week, our squad teams got the same one's...
 
PANEL:
A close up shot of the Gauntlet in the guys hands as he's talking to the other SRF trainee, he continues:
 
SRF TRAINEE 2
...stronger blast capacity, higher frequecy receivers, the works...
 
PANEL:
A shot of Scarlet as she's looking at the gauntlet with all the answers:
 
PANEL:
Back where the boys are standing they spot Scarlet coming at them, they all stop with fear in their eyes. Ethan is still walking forward insulting Scarlet:
 
ETHAN
Ha, Ha, ha! I mean think about it...
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Yang are standing there looking at Scarlet down the hall while Ethan continues to walk on and insults her:
 
ETHAN
...she's always telling us how projects should be done, she always reminds us of what we need to do and how we should do it...I mean for all we know she's probably sitting in our next class planning out our entire! agenda.
 
DAVID
Umm...Ethan?...
 
PANEL:
A close up shot of David, Yang, and Virgil just standing there watching Scarlet coming down the hall. He finishes his sentence by saying:
 
DAVID
...I don't think she's in class right now?
 
PANEL:
Ethan turns around and says:
 
ETHAN
Burp! Why you say that??
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is walking straight for them on a vengence. She swings up the Gauntlet she got from the guy and retracts the blasters:
 
PANEL:
A close up of David wide eyed and screams out:
 
DAVID
HIT THE DECK!!!
 
PANEL:
Everyone jumps out of the way as Scarlet blasts one really powerful shot straight down the training hall:
 
PANEL:
Ethan gets up and says to Scarlet in a violent and sturn tone:
 
ETHAN
Have you lost! your mind!??
 
PANEL:
Scarlet charges straight for Ethan like a wild animal, she grunts out in a loathing and vicious voice saying:
 
SCARLET
YOU!!!
 
PANEL:
Ethan gets terrified. He struggles to his feet as he's shrieking out loud:
 
ETHAN
PUNCH HER!!!...PUNCH HER IN THE [frick]IN' THROAT!!!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is still running after Ethan full force.
 
PANEL:
She finally reaches him. As Ethan is trying to get to his feet in a hurry, she quickly grabs him by his SRF uniform collar and his shoulder. She swings him off the floor so hard that his entire body flies through the air. She let's him go and he's flung across the training hall and is Slamed into the other side of the hallway wall. Other trainee's rush out of the way as he hit's it. Ethan hits the floor right on his side:
 
PANEL:
He sits up against the hallway wall gasping for breath. As he's making it to his feet, he tries to calm her down and says:
 
ETHAN
Why are you so angry with me!? There's three other guilty parties to PMS all over?!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands about 10 to 15 feet away from him not listening to a word he says. She raises the gauntlet on her arm. The gauntlet makes a high pitched power up sound:
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks at the Gauntlet on her arm, raises his eyebrows, opens his mouth wide and screams out loud:
 
ETHAN
AHHH!!!!
 
PANEL:
Ethan quickly jumps out of the way from the blast as it nearly hits him. The blows a hole straight through the training hall wall. Ethan tuck and rolls and is now standing in the middle of the training hall. He puts his hands up at Scarlet as she stands there a few feet way ready to hit him again while David, Yang, and Virgil are standing next to her holding her back. Everyone is standing around them up against the walls just watching the entire thing in a panic:
 
SCARLET
Stop...Let me go! you irresponsible morons!
 
PANEL:
Ethan is standing in the middle of the training hallway. He raises his eyebrows and says trying to calm her down again:
 
ETHAN
Woah Woah!! Okay...I know your upset with me like most of the time, but this time I seriously have no! Idea why you'd be this! upset for us simply missing class...So, let's just put down! the gauntlet, and talk about this...Okay!?
 
PANEL:
The next scene shows a bunch of trainee's walking through the halls trying to make it to their next class. The next minute Ethan comes flying through the hallway and crashes into the wall and hits the floor. Everyone jumps out of the way to safety:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is charging down the hallway while being chased by David, Virgil, and Yang. Their trying to stop her:
 
PANEL:
Ethan picks himself up off the floor slightly as he holds himself up by his hands. As he looks at the floor he says to himself in a soft and out of breath voice:
 
ETHAN
BURP! I guess not.
 
PANEL:
The next minute ethan spirals himself up off the floor and upper cuts Scarlet in the face and sends her in the air briefly and lands on her back:
 
PANEL:
Ethan quickly grabs a girls Gauntlet and tells her smoothly:
 
ETHAN
Trust me my dear, it is greatly! needed.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet gets up off the floor and charges up the gauntlet again, before she fully charges it, Ethan says to her in a soft and cocky voice:
 
ETHAN
Oh, Physcooo...
 
PANEL:
Ethan aims his arm at Scarlet, a high pitched charge up sound comes from the Gauntlet:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet turns around and starts to run away flipping, jumping, running against the walls, and dodging all the shots Ethan is shooting at her:
 
PANEL:
Ethans' Gauntlet dies out, he quickly trys to find another plasma cartridge to recharge it but there's none around:
 
ETHAN
Oh great.!
PANEL:
Scarlet notices he's out and charges after him again, she passes up David, Ethan, and Yang. They watch her pass her by as Yang:
 
YANG
Can you guys like stop!?
 
PANEL:
Ethan finally see's that there's a self sustained backup on it and hits the button, once he hits the button Scarlet runs up at him full speed and pounds him a very! hard punch dead in the center of his face. Ethan flies back atleast 15 to 20 feet and then slides on the floor:
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks up at her and says:
 
ETHAN
Okay, I've had! it.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet and Ethan stand there ready to shoot eachother with both gauntlets charging up simultaneously:
 
PANEL:
Just before they are ready to shoot, Everyone crowds around them and starts chanting and cheering for either one of them. Scarlet and Ethan are starring eachother down in a show down. David, Yang, and Virgil are standing in the middle on the side lines trying to talk them out of it, David says:
 
DAVID
As squad team Leader! I order you
both stop this, right now!!
 
VIRGIL
Are you kiddin'??
 
DAVID
I thought it'd help!?
 
PANEL:
Both Gauntlets are finally charged at their highest point possible:
 
PANEL:
While the crowd is cheering and David, Virgil, and Yang are on the edge of their seats, both gauntlets just instantly die out and power down at the same time:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet both look at their Gauntlets curiously, the crowd of trainee's around them get discouraged and upset:
 
PANEL:
The drill sergeant walks over with a remote device for gauntlets. He's walking slowly up to everyone:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
Un-be-lievable!!!
 
PANEL:
Everyone is standing there stiff and silent. The drill sergeant excuses them:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
Everyone...report back! to your training classes...Move it!!!
 
PANEL:
While everyone hurries and scurries with haste back to their training classes, David, Ethan, Virgil, Yang, and Scarlet stand there in a straight line:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
Ditchin' class, intoxication, rioting through halls, well I hope you all had a pleasant time...
 
PANEL:
The drill sergeant stands there with his arms folded scolding down on them:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
...because I promise, your all in for one hell! of a treat.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet standing speaks up to defend herself:
 
SCARLET
Drill sergeant, I myself had nothing to do! with...
 
DRILL SERGEANT
Save it!
 
PANEL:
The Drill sergeant continues:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
When you all start going above if one falls you all! fall...And what! a great time to learn! this lesson!
 
PANEL:
A birds eye view of the drill sergeant standing there with his arms folded and David, Ethan, Virgil, Yang, and Scarlet still standing there in a straight line:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
To the obstacle courses...MOVE OUT!!!
 
SERGEANT
Hold it!
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant comes walking out from behind the Drill Sergeant down the hall towards them:
 
PANEL:
As the David, Ethan, Virgil, Yang, and Scarlet stand there stiff as a board along with the Drill Sergeant and everyone is scurring back to class, the Sergeant speaks out in a empathetic tone saying:
 
SERGEANT
David?
 
PANEL:
David steps forward towards the Sergeant. He says curiously:
 
DAVID
Sir?
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant looks at him, pauses for a moment and sighs:
 
SERGEANT
Sigh...You need to come with me son...We have to talk.
 
PANEL:
David looks at the Sergeant and get immediately gets sick:
 
PANEL:
He turns around to look at his team and pauses for a second:
 
PANEL:
Yang, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang look at him like if to say everything is going to be okay:
 
PANEL:
David turns back around and pauses for a second to prepare himself for what he thinks is about to happen:
 
PANEL:
A shot of David from behind as he follows the Sergeant through the halls:
 
 
 
 
 
 
Outside the Frillick Quadrant
 
2512 ad
 
4:25pm
 
 
PANEL:
A Hoard transport is approaching a deserted Icy planet on the outer skirts of the Frillick Quadrant:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian Hoard approaches the surface and is hovering  above the icy deserted surface. The sky is dark and flurries are falling heavily and wind is blowing hard. The shot zoom's in as the bottom of the hoard transport opens up and the Hoard drops out and on to the surface one by one. The Warlord falls out last standing in front of the Wraithian Hoard:
 
PANEL:
The Warlord pulls out a tracking device and outcomes a holographic projection of the surrounding area. He moves it around trying to determine which way the chameleon is. As the tracking device stops beeping, he finally got a lock on him just over the cliff:
 
PANEL:
The Warlord turns around at his Wraithian Hoard and picks his hand up telling them to follow him:
 
PANEL:
A birds eye view of the Warlord lord leading his Hoard over the cliff. As the Hoard makes it's way over, the shot moves over to the left slightly of a plain old rock formation. After a small pause, two eyes open up and a head looks over and around the corner at the Hoard:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian Hoard is making there way through the snow and wind on the deserted icy terrain. A couple of rocks trickle down the rock formation where the Chameleon was in camoflage. One of the Wraithian warriors in the Hoard quickly pulls their bio blasters while it makes a high pitched noise:
 
PANEL:
The shot pauses on the rock formation for only a second:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian warrior is looking in the direction of the rock formation curiously. The Warlord walks over to him out of nowhere and quickly grabs his bio blaster and lowers it. They both start communicating in low and quite tones:
 
WARLORD
What! do you think your doing??
 
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR
Forgive me Warlord, but I believe we are on the vurge of making contact with the target.
 
WARLORD
Then lower! your weapon and power! down. He is no good! to the Sovereign Commander dead!
 
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR
Yes sir.
 
PANEL:
A far away shot of the Wraithian Hoard making their way through the Icy terrain. Again the shot moves to the side again showing the Chameleon hiding behind the rock in camoflage. This time he holds with him a small pistol like blaster, armed at the ready:
 
PANEL:
A view of the tracking device in the warlord hands as he's leading his Wraithian Hoard through the snow and wind. The Warlord says to himself curiously:
 
WARLORD
I don't understand? These are the exact! pinpointed locations that was uploaded into these encrypted archives??
 
WARLORD
Keep your eyes open.
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian Hoard is walking away from the shot:
 
PANEL:
A close up of the Warlord still using the tracking device. They continue on walking for just a moment before one of the Wraithian Warriors are shot in the face by the Chameleon:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian Hoard all gets themselves ready for anything that may come:
 
PANEL:
One of the Wraithian warriors is looking around and in the background another one get's shot in the face:
 
PANEL:
The Hoard stands there not knowing what to do:
 
PANEL:
From out of the blue, all of the Wraithian Hoard get's blown away except the Warlord and one Wraithian Warrior. The last Wraithian Warrior in the hoard is stuck in the heat of battle:
 
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR
Warlord! What do we do!?
 
WARLORD
We need to give him a peace offering.
 
WRAITHIAN WARRIOR
How? Currency? Artillery?
 
PANEL:
The Warlord blows the Wraithian Warrior's head up with his bio blaster:
 
PANEL:
The Warlord stands there with his bio blaster aimed behind him. In the background the decapitated Wraithian Warrior is just standing there before he hits the ground:
 
WARLORD
Sacrifice. 
 
CHAMELEON
A being kills his own kind! just to draw me 
outta' the shadows??
 
PANEL:
The Warlord turns his head around to look curiously behind him:
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon rises out of the snowy surface and blends himself back to his natural state. In his natural state the Chameleon looks like an reptilian and extraterrestrial hybrate. His eyes are yellow like those of a snake. The top of his head has short tipped reptilian like spikes going in a slick back motion. The rest of his facial features and body exteriors are reptilian like, but also very humam. He wears old ripped clothes, and carries multiple hand made weapons for survival in extreme weathers. 
 
CHAMELEON
You must be truly! desperate for my services.
 
PANEL:
The Warlord turns around fully towards the Chameleon. He slowly starts walking towards him:
 
WARLORD
Desperate! No...Wanting! Definitely, and trust me...In the end of this...you will be the one desperate of me.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon begins to get curious as he can't believe what he is hearing. He smirks and says:
 
CHAMELEON
Ha!...Is that so? How can you be so sure??
 
WARLORD
Because my scally friend...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord continues on by saying:
 
WARLORD
...I'm not hear with sacrifice...I'm here with redemption...Your! redemption.
 
PANEL:
The chameleon rolls his eyes. He starts walking around the Warlord:
 
CHAMELEON
Oh yes, I've heard that before. Upcoming clientell approaching me with offers I'd be crazy to refuse.
 
WARLORD
This ain't like that...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord continues on by saying:
 
WARLORD
...Trust me.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon pauses for a moment. He looks at the Warlord and squenches his eyes curiously and says:
 
CHAMELEON
And, why! would you think I even need! redemption in the first place?
 
PANEL:
The Warlord stands there for a second just blankly starring at him:
 
PANEL:
The Warlord and the Chameleon stand there in the distance. The Chameleon stands there listening in as the Warlord explains things in detail. The Warlord begins to slowly circle him:
 
WARLORD
Prior to my assigned mission to retrieve you, I was exposed to some minor details of your "Professional" background...
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon is slightly looking back as the Warlord is walking behind him, he cockily says:
 
CHAMELEON
Impressed much?
 
WARLORD
Well, if I and my Commander weren't!...Then I won't be here right now...Your vicious, ruthless...Which brings me to continuously ask myself one question...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord is now starring him in the face a few feet away. He asks:
 
WARLORD
...Why would a dangerous! being as yourself, need to hide in such a remote location.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon responds back saying:
 
CHAMELEON
What makes you think that I'm hiding?
 
WARLORD
Look around us...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord continues on by saying:
 
WARLORD
...Were standing in a frozen wasteland. Beings come to places like this for only one reason...to remain below the radar.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon responds back trying to make the Warlord understand:
 
CHAMELEON
I don't know how much "details" my records show'd you? But incase you haven't noticed, I have seen the ugliest and dirtiest parts of possibly every quadrant, galaxy, and dimension throughout the stars...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord stands there listening as the Chameleon continues on saying:
 
CHAMELEON:
...And with that came alot! of enemies...
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon continues on by saying:
 
CHAMELEON
...And! not to mention the fact that every law enforcement throughout the deepest recess' of space have me down as their number one target.
 
PANEL:
The Warlord begins to explain everything:
 
WARLORD
Not for long they won't...If you come back with! me to my transport.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon blinks a few times. He says while smirking:
 
CHAMELEON
Please, you make it sound like you can simply just wipe the slate clean.
 
PANEL:
The Warlord pauses for a moment starring at him in the face with a serious look:
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon slows ends his smirky look in curiosity. He says:
 
CHAMELEON
That's not...possible.
 
 
We are the Wraithian Nation, Chameleon...
 
PANEL:
The Warlord looks him dead in the face and continues on by saying:
 
WARLORD
...Anything is possible.
 
PANEL:
The next scene shows the Wraithian Hoard transport door open up from the inside. When the door opens and reaches the ground, the Chameleon is standing in outside of it in the blizzard of the snow covered abandoned wasteland:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
SECTOR 7
Obstacle Course
2512 AD
4:55pm
"Mission Incomplete"
 
 
PANEL: 
The scene opens up with the drill Sergeant standing inside the obstacle room screaming to the top of his lungs on Ethan, Virgil, Yang, and Scarlet. The Obstacle course is designed to push SRF trainee's to their ultimate limit. It is currently being simulated to be in a thunderstorm with heavy rain falling down on them as the four of them struggle through the course:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
Come on ladies...MOVE IT!!!
 
PANEL:
Ethan is running over a slippery plank and dodge a spinning spike as he flip dives over it:
 
PANEL:
He falls about 15ft. and then tucks and rolls as he hits the ground just before launching himself straigh back up in the air again and grabs a hold of the top of a wall:
 
PANEL:
As Ethan grabs atop of the wall, he pulls himself up and pauses to rest a minute. He takes an exhausted sigh and says:
 
ETHAN
Sigh! Ya' know? If you hadn't gone all ape shit on me, this! wouldn't have happened.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet then grabs a hold of the top of the wall next to him, pulls herself up and looks at him disgustedly and says:
 
SCARLET
Someone has to be the responsible one on the team, and maybe if you weren't such an irresponsible lush! I wouldn't! have a reason! to. 
 
ETHAN
Whatever.
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet flip over the wall and continue through the obstacle course as the Drill Sergeant screams in the background:
 
DRILL SERGEANT
KEEP GOING!!!
 
PANEL:
The shot switches over to the Commander leaning over a railing watching them goin through the obstacle course from a walk way:
 
PANEL:
As he stands there looking out at them in a trance with dead eyes, the Sergeant comes walking over to him from the left:
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant stands next to him and joins him leaning over the railing. As the shot pulls behind them, the Commander asks not taking his eyes off them saying:
 
COMMANDER
How'd he take it?
 
SERGEANT
Not as good I thought that he would've. 
 
SERGEANT
I informed him of the squad team's latest update! reported from the only known survivor of the rescue mission, he just fell to his knee's.
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls from behind and showing the Commander still looking out at Ethan, Virgil, Yang, and Scarlet going through the obstacle course. He then asks the Sergeant:
 
COMMANDER
And how bout' our SRF survivor...
 
PANEL:
The Commander looks now at the Sergeant and continues on by saying:
 
COMMANDER
...what's the current status report on his condition?
 
PANEL:
The same shot from behind as the Sergeant turns his head away from the Commander and back out to Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang. When he turns his head he shakes it and says:
 
SERGEANT
That stories not so different. Medic states his internal injuries are beyond repair. He's got 
maybe a half hour, an hour! tops.
 
PANEL:
The same shot from behind shows the Commander turning his face back away from the Sergeant towards Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang and shakes his head. He mutter's under his breathe:
 
COMMANDER
Jesus.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant stands there and rubs his hand over his face in degrievment:
 
PANEL:
After rubbing his eyes he looks off across the Obstacle when the Commander says:
 
COMMANDER
I had a feeling that I was right.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant still looking out into the distance responds back saying:
 
SERGEANT
About what?
 
COMMANDER
We were in way! over our heads.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant turns curiously over to Commander:
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls away showing both the Commander and the Sergeant. While the Sergeant stands there looking and listening to the Commander, the Commander continues:
 
COMMANDER
We must of been crazy to think something like 
this could've worked. To think that a future above the surface was even possible.
 
PANEL:
A different shot of the Commander as he curiously and disgustedly askes himself:
 
COMMANDER
We bet it all on Project "Takedown" and for 
what?
 
COMMANDER
Nothing...Absolutely nothing.
 
SERGEANT
It wasn't for nothing Commander.
 
PANEL:
The Commander turns to look at the Sergeant while he continues on by saying:
 
SERGEANT
Project "Takedown" did more than just gave us 
hope...It gave us courage.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant stands there trying to explain to him:
 
SERGEANT
Courage to strive for a better tomorrow instead of just making it by...To turn the dream into a reality.
 
PANEL:
The Commander turns his head away from he Sergeant and looks out at the obstacle course and slowly shakes his head. He pauses for a very short second and mutters under his breath:
 
COMMANDER
Ha...the dream.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant looks at him not knowing what to say or do at that second. He's just waiting to hear what the Commander has to say:
 
COMMANDER
Ya' know, sometimes I think about the old world, as I'm sure you do aswell.
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls away showing the Commander leaning over the railling, he says:
 
COMMANDER
I sometimes think about what the old world had to undergo...What kind of struggles our late ancestors had to overcome.
 
PANEL:
The Commander continues on:
 
COMMANDER
Whether it was political, economical, or just basic everyday necessities.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Virgil and Yang as there struggling through the obstacle course with rain falling down on them:
 
COMMANDER
No matter what they had to go through, or how big or small their! obstacles were. They always managed to overcome them.
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls back the Commander starring out into nothingness:
 
COMMANDER
And then I look at us...500 years later...All were trying to accomplish is simply our will to survive, and we can't even overcome that...As it stands right now the future of our dying race is unknown...Any chance we had at that dream lived within Project Takedown.
 
SERGEANT
Commander, Maybe giving up wasn't the best option.
 
PANEL:
The Commander turns to look at Sergeant as he continues:
 
SERGEANT
Because I got news for you if you haven't noticed.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant continues:
 
SERGEANT
That dream...The dream of a peaceful future above the surface, isn't just for us...It's for humans everywhere. In all SECTORS around the planet.
 
PANEL:
The Sergeant continues:
 
SERGEANT
If we give up...that means the dream will die...And the human race will follow along with it.
 
COMMANDER
Well, to late for that...
 
PANEL:
The Commander pauses for a second as he stares out into nothingness. After he pauses for a second, he says in a soft toned voice saying:
 
COMMANDER
Sigh...The dream is already dead.
 
 
 
The S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R Tower
 
PANEL:
The shot is far away showing half the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R Tower. We also see David sitting on one of the terraces outside of it:
 
PANEL:
The shot zoom's in a little more on David:
 
PANEL:
Zoom's in just a little more, showing David's entire body as he's looking out on the city:
 
PANEL:
A close up of David as he stands there on the edge of the terrace looking out in the city trying to take in everything. In the background we see the door decode and open up unveiling Scarlet standing in the door way:
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP! 
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is standing there looking out at David in his lonesomeness. She takes a deep sigh and begins to walk towards him:
 
PANEL:
She stops in the entry way heading out towards the terrace, folds her arms and leans on it. David says to her in an emotionless tone saying:
 
DAVID
If your here to tell me everything is gonna' be okay? Don't...
 
PANEL:
A close up of David looking out on the terrace stiff as a board. He finishes his sentence and says:
 
DAVID 
...I heard enough of that today.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet perchs her mouth, slightly shakes her head, and puts it down as she says:
 
SCARLET
No...No I just umm...
 
PANEL:
She picks her head up and immediately fires out:
 
SCARLET
...I just thought you could use some company.
 
PANEL:
David turns around half way to look at her and pauses for a second. He then smirks and shakes his head and then looks back out at SECTOR 7:
 
PANEL:
As David is looking down at the skyline of SECTOR 7, he stands there with a dead and lifeless look on his face. A few feet behind him is Scarlet still leaning on the entry way with her arms folded. She decides to break the silence and asks:
 
SCARLET
David...What did the Sergeant tell you exactly?
 
DAVID
Nothing...he just said my brothers' lost behind enemy lines...And givin' the pinpointed location of where the rescue mission was...They have good reason to believe that he's...
 
PANEL:
David closes his eyes and sqinches. He puts his head down and says in an emotionless tone saying:
 
DAVID
...Sigh...That he's probably dead.
 
PANEL:
Stands there and looks at David. She closes her eyes and her mouth. She slowly puts her head down and puts her hand over her eyes: 
 
DAVID
I always knew in the back of my mind that something was wrong...Why I never acted upon it I don't understand. 
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he looks out into the city stiff as a board, Scarlet is still standing in the entry way behind him. He says:
 
DAVID
I feel that, if I woulda' just done! something about it instead of waiting for the worst! He would...
 
SCARLET
Don't!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there pointing at him and continues to say in a sturn voice saying:
 
SCARLET
Do not! do that to yourself...There is no! reason for you to feel that this is anyway your fault.
 
PANEL:
David turns his head back towards her and fires back saying:
 
DAVID
Scarlet! What are you talking! about!? This is all! my fault!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there silently as she listens carefully as David finally blows everything out of his mind. He continues to say:
 
DAVID
In his darkest! hour, when he needed me the most! I stood down! here and left him by himself! to die!!!
 
PANEL:
David stands there with his head turned back and banging on the railling as he furiously continues to say:
 
DAVID
All! this time I've spend wasting! away, coulda'! been put to good use!
 
PANEL:
David draws his attention infront of him as he shakes head and slightly shrugs, he tones it down and gets a little emotional as he says:
 
DAVID
Now it's to late...Jeremies gone, and all I can feel is...Pain.
 
PANEL:
David closes his eyes and puts his head down as he says:
 
DAVID
And to top it all off...I don't know how to deal with it.
 
SCARLET
Ya' know David, I actually find that very funny.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks away and shrugs her shoulders and shakes her head. She says in an ironic tone saying:
 
SCARLET
That after 500 years...We can't get over what is everyday life?
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he picks up his head and looks back out at the city, Scarlet is still speaking in the background trying to give him some insight as she says:
 
SCARLET
People are dying all the time in drones leaving us to agonize, and no matter what we do...They're never coming back.
 
SCARLET
...But in case you haven't noticed all that was about to change...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet continues to say:
 
SCARLET
Look down there, tell me what you see?
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he looks straight below:
 
PANEL:
Down in front of the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R tower are the same crowd of people we saw in the beginning of the story:
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls back up to David as he says:
 
DAVID
I see the same people doing what they do every year.
 
SCARLET
No...You couldn't be more wrong.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet continues to explain to him saying:
 
SCARLET
Today is the day for mourning, and none of them care to look to the past anymore...Because all they can think about is the future.
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he continues to look down at the crowd, Scarlet is standing in the background as she continues to enlighten him with the truth:
 
SCARLET
A future were project "Takedown" is gonna' set them free.
 
PANEL:
A shot of the crowd as there smiling and chanting as Scarlet continues on by saying:
 
SCARLET
It was everyone's last chance to end all that pain and suffering we've been enduring for centuries.
 
PANEL:
A close up of Scarlet as she looks directly at David and tells him something serious:
 
SCARLET
Project Takedown has failed...Then that means death continues to rule our existance...Unless by some divine miracle hope can be restored.
 
PANEL:
A shot of David still looking down at everyone:
 
SCARLET
Now I'm beggin' you...
 
PANEL:
A shot of Scarlet as she says pleading to him:
 
SCARLET
...Please open your eyes and see the bigger picture here.
 
PANEL:
David rolls his eyes and turns around:
 
PANEL:
He looks at Scarlet for a second and walks over to her:
 
PANEL:
He stands directly in front of her face and asks:
 
DAVID
It sounds to me like you want me to forget about him...Why?
 
SCARLET
Because we are the ones who fight for a better tomorrow.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there and looks at him with heartache and says in a soft emotional tone:
 
SCARLET
...and it breaks my heart to see you like this.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there looking at him hoping he'll agree. David is looking at the doorway and slightly shakes his head as he says in an aggravated tone saying:
 
DAVID
Just leave me alone.
 
PANEL:
As David storms towards the door, Scarlets' eyes are locked on him the whole time:
 
PANEL:
He walks out the door and closes it:
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP!
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet still leaning on the entry way to the terrace looks in front of her and closes her eyes and puts her hand over her mouth:
 
 
 
Yangs' Training Quarters
5:30 pm
 
PANEL:
Yang is laying on his bed and has his hand over his face. He's groaning from a headache and the exhaustion:
 
YANG
Auughh....Augh God! I'm never drinking again!
 
VIRGIL
Dat's what you say now...
 
PANEL:
Virgil is sitting on a chair across the room next to the door. He says the Virgil:
 
VIRGIL
...We'll see how you feel on Graduation day.
 
PANEL:
Yang moves his hand, he looks at Virgil and says in an assuring tone saying:
 
YANG
Trust! me on this. It's not gunna' happen.
 
SCARLET
Well, Ya' got that right...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is standing in the doorway as she says in a sarcastic tone saying:
 
SCARLET
So, did everyone have themselves a goodtime?
 
PANEL:
Virgil looks over at Yang in a worried look:
 
PANEL:
Yang looks over at Virgil in worried look aswell. He covers up his face again as he says in a groaning voice:
 
YANG
Right now's not a good time for me.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks over at Yang and says in an aggravated tone saying:
 
SCARLET
Oh' get up.
 
ETHAN
Oh' come on man...
 
PANEL:
Ethan comes out of the bathroom dryin' his hands off and says to Scarlet to defend them:
 
ETHAN
...Just because you didn't have any fun doesn't mean you have ta' jump down all of our throats.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet says in a calm voice saying:
 
SCARLET
No your right, I'll just jump down yours.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet goes after Ethan again and Virgil gets up and grabs her saying:
 
VIRGIL
Aight, Look, Ya'll need to calm down.
 
SCARLET
Grunt.
 
PANEL:
Yang stil covering his head with his arm says in a groaning tone:
 
YANG
Please God! guys don't do this again I happen to like my room the way it is!
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks over at Yang on the bed and says in a soft voice:
 
ETHAN
Shut up Yang.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet breaks free of Virgil:
 
SCARLET
AGH!
 
PANEL:
Ethan is still looking over at Yang on the bed as Scarlet is scolding him saying:
 
SCARLET
How! could you be so irresponsible?
 
PANEL:
Scarlet continues to scold:
 
SCARLET
Do you not care! what you have done to the rest of us?
 
PANEL:
Ethan fires back at Scarlet saying:
 
ETHAN
No actually I don't only you do...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet and Virgil are standing next to eachother. With Scarlet out of breath and disgusted at him Virgil stands there listening to Ethan as he says:
 
ETHAN
...My only concern was for the one person among us who's going through a real! problem.
 
PANEL:
Ethan puts his arms out to his sides and leans forward. He says in a softer voice:
 
ETHAN
A problem that we now understand is only gunna' get worst.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet calms down a little and Virgil is still standing next to him as he continues to say in sturn voice:
 
ETHAN
So before you sit there and jump to conclusions like you always do...
 
PANEL:
Ethan continues:
 
ETHAN
...why not try to consider the fact that this time was for a good cause.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet shockingly says:
 
SCARLET
A good cause??
 
PANEL:
Yang picks up his arm to look at them:
 
SCARLET
A good cause???
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there still scolding him as she says:
 
SCARLET
Ethan, you once again didn't only screw yourself, but brought all! of us down with you.
 
PANEL:
Ethan sits there silently as she continues:
 
SCARLET
Thanks to you we get to repeat the entire year...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet continues to scold him:
 
SCARLET
...because you though it was time to get a hard on and knock back a few.
 
PANEL:
Yang decides to join to conversation and says in a groaning voice to try and lighten up the conversation:
 
YANG
Scarlet, just letting you know it wasn't like you think. All it was us just...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet fires back saying:
 
SCARLET
I'm not stupid! I know what it was.
 
VIRGIL
Aight now, wit' all dis bein' said and done, what's the scoop on David? What's that all about?
 
PANEL:
With Virgil looking at Scarlet waiting for an answer, she leans back on the wall and folds her arms as she looks off at nothing and says in a calm voice saying:
 
SCARLET
I don't know. Just when I was getting to the "making him feel better" part...He got upset and stormed out...
 
PANEL:
Yang holding his arm over his head leans over towards Scarlet slightly more and curiously asks:
 
YANG
Where is he now?
 
PANEL:
Scarlet still leaning on the wall shrugs her shoulders and says:
 
SCARLET
I don't know? He didn't say! anything. I told him what I've told him and...I guess he wasn't to hear it.
 
YANG
What makes you think he's ready to hear anything?
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang as he says to Ethan and Scarlet trying to set them straight:
 
YANG
You guys are trying to make him feel better or whatever and it only seems to be making matters worst.
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet stand there listening to Yang as he says to them in a calm and relaxed voice:
 
YANG
I'm sorry but you guys know I'm right.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang as he still is laying on his bed and says in a calm voice:
 
YANG
I think that the best thing we can do for him is just sit back...And wait for all this to sink in.
 
PANEL:
Ethan leans on the doorway of the bathroom:
 
PANEL:
Virgil is looking at Scarlet and Ethan:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks away and closes her eyes and rubs her face:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Jeremys' SRF Quarters
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PANEL:
As we get a glimpse inside Jeremys' dark SRF quarters, the door decodes and slides open out of nowhere:
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP!
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
On the floor shows David's shadowy figure with the light coming through from the doorway:
 
PANEL:
As David turns on the light, he looks around his brother's SRF quarters with lonliness in his heart:
 
PANEL:
The shot moves around the room:
 
PANEL:
David takes a deep sigh and begins to walk around the room. As he slowly takes his time looking around at all of his stuff, He begins to start putting things in a dufflebag. He glances over at the nightstand:
 
PANEL:
He walks over to it and is hovering over for a second before opening the top drawer and reaching in. As he's rumaging around he picks up a portable holographic device:
 
PANEL:
He looks at it for a second and throws it in a duffle bag before he goes back into the drawer. He grabs a few other things and out of nowhere finds a pile of pictures:
 
PANEL:
The pictures are of him, Jeremy, his squad team, their parents:
 
PANEL:
He sits down on his bed and looks through them:
 
PANEL:
He stops at one of him and Jeremy as Jeremy has him in a head lock and are playing around the room. David smirks and says in a soft whispering voice to himself:
 
DAVID
I use to hate it when you did that.
 
PANEL:
After starring at the picture for a second he glances over and looks inside the drawer and says something that catches his eye:
 
PANEL:
Inside the drawer is a small round disc like device which appears to be an audio recording that's labeled:
 
LEAVING FOR TRAINING!
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PANEL:
He puts it on the holographic projector and sits down in front of it. As he sits down and watches it we can automatically hear David and Jeremys' parents talking in the background:
 
DAD
Ok, are ya' ready? 
 
JEREMY
Ya'.
 
DAD
Ya' got all your stuff packed?
 
JEREMY
Dad, don't worry I got everything.
 
PANEL:
The shot moves to the holographic screen. It's inside David and Jeremies residence where they grew up. His father is filming Jeremy as he's putting on his uniform shirt and lacing up his boots. His father says:
 
DAD
Well, ya' can't blame me for worrying...I just wanna' makesure you have everything.
 
JEREMY
Ha! Ha!...Dad I promise you, everything's gunna' be fine.
 
DAD
Confident are we?
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he's watching, in the background we hear Jeremy and his father talking in the background:
 
JEREMY
Rule #1 always believe in yourself.
 
DAD
Ha! That's my boy.
 
PANEL:
In the holographic recording, their mother comes over also worrying if he's going to be okay, she says in hectic voice:
 
MOM
Are you sure! you have everything??
 
JEREMY
Oh my God, haha, mom dad. I promise I have everything and I'm ready to go.
 
PANEL:
David continues to watch in a trance. In the recording, Jeremy realizes that David isn't anywhere to be found:
 
JEREMY
Wait, I can't leave without saying goodbye to David.
 
DAD
Oh' yah, where is that boy?
 
JEREMY
Hey, David there you are you ready to say Goodbye?
 
DAVID
Nooo!!!!
 
PANEL:
In the recording David runs out of the room and runs into his bedroom. Jeremy looks into the camera and then says:
 
JEREMY
Mom, Dad. Give us a second please?
 
DAD
Sure.
 
PANEL:
David leans in closer to the recording, in the background we can hear Jeremy and David talking in the bedroom:
 
JEREMY
Hey David, what's the matter?
 
DAVID
I don't want you to leave me.
 
JEREMY
Oh it's gunna' be okay...Your starting training in a few years to ya' know.
 
PANEL:
Their father sneaks around and films them secretly in the bedroom. David is sitting on the floor in the corner and Jeremy is sitting next to him with his arm around him. Little David continues to say:
 
DAVID
I know, but...I don't want you to leave me alone.
 
JEREMY
David, I will never leave you. Were brothers right?
 
DAVID
Yah'.
 
PANEL:
David watching the recording beings to tear up as he's watching. Jeremy says to David:
 
JEREMY
So, that means...We don't give up on eachother, ever!
 
PANEL:
The recording shows Little David and Young Jeremy on the floor looking at eachother. David says in a low choked up voice saying before he hugs him:
 
DAVID
I'm gunna' miss you Jeremy.
 
PANEL:
David sits there with tears in his eyes for a second. He then says to himself in a low toned whispering voice:
 
DAVID
You never gave up on me...I'm not gunna' give up on you...
 
PANEL:
The shot moves to a birds eye view of David sitting on the floor watching the recording, Yang is narrating over the shot:
 
YANG
...Wait, what! do you want us to do?
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
David's Training Quarters
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PANEL:
Everyone is sitting around in David's training Quarters in shock of what he's prepared to do. Scarlet is sitting on a chair, Ethan is leaning up against the wall, Yang is sitting on the bed, Virgil leaning on the wall, and David is standing facing all of them. Ethan speaks up and says:
 
ETHAN
 
 
DAVID
I know how this all sounds to you guys but trust me...
 
PANEL:
David stands there with his arms folded, he continues to say:
 
DAVID
I know theres a chance he's still alive.
 
PANEL:
Virgil standing up againg the wall puts his two cents in and says:
 
VIRGIL
David brotha', even if there's still a chance you know this is treason of the highest level right?
 
PANEL:
David puts his head slightly down and says:
 
DAVID
I know.
 
PANEL:
Yang looks at David and then at Virgil:
 
YANG
Not to mention the fact that it's gunna' be like finding a needle in one hell! of a 
hay stack.
 
PANEL:
David immediately bends down and starts rummaging through the dufflebag from Jeremy's Training Quarters:
 
PANEL:
He comes back up and is holding it up as he says:
 
DAVID
No it's not.
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic device as a landscape mapping readout of Wraithian Capital appears floating above it:
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking at it. He points his finger at it before looking at David and says:
 
YANG
Is that what I think it is?
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic landscape mapping readout:
 
DAVID
I found it in Jeremys' SRF Quarters.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan as he's scratching the side of his head not knowing what to say:
 
DAVID
A complete layout of Wraithian Capital.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet sighs and shakes her head:
 
DAVID
The data input device is chalk loaded with notes, readings, in's and out's.
 
PANEL:
Virgil sits there calmly as he's looking at the holographic image before looking at David:
 
DAVID
Everything.
 
PANEL:
Virgil, Yang, Ethan, and Scarlet are looking at David as he continues to say:
 
DAVID
It even has a ground up structure reading of the Watchtower where Jeremy was last located. Which is exactly where we need to be.
 
 
PANEL:
David is standing there with determination in his eyes and pointing at the holographic project. He says as he's looking at all of them:
 
DAVID
This is our way in. With this as our guide, we could pull this off...I'm sure of it.
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks at David and sighs:
 
ETHAN
Sigh.
 
PANEL:
He walks over to him and stands directly infront of him. He puts his hand on his shoulder and looks directly into his eyes and in a low soft understanding tone says:
 
ETHAN
Davey, listen to me...I know exactly what your feeling right now, and trust me this isn't the answer.
 
PANEL:
A shot of David looking into his eyes as Ethan continues on:
 
ETHAN
What your askin' us to do isn't just, treason or impossible...
 
PANEL:
Ethan leans in as he says in a serious tone:
 
ETHAN
...It's suicide. 
 
PANEL:
David looks Ethan dead in his face and says in a serious tone:
 
DAVID
Earlier today you told me that you've been my brother since before we started SRF training 10 years ago...Was that the truth or just another way to make me feel! Better.
 
PANEL:
As Ethan is looking at him in his face, Virgil speaks up behind them and says in a low toned calm voice:
 
VIRGIL
He's right ya' know.
 
PANEL:
Virgil is leaning on the wall and says:
 
VIRIL
Dis' is just, askin'! us to die.
 
PANEL:
David is looking at Virgil. Yang tries to tell him to:
 
YANG
David were tryin' to help you here...
 
PANEL:
David looks over at Yang:
 
YANG
...We can't do this...Jeremy had years over us and look what happened to 'em.
 
PANEL:
David walks away from Ethan and towards the door. He stands infront of it, he puts his hands at his sides and puts his head down, he shakes his head slowly and rubs his mouth. When he picks up his head to look at them, he immediately says:
 
DAVID
Ya' your right, it's suicide...But what did you guys think our first experience with the surface was gunna' be like?
 
PANEL:
A shot of Scarlet:
 
DAVID
Our first mission?
 
PANEL:
Yang sits there and is looking down at the bed, when David starts speaking Yang picks his head up and looks at him:
 
DAVID
A walk in the park??
 
PANEL:
Virgil is looking at David as he continues on by saying:
 
DAVID
We only know what it's like above from the stories we hear...
 
PANEL:
Ethan is looking at David as he continues:
 
DAVID
...And from what we hear it sounds like chaos.
 
PANEL:
David stands at the door with his arms folded and is looking at all of them. With a serious sturn tone he points his thumb behind him shaking it back and forth and says:
 
DAVID
So if Jeremy is still alive, then that means he's in that right now by himself...Now I'm goin' up there, with or without you's.
 
PANEL:
A shot of everyone as there sitting there looking at David. He continues to say:
 
DAVID
If you guys decide to back out on me? Fine...I won't hold it against you. But know this...
 
PANEL:
A close up shot of David as he says:
 
DAVID
No matter how high the stakes are, you know as your leader and friend I would never! turned my back on any! of you...I can only hope you won't turn your backs on me.
 
PANEL:
David stands there silently for a second before he says:
 
DAVID
So what's it gunna' be?
 
PANEL:
Yang takes a long drawn out breathe, 
 
PANEL:
Ethan scratches his head and puts it down. 
 
PANEL:
Virgil is bitting his lip and looking back between them:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is looking at them and then brings her attention back to David. She looks at him with understanding and stands up and says:
 
SCARLET
I promised you I would always be there when you needed me the most.
 
PANEL:
David looks over at her. Along with everyone else. She continues to say:
 
SCARLET
I'd say thats now more than ever.
 
PANEL:
Virgil looks at David and pulls out his rosary. He signs across. After kissing the cross he looks down at it and takes a deep breath. He looks up at David and says:
 
VIRGIL
Sigh...May God be with us.
 
PANEL:
Yang looks down and then shakes his head, he climbs off the bed. He stands up and looks at David and says:
 
YANG
Count me in.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan as he puts his hands at his sides. David is narrating over the background:
 
DAVID
Where's the "Ethan" I know that's up for anything?
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks up at David:
 
PANEL:
David shrugs his shoulder's and slightly smirks:
 
PANEL:
Ethan smirks and says:
 
ETHAN
You seriously gotta' stop stealin' my lines.
 
PANEL:
Everyone else smirks and giggles:
 
PANEL:
A shot of everyone standing around. David says in a serious tone:
 
DAVID
Okay then...
 
PANEL:
A close up of David as he says:
 
DAVID
...Let's work on a plan.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
David's Training Quarters
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PANEL:
The holographic image of Wraithian Capital is spinning 
floating in the middle of the room, David is pointing his fingers around and hit areas of the holographic image of Wraithian Capital. He says:
 
DAVID
Okay, first things first, given the circumstances everything has to be perfect.
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, Yang are all standing around the holographic image as David continues to say:
 
DAVID
The Wraithians are gunna' be under extreme suspicion. So were gunna' have to be ahead of the game the entire! time.
 
YANG
They probably already doubled their patrols
...By air, land...
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking around and everyone and shaking his head and says:
 
YANG
...There gunna' be expecting us. 
 
DAVID
Exactly, your the best at reading mapping and scanning codes.
 
PANEL:
David is looking directly at Yang and says:
 
DAVID
I'm gunna' need you to give us a continuous landscape watch over all their activities.
 
PANEL:
Outside the inventory storage room, Two Science/Tech workers are outside the door talking to eachother:
 
DAVID
Try your best to gives us atleast a 35 ft. radius.
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking at them from around the corner:
 
DAVID
You can take this memory beacon and upload the landscape files in your gauntlet. 
 
PANEL:
The guys walk away and Yang comes out from behind the wall and goes into the inventory storage room.
 
DAVID
You know where to find 'em?
 
YANG
Inside the Inventory storage room on the 4th floor.
 
PANEL:
He's looking through the storage bins and finds theirs. As he's opening it up, Yang is narratoring over the scene:
 
YANG
I'll sneak my way in...
 
PANEL:
Yang grabs their gauntlets and puts them in a dufflebag:
 
YANG
Grab our tech...
 
PANEL:
Yang grabs his Gauntlet and plugs the memory beacon in the bottom of his gauntlet. As he's holding the gauntlet, the memory beacon  is uploading the landscape files into it. A holographic image of Wraithian Capital is slowly but surely being shown hovering above the Gauntlet:
 
PANEL:
Back in Davids' Training Quarters, Yang stands there holding the memory beacon in his hand. He holds it up, shakes it, and says:
 
YANG
And make it like nothin' happened.
 
DAVID
Good.
 
VIRGIL
Dat's not gunna' be enough.
 
PANEL:
Virgil gives looks at all of them and says:
 
VIRGIL
When we actually get our hands on Jeremy, things are gunna' get real bad, real quick...We gunna' need some sort of crowd control.
 
PANEL:
One of the LD workers inside the Loading Dock is standing at a control panel on the upper level quadrant trying to update the new graduate Force Hovers into the systems archive: 
 
DAVID
Same situation as Yang, your area of expertise is Force Hover control.
 
PANEL:
Virgil walks over to the control panel disguised as an LD worker. He gives them the okay to go on break:
 
VIRGIL
Your relieved.
 
DAVID
When things get that bad step in, give us some cover.
 
 
PANEL:
Virgil stands at the control panel and searchs through the new graduate archive notes:
 
DAVID
The LD workers should still be uploading our assigned Force hovers in the systems archive.
 
DAVID
Stay there, wait for my command.
 
PANEL:
Virgil finds their Force hovers in archive. Virgil curiously ask David:
 
DAVID S/T #323
 
VIRGIL
Your askin' me to break the the 7th Commandment?
 
PANEL:
David stands there looking at Virgil tying put him at ease as he says:
 
DAVID
It's not stealing, if it's already yours.
 
PANEL:
Virgil shakes his head. He perches his mouth and says:
 
VIRGIL
True.
 
DAVID
Now that covers most of our problems, but there's still something else.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks over at David and asks his curiously:
 
SCARLET
Which is?
 
PANEL:
A shot of the Ethan as he has his arms folded and his eyes are locked dead on the holographi projection of Wraithian Capital, he says as he answers Scarlets' Question:
 
ETHAN
An Escape Route.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet draws her attention over to Ethan as he says:
 
ETHAN
More or less.
 
PANEL:
Ethan stands there with his arms folded and still looking down at the holographic projection and says:
 
ETHAN
Something that's gunna' ensure the Wrathians won't follow us to the ends of the earth.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet and David are looking at him waiting to hear what he's got. David asks him curiously:
 
DAVID
You got anything in mind?
 
PANEL:
Ethan stands there looking at the holographic image with his arms folded thinking for a second. He begins to scartch the back of his head and looks at them and says:
 
ETHAN
I think so.
 
PANEL:
Inside the Science/Tech Division Ethan walks up to two science/tech interns working at a holographic workstation. He begins to talk to them and they look at eachother and they check to see if the cost is clear. Ethan is narrating over the scene:
 
ETHAN
Two interns from the Science/Tech Division. 
 
PANEL:
Ethan and the two interns walk away to private station. One of the Science/Tech interns looks back and forth to check if everything is good:
 
ETHAN
Apparently, they're known for thinking outside the box and developed explosives for SRF's to use above the surface for sticky situations, but they turned it down.
 
 
PANEL:
He reaches underneathe the work station and reaches for a dufflebag, he leans back up and hands Ethan the dufflebag.
 
ETHAN
Plus, they owe me big time.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet curiously looks at Ethan and asks:
 
SCARLET
Why would they owe you anything??
 
PANEL:
Ethan is standing outside the two Science/Tech interns training quarters leaning on the wall by the doorway. Two girls walk over to him and give 'em a hug and then walk inside the room, Ethan narrates over the scene in a cocky voice saying:
 
ETHAN
Let's just say, they're purity has been taken away from them.
 
PANEL:
Outside the Science/Tech training quarters are other Science/Tech workers as they stop infront of the doorway and look at it in shock:
 
KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!
 
SCIENCE/TECH WORKER
What the??
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks away from Ethan and down infront of her. She shakes her head back and forth and with a shockingly disgusted look says:
 
SCARLET
Ugh!...Your such a pig.
 
DAVID
Fair enough.
 
PANEL:
David is at the holographic projection as he says:
 
DAVID
And possibly the most important! thing...
 
PANEL:
Yang turns his attention curiously at David as he continues to say:
 
DAVID
...We need a way outta' here.
 
PANEL:
David picks his head up and says as he looks around at everyone:
 
DAVID
We can't just simply take off through the Loading Dock Entry Way without someone stopping us.
 
PANEL:
Scarlet draws her attention to the holoraphic image. She looks down at it and slowly shakes her head back and forth. She sighs and says:
 
SCARLET
Sigh...I know where this is goin'.
 
PANEL:
Back down in the Loading Dock, two LD workers are standing infront of a bunch of Force hovers:
 
DAVID
It's gunna' have to be on point, so timing is everything.
 
PANEL:
The two LD workers are behind the scenes where machines are putting Force Hovers in their accorded places. As their pointing in the air working, Scarlet is getting their attention by whistling. David is narrating over the scene:
 
SCARLET
Whistle.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
One is gunna' have to start a distraction while another waits for my command to open the door.
 
PANEL:
The two LD workers ebruptly and curiously turn around the see what's going on:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
And Scarlet?
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is standing in the open doorway. Shes leaning on it and in a flirty and sexy way tickles the top of her chest, bits her lip, and says in a flirty voice:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Let's keep it clean.
 
SCARLET
What's a girl gotta' do to get a favor around here?
 
PANEL:
The two LD workers look at eachother in optimistic shock. They look back at her and in a bad attempt say in a flirty way:
 
SCIENCE/TECH WORKER
Depends on what she's givin' in return.
 
PANEL:
Back in Davids' Training Quarters, Scarlet is looking at David in an ubelieved look and says:
 
SCARTLET
Don't worry, it will be.
 
PANEL:
Virgil looks at David and curiously asks:
 
VIRGIL
What about you?
 
PANEL:
Down in the SRF Training inventory storage room. David is opening up a suitcase like bag with his SRF armor and uniform inside. David responds to Virgil and says:
 
DAVID
I'm gunna' head down to the Training storage room and collect our gear.
 
PANEL:
David is looking down in the suitcase like bag now opened:
 
DAVID
Let's spread out, take care of business, and wait for your ques'...Good Luck.
 
PANEL:
David pulls it out his armor and uniform and holds it up infront of him. As he stands there looking at his gear he smirks:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the uniform and gear:
 
DAVID
Just hold on...
 
PANEL:
David stands there shaking his head slightly and continues to say:
 
DAVID
...I'm comin' for ya'...Just hold on.
 
 
PANEL:
On the 4th floor just outside the inventory storage room, two Telecommunications workers are coming down the hallway. Talking to eachother:
 
PANEL:
Once they pass the inventory storage room, Yang decodes the door and it slides open:
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP!
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
Yang comes and stands in the doorway. He looks back and forth and contacts David. He gets on his communications Device and he says in a low tone:
 
YANG
Okay, tech has been collected David.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Good, Stand by.
 
PANEL:
David is just leaving the training storage room. He starts walking down the hallway and looks behind him. He responds back to Yang and in a calm voice says:
 
DAVID
Virgil, what's going on down there? Talk to me.
 
PANEL:
Virgil is down in the Loading Dock. He's leaving the lower level quadrant and heading to the upper level quadrant. He stops in the middle of the stairway and gets on his communications device and responds back saying:
 
VIRGIL
Things are steady but ya'll need to hurry. Ya' boys ready Scar?
 
PANEL:
One of the LD workers are inside the crane operating station. He pushes some buttons and readies the door to be open:
 
PANEL:
Once done he gives a thumbs up as everything is ready to the other LD worker on the upper level quadrant:
 
PANEL:
The LD on the upper level quadrant knodes his head once and then sends a message to Scarlet through a communications Device. The Message says:
 
READY TO GO!
 
PANEL:
The message "Ready to go" moves from his communications device to Scarlets. As Scarlet is still behind the scenes of the Loading Dock where the cranes move the Force Hovers into their places, she responds back to Virgil saying:
 
SCARLET
Their set and ready.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Heard you loud and clear Scarlet, I’ll give you my command when ready to deploy.
 
PANEL:
David is coming down the hall holding the dufflebag of their gear. David still on his communications device tries to contact Ethan and says:
 
DAVID
Ethan where are you buddy? Are you ready to go?
 
PANEL:
Ethan is walking out of the Science/Tech Division and moves right into the shot. He looks up and down the hallway and responds back saying:
 
ETHAN
You can say that.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Alright guys we have the greenlight.
 
PANEL:
David picks up the pace a little and is speaking to everyone. He gives them their next command:
 
DAVID
Remember we only have one shot at this, let’s make it count!
 
PANEL:
Back down in the Loading Dock, Virgil gets off his communications device. He starts heading back up to the upper quadrant. Before he reaches the top, one of the LD workers on the lower level grabs his attention and says:
 
LD WORKER
Hey you!
 
PANEL:
Virgil turns around calmly and hesitantly waiting to hear what he wants:
 
PANEL:
The LD worker on the lower level quadrant looks at Virgil, points his finger and him, and curiously asks:
 
LD WORKER
Who are you?
 
PANEL:
Virgil starts looking around back and forth before drawing his attention to his uniform and finds a name tag. As he looks down at the name dag he hesitantly says:
 
VIRGIL
Umm...
 
PANEL:
He looks up at the LD worker:
 
VIRGIL
...Gerald?
 
PANEL:
The LD worker curiously looks at Virgil for a second. He pulls out his portable holographic control panel and begins to check his profile:
 
PANEL:
Virgil stands there frozen solid:
 
PANEL:
The LD worker found his profile and stares at it. He raises only his eyes and stares at him:
 
PANEL:
Virgil, stands there still frozen and takes a big gulp from nervousness:
 
PANEL:
The LD worker picks up his head and out of nowhere says:
 
LD WORKER
You missed this mornings meeting! Where were you?
 
VIRGIL
I'm sorry.
 
PANEL:
Virgil now relieved looks at the LD and lies. He says:
 
VIRGIL
I was just a little busy gettin' ahead by uploadin' dese new graduate Force Hovers. It won't happen again.
 
PANEL:
The LD worker looks at him and says with authority:
 
LD WORKER
Well see that it doesn't.
 
VIRGIL
Yes sir. 
 
PANEL:
Virgil turns around and takes a very! relieved breath. He continues back up to the upper level quadrant:
 
PANEL:
Back in the hallways, Yang is still at the door waiting for David to come. He’s looking back and forth in a slight panic. He says to himself:
 
YANG
Come on, where are you??
 
PANEL:
David is coming down the hallway towards Yang in a hurry. Yang looks at him and says in a nervous tone:
 
DAVID
What took you so long??
 
PANEL:
Yang and David are both running side by side heading for the Loading Dock. David gets on his communications device and says to everyone:
 
DAVID
Pick up #1 complete! Give me the latest status report!?
 
PANEL:
Virgil is standing at the holographic control panel and turns it on. He brings up the activation panel for their Force Hovers and responds back:
 
VIRGIL
Force Hovers ready at the go, Where ya’ll at?
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Approximately 250 ft. from the destination point.
 
PANEL:
David and Yang, still running through the halls say. David says:
 
DAVID
Ethan, were comin' up to the Science/Tech Division be ready.
 
DAVID
Ethan respond!
 
PANEL:
Ethan is standing in the hallway infront of the Science/tech division. He’s leaning on the wall over 2 attractive Science/tech workers flirting with them:
 
GIRL #1
Actually a drink does! sound okay sometime?
 
GIRL #2
We’ve just been to busy for any breaks really.
 
ETHAN
Oh ladies, with me...There’s no such thing as a break. 
 
PANEL:
Ethan leans in closely to girl #2. She looks at him and slightly bites her lip as he says in a soft sexy flirty voice says:
 
ETHAN
It’s just one, continual, wild ride.
 
PANEL:
David and Ethan turn the corner towards the Science/Tech Division to pick up Ethan. The minute they turn the corner David screams out saying:
 
DAVID
ETHAN!!
 
PANEL:
Ethan still leaning on the wall infront of the 2 attractive girls. He’s still leaning in closely to girl #2 and tickling her chin and says in a soft voice:
 
ETHAN
Until next time. 
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Yang are running through the hallway a little faster this time. David looks at Ethan and says:
 
DAVID
Are you serious?
 
ETHAN
Hey, they came on to me.
 
PANEL: 
David ignores it and gets back on the communications device as they’re all hurrying down the hall, he says:
 
DAVID
Pick #2 complete! Comin’ up on the destination point! Scarlet! deploy the Distraction, go!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is coming on from behind the scenes in the Loading Dock. She looks up at her distraction guy and gives him a knode:
 
PANEL:
The distraction LD worker heads over to the main entry way on the upper level quadrant and stands infront of it:
 
PANEL:
He wipes his forhead and takes a deep sigh and says:
 
LD WORKER
Let’s hope she’s worth this.
 
PANEL:
The LD worker decodes the door and purposly gets his hand caught in the door:
 
BEEP! BOOP! BEEP!
 
SHUUN CUN!
 
PANEL:
The LD worker leans his head back shrieking in pain: 
 
AGHHHH!!!!!
 
PANEL:
All the LD workers run to his aid:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet standing in the shadows of the upper level quadrant, gets on her communicator and says to David:
 
SCARLET
Distraction deployed, where are you??
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Around the corner less than 40 ft. away.
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Yang are turning the corner as Ethan says in a paniced voice:
 
ETHAN
David we gotta' hurry!
 
DAVID
Virgil deploy the Force Hovers!!
 
PANEL:
Virgil hits the buttons on the control panel to operate the crane. In the lower level quadrant, a big bungalow on the ceilling opens and starts to make machine noises:
 
PANEL:
Virgil turns around to look at the main entry door behind him waiting for David, Ethan, and Yang to come:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet comes out from the shadows and also looks at the door:
 
PANEL:
Out of nowhere, David, Ethan, and Yang come flying out of the entry way:
 
PANEL:
The LD worker in the operating room see's them coming through the entry way. He hits the toggle to open the Loading door: 
 
PANEL:
The Loading door desmokes and begins to slowly open:
 
PANEL:
One of the LD workers assisting the LD worker caught in the door turns around to the noise of the door opening. He screams out to alert everyone else:
 
LD WORKER
HEEEYY!!!
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Yang are running for the lower level quadrant. David screams out to Scarlet and Virgil:
 
DAVID
MOVE!!!
 
PANEL:
Virgil and Scarlet come and join them:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang run and leap over the railing and land on all five of their Force Hovers: 
 
PANEL:
Yang turns around and see's all the LD workers hustling towards the Loading dock door. He turns around in and in a panic says:
 
YANG
WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR!??
 
PANEL:
They turn on their Force Hovers and activate the thrusters:
 
SSSZZZEEEEEEEE!!!!
 
PANEL:
At the same time, all of them zip right through the Loading door and down the Landing strip: 
 
PANEL:
All the LD workers are on the lower level quadrant running towards the Loading door and stop infront of it:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang are zipping through the Landing strip:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Virgil:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Scarlet:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan:
 
PANEL:
A shot of David in front:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang see the end of the tunnel. It's dark and grey:
 
PANEL:
The shot zoom's in a little more:
 
PANEL:
Zoom's in a little more:
 
PANEL:
They break out of the protective shield and make it to the surface: 
 
PANEL:
After 5 seconds of air time, they're Force Hovers hit the ground and they slide:
 
PANEL:
Birds eye view of all of them looking at eachother: 
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks around to see if everyone's alright:
 
PANEL:
Virgil looks at everyone:
 
PANEL:
Ethan leans forward on the front of the Force Hover. He then leans his head back with his eyes closed. He looks at David and says with a small giggly smirk and in an out of breath relieved tone:
 
ETHAN
Sigh...It's over, we made it.
 
PANEL:
David is there looking back at Ethan out of breath and silent. Yang speaks up and with slight shock says:
 
YANG
(Narration)
Yea' but, the worst is yet to come.
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks over at Yang curiously:
 
PANEL:
Yang stands there silently and just looks out at the horizon. David, Ethan, Scarlet, and Yang slowly come to his side and joins him. Closest to the shot is David as he looks out in aww and shock. Yang horrifically bites his lip and shakes his head back and forth and says in a low voice:
 
YANG
You gotta' be kidding me?
 
PANEL:
The shot pulls behind them and shows what their all standing there silently looking at. For the first time in their whole lives they see what the Earth's surface actually is. As far as the eye can see, is nothing but desolation and the after math of destruction. Broken rock formations scatter throughout the surface. Dust and smoke is blowing through the air. The sky is filled with multiple shades and patterns of grey with red clouds spread throughout the sky from the Wraithians Bio energy. miles away we can see a few cities and bases spread out all over the surface and red lights are beaming straight up into the sky:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands their in utter shock:
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks out at the surface not being able to believe what he's seeing and says:
 
ETHAN
Good God.
 
PANEL:
Virgil pulls out his rosary, puts his head down and signs across. He picks his head back up again and kisses the cross and holds it there as he looks out at the surface:
 
PANEL:
Side shot of all of them with David standing at the far end. David says in a low unbelieved voice:
 
DAVID
Guys...
 
PANEL:
It switches over to the other side with David right in the front of the panel. He looks around at the surface back and forth in disbelief:
 
DAVID
...Welcome to hell.
 
PANEL:
From an upper view we see David, Ethan, Scarlet, Yang, and Virgil standing there from behind looking out at the Surface:
 
PANEL:
We see a birds eye view of Wraithian Capital. The greyish white clouds have darkened, and beaming red bio-energy lights shoot into the sky from tall buildings scattered all over:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sovereign Commander's Royal Chambers
 
 
PANEL:
From a bird's eye view we see the Sovereign Commander standing at his large window looking down at the city with his arms folded:
 
PANEL:
The shot zoom's in closer to him until we only see half his body. In the background we hear the big double doors open:
 
BRILCK DUN!
 
PANEL:
The warlord enters into the room:
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander turns his to the right as he draws his attention behind him:
 
WARLORD
(Narration)
Sovereign?
 
PANEL:
The warlord stands there still looking at him while he puts his hand up at the door. He says as an announcement:
 
WARLORD
...Your loophole.
 
PANEL:
The warlord looks at the double doors as the Chameleon enters into the room:
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander stands there with his arms still folded behind his back and smirks:
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon continues to walk towards the Sovereign Commander and past the Warlord:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
(Narration)
Welcome my friend.
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander is walking towards him:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
We meet atlast...Tell me, how was your trip?
 
CHAMELEON
(Narration)
Enough with the pleasantries
 
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon stops dead in his tracks and with a cold dead look on his face says:
 
CHAMELEON
Just tell me what I have to do to get these bounties off my head.
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
(Narration)
Finally...Someone who gets straight to the point...
 
PANEL:
A close up of the Sovereign Commander as he squints his eyes and says with enthusiam:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
...I like that.
 
PANEL:
The Chameleon continues to look at him:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
(Narration)
Warlord?
 
WARLORD
Yes Sovereign?
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander informs the Warlord what to do:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Please be so kind and escort this being to his rightful place?...Brief him on everything.
 
WARLORD
(Narration)
Yes Sovereign.
PANEL:
The Warlord puts his arm out to take him out of the room. The Chameleon is still looking at the Sovereign Commadner as he's preparing himself to turn around:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
(Narration)
Trust me my friend...This is all part of the plan!
 
PANEL:
The Sovereign Commander turns around and the same shot of the Sovereign Commadner from the side zoomed in on his face as he says to himself:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMADNER
...And what a plan it is...
 
PANEL:
A shot of the Sovereign Commander from the other side of the window:
 
PANEL:
The Shot zooms out until we see the entire Watchtower:
 
PANEL:
Zoom's out a little more until the Watchtower gets smaller:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
WRAITHIAN CAPITAL
2512 AD
7:45pm
"Behind Enemy Lines"
 
 
PANEL:
The shot zooms all the way to the point that we see 2 Wraithian guards standing on the edge of the rooftop looking around as they patrol the area. Out of nowhere, two grappling hooks go straight through the back of their heads:
 
WHOS WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHSOH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
Their getting reeled back across the rooftop:
 
ZZEEEEEEEEEEEE!
 
PANEL:
They stop and Ethan, and Scarlet's feet as they grab them by the shoulder, and drag them behind David and start stacking them behind the obstruction. As their stacking the bodies behind David and the obstruction, David is looking around the corner straight ahead with a cold dead look on his face:
 
PANEL:
We switch over to show what he's looking so hard at. A shot of the Watchtower out in the distance:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Don't worry Jeremy...I'm here.
 
PANEL:
The shot shows David again:
 
PANEL:
We pull around showing David from behind as Scarlet tries to grab his attention behind him:
 
SCARLET
(Narration)
David?
 
PANEL:
David turns around ebruptly:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet says to him:
 
SCARLET
...Were ready.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Good, let's check in before we start.
 
EXT. YANG - ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
On another rooftop, there appears to be a long obstruction with a tunnel running through it. David is narrating over the shot:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Yang, what's your status?
 
PANEL:
A shot from inside the tunnel. We see Yang opening his left gauntlet:
 
PANEL:
A shot of his gauntlet as the landscape mapping readout appears and hovers over it:
 
PANEL:
Yang pops his head slowly and looks back and forth. He gets on his communications device on his gauntlet and responds back to David:
 
YANG
...I'm ready.
 
EXT. VIRGIL - ROCK FORMATION
 
PANEL:
Just outside Wraithian Capitals borders, there's a large rock formation. David is Narrating over the shot:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
...Virgil, what's going on? You okay?
 
PANEL:
We zoom in closer to the rock formation as Virgil's hand pops out from the top and pulls himself up. He looks straight ahead at the city and raises his gauntlet. He responds back to David through his communications device and says:
 
VIRGIL
...Ya'.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Hear ya' loud and clear, If anything happens. You know what to do.
 
VIRGIL
Copy that.
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
David now turns around and draws his attention towards Ethan and Scarlet. He looks back and forth at them as he prepares them for what's about to happen:
 
DAVID
Okay, this is it. Now remember, the clock is gunna' be ticking so when we move, we move hard, and we move fast...Are you guys sure your ready for this?
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet both look at eachother:
 
PANEL:
They both look back at David and Scarlet says:
 
SCARLET
Were right behind you.
 
PANEL:
David shakes his head says under his breath:
 
DAVID
...Okay.
 
PANEL:
He looks at Ethan:
 
DAVID
Ethan?
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks back at him:
 
PANEL:
David readies himself to turn around. He knodes his head and says:
 
DAVID
...Start the countdown.
 
PANEL:
Ethan opens up his left gauntlet and out appears a holographic image of the detonation device for the explosvies. The timer is set for 30 minutes. Ethan hovers his finger over it and says:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
Commensing countdown in 3.
 
EXT. YANG - ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang as he rubs his face and looks around inside the tunnel:
 
YANG
Sigh...Here we go.
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic image:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
2.
 
EXT. VIRGIL - ROCK FORMATION
 
PANEL:
Virgil signs across and says:
 
VIRGIL
Please protect and watch over us...We gunna' need it.
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan as he looks down at the holographic image:
 
ETHAN
1.
 
PANEL:
The last shot of the holographic image of the detonation timer. Ethan hits the button and says:
 
BEEP!
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
Now!
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks up at David and says:
 
ETHAN
Countdown initiated.
 
PANEL:
David turns around:
 
PANEL:
He looks around the corner of the obstruction with Scarlet and Ethan behind him ready at the go. He gets on his right communications device and says:
 
DAVID
Alright Yang, Where do we start?
 
YANG
(Narration)
...Scanning perimeter now.
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang is searching through the holographic image of the landscape mapping readout of Wrathian Capital:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic image as Yang found their first move:
 
YANG
(Narration)
...Okay, just North West of your position on the next structure. 34 ft across, 26 ft below. 
 
EXT. 1st ROOFTOP - NORTHWEST
 
PANEL:
A shot of the rooftop, there's a a few guards patrolling around:
 
YANG
(Narration)
2 targets are patrolling on the Left about 20 feet out.
 
PANEL:
A shot of some more guards out on patrol:
 
YANG
(Narration)
2 more patrolling on the right side approximate 10 ft away from the other end.
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking through the holographic image as he says:
 
YANG
You gotta' 6 second window to reach that rooftop.
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Ethan is behind Scarlet as he says in a calm voice:
 
ETHAN
Wow.
 
YANG
(Narration)
Wait for it...
 
PANEL:
A shot of David looking straight ahead at the Watchtower:
 
YANG
(Narration)
...Wait for it...
 
EXT. 1st ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
One of the Wraithian guards are walking towards the shot:
 
PANEL:
He stops and pauses as he looks back and forth:
 
PANEL:
He turns around and walks the other way:
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang says in with no hesitation:
 
YANG
Go now!
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Virgil spring out from behind the structure:
 
PANEL:
They're running across the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet launch themselves off heading towards the next rooftop:
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - 1st ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
On the left side of the rooftop, the two guards are startled by the sound of them hitting the roof:
 
THUM THUM THUM!
 
PANEL:
The guards head behind the obstruction and Ethan and Scarlet take them out:
 
SNAP! CRACK! UGH!
 
PANEL:
The other two guards on the right are looking away in the opposite direction. They turn around ebruptly as their startled by a noise:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
What the?
 
PANEL:
David pops out from behind an obstruction and shoots both of his grappling hooks at him from either gauntlet:
 
PANEL:
The grappling hooks go straight through their faces:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
He reels them and with him behind the obstruction:
 
PANEL:
While David is trying to pull the grappling hooks out from their heads, Ethan and Scarlet come up behind him and join him behind the obstruction:
 
PANEL:
David looks up, gets on his communications device, and responds back to Yang:
 
DAVID
Good one Yang, keep 'em comin'.
 
YANG
I'm on it.
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang as he's scanning through the holographic image of the landscape mapping readout:
 
PANEL:
The shot switches over to the image:
 
YANG
(Narration)
...You gotta' pretty clear opening just North of you position. 34 ft across, 45 ft above.
 
EXT. 2nd ROOFTOP - NORTH
 
PANEL:
A shot of the rooftop. We see 3 guards walking around:
 
YANG
(Narration)
...There's 3 targets, straight head. 
 
PANEL:
Move of to the edge and we see three more targets;
 
YANG
(Narration)
Also 3 more targets about 25 feet out close to the left.
 
PANEL:
A shot of David, Ethan, and Scarlet hiding behind the obstruction. Yang finishes narrating over the scene:
 
YANG
(Narration)
5 seconds...Move!
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet launch themselves over the obstruction totally clearing the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
They land on a slant at the top of the rooftop. They slide down about 15 ft before leaping off:
 
PANEL:
On the rooftop straight ahead where the first three 3 targets are, we see two of them standing around close together. The third one is walking straight towards a few obstructions straight into the shot:
 
PANEL:
He reaches the corner of the obstructions and walks out  behind it. A grappling hook goes straight into his head:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
Ethan runs straight towards the obstruction. He leaps on top of it, front flips, and springs himself onto the other 2 on the other side taking them out:
 
BISH!
 
PANEL:
The other 3 guards closer to the left are standing there in a row looking out at the city. Two grapples shoot out and hit the one in the front and the one at the end:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
When they get reeled in, the one at the end knocks the one in the middle down:
 
ZZEEEEEE!
 
PANEL:
Just when he hits the floor, David immediately jumps on top of him and starts banging his head into the ground multiple times with all his might:
 
PANEL:
He then grabs his head and pulls it back until his while head is pulled out of place:
 
PANEL:
David and Scarlet take off towards the other end of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
Ethan is taking off towards the other end:
 
PANEL:
They meet up at the end and hide behind the wall at the end:
 
PANEL:
Ethan is leaning up against the wall out a breath:
 
PANEL:
He looks over and David and Scarlet and says:
 
ETHAN
Where to now?
 
PANEL:
David gets back on his communications device, and reaches out to Yang:
 
DAVID
2nd rooftop cleared Yang.
 
YANG
(Narration)
Give me a second...
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the holographic projection:
 
PANEL:
Yang pauses for a second and then jolts his head to the side and says:
 
YANG
Breath...Oh Boy.
 
PANEL:
A shot of David and Scarlet:
 
YANG
(Narration)
Umm...Ya, this one's gunna' be a little tricky.
 
PANEL:
A shot of some targets on the rooftop:
 
YANG
Just Northwest of your position, 34 ft. across, 45 ft above. 3 targets posted on the middle, fairly easy right?
 
PANEL:
The shot shows a guard posted up on the edge of the rooftop looking straight out over the city:
 
YANG
(Narration)
But you also have 2 targets on either edge of the rooftop above a swarm of guards in the streets.
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the other side of the rooftop showing the other guard:
 
YANG
(Narration)
So be, careful.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan waiting for the que:
 
YANG
(Narration)
6 seconds...
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang looking at the holographic image:
 
YANG
Move!
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the other side of the obstruction. 3 grappling hooks come flying straight up and over the obstruction:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH DINK!
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet follow along:
 
PANEL:
The shot switches over to the Wraithian guard standing on the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
We zoom in on his face as we hear David, Ethan, and Scarlet hitting the roof and taking the guard on the other side out:
 
THUM THUM THUM!
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard freaks out and turns around and immediately a grappling hook goes straight through his face:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
Huh?
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
The grappling hook goes straight into his face:
 
PANEL:
Ethan reels him in:
 
PANEL:
Once he gets reeled in, the bio-blaster falls out his arms and starts plummeting to the ground:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Wraithian Guards patrolling through the streets:
 
PANEL:
The bio-blaster hits the ground and kills two Wraithian guards:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guards turn around drawing their attention towards it:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guards are closing in on the bio-blaster:
 
PANEL:
A Wraithian guard comes out from the crowd and stands there hovering over it:
 
PANEL:
He picks it up and stares at it in his hands before turning around and looking up at the top of the buildings:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to an ants eye view of the top of the buildings:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
(Narration)
...Hey!
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the Wraithian Guard looking up at the top of the buildings and speaking on a Communications device:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
Anyone see anything up there? Report?
 
PANEL:
David, and Ethan are running across the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
A shot of two Wraithian Guards standing side by side a few feet away from eachother. The first is taken out:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
The other guard looks over at him as he's startled:
 
PANEL:
He reaches for his communications device before:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
ZEEEEE!
 
PANEL:
David and Ethan come flying out from behind obstructions and continue on:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet leaps on top of an obstruction about 10 ft. high:
 
PANEL:
A guards on the other side of the obstruction:
 
PANEL:
Out of nowhere, Scarlet flips over the other side of the obstruction and grapples the guard with her legs:
 
PANEL:
She takes him to the ground, tuck and rolls out, and turns around and shoots a grappling hook through his face:
 
WHOSH WHOSH...
 
PANEL:
The grappling hook goes through his face:
 
...WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
She reels him in:
 
SZEEEE!
 
PANEL:
She puts him on her shoulder and then continues on through the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
Back in the street, the Wraithian guard is still looking straight up at the top of the buildings speechless and left in suspense:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the top of the buildings. A Wraithian guard behind him speaks up:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
(Narration)
...Well, what are you waiting for?
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the Wraithian guard behind him. He stands there pointing his finger out up in the air and says:
 
WRAITHIANG GUARD
We need to sound the alarms!
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard turns his attention away from the top of the buildings and behind him at the guard. He fires back at him:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
Not! without Visual confirmation...
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard behind him stands there listening as he tells him:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
(Narration)
Everything! is riding on this. And can imagine what the Sovereign Commander would do to us all if we were to screw this up?
 
PANEL:
He draws his attention back up to the top of the buildings:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the top of the buildings:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
(Narration)
...Guards at outpost 31-66 come in.
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard is on his communicetion device as he's still looing straight up at the tops of the buildings:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
We have potential human activity, I repeat, potential human activity. Conduct a thorough scan of the entire! bio- structure, leave nothing! untraced.
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guards are storming through the building down the hallways. As their moving through the hallways, a Wraithian guard is watching them back and forth. He gets on his communications device and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
...Were on it...
 
PANEL:
Wraithian guards kicking in the door to search a room:
 
PANEL:
Wraithian guards doing tracing around the corners:
 
PANEL:
A group of Wraithian guards are searching through the hallways:
 
PANEL:
They come up to an elevation shaft and get in. As the doors begin to close, the one in the middle gets on his communications device and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
...Inspecting the roof.
 
PANEL:
Meanwhile, back on the roof, David, Ethan, and Scarlet make it to the end:
 
PANEL:
They all slide and get behind an obstruction:
 
PANEL:
Ethan is the last one to get to the obstruction, he leans up against it slightly out of breath and says:
 
ETHAN
...Well...
 
PANEL:
He turns his head towards David and Scarlet and says:
 
ETHAN
That's three down.
 
PANEL:
David infront of Scarlet looks at him and asks:
 
DAVID
Status report on the detonation timer?
 
PANEL:
Ethan picks up his gauntlet and opens it:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the detonation timer hovering above his gauntlet:
 
PANEL:
He quickly looks back at David and says:
 
ETHAN
25 min. 34 secs.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Alright Yang, your doin' good.
 
PANEL:
David looks over the obstruction straight ahead towards the Watch tower as he continues to talk to Yang through his communications device:
 
DAVID
Were almost at the halfpoint, were do we go.
 
YANG
(Narration)
Hang on...I'm pickin' something up over here.
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic image of the Landscape mapping readout:
 
PANEL:
Yang looks down at the holographic image and says:
 
YANG
...Damn!
 
DAVID
(Narration)
What is it?
 
PANEL:
A shot of David and Scarlet as Yang is speaking to them through his commuications device:
 
YANG
(Narration)
Guards...Scanning quickly through the structure...
 
PANEL:
Scarlet, looking down at the David's communications device and raises her eyebrows. She moves her head forward and asks:
 
SCARLET
...Why?
 
PANEL:
A shot of Ethan sitting in as he's listening:
 
YANG
(Narration)
I dunno', I think something ticked them off.
 
PANEL:
A shot of the holographic image of the landscape mapping readout:
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking intensely at it and says:
 
YANG
Their heading up to your position!
 
PANEL:
Ethan is looking at the David's communications device. He closes his eyes and leans his head on the obstruction. He puts his hand over his face and says:
 
ETHAN
What the hell?
 
DAVID
(Narration)
How many?
 
YANG
Not much.
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang:
 
YANG
10 by my count...
 
PANEL:
On the other side of the rooftop, the elevation shaft opens up and the guards are inside:
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang looking more intensely and worried at the holographic image of the landscape mapping readout:
 
YANG
They've just breached the rooftop!
 
PANEL:
David and Scarlet turn their heads to the other side of the rooftop:
 
YANG
(Narration)
Contain the situation, quickly!
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Stand by Yang.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Alright this is what were gunna' do.
 
PANEL:
David is speaking directly ro Ethan and Scarlet and says:
 
DAVID
We spread out, and take 'em down. And what ever you do, do not! let them on their com's.
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet take off down to the other side fo the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guards are moving around the roof armed at the ready:
 
PANEL:
More guards moving around the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
A Wraithian guard comes up to an obstruction, he looks around it and draws his attention to the ground where we see a Wraithian guard laying dead in the shadows:
 
PANEL:
He quickly reaches for his commuications device and tries to scream into it:
 
PANEL:
Before he can utter a word, a grappling hook goes straight through his head:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH SPLICK!
 
PANEL:
David is running along an obstruction and spiral dives straight into action:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet follow:
 
PANEL:
The three of them are taking down the guards:
 
PANEL:
Back in the streets the Wraithian guard looking straight up at the top of the buildings looks down and rubs his face:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard behind him speaks up:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
You need to listen to me.
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard stops rubbing his face and looks back at him:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
The Sovereign Commander would destroy us if it's not them.
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard in the back leans in closer and says trying to convince him:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
And what do you think he'll do if it is! them and we do nothing?
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard turns his face away and then looks back at him:
 
PANEL:
He turns his head back around at the top of the buildings and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
Wraith post come in.
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
What is it?
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard turns around and looks at the Wraithian guard behind him:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard behid him gives him a knode:
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard turns around:
 
PANEL:
He draws his attention back up to the top of the buildings ad says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
...Sound the alarms...Their here...
 
PANEL:
The last shot of the top of the buildings from a birds eye view:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet are still taking out the guards:
 
PANEL:
David takes out the last guard and they begin to quickly head back to the edge of the rooftop towards the Watchtower:
 
PANEL:
They get behind the obstruction:
 
 
PANEL:
David is behind the obstruction infront of Ethan. He reaches out to Yang:
 
DAVID
Situation contained.
 
PANEL:
Yang closes his eyes and takes a breath of relief:
 
YANG
Breath...Good.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
But we can't stay here much longer.
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking over the obstruction towards the Watchtower and continues to say:
 
DAVID
We gotta' move.
 
YANG
(Narration)
Continuing to scan the...
 
PANEL:
David looks curiously at the communications device and says directly into it:
 
DAVID
...Yang?
 
EXT. YANG - ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang is looking intensely horrified at the holographic image of the landscape mapping readout:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Yang, can you hear me? Respond?
 
YANG
Something's not right...
 
 
INT. WRAITHIAN GUARD - WRAITH POST
 
PANEL:
A Wraithian guard stands inside a small room surrounded by intergalactic holographic control panels. He's on a communications device as he nodes his head and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
...Yes sir.
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP/INSIDE THE OBSTRUCTION
 
PANEL:
A shot of Yang as he looks even more intensely at the holographic image of the landscape file:
 
YANG
Gasp.
 
EXT. DAVID - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
David tries to reach Yang again:
 
DAVID
Yang??
 
INT. WRAITHIAN GUARD - WRAITH POST
 
PANEL:
A shot of the Wraithian is the Wraith post turning on on one of the holographic images of a button:
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang stunned for words says:
 
YANG
...Oh my God.
 
INT. WRAITHIAN GUARD - WRAITH POST
 
PANEL:
The Wraithian guard hits the button:
 
BEEP!
 
EXT. WRAITHIAN CAPITAL - ANGLED BIRD'S EYE VIEW
 
PANEL:
Switches over to a shot of the entire landscape of Wraithian Capital as the sirens are blowing through the city like a nuke is about to be deloyed:
 
BBBBRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWW!
 
EXT. YANG - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Yang comes out from inside the tunnel of the obstruction and looks suspensefully out at the city:
 
RRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWW!
 
 
EXT. VIRGIL - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Virgil comes out from the rock formation and looks out at the city:
 
RRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWW!
 
 
EXT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet are standing at the edge of the building doing the same. David in the middle, Ethan on the right, and Scarlet on the left:
 
RRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
 
PANEL:
Another shot of the landscape of Wraithian Capital:
 
RRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
 
PANEL:
Switches over to one of the buildings. The top begins to surge with bio-energy and opens up slowly:
 
RRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW!
 
PANEL:
The top of another building opens up:
 
RRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW!
 
PANEL:
And another opens up:
 
RRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
 
PANEL:
 
Once all the buildings are opened up all the way, the sirens stop and dead silence streams through the city:
 
COON!
 
PANEL:
A shot of David, Ethan, and Scarlet on top of the building looking more intese and suspensefully at the buildings:
 
PANEL:
A shot of the buildings:
 
PANEL:
A shot of one of the buildings as a surging sound inside it gets louder and louder and louder until Wraith stalkers, Hoard transports, and warships come flying out the top and start swarming down the sides of the building:
 
PANEL:
The same happening on another:
 
PANEL:
The same on another:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to a shot behind David, Ethan, and Scarlet as they stand th+ Wraithians come flying out the top of the buildings and begin swarm the streets like locus's coming out of volcanos:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet looks straight ahead in shock:
 
PANEL:
Ethan looks ahead in shock aswell:
 
PANEL:
David pauses for a second and than says:
 
DAVID
...Run!
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet turn around and begin to run towards the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
Before they can even reach a few feet, A warship rises up from the other end of the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet stop themselves in a panic:
 
PANEL:
The warship stays there hovering for a second:
 
PANEL:
We see David, Ethan, and Scarlet through a targeting screen:
 
PANEL:
The warship surges with bio-energy as it begins to blast in their direction:
 
FFSSHHH PEU! PEU! PEU! PEU! PEU!
 
PANEL:
David, Ethan, and Scarlet dodge the blasts as David says:
 
DAVID
SPLIT UP!
 
PANEL:
We zoom out a showing them from a far and the warship shoot at them. David goes one way, Ethan goes the other, and Scarlet is running straight towards the warship:
 
PANEL:
A shot of her feet running towards the warships as she leaps towards it. She leap frog flips over the ship and launches herself to the other rooftop behind it. She tuck and rolls onto the other side and in a crouched down position, she turns around and looks at the ship:
 
PANEL:
The ship turns around towards her direction. Scarlet is running across the rooftop as the Warship is following her and shooting all around her feet:
 
PANEL:
She reaches the edge of the rooftop and leaps down off as the Warship continues to shoot in her direction:
 
 
EXT. - ETHAN ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP.
 
PANEL:
Ethan is running across the rooftop. In the B.G., we warships, stalkers, an hoard transports swarming the streets. blasts are being fired all over the place:
 
PANEL:
We see two stalkers closing in:
 
PANEL:
A side shot from an ant's eye view of Ethan as he's running across the rooftop and the stalkers coming closer to him:
 
PANEL:
As they begin to open fire on him, he dodges and moves out of the way:
 
PANEL:
The stalkers pass him by and turn back around:
 
PANEL:
Ethan is running straight for them as they begin to open fire upon him:
 
PANEL:
When they meet about 20 feet apart, Ethan retracts his gauntlets and leap dives straight at them and takes them out:
 
PANEL:
As they both explode in mid air, he clears the rooftop and lands on another one:
 
PANEL:
He tuck and rolls and immediately a hoard transport flies down right infront of them:
 
PANEL:
We zoom in on Ethan's face as he says to himself with disgust:
 
ETHAN
Oh' this is just great!
 
EXT. DAVID - ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: David is running across the rooftop and launches himself off:
 
PANEL:
David is soaring through the air straight down:
 
PANEL:
Just when he's about to hit the rooftop, a warship flies by and he lands ontop of that instead and begins to roll:
 
PANEL:
We zoom in on David as he's holding on for dear life:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
David! come in!
 
EXT. ETHAN - ON ANOTHER ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Ethan is outrunning and dodging the Wraithian Warriors that are falling out the bottom of the hoard transport hovering above the rooftop:
 
ETHAN
Shits! hit the fan we gotta' get outta'! here, now!
 
EXT. DAVID - ON THE WARSHIP
 
PANEL:
A shot of the Warship coming straight into the shot. In the B.G., we see Wraithian aircrafts hovering and flying in all different directions throughout the air and city:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to David who's still holding on for dear life. He responds back to Ethan:
 
DAVID
Not yet! To Risky!
 
EXT. ETHAN - ON THE ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Leaps out of the way and is coming up to the edge of the rooftop trying to dodge all of the Wraithian warriors blasts:
 
FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH!
 
PANEL:
He launches himself off the edge of lands on another rooftop:
 
PANEL:
Ethan is now running across the rooftop. In the B.G., more aircrafts and blasts being fired all over the place. He responds back to David:
 
ETHAN
Well we have to atleast try! man, there's to many! of them.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Not! before D-time!
 
EXT. - DAVID - ON THE WARHIP
 
PANEL:
David is still hanging on for dear life on the back end of the warship. He responds back to Ethan:
 
DAVID
The minute! we step foot out the cities perimeter they're gunna' follow! us all the way to SECTOR 7!
 
EXT. SCARLET - ON THE ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
Scarlet is running across the rooftop. In the B.G., we see more chaos and aircrafts searching the skies and blasts as flying all over the place:
 
PANEL:
She slides behind an obstruction for a second to catch her breath. After a short second and a few breaths, he gets on her communications device through her right gauntlet and reaches out to David in a calm voice:
 
SCARLET
...Okay...So than what do we do?
 
EXT. DAVID - ON THE WARSHIP
 
PANEL:
A shot of David holding on to the back of the warship as the warship swoops straight down to the streets. In the streets. Wraithian Warriors are swarrming around looking from the humans. Stalkers and other aircrafts are flying by:
 
PANEL:
Once the warship gets low enough, David let's go and falls to the ground:
 
PANEL:
He tuck and rolls himself on the ground:
 
PANEL:
He gets back up into a crouched position:
 
PANEL:
The warship turns back around and is coming straight at him:
 
PANEL:
We zoom in closer to his face as he's starring the warship down. He pauses for a second before responding back to Scarlet:
 
DAVID
...I dunno'...Gimme a minute.
 
PANEL:
David is running away from from the warship as it begins to open fire:
 
FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH!
 
EXT. SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL:
We zoom in on Scarlet as she lowers her gauntlet and pauses for a second, she rolls her eyes and than looks away. 
 
PANEL:
She then draws her attention infront of her out in the distance as she hears a warship closing in on:
 
PANEL:
Shot switches over to the warship coming in as it locks on target, as it surg's with bio-energy from the back to the cannons and begins to open fire:
 
CHCHCH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH!
 
PANEL:
Scarlet launches herself over the obstruction in a spiral turn and runs along the rooftop outrunning the warship:
 
FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH!
 
EXT. ETHAN - ZIPLINING UP THE BUILDING
 
PANEL:
Ethan is ziplinning up the side of the building. As he's running up it, we see in the B.G., aircrafts flying around and blasts going off all over the place:
 
PANEL:
He reaches the top and continues on:
 
PANEL:
He pauses for a second as he see's a warship coming towards him opening fire on a building a few few small than his:
 
PANEL:
Switches back over to Ethan as he's starring it in the face:
 
PANEL
Switches back over to Warship in the distance getting closer. Out of nowhere, Scarlet comes climbing over the side as she continues to run straight towards Ethan:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
Ofcourse the physco bitch would bring me nothing but problems...
 
PANEL:
The shot switches back over to Ethan looking at her:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet are running side by side as they're both outrunning the warsship:
 
PANEL:
They're almost at the edge when another warship comes up from the side:
 
PANEL:
They stop dead in their tracks:
 
PANEL:
They begin running the otherway when another warship comes up from the otherside:
 
PANEL:
Out of nowhere a few Stalkers come over hovering around the sides of the building:
 
PANEL:
Just when things weren't bad enough, a few hoard transports come flying in and are hovering around the sides around them:
 
PANEL:
Wraithian Warriors come falling out the bottoms armed at the ready:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet are back to back looking around at Warships, hoard transports, and stalkers all around them as they're trapped on the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
The shot zooms out from the rooftop:
 
PANEL:
The shot zooms out a little more as we see more Warships aimed towards the building. Other hoard transports are dropping off Wraithian warriors on the surrounding rooftops. They begin walking towards the rooftop where Ethan and Scarlet are:
 
PANEL:
The shot zoom's back in at Ethan and Scarlet as they have nowhere to go:
 
PANEL:
Scarlet stands there stunned. She draws her attention towards the edge of the rooftop as Wraithian warriors and guards come climbling up the side of the building:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the side of the building as we see more and more Wraithain guards and warriors climbing up the sides like savage zombies trying to get at them:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet are back to back as they start talking to eachother:
 
ETHAN
Okay...So now what?
 
SCARLET
I dunno'.
 
ETHAN
God! All I wanted to do today was just have a goodtime with the guys...
 
PANEL:
The shot only shows Ethan as he looks down at his gauntlet curiously as Virgil reaches out to him on his communications device and says:
 
VIRGIL
(Narration)
...Brotha', God doesn't give you watchu' want...He gives you watch' need...
 
PANEL:
We show Ethan and Scarlet looking around curiously. In the B.G., we see the Wraithians and aircrafts surrounding them. Getting louder and louder we hear an high pitched whistling sound:
 
ssszzzzeeeEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
PANEL:
Shot switches over to the side of the building. In the B.G., we see Warships, Hoard transports, and stalkers move quickly out of the way as Virgil flies straight up the side of the building; taking out Wraithian guards and warriors as they fly through the air, blasting away warships, and other stalkers, etc.:
 
PANEL:
Virgil is flying over the rooftop and he's gunning down the warships and other aircrafts:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to the back showing Yang behind him on the force hover facing the otherway blasting away at everything aswell:
 
PANEL:
The Force hover continues to the other side fo the building as it magnitizes back to the side of the building and taking out other guards:
 
PANEL:
Ethan and Scarlet are back to back blasting away the Wraithians in an all out takedown:
 
PANEL:
Switches over to Ethan and he raises his gauntlet as he screams into in a panic:
 
ETHAN
DAVID! WHERE ARE YOU!?
 
EXT. DAVID - ALLEYWAY
 
PANEL: 
David runs behind the wall of an alleyway:
 
PANEL:
He's stands stiff as a board with his hand tilt to the side. In the B.G., the warship searches around before flying away:
 
PANEL:
He turns around and draws his attention behind him into nothingness. His eyes roll back and forth in a panic.:
 
PANEL: David is still in the alleyway, he looks  back and forth through out the alleyway:
 
PANEL: David pauses for a second. He reaches into
       his pocket and starts rumaging through it:
 
PANEL: The shot switches over the picture of him  and Jeremy in David's hands. After a second    of looking at the picture he says to        himself underneath his breath:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
We've come this far...I'm not ready to give up on you yet.
 
PANEL: David hears Wraithians coming up the side    of the building. He quickly turns his head to the direction of the sound:
 
PANEL: David takes off to the otherside of the    building:
 
PANEL:
He enters out of the alleyway backwards. In the B.G., the streets appear to be almost dead as everyone is heading towards Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang's direction:
 
PANEL: He turns around slowly looking around, his  eyes come to an ebrupt halt as he lays his  eyes upon the most horrifying sight he's      ever seen:
 
PANEL: He slowly begins walking towards it:
 
PANEL: The shot switches over to what he's looking 
 at. 1,000's upon 1,000's of dead SRF's on  stakes in the ground as far as the eye can  see. Some of the SRF's are whole bodied,  and some of them are like skulls with their  armor and uniforms on them:
 
PANEL:
A shot of David as he's looking around. His eyes are wide and his jaw is partially dropped as he's stunned for words at this terrifying and shocking scenery. He manages to get out:
 
DAVID
...My God...
 
PANEL: The shot pulls behind David from an
       angled bird's eye view as he
       stands there looking at the dead SRF's on 
       the stakes. The bodies are scattered all 
       through out the streets:
 
PANEL: Switches back over to David as he continues
       to stand there in shock. Ethan tries 
       reaching out to him:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
...Davey!
 
PANEL: David is instantly drawn out of his trance
       and looks down at his communications device
       on his right gauntlet:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
Were under siege and times runnin'
               out...
 
EXT. ETHAN AND SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: Ethan and Scarlet are back to back under 
       some heavy fire. Surrounding them are 
       Wraithian aircrafts and warrionrs:
 
PANEL: Zooms in on Ethan as he continues to 
       try and get an answer from David:
 
ETHAN
...We need to know what's the 
               plan!...
 
 
EXT. DAVID - IN THE STREET
 
PANEL: David slowly draws his eyes away from his communications device to stare into nothingness as he's thrown into deep thought. After hearing that 
question, he automatically remembers what Scarlet 
told him back on the balcony. It hits him like a 
bullet train:
 
NARRATION
"People are dying in drones leaving us to agonize, and no matter what we do...Their never coming back."
 
NARRATION
"...But all that was about to change"
 
PANEL: Same shot as David is still into nothingness. He begins to shake his head and says to himself under his breath as his eyes begin to open up to the truth:
 
DAVID
Projection Takedown.
 
PANEL: David slowly lifts his eyes and begins to look  at the dead SRF's in a new perspective. He now  understands everything:
 
PANEL: Another shot of the SRF's on the stakes in the ground:
 
"It was everyone's last chance to end all that pain and suffering we've been enduring for       centuries."
 
PANEL: We zoom in on an angled side shot of David's face as he draws his head down again. His eyes move back and forth quickly as he's still opening his eyes to the truth: 
 
"And if Project Takedown has failed...Than that means death will continue to rule our   existance...Unless by some divine miracle hope can be restored."
 
PANEL: A shot of David as we are zoomed in from the back of his head:
 
"Sounds like you want me to forget about him...Why?"
 
PANEL: David turns around and looks up in the sky      like he has all the answers:
 
PANEL: Shot switches over to what he's looking at,  a shot of the Watchtower out in the  distance:
 
"...Because we are the one's who fight for a better tomorrow..."
 
PANEL: We go back to the same shot zoomed in on        David's face. He lowers his head:
 
PANEL: He only turns his head back at the SRF's in      the street and shakes his head like he knows    what to do now:
 
PANEL: He looks down at the picture still in his      hand:
 
PANEL: A shot of the picture:
 
PANEL: A shot of David from the side as takes a long    drawn out sigh and says to himself under his    breath:
 
DAVID
...Sigh...I'm sorry Jeremy...
 
PANEL: He throws the picture ever so graciously at      the SRF's the streets:
 
PANEL: The picture carriers through the bodies and      vanishes never to be seen again:
 
EXT. ETHAN AND SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: Ethan is back to back with Scarlet in an all          out heavy duty battle on the rooftop. We are      zoomed in on him:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Ethan?
 
PANEL: Ethan shouts into his communications device  and responds back to David. He says:
 
ETHAN
GLAD TA' HAVE YA' BACK! BUDDY WHAT'S 
WHAT'S THE WORD!
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Give me a status report on the detonation timer.
 
PANEL: Ethan opens up his right gauntlet and the
       holographic image of the Detonation timer        appears hovering above it. The timer is now at
       00.12.56:
 
PANEL: Switches back over to Ethan as he screams back 
       at David through his communications device on
       his gauntlet saying:
 
ETHAN
12 MINUTES 56 SECONDS!
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Okay, that'll have ta' do...Keep 
               me posted.
 
EXT. VIRGIL AND YANG - ON THE FORCE HOVER
 
PANEL: Yang is on the back of the Force Hover with 
       Virgil as he's in a hail of advanced technical
       gun fire. David reaches out to him on his 
       communications device and says:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
...Yang! Do we have visuals of the 
biochemists whereabouts inside the 
                Watch Tower?
 
YANG
I dunno'!
 
PANEL: We zoom in on Virgils face as he becoming 
       overwhelmed with the Wraithians intense 
       numbers. Yang turns his head drawing his 
       attention behind him as he says:
 
YANG
COVER ME!
 
PANEL: Yang opens up the holographic image of the 
       landscape mapping readout of Wraithian 
       Capital. He zooms in on the Watchtower and we 
       see entire outline of the ground up structure
       reading of the Watch Tower. The biochemist is 
       outlined in yellow and on the sides are 
       landscape and mapping codes as they continue
       to scroll through it:
 
PANEL: Yang is looking through it and responds back 
       David on his communications device:
 
YANG
Yah'...We do.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Good, than you and the others better get! ready.
 
PANEL: Yang looks up at nothing and responds back to 
       David. He curiously asks:
 
YANG
...Ready for what?? 
 
EXT. DAVID - IN THE STREETS
 
PANEL: David still has his head turned towards the 
       SRF's dead on the stake as the shot is    zoomed in on his face. In the B.G., about 50    feet, a warship turns the corner and is
 turning in the direction of David:
 
PANEL: David turns his head quickly towards the 
       warship:
 
PANEL: The warship stays there hovering about 25  above the ground as it sways from side to  side:
 
PANEL: A shot of David as it zooms in on him through
       a targeting system. He's starring it dead in 
       the face with a fearless look on his face:
 
PANEL: We zoom in closer as he still has the fearless 
       look on his face:
 
PANEL: He begins charging for the warship:
 
PANEL: The warship begins to slowly move towards 
       him as it surges from the back to the front 
       with bio-energy and begins to open fire as 
       it picks up speed:
 
CHICHICHICHI!!! FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH 
 
PANEL: David is charging at the warship with all his 
       his might as the warship is getting closer to 
       him:
 
PANEL: Just when the Warship is about to blast him a 
       new one, David leaps into the air almost 
       clearing the entire ship:
 
PANEL: He shoots out his grappling hook with his left
       gauntlet and retracts his blasters with the 
       right:
 
PANEL: He swings around the whole ship as he blasts  it straight down the middle cutting it right    in two pieces:
       
PANEL: As the ship splits in two in mid air, he  releases his grappling hook, flips, and lands      on the ground in a crouched position:
 
PANEL: He stays there in the crouched position as    the two piece of the ship crash into the        ground behind him:
 
PANEL: He stands up and looks behind him at the    ship:
 
PANEL: Switches over to David to the other side 
       showing the back of his head with the      broken ship and crash site in the B.G.:
 
PANEL: He turns his head around and looks up in the    direction of the Watchtower as he slowly picks  up his right gauntlet and responds back to  Yang in a calm voice and more determination in
 in his eyes than ever:
 
DAVID
...There's been a change of plans...
 
EXT. VIRGIL AND YANG - ON THE FORCE
 
PANEL: We zoom in on Yang as he continues to listen
       in carefully as David gives him the orders. 
       He responds back to David saying:
 
YANG
OKAY...WERE ON! IT!
 
PANEL: Switches over to Virgil as he draws his 
       attention behind him at Yang and curiously
       asks:
 
VIRGIL
...WHAT DID HE SAY??
 
PANEL: Switches back over to Yang as he turns around
       and replies:
 
YANG
...ROUND UP TIME!
 
EXT. ETHAN AND SCARLET - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: The shot opens up as it's zoomed in on Ethan's
       face. Just behind him still back to back 
       fighting off the Wraithians is Scarlet. He's
       listening in on communications device as he 
       says:
 
ETHAN
...ALRIGHT! WE'LL BE RIGHT BEHIND YA'!
 
PANEL: Ethan turns around and draws his attention 
       towards Scarlet. In the B.G., they're getting
       hit with heavy firepower:
 
ETHAN
COME ON! TIME TO MOVE!
 
PANEL: Ethan has Scarlet by the arm as he's dragging 
       her across the rooftop. As their continuously
       get rained upon, she asks him curiously:
 
SCARLET
WHAT THE HELL IS THE PLAN!??
 
PANEL: 
As they reach the end, Ethan turns back around  towards her showing the back of Ethan's head and the front of Scarlets face as she's    curious. Ethan replies:
 
ETHAN
...Just follow my lead!
 
PANEL: A shot of Ethan as he launches himself off the  edge of the building and lands onto a    Wraithian Stalker
 
PANEL: Scarlet is looking at him as he rides away and
       says in a loathing voice:
 
SCARLET
Only "he" would come up with such a 
stupid idea.
 
PANEL: Scarlet draws herself back from the edge of  the building:
 
PANEL: The shot switches behind her as she begins
       darting for the rooftop:
 
PANEL: She leaps off and lands on top of another 
       stalker:
 
EXT. SCARLET - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: The Wraithian on the stalker turns around when
       when Scarlet drives both her fingers in his 
       eyes and gouges them out:
 
SPLICK!
 
     AHHHHHH!!!
 
PANEL: She lays on top of him using his hands to 
       steer:
 
PANEL: She flies out into the distance as the 
       warships, stalkers, and hoard transports 
       begin t slowly follow her:
 
EXT. DAVID - IN THE STREET
 
 
PANEL: David is running through the streets in a 
       hurry as it's a race against time:
 
PANEL: He leaps into the air and latches onto the 
       side of the building:
 
PANEL: He climbs up the side of the building a 
       little while before shooting out his 
       grappling hook and shooting to the top of 
       the building:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH!
 
PANEL: He's zipping up the side of the building and    running across it:
 
SZEEEEEEEEEEE!
 
PANEL: We zoom in closer as him as he's running 
       and ziplining up the side of the building:
 
 
EXT. VIRGIL AND YANG - FORCE HOVER
 
PANEL: Virgil and Yang are on the Force zipping
       across a rooftop. Behind them in the B.G.,
       are Wraithian aircrafts following close 
       behind:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
...Yang! Where is he?
 
PANEL: Zoom's in close to Yang as he's over 
       over looking the holographic image of 
       the Watchtower. He screams out:
 
YANG
Underneath the Watchtower 
               down in the core generator 
               room. 
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Got it!
 
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic image of the 
       detonation timer:
 
PANEL: Ethan lifts his head up and screams out
       loud:
 
ETHAN
8 MINUTES! 45 SECONDS!
 
 
EXT. DAVID - IN THE STREETS/ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: Switches over to the top of the rooftop as 
       it opens up at the edge. In the B.G., is 
       nothing but dark grey skies and barely  empty rooftops:
 
PANEL: David flies up and flips onto the rooftop: 
 
PANEL: David is running across the rooftop. Out in 
       the distance in the B.G., we see The 
       Watch tower:
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic image of the 
       detonation timer:
 
PANEL: Ethan screams out:
 
ETHAN
7 MINUTES! 34 SECONDS!
 
 
EXT. DAVID - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: David is heading straight into the shot as 
       he's running full force:
 
PANEL: Out of nowhere 2 Wraithian Warriors fly 
       up from the side of the building right
       infront of him. The Charge up their bio
       canons and aim them right at him:
 
PANEL: Shot switches over to David as he just rams 
 straight into them knocking them off the  rooftop:
 
PANEL: David leaps off the edge of the rooftop 
       and shoots out his grappling hook:
 
WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH WHOSH!
 
PANEL: A shot from behind as David leaves the 
       rooftop and heads straight up towards 
       the rooftop of the Watchtower:
 
ZZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
 
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: Ethan is flying on the Wraithian Stalker. 
       In the B.G., Hundreds of Wraithian 
       aircrafts are following him:
 
PANEL: We zoom in as he looks down at the
       holographic image of the detonation 
       device:
 
PANEL: A shot of the detonation device:
 
PANEL: Ethan screams out loud:
 
ETHAN
6 MINUTES! 29 SECONDS!
 
EXT. DAVID - WATCHTOWER - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: David is running across the rooftop and
 enters in the same way Jeremy did:
 
 
INT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER 
 
PANEL: He drops down through the roof and is 
       standing inside a hallway:
 
PANEL: David takes off down the hallway:
 
PANEL: He momentarily stops at the end of the 
       hall:
 
PANEL: He looks around for a brief moment before
       taking a left and continues on down the 
       hallway:
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: Shot of the holographic image of the 
       detonation device:
 
PANEL: Ethan screams out:
 
ETHAN
5 MINUTES! 54 SECONDS!
 
INT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER
 
PANEL: David is reeling himself down the elevation 
       shaft:
 
INT. DAVID - CORE GENERATOR ROOM
 
PANEL: David breaks out of the vent and inside the 
       core generator room:
 
PANEL: He falls to the ground about 20 feet:
 
PANEL: At the other end of the core generator room 
       is the biochemist. As he's chained on his
       knee's, two Wraithian Warriors are beating 
       him to a blood pupil:
 
PANEL: David is on top of one of the bio-surged 
       components when he leaps off and lands on 
       top of both of them:
 
PANEL: He takes both down in a very vicious kind 
       of way:
 
PANEL: He moves over infront of him and stands 
       there just starring at him for a second:
 
PANEL: Shot switches over to the biochemist. He's
       looking up at him and says with excitment:
 
BIOCHEMIST
...Thank! you.
 
PANEL: A shot of David as he's looking down at him
       slightly out of breath. He picks up his 
       arms that are chained and says:
 
DAVID
Don't thank me yet!
 
PANEL: He retracts his blasters and breaks the 
       bio charged clamps and chains:
 
PANEL: David has the biochemist by the hand as 
       he begins running into the shot in a panic.
       
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: Ethan flies by as he's dodging Wraithian 
       aircrafts.
 
PANEL: Ethan looks down at the holographic image
       detonation timer:
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic image of the 
       detonation timer:
 
PANEL: Ethan screams out:
 
ETHAN
2 MINUTES! 14 SECONDS!
 
 
INT. DAVID - CORE GENERATOR ROOM
 
PANEL: David is dragging the biochemist through 
       the core generator room as he continues to
       say:
 
DAVID
Everyone get in position and hurry
                cause were gunna' be comin' up 
fast. 
 
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: Etha is flying through air on the 
       Wraithian Stalker. In the B.G., Wraithian
       aircrafts are hot on his tail:
 
PANEL: He turns around and begins heading away 
       from the shot. In the B.G is the Watchtower
       far out in the distace. The Wraithian 
       aircrafts, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang    are following behind him:
 
INT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER
 
PANEL: The doors of the elevation shaft slide open:
 
SHEEE!
 
PANEL: David and the biochemist leave in a hurry. 
       Once they step foot out the elevation shaft,
       A group of Wraithian guards turn the corner:
 
PANEL: One of the Wraithian guards in the front of 
       group points at them and says:
 
WRAITHIAN GUARD
SIEZE THEM!
 
PANEL: They begin to open fire:
 
FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH! FSH!
 
PANEL: David gets infront of the biochemist as a 
       shield. He begins to fire back at them:
 
PANEL: They quickly begin to back up until the reach
       the end of the hallway. They turn around and 
       make a break for it:
 
 
EXT. ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic image of the 
       detonation timer:
 
PANEL: Ethan picks his head up and screams out:
 
ETHAN 
34 SECONDS!
 
INT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER
 
PANEL: David and the biochemist are hurrying down the 
       hallway:
 
PANEL: Out of nowhere about 25 feet out, another 
       group of Wraithian Guards come around the
       corner and begin to open fire at them:
 
FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH 
 
PANEL: David gets infront of the biochemist again and  begins to charge at them and also opens fire:
 
PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU!
 
PANEL: Once David gets close enough, he takes out the 
       remaining Wraithian guards with his bare    hands:
 
PANEL: He picks up the biochemist and puts him on his 
       back and hurries down the hallway:
 
 
EXT. HOLOGRAPHIC TIMER 
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic timer:
 
17...16...15...
 
PANEL: David and the biochemist make their way to the 
       rooftop: 
 
 
EXT. HOLOGRAPHIC TIMER
 
PANEL: A shot of the holographic timer
 
11...10...9...
 
EXT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: David and the biochemist are running as fast    as they can for the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL: A shot of the rooftop:
 
PANEL: David and the Biochemist continue towards the 
       edge of the rooftop when bio blasts come up 
       from behind them:
 
FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH!
 
PANEL: A group of Wraithian Guards are behind them as 
       they're running after them:
 
EXT. HOLOGRAPHIC TIMER
 
6...5...4...
 
 
EXT. DAVID - THE WATCHTOWER - ROOFTOP
 
PANEL: The group of Wraithian guards begin to open 
       fire again as they're still running after 
       them:
 
FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH!!
 
PANEL: A closer shot of the edge of the rooftop:
 
PANEL: Once they get close enough, David grabs the 
       biochemist by his back and throws him right 
       off the roof:
 
PANEL: The Wraithian guards continue to open fire:
 
FSH FSH FSH FSH!
 
PANEL: David reaches the edge and launches himself 
       off. He begins free falling about 1,000 feet 
       to the ground:
 
PANEL: The Biochemist is free falling:
 
PANEL: David is free falling with his arms and legs 
       out in position like if he's sky diving:
 
PANEL: Out of nowhere, Ethan comes flies in fast and 
       grabs David:
 
PANEL: Scarlet grabs the biochemist:
 
EXT. DAVID AND ETHAN - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: David is holding on for dear life as he begins
       to look down. He looks back up and Ethan as he
       has hold of him:
 
PANEL: Ethan throws him up on the Wraithian Stalker
       with him:
 
EXT. HOLOGRAPHIC TIMER
 
3...2...1...0...
 
 
EXT. WRAITHIAN CAPITAL 
 
PANEL: The shot pulls away showing a good  landscape view of Wraithian Capital. In    the B.G. is the Watchtower as 100's of  Wraithian Aircrafts come flying by it in  the distance. Out of nowhere, the buildings  trailling straight into the shot start  blowing all over at random:
 
 
EXT. SCARLET - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: Scarlet is trying to keep the biochemist down
       as the Wraithian aircrafts as shooting at
       them.
 
PANEL: A side shot of her zipping through, over, 
       and around the buildings as the Wraithians
       continue to open fire:
 
FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH FSH!
 
PANEL: From out of nowhere, shots are being fired 
       from underneathe them:
 
PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU!
 
 
EXT. VIRGIL AND YANG - FORCE HOVER - GROUND
 
PANEL: The shot moves down until we see Virgil and 
       Yang riding top speed on the force hover 
       on the ground. In the B.G., pieces of  buildings and Wraithian aircrafts are    hitting the ground behind them:
 
PANEL: Yang is in the back of the Force Hover  firing at the Wraithian aircrafts above:
 
PANEL: Out of nowhere, a Hoardtransport falls  right behind them and covers Yang:
 
 
EXT. ETHAN AND DAVID - WRAITHIAN STALKER
 
PANEL: The shot moves up to Ethan and David. Ethan    and David are on the Force Hover as 
       they're dodging, flying under, and over the    buildings as they begin collapsing in on  them:
 
PANEL: David is in the back blasting away the 
       Wraithian aircrafts to ensure they go down:
 
PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU PEU!
 
PANEL: Switches over to the back of them as the 
       Wraithian aircrafts are being crushed, 
       blown up and shot at:
 
 
EXT. WRAITHIAN CAPITAL 
 
PANEL: We pull back until we see a good landscape 
       shot of what's going on. The skyscrappers
       are falling in and destroying the Wraithian
       aircrafts as their chasing them through 
       the city:
 
 
EXT. OUTSIDE WRAITHIAN CAPITAL
 
PANEL: We zoom is as we see David, Ethan, Scarlet, 
       Virgil, and Yang make it out of the smoke 
       and debree alive:
 
PANEL: Virgil and Yang skid on the floor as David,
       Ethan, Scarlet, and the Biochemist decend
       from the sky on either side of them:
 
PANEL: The shot pulls around behind them as they're  all on their air and bover crafts looking at    Wraithian Capital. pieces of the buildings are  still slowly falling to the ground. Smoke  covers the ground and debree is floating  around the area aswell:
 
PANEL: Shot of Virgil and Yang as their looking at 
       the city quietly:
 
PANEL: Shot of Scarlet and the biochemist as their
       looking at the city:
 
PANEL: Shot of Ethan and David as their looking 
       out at the city. David slowly begins to get
       up from the Wraithian Stalker and is slowly
       walking closer to the city with his eyes 
       still locked on the city. Ethan is looking
       at him the whole time:
 
PANEL: The shot pulls behind David as he looks at 
       nothing but decay and debree filling the 
       city:
 
PANEL: The shot pulls around to a zoomed in shot  of David as he lets out a small sigh:
 
DAVID
Sigh...
 
PANEL: Virgil and Yang are on the Force Hover. 
       Yang looks at Virgil as he signs across
       and begins to say a prayer for the dead:
 
VIRGIL
...Eternal rest grant unto Jeremy,
                O lord...
 
PANEL: A shot of Ethan as he's looking at David:
 
VIRGIL
(Narration)
...And let yo' perpetual light
                shine upon him...
 
PANEL: A shot of Scarlet and the biochemist looking
       at him:
 
VIRGIL
(Narration)
...May his soul...one of the faithfully departed...
 
PANEL: A shot of David looking out at the desacrated
       city:
 
VIRGIL
(Narration)
...through the mercy of God.
 
PANEL: Virgil has his head bent over with his eyes 
       closed as he finishes the prayer:
 
VIRGIL
(Narration)
Rest in peace...Amen.
 
PANEL: He takes one last look at Wraithian Capital
       and says:
 
DAVID
...Amen.
 
PANEL: David turns around and says to them:
 
DAVID
...Let's go...
 
PANEL: David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang are 
       all riding off out of the shot through the 
       vast surface or nothingness:
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
SECTOR 7
Loading Dock
2512 A.D 
10:25 pm
"Mission Complete"
 
 
INT. LOADING DOCK
 
PANEL: We open up with a few LD workers trying to 
       clean up the crash landing site from earlier.
       After a second or two, the Loading dock main
       entry way begins to desmoke and unlock:
 
PSHHH! CLOCK CLOCK!
 
PANEL: All the LD workers draw their attention 
       the Loading Dock Main Entry doors:
 
PANEL: Shot of the doors as their opening up:
 
PANEL: Switches back over to the LD workers as 
       they're all looking down the loading strip.
       They all slowly move out of the way as 
       David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang 
       slowly come in and stop in the middle of them:
 
PANEL: The shot switches over to David as they are 
       all getting off they're force hovers. In the
       B.G. and all around them are the LD workers as
       they're just standing there in utter shock:
       
PANEL: A shot of Scarlet getting off her Force Hover
       as she's trying to maintain the biochemist
       who's covered in dirty and bruises:
 
LD WORKER
It's the biochemist!
 
PANEL: Switches over to an LD worker in the crowd as 
       he slowly gets excited and says:
 
LD WORKER
They did it...They did IT!
 
PANEL: All the LD workers begin moving in closer 
       as they're still getting off their Force 
       Hovers. The LD workers are cheering them on
       in this glorious moment:
 
PANEL: A shot of Ethan as he's smirking and smiling.
       all of the LD workers are surrounding him to 
       cheer him on:
 
PANEL: A shot of Virgil:
 
PANEL: A shot of Yang:
 
PANEL: A shot of Scarlet and the biochemist:
 
PANEL: A shot of David:
 
PANEL: The shot pulls back to a bird's view as we
       see the catwalk on the upper quardrant. In
       the B.G. on the lower quadrant the LD workers 
       are still surrounding them and cheering them
       on. The Sergeant steps into the panel and is
       looking down upon all of them silently from 
       the upper quadrant:
 
PANEL: Moves back down to the lower quadrant as David
       is still smirking and smiling at all the LD 
       workers. In the B.G., the Sergeant screams 
       out loud over the cheering and raging on the
       lower quadrant and says:
 
SERGEANT
(Narration)
YOU!...FIVE!!!
 
PANEL: A shot of the Sergeant as he looks down with        a very stern look on his face:
 
PANEL: Scarlet is looking up at him:
 
PANEL: Virgil is looking up at him:
 
PANEL: Yang is looking up at him:
 
PANEL: Ethan is looking up at him and under his 
       breath says:
 
ETHAN
...Oh' shit...
 
PANEL: The Sergeant points his thumb out behind him
       in a motion to follow him. Again he says with 
       a very stern voice:
 
SERGEANT
...Come! with me.
 
PANEL: The Sergeant turns around and begins walking
       away from the edge of the railing:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
...You all should be lucky to be 
                alive...  
 
 
 
INT. DAVID, ETHAN, SCARLET, VIRGIL, YANG, COMMANDER, SERGEANT - COMMANDER'S 
PRIVATE CHAMBERS 
 
PANEL: David, Ethan, Scarlet, Virgil, and Yang are 
       all standing in a straight line from side 
       to side on the other side of the Commanders                                                                    desk. The Commander is walking back and 
       forth in front of them:
 
COMMANDER
...Do you have any! idea what you
               have all done?
 
PANEL: A shot of Virgil Scarlet standing next to
       eachother with their faces down:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
Not only have you all broken more
                SRF laws than anyone in the history 
of the new world.
 
PANEL: A shot of Yang and Ethan standing next to
       eachother with their heads down:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
But through your arrogance, you 
                could've put us in enough jepardy
                to end the human race as we know!
                it.
 
PANEL: The Commander is walking around them as he 
       continues to scold them:
 
COMMANDER
As your Commander I should makesure
you never! step foot above the 
                surface again!
 
PANEL: A shot of David as his head is down:
 
PANEL: The Commander moves around his desk and sits
       at his desk and leans forward as he says:
 
COMMANDER
...But as a human...I would like
                to be the first of many to say...
                thank you...
 
PANEL: A shot of Ethan and Yang as they look up 
       curiously before smirking. They look at 
       Scarlet and Virgil:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
I know its not much.
 
PANEL: Scarlet and Virgil are looking back at them
       smirking as well, they turn they're faces 
       back at the Commander behind his desk:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
But it's all I have right at this
                moment...
 
PANEL: The Commander leans forward and is smirking
       at them. As he draws his attention next to
       him and puts his hand out, he raises his 
       eyebrows and says:
 
COMMANDER
...That! and, these ofcourse.
 
PANEL: A shot of a small metallic like box as the 
       Sergeant is walking it through the room is
       his hands:
 
PANEL: The Sergeant stands infront of them holding
 the box as they all look at it curiously:
 
PANEL: The Sergeant opens the box and inside are 
       five awards. There medallions with an SRF 
       symbol on them:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
These awards are given for duties
                of the highest order.
 
PANEL: A shot of Ethan and Yang as they're being
       handed theirs:
 
COMMANDER 
                     (Narration)
Only a few Squad teams were awarded
                these in SRF history.
 
PANEL: A shot of Virgil and David being handed 
       theirs:
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
So Don't take these lightly.
 
PANEL: Scarlet speaks up as she's holding her award
       and asks the Commander:
 
SCARLET
...Umm...Commander? 
 
PANEL: A shot of the Commander as Scarlet continues
       to ask him:
 
SCARLET
Forgive me, I don't mean to be so
                demanding or anything, but.
 
PANEL: Scarlet continues to ask him:
 
SCARLET
...About! Graduation day? Will we.
 
PANEL: The Commander cuts her off as he shakes his
       head back and forth and says:
 
COMMANDER
You don't even need to finish that
                sentence, We'll have that taken 
                care of.
 
PANEL: Scarlet draws her head back and closes her 
       eyes. She lets out a good sigh of relief and
       says:
 
SCARLET
Sigh...Thank you.
 
COMMANDER
(Narration)
You don't need to thank me...You've
earned it.
     
PANEL: The Commander looks around and all of them and 
       says with the utmost sincerity:
 
COMMANDER
...We, are all! in your debt...More than you could ever know...
 
PANEL: A shot of all five of them looking back at the
       Commander silently with their heads held high:
 
 
 
INT. DAVID,ETHAN,SCARLET - DAVID'S TRAINING QUARTERS
 
PANEL: Scarlet is coming down the hallway heading
       towards David's Private Quarters. She comes 
       to the door and stands in the doorway. In the 
       B.G. inside the room, David is sitting on  
       his bed, and Ethan is sitting on a chair by
       the bed. The two of them are laughing and 
       talking as they're interrupted by Scarlet:
 
PANEL: Switches over to Scarlet as she leans up 
       against the doorway and begins to rub her 
       face and look around the room. In the B.G.,
       a few SRF Trainee's are walking back and 
       forth through the halls:
 
ETHAN
(Narration)
Okay, it's safe to say I've over
                stayed my! welcome...I'll ahh, 
                just give you 2 some privacy...
 
PANEL: Switches over to Ethan and David. David is 
       still sitting on the edge of his bed, and 
       Ethan is sitting backwards on the chair next
       to him. Ethan slowly gets up from the chair 
       as he looks at David and says in a quiet and
       secretive tone:
 
ETHAN
We'll discuss early development 
                plans for the graduation party.
 
PANEL: As Ethan is getting up from the chair 
       smirking, David puts his head down, giggles,
       and says:
 
DAVID
Ha, God...
 
PANEL: Switches over to the door way. Close up we 
       see the back of Scarlets face. In the B.G.,
       David is sitting on his bed and watching 
       as Ethan is walking towards the doorway:
 
PANEL: Ethan makes it to the doorway, he stops for 
       a second and looks over at Scarlet and says:
 
ETHAN
...Pyscho.
 
PANEL: Switches over to Scarlet as she looks back 
       at him and responds:
 
SCARLET
...Lush.
 
PANEL: Same shot as Scarlet smirks and then giggles:
 
PANEL: Switches over to Ethan as he does the same. 
       Ethan leaves the room:
 
PANEL: Scarlet, still smirking, is watching Ethan 
       walk away:
 
PANEL: Scarlet looks back into the room at David as
       she continues to smirk:
 
PANEL: David is looking back at her, his smirk dies 
       down and he begins to perch his mouth as he 
       looks down infront of him:
 
PANEL: Scarlet, still leaning in the doorway does
       the same. She begins to walk into the room
       slowly:
 
PANEL: She turns around and faces the desk. Close
       up into the shot is David as he's looking 
       down at the floor:
 
PANEL: Scarlet turns around quickly and begins to 
       break the silence between them:
 
SCARLET
David, I came here to talk to you
                about What happened earlier on the 
                balcony.
 
PANEL: David picks up his head and draws his
       attention at her:
 
SCARLET
(Narration)
About the things I've said to you...
 
PANEL: Switches back over to Scarlet as we zoom in
       on her face. She stands there with empathy in
       her eyes and dissapoint. She looks at him 
       shaking her head before dropping it and says:
 
SCARLET
...I'm so ashamed of the way I've 
                acted...
 
PANEL: She pauses for a second. She lifts her head
       back up and says:
 
SCARLET
In that moment I shoulda' been alot
                more understanding and compassionate
                of the situation...
 
PANEL: David continues to look at Scarlet as he's 
       listening to her every word:
 
SCARLET
(Narration)
...I know how much Jeremy meant to
                you and you have every right to hate
                me for it...
 
PANEL: Scarlet pauses for a second as her face 
       slightly squinches. She leans in slightly as
       she says with incredible sincerity:
 
SCARLET
...David...I'm so, sorry.
 
DAVID
(Narration)
You don't have to be...Trust me...
I can honestly say I'm okay...
 
PANEL: David continues to look at Scarlet as he 
       wave's hands and shakes his head. He says:
 
DAVID
All I heard today was sorries and 
               condolences and it done nothing 
               for me...
 
PANEL: Switches over to Scarlet as she stands    there listening to his everyword:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Everyone was giving me a crying
               shoulder when I needed a pushing hand.
 
PANEL: From a side angled shot of David, we see  him drop his head down, closes his eyes,  and raise his eyebrows:
 
DAVID
If I'm saying anything 
Scarlet...
 
PANEL: David picks up his head and with a smirk 
       on his face draws 
 
    DAVID
    It's that you gave me exactly
                what I needed to throw the past 
behind me...And keep moving
                forward...
 
PANEL: David continues to smirk at her silently:
 
PANEL: Switch over to Scarlet, we zoom in on her as
       she slowly begins to develop a smirk on her 
       face:
 
PANEL: Same shot as she drops her head:
 
PANEL: When she picks up her head she immediately
       says:
 
SCARLET
Anytime...
 
PANEL: David's eyes are following her as she begins 
       to walk out the door:
 
PANEL: We see Scarlet as she's walking towards the 
       door. We have an extreme zoom in look of her
       face. In the B.G as see David sitting on the 
       edge of his bed as he blurts out stopping 
       her:
 
DAVID
Hey! Scarlet?
 
PANEL: Scarlet turns around to look at him waiting
       to hear what he has to say:
 
PANEL: We switch over to David as he sits there just
       starring at her. He draws his attention 
       irradically all over the place as he tries
       to get out:
 
DAVID
Umm...Ha! Well...You know we've 
                known eachother for quit sometime 
                now...
 
PANEL: David starts scratching his face:
 
PANEL: Scarlet slightly tilts her head still 
       curiously waiting for an answer:
 
DAVID
(Narration)
Over the years...ya' know...I've
                got to know you and...ya' know...
                you've got to know me.
 
PANEL: David continues to do random crazy actions 
       as the nerves are running through his body:
 
DAVID
...So...I was just...wondering...
                I mean if you want! to? Perhaps
                ...Maybe-
 
PANEL: Scarlet stops his bumbling and immediately 
       cuts him off by saying:
 
SCARLET
What took you so long?...
 
PANEL: Scarlet stands there for a second smirking
       back at David before exiting to the left out
       of the doorway and into the SRF Training 
       halls:
 
PANEL: From a close up shot of David as his eyes 
       are still locked on the doorway. He pauses
       for a second on the doorway before drawing
       his attention to the ground infront of him
       as his eyes are locked on the ground, he 
       slowly begins to grow a smile:
 
 
COMMANDER 7
(Narration)
...Everyone!...Today was truly! a 
day to be remembered...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
SECTOR 7
2512 AD
12:00am
"Ending the Anniversary"
 
EXT. SPEAKER, CROWD - SECTOR 7
 
PANEL: The shot opens up from an angled view of 
       the people of SECTOR 7 in the streets. In
       the B.G., The S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R Tower is 
       shown in the left background in the
       distance. The streets are quiet as the 
       humans of SECTOR 7 are listening to the 
       announcement from the Commander:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
We end this anniversary not with
                doubt...But with hope...
 
PANEL: The shot zooms in and switches around to
       a smaller section of te crowd from over
       head as they're all silently looking at 
       the speaker:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
With faith...Not disbelief...
 
PANEL: The Speaker is standing on the same stump
       he did earlier as he continues to end the 
       anniversary:
 
SPEAKER
For 500 years we have been 
                enslaved like animals down here,
                while the Wraithians roam freely
                on the ground that's rightfully
                ours.
 
PANEL: Another small section of the crowd as 
       they're listening to the speaker:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
And when I think about it...I 
                pity them...
 
PANEL: Another small section of the humans of 
       SECTOR 7:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
...Because our S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R
                resistance is ready to give it back
                to them 500 fold...And when they 
                do they're going to beg! them for
                mercy...
 
 
INT. COMMANDER, BIOCHEMIST, SERGEANT - 
          TELECOMMUNICATIONS DIVISION
 
PANEL: Inside the telecommunications division, the 
       biochemist stands there on the opposite side
       of a holographic image of the components 
       giving a full frontal demonstration on how 
       the components work. The holographic image is
       zoomed in on the panel:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
...The road ahead of them is not an 
                easy one.
 
PANEL: The shot shows the Commanding board on 
       holographic projections like earlier in the 
       story standing up and clapping with smiles
       on their faces:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
Noone said it was ever gunna' be...
 
PANEL: A shot of the biochemist with an extreme 
       close up of the biochemist from the side as
       he's looking up at the screens with a smile
       on his face:
 
PANEL: He turns his head away as he looks at the 
       Commander and the Sergeant standing about
       10 ft. away from him in the B.G., they're
       smirking back at him:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
...But they have proven themselves
                strong enough to bare it...
 
 
EXT. SPEAKER, CROWD - SECTOR 7
 
PANEL: A shot of speaker from a side mid zoomed in
       shot as he continues to speak aloud to every
       one:
 
SPEAKER
And on that note, same thing goes 
                for us...On this Journey to the 
                surface, we will! face grave threats.
 
 
INT. VIRGIL AND YANG - MEDICAL DIVISION
 
PANEL: Virgil and Yang are on medical tables as 
        they are looking down at he ground silently. In the B.G., medics are working on other
        tasks:
 
PANEL: From a side angled view see Virgil extremely
        close in the shot and Yang in the B.G.:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
But we won't have to face them alone...
 
PANEL: Same shot as Yang looks over at Virgil and
       smirks:
 
PANEL: Virgil looks over at Yang and also smirks:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
For we will have eachother...
 
 
EXT. SPEAKER - SECTOR 7
 
PANEL: A shot of the speaker for a zoomed out view.
       The crowd is looking at him listening to 
       every word he has to say silently:
 
SPEAKER
(Narration)
  I stand before you saying that the
                Wraithians terror will eventually     be coming to an ebrupt, halt...And 
                a new chapter will begin.
 
PANEL: A shot of the speaker from behind. In the 
       B.G infront of him at the humans of SECTOR 7
       looking at him silently:
 
SPEAKER
For this we have noone else to 
thank but our S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R's.
 
PANEL: A shot of a small section of the humans:
 
SPEAKER
Thanks to them we will stop! 
               suffering...
 
PANEL: Another shot of a small section of the 
       humans:
 
SPEAKER
We will stop! agonizing...
 
 
PANEL: Switches over to the speaker from the front 
       with a close up upper view:
 
SPEAKER
But above all, we will stop! Surviving...And we, will start, Living!
 
...YAAAAAAHHH!!!
 
PANEL: A shot of the humans in the streets 
       cheering on the future:
 
YAAAAAH!!!
 
PANEL: Another shot of the crowd:
 
YAAAAAH!!!
 
PANEL: A shot of the Speaker from behind as he 
       has his hands out. The humans are still 
       cheering:
 
YAAAAHH!!!
 
PANEL: The shot zooms out until we see a good 
       majority of the humans in the streets of 
       SECTOR 7 cheering. In the B.G to the left 
       of the panel, we see the S.U.R.V.I.V.O.R 
       tower:
 
YAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
 
 
INT. SOVEREIGN COMMANDER AND WARLORD - ROYAL CHAMBERS
 
PANEL: We open up with a bird's eye view of the 
       Sovereign Commander standing at his large
       Window looking out at the city: 
 
PANEL: We switch over to an zoomed in view of him
       as the Warlord is walking up behind him to 
       his right:
 
PANEL: The Warlord makes it to his side as the 
       Sovereign Commander stands there and says:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Everything is set in position 
position! Warlord.
 
WARLORD
Yes Sovereign...The humans haven't
                the slightest idea what's upon 
                them now.
 
PANEL: From an angled shot we only see the 
       Sovereign Commander as he failes to draw his 
       eyes away from the city:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Good...That's the way that we 
                want it...
 
PANEL: The Warlord also doesn't draw his eyes away
       from the city as he says:
 
WARLORD
Ya' know Sovereign we have allowed 
                them to gun down alot! of our 
                warriors.
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
You of all beings should understand
                that casualties are inevitable in 
                times of war...But yes, I agree with
                you that the sacrifice was great...
 
PANEL: The Sovereign Commander still failes to draw
       his eyes off the city as he says with a 
       dark and sadistic smirk on his face:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
...But the result of it will be 
                glorious...
 
PANEL: An angled upper shot of the Warlord and the 
       Sovereign Commander from the right as they 
       both look out at the city:
 
WARLORD
...So what do we do now?
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
Now my friend, we prepare ourselves
                to do what we are born to do...
 
 
INT. BIOCHEMIST - PRIVATE QUARTERS
 
PANEL: The biochemist his in his private bathroom 
       quarters as he bends down at throws water on
       his face:
 
PANEL: Switches over to a mirror refelction shot of 
       his face. He reaches for a clothe and begins
       to dry his face:
 
PANEL: As he's drying his face, his skin and ever 
       part of his body begins to change and morph
       until his skin and body is complete different:
 
SOVEREIGN COMMANDER
...Extermination.
 
PANEL: The biochemist removes the cloth from his 
       face and reveals that its the chameleon:
 
 
 
THE END! 
 
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MrPositive
MrPositive - 2/20/2016, 1:39 PM
Tylerman
Tylerman - 2/21/2016, 2:12 PM
@ MrPositive

lol I dunno' if I should take that as good, or bad. how did you really enjoy it. I kinda' need some good insight if you wouldn't mind helpin' me out.
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