How to introduce Krillin in Dragonball Reborn - Part: 2

How to introduce Krillin in Dragonball Reborn - Part: 2

You may have read this Fan-Fic, but I have made alot of changes.

By OriginalPhysco - Apr 03, 2009 07:04 PM EST
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Dragonball Reborn

It starts with two Saiyan pods crashlanding right into the ground. The only thing you see is that both of the doors open. The movie shifts to a party hosted by Roshi. Everyone is dancing, having a good time. But a little boy is stuck in a room, studying. The little boy happened to be Gohan. Goku comes in the room, wore out from working out. Goku gives him a four star dragonball and tells him that his grandfather gave it to him. Goku placed the ball on a hat he made and Gohan puts it on. Gohan asks Goku a complicated math problem.
Goku laughs and says "save that one and ask your mother." On the dance floor, a woman comes up to Yamcha and tries to seduce him. Yamcha tries to get her off but Bulma see's him and pushes him into the food table. Bulma storms out the house. Goku comes out and asks if he was ok. After Goku pulls him up he see's a piece of chicken wrapped in noodles, stuck in Yamcha hair. Goku takes it out and eats a peice of it. Everyone looking at him yells "EWWWWW."

Some bald short guy says "same old Goku." When Goku see's him they run to eachother and hug. This bald guy was short, but he wasn't a midget. Everyone doesn’t know who this guy is and Goku introduces him. He says that his name is Krillan and that he was his best friend since he was seven years old. Krillan had to go away when they turned sixteen. Krillin had to leave because his mom had got a well paying job somewhere far away. There, Krillin was trained by a great elder that died a few months ago. All of a sudden someone knocks on the door. When Chi-Chi opens it, it his her father, the Ox-King. He is to big to fit in the door, so he has to go to the backyard part of the party. There everyone talks to the Ox-King and the children climb on his back. The movie shifts back to the Saiyans coming out their pods. When they come out they see Piccolo flying over their pods. One of the saiyans were bald and bulky, named Nappa and the other had alot of hair, named Radditz. They read Piccolo's power level and demands to fight him. The fight lasted over eight minutes. They defeated Piccolo easily. When the Saiyans talk about Kakorrot Piccolo flys away injured. Piccolo knocks down Roshi's door and falls on the ground. When Piccolo wakes up, he finds himself on a bed and he leaves out the room.

Goku tells him that he fainted when he knocked down the door. Everyone is behind Goku, looking afraid. Piccolo tells him that two Saiyan warriors are on their way to find him. He tells him that the Saiyan race is the one's that sent him to this planet. He also tell's him that they are no joke, that they defeated him easily. Goku and Piccolo decide to go take a look, to see if they were still there. Nappa goes to Roshi's house and demands to see Kakorrot. When they refuse to give him information, he trys to attack a woman. But Yamcha stops him and takes him on. This fight lasted one minute and a few seconds. Before he finishes Yamcha off, he spots Chi-Chi and goes after her. He says "you are one cute earthling woman, stick with me and you'll have anything you want." Chi-Chi says that she is married and smacks him.

He is furious and before he punches her, his scouter picks up a dangerous power level. He turns around and see's Gohan. Gohan rushes toward him and punches him like crazy. Then Gohan kicks Nappa out the roof and into the water. When Gohan is done kicking his ass, he asks "what happened?" The movie shifts to Goku and Piccolo fighting Radditz. In this fourteen minute fight, Piccolo discovers that Raditz is very fast, so he says "Goku, I will give him company. Meanwhile, charge up your Kamehameha." By the time Raditz realizes Goku is charged up, he knocks Piccolo out of the way and Raditz does a ki attack and wait that looks like Goku's kamehameha, but it's dark yellow. Raditz says "Double Sunday" and the ki energy from both his hands combine and charges at Goku. At the same time, Goku releases his Kamehameha wave, and both attacks clash. It seems to be a pretty even wave, until Piccolo releases an attack called the Special Beam Cannon. This drops Raditz's powerlevel a lot, and with this condition, Goku destroys Raditz with the Super Kamehameha. They went back to the party and heard what went on with Nappa. Piccolo stares at Gohan and Goku stares at Piccolo staring at Gohan. That night Yamcha died in Bulma's arms. Goku says "We can still call upon Shen-Long." As soon as Bulma starts to grin the movie shifts to them packing up. Piccolo says to Goku "while you are looking for all seven Dragonballs to make your wish, I want to train Gohan." Goku says yes without hesitation. Piccolo says "yes, well, ok come on Gohan." Piccolo thought it wasn't going to be that easy. Gohan goes with Piccolo and looks at his Dad and mom before he leaves. Chi-Chi and everyone is shocked at this. Then Chi-Chi yells at Goku saying "YOU LET A GREEN AND PINK JEEPERS CREEPERS TAKE MY SON?" Goku tells her that he thinks Piccolo will train him well and take good care of him.

On another Planet you cant really see this person because he is covered with darkness. All you know is that he has a tail, horns and is getting in a huge space pod. Also this man in Saiyan armor is getting in his space pod too. The Pod says "hello Vegeta, where would you like to go?" Vegeta response was Earth. Before Goku and the others go off, Goku gives Chi-Chi a kiss goodbye. Chi-Chi finds Nappa's scouter and throws behind her, in the water. In the truck, Roshi tells Goku that he wants to teach him a special new move. In this training Goku will have to pick up this big truck and carry Roshi, Krillin and Bulma to the first two Dragonballs. The Truck was doubled ten times its own weight when they found the first Dragonball in the north Pole. Later Piccolo drops Gohan in the middle of the street and a van comes right in for Gohan. The van gets crushed when it hits Gohan. Piccolo comes down to him and says that he will have to spend his days out in the wild and he gives Gohan a sword. Gohan was crying a lttle bit when Piccolo left.

Two days later, Goku and the others find the three star dragonball in Paris. It was in the Eiffel Tower. The two space pods are still on their way, rocketing to earth. After the truck carrying, Goku had to carry mountains from egypt. They also found a two star Dragonball in the sphinx mouth. While Gohan was training he slayed a tiger and ate him. He also found a seven star Dragonball in a bee hive. Gohan made a little bag out of fur and put it around his waist. Thats what he put the dragonball in. In New York Goku buys four huge bags of Corndogs and left Master Roshi to pay. After that the owner of the stand put up a sign that said "all sold out." There they found the six star Dragonball on lady liberty. Roshi made Goku pick up Lady Liberty and take five places, five times on that little island. He then showed Goku the special move he wanted him to learn. He told Goku that he never mastered it, the Spirit Bomb. Goku raises his two arms and see's how enormous the energy ball is and how dangerous it is. Goku eyes start to shine white and glow white. Also his eyes seemed to sparkle. Then Goku cuts off the energy and it dissapears.

A day later Gohan is sleeping in a cave. When he wakes up he finds cooked fish, Apples, peaches and water. He doesnt realize Piccolo in the darkness of the cave. When the big space pod comes down, we get to see who he is perfectly. But another comes out too. This one has braided hair and looks beutiful. His name is Zorbon. He calls the weird looking guy with horns "Frieza." When Friza walks right into the five star Dragonball, he looks at it with excitment. He tells Zorbon to find the other Dragonballs with his scouter. Zorbon manages to find a Dragonball, but it was with Gohan. Gohan stops him from taking the Dragonball and they fight for a couple of minutes. Piccolo was in the air, grining of how Gohan was beating his ass. Then Zorbon turned into this ugly beast of a monster. He managed to beat Gohan, but Piccolo couldn't do anything because Gohan needs to learn. Then you see one tiny tear come from Piccolo eye. Zorbon beats Gohan and takes his Dragonball to Frieza. Vegeta crash lands and figures out Frieza is here looking for the Dragonballs. Vegeta flys pass Goku and the others. Goku decides to go chase whoever that is. When Vegeta reads a strong power level he stops and Goku knocks into him by accident.

Vegeta goes back to where he was hit and is surprised to who he finds. He see's goku and says "Your Kakorrot, WHY HAVEN'T YOU DISPOSED OF THIS WORLD YET?" Goku says "my name is not Kakorrot, it is Goku." He says he is nothing like the Saiyan race and this makes Vegeta angry. He goes after Goku and fights him. This battle took like over nineteen minutes. Then Vegeta tells goku about the Oozaru's. He said that the reason Goku's Oozaru wasn't huge is because his power wasnt high enough. Then Vegeta uses a power called "Blutz Waves" to eclipse the Sun. Then Goku and Vegeta start to pulsate and their vains looking as if they wanted to pop out. They both turned to big, huge Oozaru's. This fight was only for like nine minutes. Vegeta was mad that Goku matched his powers. He said "I couldnt be beaten by a low class scum." Vegeta manages to knock him out of Oozaru form. Then he picks Goku up and squeezes him hard. Gohan comes up looking like a warrior saying "get off of my dad." Then Gohan does a Masenko on him. With this he knocks Vegeta out his Oozaru form. When Vegeta reads Zorbon and a Dragonball power level, he leaves.

Vegeta catches Zorbon destroying a city and fights him for the Dragonball. Vegeta defeats Zorbon and his beast side easily. Zorbon begs for mercy and tells him that Frieza is the one who really destroyed Planet Vegeta. At this Vegeta kills Zorbon with his Gattick Gun and goes after Frieza's Dragonballs. He wants to wish to become almighty in the universe, so he could defeat Frieza. Then vegeta see's Nappa and kills him because he failed in his mission. Vegeta gets an old man to shout Dragonball and Frieza walks right in to the trap. Vegeta snatches the dragonball and takes the two somewhere else. When Frieza figures out that he was a decoy, he deposes of the old man. Later Goku wakes up in his house and he is wounded so much that he can’t get up. Roshi tells him that he found these old beans that will keep you full for ten whole days. Goku eats them and gets straight up. Piccolo tells Goku about Frieza and that he thinks he came with Vegeta. Then Roshi's sister, Buba comes over and tells them that Vegeta took the two Dragonballs to Dragon Valley. Dragon Valley is like the Dragon temple but instead it’s a valley that looks like Namek. There was a big alter there that had Seven holes in them. They go there and they dont see Vegeta. Goku and Krillin see's the two Dragonballs in their places, so Goku put the other Dragonballs in their places. When Goku calls upon the dragon, Vegeta comes out to fight Goku. Krillin jumps in and fights. In this six minute, Krillin unlocks his potential from Piccolo. Krillin does a Solar Flare and this technique blinds Vegeta. Krillin starts punching and kicking Vegeta. Then Krillin uses his Destructo disc. This attack chopped off the top peice of Vegeta's hair. Vegeta is furious and goes after Krillin. Goku stops him and takes Vegeta on again. Goku ask how did he know about the Dragonballs. Vegeta said that their Scouters are also comunicators and that he heard of Shen-Long and the Dragonballs. While they are fighting the Dragon comes out. When they see Frieza going for the Dragon, they stop fighting and Vegeta goes after him. They fight for some minutes and then Frieza uses his Death Beam and before he kills Vegeta, Goku tells him to stop. While Frieza and Goku are fighting, Piccolo heals Vegeta under Goku's orders.


Frieza and Goku are beating each others ass. Then Frieza said he never had to use his true form on anyone. While Frieza was transforming, Goku tried hitting him but there was a shield over Frieza. Frieza then turned to his true form. His true form looked beautiful and sparkly clean. He was also big and Bulky. After piccolo was done healing Vegeta, he tells the others to leave because it's to dangerous. Frieza said "you’re not going anywhere" and sent his Death Beam after Gohan. But Piccolo got in the way and died for Gohan. Vegeta tells Goku about Frieza killing the Saiyan race and that Goku is the only one that can stop him. Frieza sends another death Beam but this time toward Chi-Chi. When she dies that’s when Goku snaps. His eyes start brighting Yellow and hair turns Blonde. The hair on his arms and his eye brows also turn blonde. Vegeta is amazed at what he see's, he says silently "a... a Super Saiyan." Goku tells Roshi to get everyone away, that he is about to use the Spirit Bomb. Roshi gets everyone away. Frieza and Goku fight more and then Goku knocks him down and raises his arms. Goku says "FRIEZA, I CANT ALLOW YOU TO DO THIS ANYMORE AND NOW YOU ARE GOING TO PAY. YOU KILLED EVERYTHING ABOUT ME, MY RACE AND EVEN MY LOVE, CHI-CHI." The Dragon roars in the back round. Then Goku says "SPIRIT BOMB" and throws it at Frieza. Frieza uses a Death Ball to stop it, but it doesn’t work and Frieza is obliterated. Then the Dragonballs fall on the ground and the Eternal Dragon is still up. He wishes back all his friends that died. When Goku gets home, Chi-Chi and Gohan come up to hug Goku. Chi-Chi then asks Goku is she getting wrinkles? Everyone laughs at this. In the end we see Gohan with the Dragonball hat, flying around with Goku, Piccolo, Krillin and Yamcha. After that a scientist is working on a robot, then throws a piece of it at the screen. Then it would say Dragonball Reborn.

Deleted Scenes:

(1). Bulma drives off crying because she think Yamcha is playing her.

(2). Nappa escapes out the water from killing a huge fish.

(3). Gohan see's the eclipsed sun and turns to an Oozaru. He nearly destroys everything. Since Piccolo can control Oozaru's, he calms Gohan down and he turns back to normal.

(4). Frieza smirking when he knows that Vegeta tricked him. It seems that if he wanted that to happen.

Alternate Ending:

Frieza sends another death Beam but this time toward Krillin. When he dies that’s when Goku snaps. His eyes start brighting Yellow and hair turns Blonde. The hair on his arms and his eye brows also turn blonde. Vegeta is amazed at what he see's, he says silently "a... a Super Saiyan."
Goku tells Roshi to get everyone away, that he is about to use the Spirit Bomb. Roshi gets everyone away. Vegeta doesn't want to go and everyone leaves him. All of a sudden an arm picks up Vegeta and puts him in the truck. Frieza and Goku fight more and then Goku knocks him down and raises his arms. Goku says "FRIEZA, I CANT ALLOW YOU TO DO THIS ANYMORE AND NOW YOU ARE GOING TO PAY. YOU KILLED EVERYTHING ABOUT ME, MY RACE AND EVEN MY FRIEND, KRILLIN." The Dragon roars in the back round. Then Goku says "SPIRIT BOMB" and throws it at Frieza. Frieza uses a Death Ball to stop it, but it doesn’t work. The Spirit Bomb only obliterated Frieza's lower side of his body, half the top of his head and his left arm. It looks like if Frieza never did that Death Ball, his whole body would be obliterated. Frieza power level is also massively down. Frieza is still able to fly and goes around Goku shoting Death Beams. The mysterious figure that saved Vegeta, comes in and finishes off Frieza with a Finish Buster. After that, his Blonde hair changes back to normal. This is when Goku learns that he is also a Saiyan. Before Goku talks with him, he wishes for his friends to come back to life. Then the mysterious figure says that his name is Trunks, Bulma's and Vegeta's son and that he is from the future. Trunks tells Goku that in five years, androids created by Dr. Gero will come and try to kill him. He tells Goku that he needs to train because the androids will kill him. He also tells Goku that he came to the past to destroy Frieza because in the future Frieza will work with Dr. Gero to make the ultimate android. Since Frieza has died the android cannot be made perfect. When Goku and Trunks gets to the house, Chi-Chi and Gohan come up to hug Goku. Trunks says in his mind "I cant tell Bulma and Vegeta that im their son from the future. They need to fall in love, the way they will. If I do tell them, they will be forced." Then trunks see's Bulma and Yamcha dance together. When Vegeta looks at Trunks for the second time, he feels that he is connected to Trunks somehow. In the back yard you see master Roshi training Krillin. In the end we see Gohan with the Dragonball hat, flying around with Goku, Krillin, Piccolo and Yamcha. After that a scientist is working on a robot, then throws a piece of it at the screen. Then it would say Dragonball Reborn.


I think the third one should be called Dragonball Unleashed. The main villain should be Cell, trying to achieve his perfect form.

What do you think?
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joob234
joob234 - 4/3/2009, 10:12 PM
hahaha too bad none of this will work since chatwins coming back to play goku again, so guess another story as him as a kid and [frick]ing the saiyan story up probably by making them kids!
realfirstavenger
realfirstavenger - 4/5/2009, 9:35 PM
all i know is that krillin is my favorite character and if there are more of these terrible movies that he had better be in them
007
007 - 4/25/2009, 5:29 PM
no no no dbz is so shit it'e terrible i have seen the movie i was very angry not happy
OriginalPhysco
OriginalPhysco - 4/27/2009, 2:08 PM
DBZ???
steven21
steven21 - 7/29/2009, 6:45 PM
Iheard bad things about the first movie, oh well
oh were did u get the photo of Frieza?

well If they make anymore movies I just hope they are good
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