JUSTICE LEAGUE: battle of the watch tower

I am working on another fan comic, which is entitled JUSTICE LEAGUE: battle of the watch tower, this is one of the pages. what do you think?

Fan Fic
By jadephoenix - Jan 08, 2014 02:01 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The premise:
The watchtower have been infiltrated and its up to the core members of the JLA to stop the villainous plot.

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jadephoenix
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DangerMan
DangerMan - 1/8/2014, 2:58 AM
Mind mind?
MrCBM56
MrCBM56 - 1/8/2014, 3:14 AM
I like the art but the dialogue needs work.

And I think it's too early for a JL comic for the OAU.

Try to focus on the individual heroes first.
jadephoenix
jadephoenix - 1/8/2014, 5:48 AM
oh ok, do you guys know of anywhere else i could post this comic that would be more appropriate?
jadephoenix
jadephoenix - 1/8/2014, 5:50 AM
oh and @ DangerMan, maybe batman was still shaking off her mind attacks! lol jk it was a typo, thanx for pointing it out to me
jadephoenix
jadephoenix - 1/8/2014, 7:22 AM
ok i will thanx, any other criticism?
NovaCorpsFan
NovaCorpsFan - 1/8/2014, 11:34 AM
When I see other fan comics now I'm like, "Whoa, maybe I should tone back the Shakespearean dialogue."

Then I remember I'm writing Silver Surfer and this is Justice League and the two are poles apart.

Nice work with this, but some of the others have said, dialogue is essential. I go over my scripts several times changing dialogue, tweeking the wording, yadda yadda. Keep at it.
kong
kong - 1/8/2014, 12:34 PM
Please don't associate this with OAU unless you have discussed it with the group. I'd prefer you take OAU out of the name or took it down.
DEVLIN712
DEVLIN712 - 1/8/2014, 2:37 PM
I agree with the others, it's too early for JL and Avengers right off the bat, I want to build up to them being introduced.
If you're interested in getting in involved just PM me
jadephoenix
jadephoenix - 1/8/2014, 4:53 PM
apologies, i guess i didnt understand at first how the OAU works, and how new it was, i get it now thanx!
MightyZeus
MightyZeus - 1/9/2014, 4:06 AM
I like the artwork it looks great. Bravo. Keep doing what your doing.
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