KI

KI

I am writing a script, here is my idea .....

By TheManwithaPlan - Oct 18, 2010 06:10 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

I want to write a script about a super hero movie, and I'm a fan of the old Dragon ball Z stuff, and I wanted to take that but turn it into something totally different.
Here's the Story

A young boy named Ben Tin is a less then average high school student, trying to be one of the popular kids. His best friend Alex Rivers thinks he should just stay who he is and not become another big shot.

Ben and Alex are bullied at school by a highly trained martial artist named Michishige. When Ben goes home he is greeted by Kenta, the neighbor. Kenta is an old Japanese man who looks very weak and not much life left. Kenta asks Ben to help him with chores around his house.

Ben accepts. One day, Ben is jumped by Michishige and his crew. Kenta appears out of nowhere and scares everyone away but Michishige and Ben. Kenta reveals Michishige is Kenta's martial arts student. Ben requests to train under Kenta and training begins immediately. Rivalry begins between Ben and Michishige.

Kenta reveals the art of Ki to the boys, amazingly Ben picks it up almost immediately, however Michishige attempts fail and he leaves, vowing never to return. Michishige does research on KI using old books he once stole from Kenta.

Michishige finds an easy version of KI to master, however what Michishige missed was this KI is pure evil, it consumes the user. Ben stays with Master Kenta, learning the pure KI.

Michishige begins destroying the city, calling Ben out to fight him. Kenta tries to calm Michishige down but the Evil within erupts and Michishige kills Kenta. In a blind rage, Ben attacks Michishige and the battle becomes horrifying. Both are evenly matched.

Ben tries to use the good inside Michishige but the dark Ki is in total control, Ben realizes the only way to save Michishige is too destroy him. The fireworks go off and the battle is fierce. The battle ends with Michishige using the KI against himself, leaving him open for an attack from Ben to finish it. The battle ends. Ben uses what he has learned for good.

The End.

Obviously some things need adding but that's pretty much it in a nutshell.

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Boekelaar
Boekelaar - 10/19/2010, 7:09 AM
Sounds like DBZ meets Gran Torino, I actually liked that though maybe it was because me and the main character share the same first name :D
TheManwithaPlan
TheManwithaPlan - 10/19/2010, 12:42 PM
@Superdude001

I know what you mean

My target audience are young teens and I want it too be on the border line, something dark yet something people can see. To my knowledge there isn't a movie about a young kid learning about KI that isn't dragon ball z related. I don't want to focus on martial arts, cause that is way to unoriginal but on KI not many or at all have tried that.
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