Legends of Eden- Rise of Zagan part 2

Legends of Eden- Rise of Zagan part 2

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By HeavenlyDark - Dec 05, 2010 01:12 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

For Part 1: http://comicbookmovie.com/fansites/multiverse/news/?a=25772



Legend of Eden – Rise of Zagan pt.2

Adoneal has been flying around Eden ever since the meeting and knock some heads trying to find some info on the child he’s trying to find. He decides to call his father to bring him up to speed on his and everyone’s situation.

Adoneal: One day has passed since the meeting and I’m working a trail on the child, while the others are doing what they can to prepare. Tiny went to his father for help due to him being from “the great” old generation and all, but from what I’ve heard his coming to the fight with some “old friends”. Gold Wolf on the other hand, when he told his parents they tried to lock him in his room ha ha ha ha ha. So yeah he secretly broke out of his house and is with Sonic Wave, Silver Fang, and Phantasma, but I don’t know what they’re up to. Funny as Gold Wolf’s failed entrapment I can understand his parents acting like that……..yeah I know and I’m sorry but I have to do this to save the universe, and to redeem myself for the incident with mom……yes the whole universe needs me to fight and…. (Peers down) sorry dad I gotta go I found the child. (Hangs up)

Adoneal flies down and meets a little girl coming out of a halfway house. She’s about twelve, blonde and is a little scared of the angelic being coming to meet her.

Adoneal: Hi

Little Girl: Hi (Awkward silence as she stares at him)

Adoneal: What’s your name?

Little Girl: (after a second or two) my names Miranda. What’s yours?

Adoneal: My names Adoneal.

Miranda: Adoneal?

Adoneal: Its and old name for archangel kid. Anyway the reason I’ve come because you have a special power and I need your help.

Miranda: I don’t have any powers (trying to lie)

Adoneal: Bull! (His form changed to anger that looks like a fallen angel) I’ve seen you us them you use it to con people out of money and I have no time for games, now you’re coming with me.

He grabs by the arm but when her hands and eyes start to glow Adoneal let’s go, knowing one wrong move and things would be worse than ever. Miranda looks at a car and it starts to glow and she looks at the halfway house and it also glows, and after a flash of bright light the halfway house is on wheels and has an engine roar. Miranda runs inside and tries to run Adoneal over with the halfway house car.

Adoneal: Crap, crap, crap, crap, CRAP! (Breathing hard) gotta call someone (looking in his cell while flying) urrrgggghhhh come on don’t I know anyone. Ummm he’ll have to do. (Calls number

Markus: Hello?

Adoneal: (in a hurry) Hey Markus how are you, well I’m fine but I need your help.

Markus: okay but---

Adoneal: (still in a hurry) thanks, there’s a little girl driving a halfway house trying to kill me I need Yin, no Yang, No both, either whatever get here! (Hangs up)

Markus looks outside the hotel he was staying in and sees the halfway house. He runs down a street to intercept the thing and sees it coming down the street.

Markus: Henshin (the command he yells separates him into Yin and Yang)

Yin: That’s weird

Yang: What the car building or that we’re standing in its way?

Yin: Both

Yang: Good, do you have a plan?

Yin: No, do you

Yang: Yes

Yin: then why ask?

Yang: shut up and pop the tires.

Yin: fine…..A-hole (Yang looks back ready to say something)

Adoneal: HELP!!! (They both snap back to the task at hand)

Yin and Yang run at the halfway house slashing the tires with their swords. As the tires pop the house starts sliding and destroying the road and everything on it. Yin and Yang grabbed the back and try their best to slow the building down, while Adoneal starts feeing courageous and his form changes to where he is a metallic and can be unmovable and stops the building by grabbing the front of it.

Adoneal: Thanks guys you couldn’t stop building any faster.

Yang: You didn’t tell us where you were you idiot! We were lucky to find you!

Yin: True

Adoneal: But when it was tearing up the road.

Yin: We’re not the that strong I can stop a tank and Yang here can stop a small, slow train…..Sorry

Yang: I can do more than that and stop saying you’re sorry shesh we stopped the
thing didn’t we.

Yin: okay fine but how did this all happen again?

Adoneal: Oh yeah, there’s a little girl in there who’s…..well driving the building

Yang: (goes inside the building and comes out) Got her tied her up with some spare rope I got, but you’re telling me that girl did all this.

Miranda: I can do way more than this let my hands go and I’ll show you. (Tries to spit on him)

Yang: Shut up already if Adoneal came after you, then you’re important (to Adoneal) so why is she important.

Adoneal: Let’s get her to Psychonaut first then I’ll explain everything there.

As these three are going to Psychonaut for the reason of Miranda’s importance Gold Wolf, Silver Fang, Phantasma, and Sonic Wave are facing another situation.

Phantasma: Are you sure you wanted to leave without letting them know you’re gone?

Gold Wolf: Yeah once they see I’m gone they’ll know besides you guys need me right now.

Silver Fang: No we don’t.

Gold Wolf: Shut up you heartless blood sucker.

Silver Fang: Heel boy before I make you play dead.

Gold Wolf: Argh! I hate dog puns, but you know what I learned? Vampires SUCK!

Silver Fang: Oh real original.

Gold Wolf: Well you wh----

Sonic Wave: Both of you shut up (While hitting them both with a sonic shot)

Phantasma: Okay everyone calm down now where are we going?

Sonic Wave: We’re going the central bridge way.

Gold Wolf: Why?

Sonic Wave: Because one I need to get some supplies some homeless friends of mine are holding for me and two because it’s one of the most spiritual places in Eden.

Phantasma: Whoa! Why haven’t I heard of this before and how do you know this? Because I work with ghosts and I can even become one. (Drawing back her anger) So how do you know this?

Sonic Wave: Well it’s a secret place for only the 100% dead and it’s a place that’s only known to the unknown living.

Phantasma and Gold Wolf: Unknown living?

Sonic Wave: People who are ignored in society, and never listened to and because I protect people like that I know of it.

Phantasma: Wow.

Gold Wolf: Cool

Silver Fang: Boring are we there yet cause I hate smelling a wet dog, while listening about fairy tales. (Rolls his eyes) I don’t even know why I’m here.

Gold Wolf: You’re here because we all have to fight and I want to stop being your enemy by fighting this evil.

Silver Fang: I want to be your enemy so shut the H---

Sonic Wave: We’re here.

They begin to fly down under the bridge into a mysterious mist with Sonic Wave leading the way.

Silver Fang: Why are we sittin in Mist?

Phantasma: Yeah is this normal because I can sense a lot of spiritual activity but I can’t see anything.

Sonic Wave: No, it’s not normal but it’s nothing I can’t clear (shoots a sonic blast)

Gold Wolf: Dear God!

The mist clears only to show the homeless that once lived there are now ripped apart and their blood and their blood and organs cover the bottom of the bridge. As they all look at this they see some poor victims’ intestates are hanging across the bottom of the bridge spelling out the words “Welcome home”. The sight is so horrible Gold Wolf barfs.

Sonic Wave: NO……..How….who…..no, no, no, no, please God no. (Falls to his knees)

Phantasma: Who could have done this?

Gold Wolf: (getting up from hurling) I don’t know…..God I don’t know.

Silver Fang: Isn’t it obvious?

Gold Wolf: No I can’t be him we still have four days

Silver Fang: Until he attacks us.

Sonic Wave: He’s right why couldn’t I see that.

Woman’s voice: Help me.

Sonic Wave: (Running to her) you’re alive! Are you okay?

Woman: Kill me, please kill me

Sonic Wave: What! No! You’ll live I’m here to help, I can save you.

Woman: (grabbing his collar) Give me death!

At that moment Sonic Wave looks down and sees the woman’s stomach is swollen, moving, and something was trying to get out. Then Silver Fangs walks next to Sonic Wave and puts his hand on his shoulder and nods his head, so Sonic Wave walks away with tears in his eyes as he hears Silver fang cuts the woman’s head off and sucking her blood (he could help himself). In all his life he had never had such lost.

Phantasma: I’m sorry but don’t blame yourself that’s not what they would want.

Sonic Wave: (looking down in shame) Are you sure?

Phantasma: Ask them (Summons the entire ghost population in the area)

Sonic Wave: I’m sorry so, so sorry….. I failed you all.

Ghost # 1: You never failed us you protected us for years now.

Ghost # 2: You must make sure this never happens ever again, all of you must make sure. Promise us.

Sonic Wave: We will. (Dries his tears)

Phantasma: Are you guys ready then?

All ghosts: Yes we are.

Phantasma holds her hands up and her hands and eyes start glows a ghostly green. Then beams shot out of her hands and it hits all the ghosts’ hearts as the bright light shines over head and they begin to raise up into it all of them waving goodbye to their good friend as Sonic Wave waves goodbye back. The light fades away and the ghosts are gone and at peace now but there is a more pressing matter to attend to.

Phantasma: Silver fang go to Red Lightning he’s with his brother Energy Spike who is analyzing Devil Blade. Bring Devil Blade back so we could question why he attacked here and where will they attack next.

Silver Fang: Why should I we couldn’t even stop something this ruthless, besides I don’t care about any of this I could just join him and be done and safe give me one reason I should do anything for any of you.

Phantasma: Because (Raises her hand as it glows ghostly green and a spirit appears) I know you fiancé and if you don’t help us fight Zagan you will watch her soul be tortured but if you help us you’ll be able to talk to her and save her save her soul.

Silver Fang: ……………Fine (flies off)

End of Part 2

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legionbecks
legionbecks - 12/6/2010, 12:50 AM
first
legionbecks
legionbecks - 12/6/2010, 12:51 AM
wow i have done a fister for a long time, so what is this again?!
HeavenlyDark
HeavenlyDark - 12/6/2010, 10:33 AM
This is a story about characters i made myself....pretty much.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 12/6/2010, 1:07 PM
legionbecks @ U a$$ lol! ; P


DARK @ Excellent! ; )
legionbecks
legionbecks - 12/7/2010, 7:37 PM
oops, i havent done*
and leee my man thanks mate, how u being, i havent being active on this site but am a constant visitor of this site ;p cheers.
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