I haven't seen Thor:TDW, i don't know if it is good, but from the clips of Thor and Loki in a star wars ship and of Thor in the subway i have really low expectations. Anyway, I would like to show what i would have liked for the Thor sequel, i dont think it is better than TDW, it is just an alternative, awesome story. Sorry for my bad english.
Part 1:
The story starts 500 years ago, Thor is a young God, he could even be played by Liam Hemsorth, he has the classic look from the comics, long hair, helmet, no beard. Thor arrives at Nidavellir, realm of the dwarves, whre Ulik is fighting the dwarves. Ulik is trying to steal Twilight,the sword of doom, the most powerful there is, which the dwarves have recently created. Thor fights and defeats Ulik, who, defeated, whispers "The lord Surtur will return, he will be awaken and he shall rule the 9 realms once again" or something like that, in a prophetic tone. Thor does not understand, he doesnt care, he laughs arrogantly, and talks arrogantly to the dwarves that want to thank him. The king of the dwarves thanks him personally and tells Thor about how responsible he should be with Mjolnir, the hammer that the dwarves built for Odin so long ago. Thor leaves to Asgard, and we finally see the THOR 2 logo on the screen.
Part 2:
We are now in the present day. We see Loki being imprisoned, he is sentenced to the isle of silence, the same one that we saw on Avengers:EMH.
Loki is alone in the isle and suddenly, the Enchantress and the Executioner appear out of nowhere, they are both very distressed.The Enchantress makes Loki able to talk by a spell, and they talk about what to do now. It is revealed how they secretly helped Loki achieve his plans. The relations between the characters are also showed, the Enchantress is a lover and follower of Loki, the Executioner is in love with the Enchantress, etc. They have little time and they just want to part from eachother and say goodby. The the Enchantress and the Executioner transport out of the isle and go back to their home (a dark place in Asgard, where it is raining) and Loki stays there alone.
Part 3:
We see Thor reuniting with Jane in Midgard. This is a more matured Thor than the one we saw at the start, he has his awesome beard and no helmet. This will probably not feel right but i think Thor should decide to live as a mortal in earth, i will later explain more why he does this, but he says to Jane that he needs to be with her and he wants simplicity, he is tired of fighting and just wants to rest. Part 3 would be composed of many scenes which alternate with part 4. Summarized, it should show the development of Thor and Jane's relationship living together over the course of many months and Thor living as Donald Blake. A couple of scenes that i imagine would include Thor having a bad dream, showing the most important parts of Thor and Avengers (Loki stabbing him, etc), and waking up with a scream. Then Jane consoles him, etc. Another scene that would be very fun to watch would be Thor (still as a mortal) in a fight with the Wrecking Crew. The Wrecking Crew should be a regular gang who are stealing someone, they dont have powers, but they have more or less their traditional looks and weapons(we will probably never see them with their true comicbook powers anyway). Thor is defending somebody who is being robbed, showing that he is still a hero (and adding action to this part of the movie which is kind of the most boring part.
Part 4:
As i said, this part would happen simultaniously with part 3. I think it should be about Amora, very lost with the imprisonment of Loki. She has lost her guide and her lover, and she does not know what to do. Desperate she seeks help in books and learns about Surtur. He appears to be the only one capable of defeating Odin and Asgard in order to save Loki, "the true heir to the throne and only possible ruler of the 9 realms". Amora finally awakens Surtur, but she is quickly possesed by him, she has a new master. Over the course of this part Surtur awakens fully and builds up his plans and his army of fire demons. Amora has cast a spell that stopped any possible communications between Asgard and Midgard. She also manages to steal the sword Twilight from the dwarves (what his previous follower, Ulik never accomplished). The rumor of the awakening of Surtur spreads through the 9 realms except for midgard. The warriors 3 and Sif and Balder don't want to tell Thor and disturb him, so they decide to investigate by themselves.
Part 5:
The Asgardian warriors arrive too late at the realm of Surtur. The demons defeat them easiily and posses them and Surtur orders Amora to lead the invasion of Asgard. The invasion starts. The Enchantress and the Executioner lead the attack. Thousands of demons start appearing at the Bifrost. There is some awesome Heimdall action as he tries to fight off but he is soon defeated and possesed. To summarize, they conquer Asgard rather easily, capture Odin (who is now very weak, about to enter the Odin sleep) and his wife, and probably the most dramatic scene happens. Amora takes Odin to a public plaze, and she executes him. This contrasts with Thor, who is just living happily with Jane, and Loki, lonely in the isle of silence. The old generation ends and a new one starts, Thor is the heir to the throne. The warriors 3, Sif, Balder, Heimdall and Valkerye are all looking, but they are possesed by the demons, and they all have anger and wrath on their faces. The Executioner is not there. Thor's mother looks desperate as her thousand-year-old husbund dies with his kingdom, and neither of their sons is there. The Enchantress occupies the throne of Asgard, she has forgotten Loki. Surtur rests in his throne at his realm.
Part 6:
Thor is in earth with Jane. They are having a walk somewhere,when suddenly Thor sees a figure in the distance, as they get nearer, he finally sees it well. Its the Executioner, with his axe in his hand. Thor prepares to fight and tells Jane to run. But the executioner just drops the axe, and says he wants to talk. Thor is very confused. The Executioner explains everything, he tells Thor that he never wanted this, he loves Amora but now she is possesed by Surtur, she has gone crazy and he needs to help her. The Executioner was never possesed, he just followed Amora, he is her protector, and now he knows that this is not Amora. Thor looks at him incredibly shocked as he tells the story, Thor had a relationship with Amora a very long time ago. His eyes are full of pain as he hears about the invasion of Asgard. The executioner finally gets to the part of the execution of Odin and Thor just loses it and falls on his knees. Jane hugs him. He has abandoned his father, he forgot him, and he wasnt there when his father needed him most. His relationship with Odin is extremely strong as they lived together fot hundreds of years. Thor, in his knees (Jane hugging him), lifts his right arm and calls Mjolnir, which he keeps safe in the apartment he shares with Jane. Mjolnir comes fast and Thor grabs it with strength. The Executioner opens a portal to Asgard and Thor leaves, full of rage.
Part 7:
In Asgard, asgardian warriors and civilians are now prisoners, they have lost hope, Surtur’s demons are ravaging their homes. One particular demon is about to attack an asgardian family but suddenly, we see Thor’s hummer hit him in the face. Thor grabs his hammer back and screams “For Asgard!”, and then the awesome battle starts and Thor kicks a*s. He finally finds the Enchantress and a fight begins between the two. In the end, more and more demons appear until Thor is just not able to defeat them. The executioner appears and saves him and helps him escape through the Bifrost (against Thor’s will). The enchantress is enraged with this treason. And as Thor disappears through the Bifrost, he sees the figure of the executioner being killed by the Enchantress.
Part 8:
Thor appears in another realm, but he is just not sure which one. He then finds dwarves and learns that he is in Nidavellir. He finds the dwarve king and they offer him a place to stay and hide. There he spends a couple of days and the dwarves teach him what it really means to wield Mjolnir and to be a king. In the first movie, he says that “he still had a lot to learn abot becoming a king” and now he learns it. He plans his strategy and prepares, and after 2-3 days, he is ready to take the battle to Surtur, in Muspelheim.
Part 9:
Thor arrives at Muspelheim. This part is just the long, final battle with Surtur. Thor arrives, says “Surtur, i shall have word with thee”, they talk for a while, Thor says “For Odin” and then its on. At the end Thor obviously defeats Surtur, the demons of Asgard leave and return to their master, the possesed asgardian warriors come back to normality and Thor retrives the Twilight sword to the dwarves.
Part 10:
It is the end of the movie, Thor takes Jane to Asgard, there is a funeral for Odin to which Loki and the dwarves, and cratures of the 9 realms (maybe including midgard) attend, and Thor is crowned king of Asgard. Thor asks Jane to stay living with him in Asgard as the new queen. Loki goes back to his cell and the Enchantress is emprisoned too.
After Credits scene:
Somebody informs Thor that the Infinity Gauntlet is missing, or/and somebody frees Loki.
Elements to be used in Thor 3:
Ragnarok, Thor as king, Thor’s prophetic fight with the Serpent, death and resurrection as ultimate Thor. Loki should also be a very important part of this movie.
Final Notes:
What i like of this story, and what would be continued in my Thor 3 is a real evolution of Thor. We see him in the past, the present and the future, and we see him growing and learning. Again, I dont say this movie would be better than Thor:TDW, i just imagined it and think it would have been awesome. I think sooner or later (hopefully after Phase 3), Marvel will reboot the MCU with spiderman, the FF, the xmen, the real mandarin, the real frost giants, Thor’s helmet, Hank Pym and HIS creation of Ultron and with a little more serious tone. I dot say origin stories again, they shoul start in a world where superheroes already exist and maybe show their origins in flashbacks. If this is the case, i would love to see my Thor 2 story.