RECAP: Peter gains his powers, starts to fight crime, but one night coming home from a high school party, Sees his Uncle Ben dead, as he realizes, that he was irresponsible, and he caused his Uncle's death and to this day he still makes theories on how it could have been avoided (NOTE: I took away the wrestling part of the Spider-Man origin because, well I just didn't like it, this is my vision for a Spider-Man story.)
-"GET OUT!! GET OUT NOW I SAID DAMNIT!!! YOUR WORK HABITS SUCK, YOU DON'T COME FOR 2 DAYS!! DO YOU TAKE ANY OF THIS SERIOUSLY PARKER?! DO YOU?!" The manager at Mcdonalds said. "Um, well you see I was um--- listen I'm really sorry if you just--" Peter replied. "I DO NOT WANT TO HEAR A GODDAMN THING FROM YOU, YOU SLEAZY TEENAGER!"
-SPIDER-MAN: TROUBLED SLINGER
-(PETER THINKING TO HIMSELF) "MAN! How am I going to help Aunt May with all the bills she's trying to pay."
-PETER LOOKS AT HIS WATCH IT SHOWS THAT IT'S 8:45AM
-"CRAP, I'M LATE, OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!" Peter said.
-"Maybe Peter Parker can't get there on time, but Spider-Man can!" Peter said to himself.
-QUICK SHOTS OF PETER CHANGING INTO SPIDER-MAN INTO AN ALLEY.
-"Woowee!!!!!! Spidey yelled out loud as he swung through the New York buildings.
-PHOTOGRAPHY QUICK SHOTS OF THE DAILY BUGLE, EMPIRE STATE UNIVERSITY, JOE'S PIZZERIA AND DR. CONNORS LAB.
-BRRRRRRIIIINNNNGGGGG!!! A bell rang.
-"Oh great a bank robbery? Now, Jeez louise, what kind of a world do we live in?"
Peter thought to himself.
-Spider-Man swings through the air and does a sommersault and freefalls down to kick a robber in the face.
-OOOOOOOOO! One Point for Spidey here you suckeroony!
-Spider-Man's spidey sense tingles and kicks the other robber's gun away.
-"You going to feel alot Spidey, a whole lot of me inside you." the robber said,
Spidey replies saying, "That's what she said?" The robber says "OH SHUT UP ALREADY!"
-Alright, Alright, that's what he said. Spidey says.
-Then Spider-Man makes a quick move then punches him in the face.
-"SCHOOLED HOME BOY!" Spider-Man yells.
-Quick shots of Spider-Man swinging away and the thugs are knocked out.
-BRRRRRRIIIINGGGG!!! Another bell rang, this time the school bell.
-"Oh Great, block one is over, better luck next time Parker" Peter thought to himself
-Peter turns behind and sees Harry Osborn.
-"Oh Hey Parker, how you holding up with your Uncle's death?" Harry said.
-"Um doing okay I guess, see you in block six Harry" Peter replied
-Quick Shots of Peter and Harry walking away from each other.
-Peter then quickly becomes alone in the halls.
Part 1 complete