The Amazing Spider-Man 2012 Part 8

The Amazing Spider-Man 2012 Part 8

With Great Power...

By MRLONGCAPE - Aug 02, 2011 12:08 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

23. "ANYONE WANNA CHALLENGE ME! CRUSHER HOGAN! ANYONE!" "I'll take that challenge dickhead!" a costumed teen swings and sommersaults to the ground, "Masked person who are you! Reveal yourself!" "I am The Amazing Spider-Man!" the crowd then laughs at him. He then looks at Crusher Hogan and sprints toward him and before you know it he is hanging upside down. "What the hell! Put me down! Put me down!"
"Guess I ain't the pussy anymore." He then throws Crusher Hogan to the ground face forward. "It's done! It's done Crusher Hogan is down! Congrats young sir! You have just one 3000$ dollars!"

24."Where is Peter? I said I'd pick him up here at 9!" Uncle Ben then sees a robbery and he tries to stop it by yelling "Hey! you there, stop you hooligan!" the robber then comes close to him and takes out his gun, Uncle Ben is then seen running, he then dials 911 "Hello 911 I'm being chased by a robber please help!" in the background we hear a bang.

25. "Uncle Ben? Uncle Ben where are you?" Peter then sees at his feet his own Uncle lying on the ground bleeding heavily, "Peter, you must remember what I said, With Great Power, there must also come "breathing" great responsibility." Peter then looking for any sign of breath yet there wasn't any sign. "HELP! HELP! ANYONE HERE! PLEASE HELP!" fades to black.

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Stumblin
Stumblin - 8/2/2011, 1:54 PM
Just because you're 11, I have to automatically like what you produce? I'm not trying to pick on you, but you need to work on your dialogue, try to think how your parents talk not how you and your friends talk.
95
95 - 8/2/2011, 6:27 PM
I don't blame you for having bad dialogue, Sophomore Year I finally got it down. On a site like this, you need to have a compelling story, and one worthy to read. Something that grabs the reader, a story that has a reason to be told. Not to mention, a story that is completely different from what we've already seen on film [Another wrestling scene? Really?]. I'd forgive your dialogue if the story was extraordinary, but it's not.

And speaking of your age, aren't you the one who posted that article about the Spider-Man porno? *shakes my head* LMFAO!
Joker11
Joker11 - 8/2/2011, 10:56 PM
Bro you cant keep using the "Im only 11" excuse. Figure out your dialogue and figure out how to do pics. Ask your dad or something.
Joker11
Joker11 - 8/3/2011, 3:40 PM
Yeah you could do that to. Its so simple once you figure it out. I felt like a retard for not doing it rite for sooo long!:)
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