UPDATED Justice league poster

UPDATED Justice league poster

JLA poster I'm currently working on...

By Cloudfighter - Apr 13, 2013 04:04 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Thank you for the input and this is what iv decided to do

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kong
kong - 4/13/2013, 5:23 AM
Well the font is not right at all, and did you use toys for the characters?
Abary
Abary - 4/13/2013, 5:26 AM
It's cool, but I would change the lighting, the title, and make them look less like Action Figures.
Cloudfighter
Cloudfighter - 4/13/2013, 5:53 AM
there only action figures as im still making the jla members, they are there to show were they would go
Abary
Abary - 4/13/2013, 7:44 AM
I agree that there should be more explosions, or SOMETHING to show that this is an epic action movie.

Plus, does the cartoon guy in the background go OVER Batman's cape?
Jolt17
Jolt17 - 4/13/2013, 8:31 AM
Good concept, but the execution is still poor. I'm not entirely blaming you, though, since I know such a concept is not an easy thing to be finely crafted. Well, first off, the font. I hate how people frequently use the Justice League animated series title card for their movie posters, perhaps thinking that it will be used in the real movie, when it's actually just a lazy, and uninspiring move. Of course, the best solution for this is to be creative and modify a certain type of font yourself, but for your poster, I recommend you to remove the title, and just put a "Coming Soon," or something else, instead - the concept fits better for a teaser poster, than a full-fledged theatrical poster.

Secondly, the globe. Would you expect for a planet that is bombarded with large explosions all around it to stay so vibrant, calm-looking, and for Earth's case, still so blue and green? Yep, not. And it does have an effect on the scale, which, like SuperDude001 said above, doesn't make it seem like a massive superhero sci-fi movie. You can add a little bit of flares here and there (it wouldn't hurt, really), adjust the colors, et cetera.

And it also affects to the lighting, as a whole. logically speaking, the interior of the Watchtower will also be showered with the blazes from the explosions, thus it won't stay so "clean." My suggestion is to dim the lights on the interior (and the heroes), and whip up some yellow/orange shadings onto them. That way, the whole layout of the poster must blend together, and also will create a more dramatic effect, overall. Also, are you putting the action figures there just as placeholders? If not, then the lighting on them should also be made more subtle.

Those are the major flaws, I think. A couple of other details here and there, but those three are the most prominent ones that you have to fix beforehand. Once again, it's a good concept, but for every good atmospherical poster concept, there also comes a tricky execution. It's a great thing to see someone coming up with such an idea, though, so keep up the good work.
Cloudfighter
Cloudfighter - 4/13/2013, 8:47 AM
i went with the dark knight/man of steel font
OrgasmicPotatoe
OrgasmicPotatoe - 4/13/2013, 8:49 AM
It's great for what it is, an unfinished project.

Here's some idea, I'd make the planet darker, shadier. Explosions alone don't make it look THAT bad, is the earth looks all burned up, I think the idea would be better represented.

Also, the logo of the latest version. The font in the original is good.
whoa123
whoa123 - 4/13/2013, 10:20 AM
Very nice man! Brainiac can use a little ore editing though.
95
95 - 4/13/2013, 1:27 PM
Well the others have said what needed to be said, so all I'll say is: nice job.
Abary
Abary - 4/13/2013, 2:31 PM
I actually liked the original concept more, but nice work on the updated version.
I still think the title font can be better though, but it is definitely an improvement.
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