Part 2 is really all about character development. It’s the part of the story where most people just skim over to get to the real meat of the story, so instead of rewriting the complete thing I’m just going to hit the highlights and key moments. Dialogue is iffy at best but sums up what is supposed to be said.
Recap from part 1:
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Magneto is the ruler of the Savage Land and leader of the Brotherhood of Mutants and while recuperating from his loss against the X-men his chief-errand-boy Azazel appears to let him know that there is an inbound spacecraft. Magneto along with his top officers Emma Frost, Juggernaut and Azazel meet the craft in the heart of the Savage Land. Upon noticing that it wasn’t stopping Juggernaut uses his supreme strength to stop it in its tracts. Magneto opens the craft to only discover an infant boy laying inside with an “S” pendant necklace around his head.
Magneto removes the baby which triggers a message from the baby father stating “Greetings my name is Jar-El and what I am about to tell you is of grave importance. The infant you are holding is my son, Kal-El. He posses many great abilities and will be useful in the saving of your planet from its many hardships to come. I selected you; Martha and Jonathon Kent, to look after my boy for you seem to be great people. I have studied you and your plant for many years and it seems you are fit for such a great duty. Please take great care of him. And when he is of age show him the craft for only he can play the rest of the message and unlock the true meaning behind his life.” Intrigued Magneto takes the boy in as his own.
Now part 2:
Five years later:
Two boys about five years old are running through the thick of the forest in the Savage Land. One boy has pure white hair and the other black and is wearing the “S” pendent necklace. They bicker back and forth about who’s faster. We switch to a bird’s eye view to see the two heading for a large cannon. Quick Silver speeds and jumps it shouting back “I bet you couldn’t do that.” Kal-El slows to a stop looks down the cannon and backs up a bit but not far enough. And runs flat out towards the cliff, He leaps but falls short. Screaming his lungs out he falls face first.
We switch to a close up of Quick Silvers face, clearly up set and worried he shouts “KAL-EL!” Then off panel Kal-El says “what?” QS Turns around and sees his brother hovering above the ground. “Ha I think I won this time brother” Kal-El says to QS as he takes off leaving him behind.
Ten Years Later: Kal-El is much older now (about 15) and instead of wearing the necklace he now wears a shirt with the “S” on it.
Magneto is in full suit leading a band of mutants through the front doors of the main complex of the Savage Land. It’s a group of about five or six people, including Frost, Juggernaut, Azazel, a late teenaged Scarlet Witch and Quick Silver trailing in the distant back. They round the corner and are heading to the ship. Standing in front of the ship is Kal-El, where unlike the rest isn’t suited up ready for a mission.
“Go back inside Kal-El, you are not to join us on this mission,” Magneto shouts as they walk up.
“But I am Father! If Pietro is ready so am I!” Kal-El retorts.
“Yes he is ready, he has faced the trials and exceeded with ease,” Magneto replies. QS smiles.
“I am fast then he is and I CAN FLY! I would pass the trails if you would just let me try!”
“None sense, you are never to leave this Island. If you were to fall in battle, I…I don’t know what I would do.” Magneto replies. Both QS and Scarlet Witch exchange glances and are pissed.
“But I am ready!”
“Fine if you truly believe you are,” Magneto turns to face Juggernaut
“Cain, if you were to be so kind and teach my son a lesson.” Cain grins likes its Christmas.
“With pleasure,” Cain says stepping forward. Quick Silver chuckles Kal-El’s eyes widen with fear.
Kal-El takes off in flight reaches a hundred(ish) feet and dives down with his right fist aimed right at Juggernaut. Kal-El collides with Juggernaut with a sonic boom but Juggernaut doesn’t even flinch, he grabs the boy by the shirt and throws him across the clearing into a tree.
“Enough, my point has been made,” Magneto says. Juggernaut turns away just as Kal-El crashes through the trees and runs into him knocking Juggernaut off balance. Furious Juggernaut turns around with a right hook which Kal-El dodges lands one of his own onto Juggernaut’s helmet, cracking it in the process. Kal-El follows through with a left hook shattering his helmet.
Kal-El is getting madder and madder with each punch he throws. His eyes start glowing red. Juggernaut now in a rage throws a punch hitting Kal-El in chest sending him back a few feet. Not giving up Kal-El charges in again this time Juggernaut hits him with an uppercut sending Kal-El into the air.
Out of breath and shaken Kal-El goes in for one more round. He flies in hitting Juggernaut hard and then follows through with multiple sonic-speed punches the last one being an uppercut now sending Juggernaut into the air.
The crowd that has now formed around the two fighting gasp. Kal-El grits his teeth and bright red lasers shoot from his eyes nailing Juggernaut mid air sending him crashing into the airplane. The crowd erupts in cheers and screams for Kal-El.
Magneto walks over to Kal-El and pats him on the back. “Well done, and I can’t help but notice you’ve discovered a new power.”
Grinning “Yeah I had no idea I could do that, until it just happened. Now I am ready for your mission.”
“Ha you are young and not wise my child. Why would I show the enemy by strongest weapon now when you’re merely a boy and not wait till your older, stronger.”
“That’s not fair! I just defeated your strongest man in a matter of minutes”
“Yes and I’m very proud of you but out in the real world, humans have teams of men just as strong as Cain. Trust me my child someday this army I’m raising will be yours. To lead into battle and conquer the world.. You are the born leader of all Mutants. Heath my warning child and not rush off and throw away all my years of planning.” Kal-El nods and sleeks off to be surrounded by the cheering crowd.
Ends with a closer up on Quick Silver and Scarlet Witch off to the side, angry as hell and plotting against their father and brother.
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Part III: Birthright