Anthony Stark Presents: SPIDER-MAN: LEGENDS BORN; Chapter 1

Anthony Stark Presents: SPIDER-MAN: LEGENDS BORN; Chapter 1

My new series, TMNT: Origins, has been getting a lot of great feedback, and so I decided to start another series, based on our wall-crawling menace, known as Spider-Man. Hit the Jump to take a look at Chapter 1.

By r3negade - Mar 29, 2014 01:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Here is the first chapter in my latest comic series, Spider-Man: Legends Born! Be sure to read, and leave a comment below on your thoughts of the series!



Spider-Man: Legends Born; Chapter 1 by anthonyEstark


Be sure to check out my other series, TMNT Origins!
Chapter 1: and Chapter 2!
About The Author:
r3negade
Member Since 2/5/2013
I'm a total nerd. While I haven't seen all comic book films, I still know and love the characters that we see on screen today!

Favorite Actor: Liam Neeson
Favorite Superheroes: Captain America, Spider-Man, Batman, Flash, etc...
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kong
kong - 3/29/2014, 2:10 PM
....no.....
Abary
Abary - 3/29/2014, 2:12 PM
Not bad. Could use a little work. Main thing I'd suggest is chopping it up into paragraphs (basic rule of starting a new paragraph with each quote and when topic shifts). But otherwise it's not bad.
Abary
Abary - 3/29/2014, 2:32 PM
See you took my advice lol ;)
TheHero
TheHero - 3/29/2014, 2:57 PM
Hmmm......I liked it.
The only part I didn't like was the removal of the Wrestling Scene. I felt that didn't make the message of great power comes great responblity clear.
But otherwise, good job.
DEVLIN712
DEVLIN712 - 3/29/2014, 3:04 PM
I liked it, really different from the normal Spidey, but I liked it nonetheless
r3negade
r3negade - 3/29/2014, 3:07 PM
@All, thanks for the support and suggestions, @Hero2719 I was trying to do a unique story, unlike one we've ever seen, and the wrestling scene would've made it too much like the first film, or the new one.
Mrcool210
Mrcool210 - 3/29/2014, 11:54 PM
@Hero2719 i didn't have the wrestling in mine either, but you can see what i did do to change it, oh and great story stark
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