Batman: Year One Part 1 of 5

Batman: Year One Part 1 of 5

A script i created a long time ago, let me know if you want to see more.

Fan Fic
By Khan - Aug 04, 2012 04:08 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Here is Part 1 of 5, Enjoy and Comment Below!

Batman: Year One Part 1

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TruthJusticeSuperman
TruthJusticeSuperman - 8/4/2012, 6:53 PM
Like some of the ideas the dialogue is a bit cheesy at times and some lines are obviously taken from Batman Begins, the way or approach you might want to have is just start with Bruce Wayne talking in his head and going around in the ghettos of Gotham investigating learning to become the detective we know batman can be. Have him in multiple disguises and him infiltrating the mob of Falcone. Then him getting the resources from Fox and learning to use them. I like the idea of nightmares in this part but I need to see Bruce Wayne be more active see him more active continuously training doing push ups hitting a punching bag even. Doing something to get his fear and frustration out, overall its pretty good you just need to revise it again check on the dialogue and things of that nature.
SAT
SAT - 8/4/2012, 6:57 PM
This script...I like it...ANOTHER!
...That made NO sense...
Oh well keep writing please!
PJ
PJ - 8/6/2012, 6:53 PM
Pretty good story but, lines borrowed from BB and some scenes are a bit cheesy demeans it a bit. I'd continue writing though.
PJ
PJ - 8/6/2012, 6:53 PM
Overall, its good.
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