DBA's Punisher: Go With God FanScript

DBA's Punisher: Go With God FanScript

When The Punisher finds the killer of an old friend of his from back in Vietnam, he must decide whether to go with guns or go with god.

By deadpoolbeatsall - Nov 09, 2012 04:11 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Source: deadpoolbeatsall

WARNING: NOT FOR KIDS

I could already see people giving me shit about this. I am not trying to shove a religion down anyone's throats (If you read the script you see something else gets shoved down someone's throat) I am an Atheist, the religious undertone isn't meant for anyone to take away with them.

Punisher_ Go With God

Check out my other script
Punisher: Desperation

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95 - 11/9/2012, 10:09 PM
Beside a few words misspelled (threw — instead of through, etc.) • you got action and dialogue down (I like Frank's last couple lines). Every character has a voice and the beats of action are very Frank Castle–like (eye gouging and burning). And you had a through-line (although it's only four pages – a lot of fan fiction don't adhere to that character development technique). Pretty neat that you included his Vietnam career in there, too. I like your work. Planning on a feature length screenplay? Would be interested in reading it — you seem to have respect for the character.
BobGarlen
BobGarlen - 11/10/2012, 8:24 AM
this is pretty good, Reminds me of a short story i wrote about Frank ages ago. It's called One Way To Live, we touch on a couple themes: http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/robertgarlenoncmb/news/?a=37475 i think you'd like it
MrJusticeAvenger123
MrJusticeAvenger123 - 11/10/2012, 12:51 PM
I like it, you have a lot of respect for this character and this script turned out great. And I love the action and violence.overall 9/10
comicNERD1031
comicNERD1031 - 11/12/2012, 5:37 PM
Frank is probably my all-time favorite character and i think you did a good job of portraying him
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