First off, sorry I'm late; I've have limited internet time since my last article, but I did take notice to what you've guys said, so I did some extra work on my Emma Frost piece. Nothing major, but I like the improvements, and thank you guys for pointing the problems out to help me improve.
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Edited(done extra work on the size of the head, the shape of the breast, the thickness of the neck, and I thinned her up a bit):