Fictonal Ant Man Movie Script Part 2

So I`m back and kind of dissapointed at the lack of comments on Part I. But nevertheless here I give you Part II and the first action scene that Pym takes part in. Hope you like it! NOTE: if you haven`t read part one: http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/avengers72/news/?a=72267

The scene cuts to a SHIELD base somewhere where agents are monitoring computers
Agent: sir!
Agent Quatermain walks over
Quatermain: what?
Agents: there`s been a radiation spike in downtown New York
Quatermain turns to Maria Hill
Quatermain: Hill?
Hill: send a squad I want those particles taken back!
The scene cuts quickly to Pym riding on his motorcycle through NY then to the SHIELD agents traveling through a dysfunctional subway
Quatermain is leading them
He holds up his hand signaling them to stop
They all look forward into the darkness
Suddenly a bright light appears and a drill like vehicle moves forward
The SHIELD agents run and fire at them
The scene cuts to hank in a traffic jam
Suddenly the drill breaks through the ground and blasts hank off his bike
SHIELD and AIM engage in battle
Henry witnesses the battle from behind a car
Finally SHIELD gets close enough for one of the agents to retrieve the particles
But as he runs back one of the AIM soldiers shoot him in the back
He collapses and rolls over next to Pym.
The agent holds out the particles
Agent: take it. Take it away from here. Run!
Pym takes the particles and the agent dies
The AIM agents see him and start going his way and shooting at him
Pym runs to his bike and drives away only to be saved by the SHIELD agents stalling AIM
The AIM leader (same one in the beginning) watches as Pym runs out of his view.
He turns to another soldier
AIM leader: call supreme… tell him we`ve failed
The scene cuts to the SHIELD agents still in battle
Agent (to Quatermain): sir incoming aircraft
Quatermain looks up to find an AIM helicopter like vehicle (if you`ve ever played the im2 game you know what it looks like)
The aircraft shoots at them allowing the AIM soldiers to board
The aircraft retreats leaving the shield agents on the ground
Quatermain notices the dying SHIELD agent laying there and goes over to him
Agent: sir
Quatermain: stay with me soldier! Where are the particles?
Agent: gave to… civilian.
Quatermain: who?
The agent has a flash back and sees a ring on Henry`s finger that reads: Pym- official member of the board of biochemistry
Agent: Pym
He dies leaving Quatermain with only that name.
He sends the information to Hill
She receives it and orders the SHIELD agents to track that name

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