Solomon Jones : A Ghost Story

Solomon Jones : A Ghost Story

Solomon encounters Ghost for the first time

By ndwwrestler2 - Sep 30, 2011 12:09 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Solomon Jones

I'm on a Jet with Lauren, and two new guys. Anthony and Lance I believe. We are on our way to a warehouse where we believe Ghost is hiding.

Ghost is an Android created by Carelo Hostello, the man that created the Super Solider serum that I was born with in my body. Ghost was a just a helper for Hostello. But apparently he developed a hatred for humans after witnessing his master kill himself.

Ghost tried to kill the U.S Senator, but his plans was foiled by Iron Man, who Ghost would've killed if the rest of the Avengers hadn't showed up. Ghost has Super strength and the ability to shapeshift. Fortunately we were able to our hands on technology that will help us see behind Ghost's disguise, I don't know if that's gonna help if we can't deal with his Super Strength.

"So I Heard that this guy took down Iron Man." Says Lance breaking the silence.
"Yeah, But Iron Man is just a guy in a suit." Says Anthony.
"Oh C'mon, do you know what that suit is made of?
"No, do you?"

We are about to face a Super Android that is a murdering machine, and these two highly trained government agents are arguing over what Iron Man suit is made of. This is like a horror flick, where you know which one is going to die first.

Lauren lands the jet and we get off. We head to the doors, and we can hear someone using some tools. Whatever somebody is doing in there, it probably isn't any good, So I give the signal to go in. We open the doors and we aim our weapons at what seems to be a harmless old man, who notices us, and wisely puts his hands up.

Lauren points her sensor device at him to see whether or not he is the android in disguise.

The Sensor turns red, which means that he is not the android. But I notice that even though we've put our guns down, his hands are still up. I look into his eyes and notices he looks up for a quick second. I look up and see the Android named Ghost sticking to the ceiling, looking down at me with his frightening dark red eyes. I quickly aim my gun at the android and I hit him with an Andamantium bullet. The others notice as the Android jumps down his hands transform in to weapons, he starts firing bullets at us. Me, Laura, and Lance are able to get out of the way, Anthony wasn't so lucky.

I fire some more Andamantium bullets at the Android, and it knocks him back a little bit, and as soon as the Android turns around I jump on the Android's back with a knife and start cutting through his armor, just to find any wire that will shut down the android. Once I got through his armor I was able to cut a yellow wire which shut down his right arm.

Lance charges at the robot, probably looking to help, but he ends up getting knocked into the fields like a Gnat. The Android quickly grabs me throws me thew a table. He comes towards me, but then Lauren pulls out a pistol and starts firing at the Android. It doesn't damage him at all, but it does get his attention, he turns toward Laura and starts walking towards her.

I grab my knife and start running toward the android. He quickly realizes my intentions and grabs my throat. He picks me up by the throat, and now I am looking him the face. Of Course I'm thinking that he is going to take his time and make my death very painful. But his eyes quickly turn from red to white and red again, almost like he was scanning me.

"P-5, you've grown since the last time I've seen you" Ghost said. "I wonder what my master would've said after seeing how much you've grown".

"When you see him, you can ask him yourself!" I said

I quickly punch a hole in his chest,and leave a grenade. Ghost realizes that I just put a grenade in his chest and let's go of me while he tries to get it out. I recognize that the old man is gone, so I quickly grab Lauren and get out of the warehouse.

Me and Lauren get up off the ground, and look at the destruction of the warehouse. Before Lauren asks me a question of exactly what I was thinking, she realizes that Lance is still alive and breathing. I continue to look at the burning warehouse, because I'm not sure if I can leave here, not being a 100% sure that the monster is dead.

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MaddMonkk
MaddMonkk - 9/30/2011, 5:50 PM
i like where you're going with this. Try some comparisons or analogies to make a point, it will stretch out the story and make the reader relate to the characters. Good Stuff.
ndwwrestler2
ndwwrestler2 - 10/2/2011, 9:44 PM
@ logicoflame Thanks for vote of confidence, I'm not used to writing these sort of things.

These other guys tried to help me and give me some advice, why'll you comment negatively like jackass.
MaddMonkk
MaddMonkk - 10/3/2011, 5:06 AM
Like Fats said NEVER STOP WRITING.
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