Star Wars: Episode III - Revenge of the Sith Fan Made Trailer

Star Wars: Episode III - Revenge of the Sith Fan Made Trailer

By Tom01992 - Dec 10, 2012 08:12 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Star Wars: Episode III - Revenge of the Sith Fan Made Trailer from Tom Claydon on Vimeo.



Any feedback would be appreciated, I put a lot of time into making this. :)
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jjk2814
jjk2814 - 12/10/2012, 4:01 PM
The editing is really clean. The second-half once the John Williams music cued in was much better than what came before. I think the first portion with the Hans Zimmer(From TDKR, correct?) just seems too gloomy, even for Episode III, I mean it is still Star Wars, its gotta look at least a little fun.

Really though, major kudos on the actually cutting. Very nice, but the overall tone is a little off putting.

Also something I've always wanted to see is Anakin marching into the Jedi Temple with THE IMPERIAL THEME. I love John Williams, and maybe it was Lucas's call, but i never understand using the Trade Federation theme in that moment. I mean, its the birth of Vader, the theme should have been used there for the first time in the series, instead of the end of Episode II.
LoudNoises
LoudNoises - 12/10/2012, 4:40 PM
This pretty good stuff. The way you opened with Palpatine narrating was a very nice touch. And like jjk2814 mention, the editing is very clean. However, if your open to some feedback, here is what I would suggest. Right after the initial narration by Palpatine ends, and then it goes to some emotional scenes between Anakin and Padme, it begins to drag a bit. Too many back and forth shots of Anakin looking sad or serious to Padme looking desperate and grieve stricken. There are also some repetitive moments with Anakin and Obi-wan fighting Count Dooku which seems unnecessary. And that final scene between Obi-wan and Anakin went on a little too long. It's a great scene, but I think just hearing Obi-wan screaming "you were the chosen one!" would have been enough to really keep the momentum going. All and all you truly have a talent for editing together movie trailers. I realize i'ts much more difficult than it looks. If you were to make any revisions, I'd say tighten it up a bit and don't repeat any scenes or let dialog scenes between 2 character go on too long. And I love the idea and switching up the music to the Imperial March Theme when we see Anakin leading the clone troopers into the Jedi Temple. Keep up the good work!
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