The Avengers 2012: Part Two: UPDATED

The Avengers 2012: Part Two: UPDATED

This is part 2 of my short Avengers story. Check It Out!

By DCMarvelFreshman - Jan 30, 2010 12:01 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

READ PART ONE HERE

Preously...
SHIELD recieved approval from the government to reopen the Super Soldier Program, using Captain America's body as a new source. Director of SHIELD, Nick Fury must obtain investment from Stark Industries...

Continued...

After leaving Nick Fury at the board meeting, we are looking at the exterior of the SHIELD facility.



The S.H.I.E.L.D Facility

The SHIELD Facility, located on Riker's Island, is now the base of operation for SHIELD. It was one of the things, Stark Industries help develop. The building is equipped with High Tech products, including some things featured in Iron Man 2's Stark Expo. All the doors are vaulted, and a secret code is required to enter. The facility has levels underground as well. The lowest levels is considered The Pegasus/ Vault, which contains super-enhanced criminals, including The Abomination from The Incredible Hulk. There is an entrance from the back of the island, that is above ground, used to import the super-enhanced criminals.

(The card required to enter the facility looks similar to this. The "Avengers" part would be replaced by SHIELD logo.)


Story Continues...

We are then looking at Nick Fury walking in the facility, as he is greeted by SHIELD agents. He soon arrives to a vaulted door, where he passes right through by swiping his card containing the entrance code. We can see that the room he has just entered is the hospital/ nursing section of the facility.

We are then looking thru a window into a room where some SHIELD agents are working on Captain America's body. (The audiance only gets a glimpse of Captain America body lying) On the other side of the window, looking thru, is deputy director of SHIELD, Maria Hill.



Behind her is Gamma Radiated scientist taking notes. Nick Fury then approaches Maria. They have a short conversation about the status of Capt's body. At some point in the conversation, "He looks like he can hop right off the table." After they discuss Captain America, thay talk about what all happened at the board meeting. Fury tells Maria they have to get investment from the famous Iron Man to go any further.

Maria doubts Tony Stark would agree considering all that he has done for SHIELD. Nick says if Tony's declaration of world peace is still in mind, then it shouldn't be a problem. Maria Hill then says that they should schedule a meeting now, because Tony has been doing side missions for General Ross...



Marvel-Freshman: I had to throw Maria Hill in the mix. I figured since her first appearance was in the New Avengers, she could slip in. And don't worry I don't plan for her just to be some boring assistant, I plan on giving her a little action at the end. Iron Man will be introduced in the next scene. So far, what do You think?
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invalensname
invalensname - 1/30/2010, 11:21 AM
Good. But I imagine rescuing Cap's body will be seen on screen and made a big deal of.
You should also make these longer, a good few scenes together rather than just one/two scenes.
But yeah, pretty good.
DCMarvelFreshman
DCMarvelFreshman - 1/30/2010, 12:15 PM
@invalensname I plan on adding more, to future parts. I just placed this in hear, because the next part is longer, and if it were added to this part, it would have went against the reason I'm doing them in Parts.

@Anil Rickly, I'll check it out now. I like seeing what other come up with.
soperman
soperman - 1/30/2010, 1:42 PM
sounds good so far
DogsOfWar
DogsOfWar - 1/30/2010, 2:17 PM
Its a slow build up so far, but I'm in.
Batmanknight
Batmanknight - 1/30/2010, 9:10 PM
Cool story so far man.

I like how your doin it in chapters. Its easier to read that way. May i suggest doing longer chapters though.

I like the idea and hope to see more.
Vafrous
Vafrous - 1/30/2010, 10:13 PM
Good job...Is Hawkeye gonna be in it?
superotherside
superotherside - 1/31/2010, 7:23 AM
nice! I like this one to bad I wish I could get a build up like this for my spidey reboot script could you check it out? and tell me what I'm doing wrong? please? or at least weather it's good or not the first one comment was a bit critical so maybe you can help?
http://comicbookmovie.com/fan_fic/news/?a=14419
thanks
soperman
soperman - 2/7/2010, 6:35 PM
this reminds me of the ultimate avengers animated movie, its quite similar so far
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