UniBeam11's Original Comic Script Issue#6!!

UniBeam11's Original Comic Script Issue#6!!

Our heroes reside in Dr. Doom's captivity. But where are they and what is going on? Read this next installment to see what exactly awaits our heroes as they gear up for a once in a lifetime battle! Shoutouts to MisterNiceGuy, Cipher, BattlinMurdock, WorldBreaker, IronLeprechaun, Gspawn and all the others for their great feedback!

Fan Fic
By UniBeam11 - Sep 03, 2012 09:09 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Well, if you have read up from the past 5 issues then i think you are in for a real treat here with issue 6! For those who have read it (no one here) i have gone and re-edited what i got feedback from, i would appreciate more! So please leave your comments below! Enjoy the ride!
(If you have not read up to this point and feel compelled to get caught up, i provide the links below to the previous issues)



Issue #6



http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fan_fic/news/?a=65971 (Issues 1&2)

http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fan_fic/news/?a=66160 (Issues 3&4)

http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fan_fic/news/?a=66371 (Issue 5)

Hope you enjoyed the read, for those who have read everything up to this point, be honest with how you think it compares! Complaints? Lets hear them! Things we've done better? Lets hear em! Thanks for anyone who took the time to read, much appreciated!! Stay Classy!

UniBeam11

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Thefancaster
Thefancaster - 9/3/2012, 10:25 AM
my only suggestion of constructive criticism with this piece, is that if you want to have them bickering and fighting with each other you need to make it more "adult" rather than sounding like husband and wife nagging at each other, ya know? other than that its good... I like the premisce and ill prob read some more tommorow.
cardiakid
cardiakid - 9/3/2012, 12:02 PM
That's some pretty good stuff @UniBeam11! Hey, if you get time, maybe you could check out my Fantastic Four Fancast
95
95 - 9/3/2012, 5:15 PM
You do a pretty good job of telling a story and giving information from character-to-character just through dialogue; but 'screenplay' format is a far better way of telling your stories, I think. Besides the good dialogue, the very little action can make reading this a bit unenergetic (for lack of a better word). Still, good storytelling, and balancing of all these characters.
IronLeprechaun
IronLeprechaun - 9/8/2012, 6:07 AM
Really good I like this alot
Oarsis
Oarsis - 9/21/2012, 1:11 PM
Great work!
I really enjoyed this! The dialogue was really well done!
Invictor
Invictor - 12/18/2012, 1:35 PM
This is a reason why CBM must put some fan-fic on main page so people can show their true talent in writing and even some day get discovered. This is very fantastic!
Vaderpool99
Vaderpool99 - 12/23/2012, 11:55 AM
A pure writing example of brilliancy. You have the talent in my opinion to one day be the John Blake to one Stan Lee and shall save Marvel from the apocalyptic Marvel NOW!
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