A Hero's Rise

A Hero's Rise

Hugo Strange is on a quest to destroy the legacy of Batman. Unlike the ones before him, Strange realizes Bruce Wayne is the chink in the Dark Knight's armor. In this desire for destruction Strange paves the way for one of Batman's greatest foes to rise.

By shock - Aug 09, 2013 04:08 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
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comiccow6
comiccow6 - 8/10/2013, 9:45 PM
Man, just as good as when I first read it. Liked the tweaks you made, they help the story move along without going to fast or slow. Good job man. Good job.
shock
shock - 8/11/2013, 7:04 PM
Thanks! I finished the sequel to Superman Genesis and plan to post it in the coming week.
comiccow6
comiccow6 - 8/12/2013, 5:41 PM
Sound awesome! Can I ask for some tips?
shock
shock - 8/13/2013, 4:09 PM
Sure what do you have?
comiccow6
comiccow6 - 8/13/2013, 11:23 PM
So I'm having trouble writing. It's not so much the story or dialogue, it's that I'm trying to increase the length of my scripts. So, what I'm asking is how to make scenes longer or create new scenes without them being filler.
shock
shock - 8/14/2013, 4:00 PM
It can be tricky trying to add length that is worth adding. For me I have several different story lines going in one story. For my last Batman story I wanted to tell the story of Batman, Bruce Wayne, Barbara Gordon, Bane, Ra's Al Ghul, and The Penguin. In doing that you have to have each story line meet at the end in a way that fits. Pace each story line so that they all progress at the same rate.
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