Spiderman 4: The Nero Version

Spiderman 4: The Nero Version

You've heard me harp and complain; now here's how I'd do it with my first Fan Fic.

By NERO - Jan 06, 2010 01:01 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Spiderman 4 According to Nero:




It has been two years since the end of Spiderman 3. Peter is settling into a new phase of his life. Mary Jane moved to Paris shortly after SM3 having accepting a modeling contract and wanting to have some space. Peter has become a more confident hero who is much more comfortable in his own skin and he has learned something… (GASP) Being Spiderman is actually fun and allows him an escape from his troubles, for the most part, and with no one around to worry about him being Spidey every day and vice versa the pressure is off a bit. This new relaxed and confident standing has led him to be quite a motor mouth. His life as Peter is still complicated; money problems, finally getting over MJ, Aunt May is doddering on well (she’s now 167 and Medicare is insisting on euthanasia... I kid.). Pete is now in his last semester of his Master’s Degree program and things are going well. Peter has been working with Doc Connors and Gwen on Connors’ baby; the attempt to induce mutation via gene therapy to reproduce severed or destroyed tissues by splicing reptilian DNA (it’s a comic movie) and it has begun to show promise. Should it succeed Pete will have essentially have made his name in the scientific community and can have his choice of PhD programs and jobs afterward. Top that off with a successful dating life with options including his research partner Gwen Stacy and a one way crush on lovely socialite and classmate Felicia Hardy, basically life is good for once.

We will also see that the idea of the super villain has really begun to catch on. Baddies have begun taking the ideas set forth by Gobby, Doc Ock and the like and using gimmicks and tech to not only pull off crimes, but snatch headlines giving them a Spidey style pseudo celebrity fueled by J Jonah Jameson’s hatred of all things costumed. The opening action can involve a fight between Spidey and a New Baddie who has taken to knocking off armored cars by knocking them over… literally, the Rhino. Imagine high speed chase meets demolition derby through the streets of NY at 60mph. Rhino is dispatched quickly showing just how "good" Peter has become.


As the story progresses we find that Aunt May has a degenerative condition and has only a year or two left to live. This throws Peter into overdrive trying to work to make money to help pay for experimental treatments and pushing Doc Connors to formulate a successful therapy using their own research. Peter pushes to go ahead with human testing far too early. Prompting Doc Connors to do the noble thing and take the treatment himself as it is still his dream to be whole againafter losing his arm. Failure. Peter and Gwen leave Connors in his lab and go to visit May. Connors, dejected remains in the lab to review the data from the failed experiment.

He falls asleep at his desk.

We flip to the next morning, Connors awakens in his office clothes tattered and filthy, a strange taste in his mouth; he pulls a wad of hairs from his mouth. He heads towards his lab and notices there are deep scratch marks on the door frame on the same side as his missing arm. He traces the marks and follows them into the lab, utter destruction. Claw marks on the walls and floor, the door to the outside is nearly ripped off its hinges. He stands wondering seeing strange foot prints leading away from and back to the lab.

The Daily Bugle is abuzz that morning JJJ has an assignment for Parker. Last night an old woman was attacked in Central Park by a six foot lizard that ate her two shitzus; a vendor got a fuzzy shot of the creature with a camera phone in the darkness. JJJ wants a shot of this thing and will pay top dollar for what he calls NYC’s own Bigfoot. Pete takes the assignment. After several nights Aunt May has come home from the hospital and is stable living at Pete’s place. He has combed the city for nearly a week looking for The Lizard and has been all but locked out by Doc Connors after their failed experiment.


The attacks have continued in the meantime and have increased in savagery, the night before a police officer stopped the Lizard only inches from biting a small child. The heroic officer was mauled nearly to death by the beast and is on life support at a local NYC hospital. In response to public fear and anger the Mayor and Police Commissioner have now put out a cry for help to Spidey or anyone who can help them stop the creature before someone is killed. Peter gets his first glimps of the Lizard, but looses it in the sewers.

A famous big game hunter steps forward to take up the challenge, Sergei Kravinoff better known as Kraven the hunter.

Kraven has also made the media savvy move of buttering up to Jameson who has given Parker the unenviable task of going with Kraven in search of the Lizard to get the photo of the its capture, this has prohibited Pete's own search as Spiderman. Peter gets to know the boastful and abrasive Kraven and he also begins to notice that Kraven’s abilities exceed those of normal men, both physically and perceptionally. When pressed by Peter as to how he can do these things Kraven jokingly tells him a witch doctor did it. (We will find out later there was more going on than this).

After several nights, the pair get lucky and catch the beast as he takes down a carriage in the park knocking it down an embankment; driver, passengers, horse and all. The Lizard is tearing into the horse when Kraven arrives and takes his shot missing at first blush. When Kraven finally glances for Parker to see if he’s getting this he realizes the boy is nowhere to be found. Soon Kraven has wounded the beast and is going in for the kill when Spiderman arrives and tries to subdue the creature; seeing no need to kill it, and also being suspicious of why the monster appears to be wearing tattered human clothes.

During the ensuing three way fight, which has raged from Central Park into the NY Sewers, Peter is left battered. He discovers that floating near his face in the muck is the small plastic Empire State University ID badge of Dr. Kurt Connors. He has just enough time to sieze the badge when his Spider Sense tingles. He moves as Kraven’s brass knuckled fist comes crashing down. Kraven then admits that Jameson has done more than offer to match the Mayor’s reward for capturing or killing the Lizard; he has made the same offer in reward money to him if he can deliver Spiderman to him alive. Spidey narrowly escapes in his weakened condition. Kraven returns to the Park to find Parker. Peter is there giving the excuse that he was trampled by the injured horse. Kraven is suspicious.

The next day Parker goes to the ESU Lab of Doc Connors and demands to be let in. Connors finally relents and allows Peter in. Connors is a mess, he has not shaven or attended his classes in more than a week, his wife has told Peter he has not been home either and she is worried. Peter demands to know what’s going on and tells Connors his suspicions dropping the ID on the table. Connors asks where he got it and Peter lies saying he was with Kraven in the sewers, gambling that Connors won’t remember the circumstances of only Kraven and Spiderman being present. The gamble pays off; Connors admits that he must be the Lizard and that he has been trying to reverse the process, but has had no results and that the process leaves him with no memory of the atrocities he commits each night, and his thought process is becoming more incoherent, and what’s more he shows Peter a reptilian skin beginning to permanently form on the nub of his severed arm and the locations of his knife wounds delivered by Kraven. The two begin to combine efforts as the day wears on Connors has Peter attempt to lock him in the university’s old fallout shelter. Peter takes watch, now dressed as Spiderman. His Spider Sense tingles, too late.


Kraven knocks him out with a tranq dart. He awakens bound outside the reinforced bomb shelter heavily chained and bound. Kraven gloats that it was easy enough to follow the Lizard’s trail back to the university and that he had known Connors was the lizard for quite some time. He had been waiting for the appearance of Spiderman, his main target, before springing his trap. He had noticed Spiderman found the ID in the sewers and was just glad he didn’t have to tip his hand and lead Spiderman here himself. Kraven decides it is better to wait out Connors’ transformation, as the Lizard tears helplessly at the door behind them, than to try to deal with the monster and Spiderman together again. He admits that JJJ was not the only person who wanted Spiderman exposed, confessing that his abilities were granted by a mysterious figure he met in Russia that offered him the chance to be more than human and exposed him to a special gas that gave him the powers that made his reputation as the world's greatest hunter and that he now needs more challenge than simply killing tigers and bears with his bare hands. He had hunted all a normal man could, it was time for something more challenging and this mystery man had seen to it he could do just that in exchange for a favor. He has chained Spiderman here for a reason, his benefactor would like to speak with him before he is exposed, humiliated, and turned over to authorities by Jameson. Kraven dials a number on a small cell phone and puts it on speaker and leaves the room. There is silence for a moment and then we hear the voice of… Dafoe!

The general threat is that he (Spiderman) will never be free of the Goblin; Osborne is always watching and none of those close to him will never be safe. The call ends and the angry Spidey breaks his bonds as Kraven returns. He smashes Kraven through the wall into the fallout shelter and he is pounced on by the Lizard.


The fight flows from the shelter through the labs and sciences building finaly spilling onto the campus (we see in an aside that the symbiote sample Connors held onto escapes in the mayhem). Spiderman has a sudden epiphany as to the cure and rushes to the ruined lab to attempt to make the minor adjustment to the compound he and Connors had made earlier. Retrieving Kraven’s tranq rifle he loads the single dose he has able to make and takes aim just before Kraven can deliver the deathblow to Connors. Spidey fires the dart into Lizard and then swings in to incapacitate Kraven in the confusion.


In the end Kraven leaves NYC in defeat, having done nothing truly unlawful and having been fairly beaten he leaves with no reward and no fanfare. He vows to himself that the next time he sees Spiderman he will be the prey and he will have his head on his wall. Connors, having been seen by the college students transforming from Lizard to normal gives a statement to the public as his career and reputation are now ruined and he has surrendered himself to face criminal charges. He gives all the credit for the situation’s resolution to the heroic actions of Spiderman and his brilliant grad student Peter Parker. Peter is taken aback as Connors winks to him; finally acknowledging that he had figured that Peter was Spiderman long ago. Jameson pays well for Pete's amazing photos of the park battle and offers, in private, to set up a fund for Peter with the matching reward money Jameson had put up to be used as needed when needed, and only for, Peter to pay for May’s treatments in an uncharacteristically fatherly gesture, which he makes Peter swear to never reveal.

(The Mayor reneged on the original reward money stating that since Peter had colluded, in a manner of speaking, with Connors and had tried to develop a cure rather than just handing Connors over to authorities in a timely fashion and had struck a deal with Peter that if he made no fuss about the reward then the city would not press charges against him. They refus to give the reward to Spiderman due to his status as a vigilante.)

In the end Peter and Gwen walk across the Brooklyn Bridge; they talk and kiss and Peter’s Spider Sense tingles, he glances around and sees nothing. He and Gwen walk along towards Manhattan, Peter is still uneasy. As the camera pans away we see the view of the couple from the top of the bridge as the camera reveals the right leg, arm, shoulder, and back of the head of a more classically comic looking Green Goblin. He watches the happy couple and laughs maniacally.




Major differences in this film from the Raimiverse:

There is a relationship between Gwen and Peter, but it is not a major focus. As she doesn’t know he is Spiderman there is no pressure there as in the last two Spiderfilms. It is lighter and more casual the way a relationship at that point should be. Gwen is the anti-MJ she is light and accepting of Peter’s quirks and generally very understanding, but not a doormat. A breath of fresh air after the heavy handed presentation of MJ of Spidey 2 and 3.

Kraven is a charming but unsympathetic villain, Connors still follows the sympathetic mold, but there is really no choice with the character as it is cannon that you feel for the guy.

It sets up a direction for a sequel, but doesn’t demand it go there right away. I like the idea of setting Goblin up as a behind the scenes bad guy who can quietly bring together the Sinister Six in place of Doc Ock who I would love to see as part of the final group somehow.

Where would I go next? I’d go with Black Cat and Scorpion which can then transition into the Mac Gargan version of Venom which can eventually lead to Carnage in a few sequels since Eddie Brock was vaporized. (Thanks Sam.)

Spidey Six simply has to revolve around the Sinister Six. I mean come on, you can’t get better marketing than that.

So there you have it Spiderman 4 according to Nero.

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LEEE777
LEEE777 - 1/6/2010, 8:09 AM
Great stuff man, thumbs up from me!! ; )
NERO
NERO - 1/6/2010, 1:12 PM
Thanks guys.

@ Rickly: I see Norman as a facilatator, think of him as the Spidey version of Nick Fury popping in here and there over the next two sequels to pull the Sinister Six together. I use Norman as the originator of the Six verses Ock because Ock was made such a good guy by Raimi I have trouble seeing a reason for him to form the group, though he may join it, just not form it. My version of a Sinister Six would be made up of Goblin, Ock, Vulture, Electro, Mysterio, and Kraven.
Ryden
Ryden - 1/6/2010, 1:26 PM
love it, great job nerosday ;)
Phinehas
Phinehas - 1/6/2010, 1:28 PM
I LOVE it! Why or How is it they could not do this earlier???

So, explain how Gobby survived from the first film? Did he make a physical transformation after dying and actually assume an actual grotesque face? Or was he never just never buried and decided to wear a new costume with a latex face?

InSpace
InSpace - 1/6/2010, 1:56 PM
Nerosday@Dude this an Awesome story.
I love how you brought Norman back.
Phinehas
Phinehas - 1/6/2010, 2:04 PM
I missed it! How did he bring Norman back from the grave???
NERO
NERO - 1/6/2010, 2:34 PM
@Phin: Much like in the comics. A side effect of the gas Norman inhaled can cause stasis in the event of massive trauma causing state of near suspended animation while the body heals. Figure Norman bypasses autopsy somehow, and the puncture wounds wouldn't be all that hard to overcome. He awoke several weeks after his funeral and, like the Lazarus pit side effect, awoke in a near psychotic state tearing his way from the grave. Once coming to his senses he sets up a new life for himself in Europe using funds squirreled away over the years in Swiss accounts. I'd reveal all of this in Spiderman Six.

In film chronology there is about six years elapsed time from Spiderman to Spiderman 4 and in this gap Osborne has been building a new Empire for himself using shadow corporations and pseudonyms. He is now a force to be reckoned with and directs his formidable resource towards the goal of making Spiderman’s life hell.

I have even toyed with the idea of Osborne being the facilitator bringing a lot of this tech to the mass of random costume villains cropping up. He’s not giving it away, but he’s developing it and using his underworld contacts allows some to go missing here and there and see to it that low level crooks like Rhino and Electro get a good tutorial on how to use the stuff, knowing full well Spiderman will have to butt heads with them to bring them in. This might help with the Goblin Sinister Six angle, basically making Goblin in some way responsible for all of their abilities through either tech or funding, as it was in the case of Ock, though Harry was in charge of Oscorp at that time.

Speaking of Harry the stasis effect also leave a means for him to make a comeback later, and if he does I’d leave him nuts for a while and have him take on the Hobgoblin persona to antagonize his father.
DogsOfWar
DogsOfWar - 1/6/2010, 2:37 PM
@Nero-This looks so much better here than one big comment in another story. Great job! I would really like to see this on the big screen.
Phinehas
Phinehas - 1/6/2010, 2:47 PM
I figured it'd be something like that! Would that same episode explain why switched costumes? Not that I prefer the other, I'm just curious. And "Several weeks in the ground without food, water, and air??? Dude, you're stretching the lines of suspension of disbelief with those numbers. Or am I being too persnickety?
NERO
NERO - 1/6/2010, 3:39 PM
@Phin: Lol... well there is air in the coffin and vault that would last quite a while if someone is taking the equivalent of one breath every twelve hours or so. I had read somewhere once that there is about six hours of useable air in a coffin if you remain calm. The coffin’s seal would trap it in at the time of closing and keep it there. Also don’t forget about the large cement vault the coffin rests in underground as well. The closest real world thing a human body can do to reach a point of stasis is emersion or drowning in freezing water. Normally we are totally brain dead after six minutes without air, but drop someone into freezing liquid and people have been revived up to half an hour later with no damage. So figure you can go a week without food, three days without water, a few minutes without air.... if you only need one breathe every 12 hours, it kind of stretches the other needs out with it and… Its a comic. :) Where would comics be without suspended animation, stasis, cloning, advanced genetics, gamma bombs, radioactive spiders, and cosmic radiation, all without cancer, etc.

I want there to be mystery and speculation as to how Goblin came back so this film will present no answers in the brief two scenes in which he appears or is heard.

As for the costume change: Norman used the existing flight suit in Spidey 1 tweaking only the helmet. I think this was more a matter of practicality than aesthetics, or at least I hope he didn't deliberately want to look like a power ranger. The new suit much like Harry's is lighter and allows more movement. Norman is more used to his abilities now and will be a much more physical threat on or off the glider the suit will reflect that. The mask will simply be a new means for him to portray his totem and strike fear into his victims appearing more natural in his horror will be far more disquieting than wearing a large scary crash helmet.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 1/6/2010, 7:20 PM
NERO @ I hope HOLLYWOOD is watchin' dude, i wanna see this!!
DDD
DDD - 1/6/2010, 10:07 PM
Nero@ this is downright accurate and right on the money!
Your keeping Osborne in the shadows is character exposition
of the most subtle and best kind! Keeps people guessing
and captures there interest!

I wish Sam Raimi was reading this 'cause this is exactly how
Spidey 4 should go!!! I'd like to anonymously ghost write
this into a full 120 page script and then you send it off
to Raimi but unfortunately they don't take spec scripts in
Hollywood anymore!

Damm why won't they listen to intelligent fans like you
Nero@! They would be way ahead of the game if they did!
NERO
NERO - 1/6/2010, 10:39 PM
Thanks guys. DDD I'm glad you like it, buddy.
6of13
6of13 - 1/7/2010, 8:17 AM
Fantastic story.
Is it not possible to imagine that Osbourne was never really truly dead in the first place, but almost dead. He survives his wounds and with his connections fakes his funeral. Perhaps he somehow had planned for this contingency. Okay, I am not so sure how that sounds to you however I am trying to suggest something a little more tangible than the resurrection from the grave bit.
Makiveli21
Makiveli21 - 1/7/2010, 2:43 PM
Awesome dude I loved it! I loved how you used Kraven and Osborne! Freakin Brilliant!!! Wheres DellaMorte? Hes gotta read this since he insists that Osborne shouldnt come back. It made your version so intriguing!!! Now I hate Sam Raimi even more! And while Ive been hating on Tobey alot I think with this story, I could picture him pulling it off and bringing him back into the true role of Peter Parker. Get busy on the 5th one cuz now Im interested!
OdinsBeard
OdinsBeard - 1/7/2010, 4:30 PM
i dont get why people can't grasp norman coming back. he wouldn't be "coming back from the dead"- the way the first spider-man movie ended was exactly like the comic as far as norman's alledged death, the same thing happend in the recent (fantastic) spider-man cartoon. in both cases norman returned because he never died to begin with. he has super-strength remember? the only thing that waas different in the movie was MJ was there instead of gwen and he actually saved her. otherwise it goes about the same.
AGame67
AGame67 - 1/7/2010, 6:04 PM
Awesome story dude. This is the perfect way to do it if they HAVE to do a Spider-Man 5. Do the Kraven thing then bring Norman back and it end while they're behind.

I really enjoyed the story dude.
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