Suicide Squad Preview by BatmanKnight

Suicide Squad Preview by BatmanKnight

This is the beginning of my Suicide Squad story I am writing. I want to know what other people think before I keep going to finish something no one is going to read. I think that if a Suicide Squad movie is to be made it has to have a lot of violence and bad language and definitely rated R. So hope you enjoy and comment below.

By Batmanknight - Feb 01, 2010 12:02 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic



Meili Mountains of China



Four people heavily dressed in snow gear trudge up the mountain. They walk until one pulls down his glove and reveals a communicator. “This is Rick Flag; we’re currently 5,000 meters above sea level. Requesting further orders,” says Rick rubbing his gloves together and breathing deep. “Rick, sorry to tell you this but you gotta keep climbing. You’re not going to find him here. Hell you’re not even scratching the surface,” says the voice over the communicator. “Shit…I was worried you’d say that. Flag out.” Rick signals for the team to keep moving and they pursue. “Rick maybe we should take a rest. The doctor looks tired,” says a female voice through a receiver connected to her jacket. “Come’ on Karina, just a few more miles and we’ll stop,” says Rick turning to the woman behind him. “I’m fine, we must continue if we ever want to catch the Yeti,” says an old man behind Karina. “No I’m with Karina, I’m tired as [frick],” says Bright, the man next to Flag. “We have movement on your position Flag,” says the voice over the watch. “No shit we’re walking,” says Bright. “What are you talken about, I don’t see anything,” says Rick trying to look through the gusting snow.

On a much lower part of the mountain in a tent we see the man speaking to Rick. “You’ve got movement and it ain’t just you guys,” says the commander staring at the radar on his computer.

Bright takes out a shotgun and Flag a pistol. They aim through the snow still unable to see anything. They wait quietly as Rick and Bright move their guns. Then suddenly the doctor is picked up and thrown at Karina. Bright turns and shoots but the large white monster reveals itself and punches Bright across the face. Flag shoots at the monster that runs towards him. Flag rolls to the side and grabs Bright’s gun and shoots the monster in the spine. The monster pounds the ground and it begins to crack towards Karina and the doctor. The ground suddenly splits and a crevasse is formed. Rick charges the beast and shoots his gun directly at the chest of the beast that knocks Flag away. The crack in the floor widens and the doctor falls miles down to his death. Karina holds on for dear life with her finger tips. “RICK,” yells Karina. Rick slides across the ice towards Karina and grabs her hand as she falls. The beast begins running towards them until Bright takes out a flare gun and shoots the beast. The yeti then runs towards Bright who shoots his pistol like a mad man.

“Rick, don’t drop me,” cries Karina staring at Rick. Rick tries to pull her but the combination of cold, wind, pain, and exhaustion make it that much harder. Bright continues distracting the beast that swings furious punches. Rick begins slipping closer to the crevasse barley able to hold on. “RICK WE GOT TO DO SOMETHING,” yells Bright jumping away from the monster. Rick stares into the eyes of the women he holds as his body gets closer and closer to her situation. “I’m sorry Karina,” says Rick. He begins letting go of her hand as the tears freeze to her face. They finally part and he stares at her as she falls. Soon she disappears through the darkness and mist of the crevasse. Then the Yeti throws the torn body of Bright at Rick who is left alone facing the monster. He takes out a large knife and charges the monster. He swings the knife and cuts the arm making the beast angrier. Then he slides between its legs grabbing the buried pistol and shooting the monster in the back. The Yeti turns swinging down his fist at Rick who is able to dodge it. Then Rick seizes the opportunity and lets out three bullets into the face of the monster. The yellowish blood of the creature spills on Ricks face as it falls forward. Rick stands up and yells as he lets out the rest of the clip on the monster. Then Rick falls beside it. He picks up his wrist and speaks into the communicator. “This is Rick Flag. I am currently 5,000 meters above sea level on the Meili Mountains. My team has died…and I’m [frick]ed.” He drops his wrist and closes his eyes lying next to the beast.

Then we go to the beginning credits.

After the credits we see Karina falling down the crevasse. She yells “RICK” as she falls down the crevasse clawing at the air above her. The yells continue as Rick awakes in a hospital bed. He looks around surprised to be alive. “Rick Flag,” says a large African American getting up from a chair beside Rick. “Amanda Waller, you’re the last person I expected to see in the icy mountains. Hell and the last I wanted to,” says Rick. “Well it looks like you didn’t lose your humor on those mountains,” says Amanda. Rick disregards the comment and stares at the woman. “How’s my father,” asks Rick. “He’s good. Still leading Task Force X. He wanted to come but…” “Busy…Amanda I’m not ten I don’t need my father here beside me when I’m sick,” says Rick. “Rick as much as you might think I’m not here to ask how you’re doing. Your father wanted to be the one to ask you. But I figured after what happened up in the mountains there’s no better time to ask,” says Amanda. “This is really not the time,” says Rick. “Then when is the time Rick,” asks Amanda growing annoyed. “Anytime BUT just after my friends got killed by a [frick]en snow monkey,” says Rick reciprocating the feeling. “I’m sorry Rick, but I thought you were strong enough to get over it. Your father does it every day,” says Amanda. “Yeah, well I’m not my [frick]en father am I,” says Rick. Amanda begins walking towards the door and freezes as she opens it. “You’re right. You’re not your father, but would it kill you to act like him,” says Amanda walking out.

A Palace in Quarac



A group of Jihad soldiers shoot furiously at a blockade. Behind we see a middle aged man and a black man dressed up in fur and leather resembling a tiger. “Shit man, we’re in a tight spot now,” says the Tiger. “Relax everything’s under control Bronze Tiger. Where the [frick] is Multiplex,” demands the man. “Right here Rick,” says a man dressed in a green and black suit walking up behind them. “They got us pinned. I need you to go in there and hold up as we advance,” says Rick. “Human shield…ok, how many you need,” says Multiplex holding his hands together as a green and black sphere forms in his hands. “Six,” says Rick. Suddenly five men exactly like Multiplex appear next to them. “That’s just messed up,” says Bronze Tiger. “Let’s do it,” says the original Multiplex.

The Multiplex clones jump the blockade and rush the attackers. Rick pulls out two revolvers and follows behind a clone shooting the Jihad soldiers. Bronze Tiger looks at the original Multiplex watching the fight. “AREN’T YOU GONNA FIGHT,” asks Bronze Tiger ducking the bullets. “No…they got it under control,” says Multiplex. Bronze Tiger leaps from behind the blockade and takes down two soldiers by their faces. He gets up and kicks out the feet of one and punches another. He summersaults knocking down another and cuts a final soldier with a blade from his sleeve. “All clear on the ground floor,” says Bronze Tiger into his earpiece, “what’s up with you Rick.”

Rick hides behind a door watching the Multiplex copies fighting the Jihad. “I’m good up here. I’m gonna start looking for Rustam,” says Rick. “Rick better wait for back-up, you’re not as strong as you used to be,” says Bronze Tiger. “Hey Bronze,” says Rick. “Yeah.” “[frick] you.” Bronze Tiger laughs and Rick walks down the hall.



Rick walks slowly around the palace, aiming his guns around every corner. Suddenly he is thrown against a book case that falls on him. Then he is thrown across a desk. The trail of a super speeding figure runs across the room. Two javelins land next to Rick who moves as they explode. The speeding figure stops and twirls a javelin in his hand. “Hello Rick Flag,” says a large brown man. “Jaculi. I must be getting close if you were sent in,” says Rick aiming his revolvers at Jaculi. “You’ll never get to him Rick Flag,” says Jaculi, “cause just like I” Jaculi disappears and speeds behind Rick and pushes him across the room. “He is too quick,” finishes Jaculi. “He pulls out a javelin from a quiver on his back. He aims it at Rick with a smile. Then his hand is suddenly severed from his body and drops to the ground. A boomerang ricochets around the room and returns to the hand of a man dressed in a blue hat and coat with multiple boomerangs around his waist and a toothpick in his mouth. Jaculi turns and the boomerang man lets out a smirk and a wink before throwing another boomerang taking off Jaculi’s head.

Rick gets up and walks towards the other man. “Captain Boomerang, nice save,” says Rick shaking his hand. “I heard you were supposed to wait for back-up,” says Boomerang. “Well Blockbuster was the back-up, but his block got busted before he touched ground,” smiles Rick. “You know where Rustam is,” asks Boomerang. “Well hopefully in this temple if we’re here,” smiles Rick, “I think we’re close, they have the Jihad downstairs fighting our men so they gotta be protecting something,” says Rick walking out of the room. “That’s some logic,” says Boomerang,” but I’ll take it.” Boomerang follows Rick out of the room.

Back on the ground the fight rages on. Bronze Tiger fights off attacking Jihadists with scimitars and Multiplex throws cars and large pieces of debris at crowds of Jihad. On the balcony of the palace a man in a black turtle neck and pants jumps onto the side of a helicopter and shoots its drivers with blasts from a shotgun. He takes the wheel and circles in the air for a moment before driving it at the ground. As it starts to descend he jumps from the helicopter onto the roof of another building. The helicopter crashes with a large explosion taking out many Jihads.



“Good job Nemesis, but next time give a warning,” says Deadshot. “Now that wouldn’t be any fun would it,” says Nemesis jumping down. Deadshot, Bronze Tiger, Nemesis, and Multiplex come together behind the exploded helicopter. “What’s the situation,” asks Deadshot. “We’re down here killin Jihad and Rick and Boomerang are in the palace searching for Rustam. “Boomerang,” asks Nemesis with a smirk, “that’s funny. Looks like we’ll be one more man down.” Bronze Tiger looks at Multiplex who is staring at the floor. “Multi what’s up,” asks Bronze Tiger. Multiplex stays fixated on the floor. “MULTI,” demands Bronze Tiger. “WHAT,” asks Multiplex lifting his view, “one of my clones just got killed. They found a bomb deep beneath the palace, we only got five minutes.” “Shit. LETS GET EVERYONE OUT OF HERE, EVERYONE TO THE HELICOPTER,” demands Bronze Tiger as the team begins to disperse,” he pushes a button on his earpiece and speaks. “Rick you got to get out of there, there’s a bomb under the palace.”

We see Boomerang and Rick in the palace. “A bomb,” asks Boomerang worried, “I didn’t come here to die.” “What didn’t you understand about SUIDE Squad,” asks Rick, “I’m stayen here Tiger. Today we catch this son-of-a-bitch.”

“Hell no Rick we’re leaven,” says Bronze Tiger, “liften off in 3 minutes.”

“Then I guess I’m catchin the next flight,” says Rick pulling off his earpiece. Rick walks down the hall and Boomerang stays put. “Let’s go Boomerang,” says Rick gesturing with his gun. “Rick I already helped today. I got a son back home. I can’t die today,” says Boomerang. Rick pulls out a small switch from his pocket and shows it to Boomerang. “Think about your decision. Cause I got your exit right here,” says Rick. We see through the bottom of Boomerangs pants and see a bracelet with red lights on it. “Come on Rick. I can’t help you anyways,” says Boomerang. Rick pauses for a moment and throws the detonator and a small leather pouch. “Wouldn’t want Rustam getting these,” says Rick. Rick runs down the hall and Boomerang runs in the opposite direction.

Rick gets to the main hall and finds a man sitting in a throne. He aims his pistols and the man remains in the chair. “Hello Rick Flag,” says the man. “Rustam,” says Rick. “You finally found me. How long did it take…3 months,” asks Rustam smiling. “You know I was thinking about what I’d say in this moment. When I finally got you in aim sight,” says Rick, “but I think I’ll just kill you.” Rick begins firing his gun and Rustam creates a flaming sword in his hand.

Back at the helicopter we see Nemesis in the driver’s seat and Bronze Tiger beside him. Boomerang breathes deeply as he finally arrives. He pulls himself onto the helicopter and wipes the sweat off his face as the rest of the men stare at him. “What,” asks Boomerang? “Wheres Flag,” asks Multiplex. “He’s in the palace looking for Rustam,” says Boomerang. Bronze Tiger grabs Boomerang by the throat and aims the knife up his sleeve at Boomerang’s neck. “YOU LEFT HIM THERE,” yells Bronze Tiger. “BONZE WE GOTTA LIFT OFF WE ONLY GOT THREE MINUTES LEFT BEFORE WE ALL DIE,” says Nemesis. Bronze Tiger stabs Boomerang in the shoulder then returns to the front seat. “Let’s go,” says Bronze Tiger.

In the hall Rick is on the floor with burns large cuts burnt onto his skin. “You see Rick Flag. You and your death squad can’t beat me,” says Rustam circling Rick and twirling his sword in his hand. Rick kicks out Rustams feet and leaps up shooting him, but Rustam swipes the bullets with his sword. Rustam gets up and they begin engaging in an intense hand to hand combat fight. Rick takes out a knife and stabs Rustam in the stomach. Rustam looks at the knife and smiles. With a wave of his hand a new flam scimitar appears in his hand and stab through Rick. Rick falls bleeding and breathing deep. “You see Rick Flag. Jihad is the future. I am the future.” Rustam grabs Rick’s pistol and aims it at Rick’s forehead. “I always thought the most embarrassing deaths were the ones suffered by their own weapons. What do you think,” says Rustam. “You know what I think. [frick] you, you [frick]en Osama, Castro, Hitler wanna be. You think it’s over with me. There’s an army coming for you. And when they come they’ll slice every [frick]en piece of you down to your flaming dick. So to reiterate [frick] you,” says Rick. Rustam smiles and pulls the trigger.

In the air the group flies as the palace lights up in an explosive flame. The helicopter hangs right from the impact then fixes. “You think he got out,” asks Boomerang. “Shut up Boomerang,” says Multiplex.

Hope you like it. I really want to hear what you think. I've started a pretty long casting for the Suicide Squad that I'm going to release later. I still don't know who should play Rick Flag Jr. so if anyone has suggestions please tell me. My choices right now are either Adam Baldwin or Mark Walberg.So comment below.
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Batmanknight
Batmanknight - 2/1/2010, 1:04 PM
Cast so far:

Rick Flag jr: ?
Rick Flag Sr: Kevin Costner
Bronze Tiger: Laz Alonso
Multiplex: Eli Roth
Nemesis: Paul Walker
Deadshot: Jeffery Dean Morgan
Captain Boomerang: Oliver Platt
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 2/1/2010, 5:40 PM
BatmanKnight @ Great read man!!!


Hey TOM HARDY for DEADSHOT! : P
Batmanknight
Batmanknight - 2/1/2010, 6:12 PM
@Anil-Mathew Bomer is a good actor but i dont think hes right for this.What did you think about the story?

@LEEE- Thanks man. Tom Hardy doesnt look Bad Ass enough for it lol.

Thanks for reading it guys, looks like Suicide Squad isnt that popular
himynameiszach
himynameiszach - 2/1/2010, 8:58 PM
naaa [frick] eli roth yo he is a real shitty actor, he seems good but then really watch inglorious bastards he seriously sucks tant
THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 2/2/2010, 12:17 AM
Holy shit! i was working on a Suicide Squad story too!
Great minds think alike man.

Luckily it seems like our stories are going to be quite different enough.

I admitt, I am not too crazy about the cast. I do like Costner, and as you know I am crazy about Morgan for Deadshot. I explained my views on that pick thoroughly in my Secret Six cast.

I am not keen on your Boomerang pick, Platt is way over weight for teh role, so I don't think he could be appropriate for the role.

Walker doesn't really have the presense for Nemisis, he needs to eb more aloof and cool, emotionally I mean.

One complaint I had was with your Bronze Tiger. he is the 4th deadliest fighter in DC comics, he has trained for years in multiple forms of combat, is wealthy, powerful, and your dialoue for him has made him a token black. Don't get me wrong, the story is well written save for him. Just switch some dialogue and you will be good.


For Rick Flag Jr. I would go with either Wahlberg or Matt Damon.


I would love to read the rest of this when you finish it.

I'll read yours, and you can read mine ;)

HAWK out.
Batmanknight
Batmanknight - 2/2/2010, 2:49 PM
@Him-i thought he did good in that movie. what did you think about the story?

@HAWK-Thanks for liking it...i think.

My story is going to focus on the origin with Jihad and a part from a later issue, but if i told you which one you would probably know what it is off the back.

Well my first pick for Boomerang was Mel Gibson, but i feel that he has to be someone funnier and stupid criminal looking.

For Nemesis i was also thinking Matt Damon, but i feel he is a little too old. Walker could do it though. In the Fast and the Furious he acts aloof and cool.

With Bronze Tiger i wanted him to look like a friend to Rick Flag Sr. so the dialog probably came off that way. In what I've written recently hes more seriouse and commanding with Rick Flag Jr. His wealth and power factor in later.

Wahlberg was my first choice but i thought people would think hes a bad actor.

Damn man you're really writing a lot of stories. I'm writing this story because when i was writing my Superman 2 story i just couldnt figure out what to write about and then i remembered my casting i was doing. Cant wait to read yours. What is it about?

THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 2/2/2010, 3:39 PM
Well, My story is goign to be about Deadshot being brought into the Squad, the roster will feature my favs: Deadshot, Rick Flag Jr., Bronze Tiger, Nightshade, Nemesis, Count Vertigo, Plastique and Captain Boomerang.

It will be a bit political, heavily featuring "The Wall" and her battles in DC.

I will also make Jr. a bit older, about the same age as Jeffrey Dean Morgan, I will probably cast Neal McDonough for the role I have wanted to write somethign for him for a while, and I think he would play off Morgan well.

Morgan is the ideal Deadshot, I don't really like LEE's pick for the role.

My pick for Boomerang is definately David Wenham. He is a bit older, but he is still in great shape, is Austrailian, and would kick ass. I think he could also bring out the laghter side of Boomer. Mix Faramir with Friar Carl and you got Boomer.

I have a lot of ideas ratling around my head, and a lot of works in progress's were lost when my computer was fried, so I am starting anew. I have a half finished Superman, an outline for X-Men 6, a outline for Suicide Squad, a Justice League outline, a nearly complete Justice League sequel, and a Batman 7 outline.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 2/2/2010, 4:44 PM
KI$$ IT!!



; P
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 2/2/2010, 4:45 PM
Seriously though....

JDM is already two DC comic book characters and could be a third (LOBO), think about it! : P
Batmanknight
Batmanknight - 2/2/2010, 6:59 PM
Thats an interesting way to do the story. The books mainly focused on Flag in the beginning so i chose to go that way. Plus the Jihad was their biggest enemy so i thought i had to do it.

McDonough would be a good older Flag. They dont look much a like though.

I think Boomerang should be older. Plus i plan to bring in his son if i ever write a sequel.

HAWK you got to finish those Superman and Batman stories man lol. Those are the best.

@LEE-Ok maybe he does look Bad Ass enough, but i dont think he could act. I dont recognize him from anything and he looks too bronze with no brains.

I dont think he'll be LOBO and Losers people wont associate with DC and Watchmen is more than just a CBM its a great story.
THEHAWK
THEHAWK - 2/2/2010, 7:47 PM
@LEEE. Hardy is alright, but he just isn't Deadshot. Deadshot is one of my favorite characters and Hardy just don't got it.

And I seriously doubt that he will be Lobo. I mean the only name we heard before the project died was that someone mentioned Clancy Brown's name for Lobo, but that is it.

@Batmanknight. I know it was focused on Flag, but everyone remembers Deadshot the most from it. He is my fav from the team, him and the Wall. So I am focussing the story on them two, and have Flag as a secondary.

Well, Wenham is about 35, he could have a wee laddie of a son. But I am going with a younger one in my story.

I have to rewrite about half of my Superman 2 story. I am writing it as a stand alone story as well as a sequel. ANd Batman 7 will take a while. I mainly want ot bring him back so I can do Justice League.
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