"The Amazing Spider-Man" What Should Happen Part 5

Whoever shall read this... PLEASE HELP ME WITH GRAMMAR I'M ONLY 11!

Part 5...

By MRLONGCAPE - Jul 19, 2011 01:07 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

14."Ow.. Ow... OW! Peter yelled, "Sorry!" Gwen said, "you know cleaning up wounds isn't my style." Peter stood up and said, "You know how, today went obviously wacked? Well I've been thinking, that Lizard or whatever his name is now, somebody has to stop it, something that can match that reptile's own, I've been thinking about this for a while"... We see a bunch of costume designs of the suit for Spider-Man, "OOO, I like this one," Gwen said "Are you sure? I mean it's good and all but really that suit, it looks like someone made basketballs covering out of that suit." "Alright, fine if you don't want my help then do this by yourself. Speaking of which do you wanna like have dinner with me and my Dad?" "Um Okay, alright dinner with you and your dad." "Great, Okay so should I go through the window?" "Yeah that'd be great actually."

15."PRKKKERR PRRRKKKER! PRRRKKKER" "Nargh"! THE NEXT DAY.... "Help"! "Help"! "any one"! (P.O.V:) we are seen falling down a building before Peter shoots a web and another, and he does quadruple summmersaults i the air before he shoots another web and flexes his stomach and he flips and sees the person, he then flips and lands on the sidewalk, "What's the problem Mam?" "Those assholes took my car!" Spider-Man then shoots two webs at nearby buildings and he launches himself into the air and then jumps from the building to shoot another web then he flies through the air shooting his web balls at them knocking one of them unconscious and lands on top of the vehicle knocking the remaining ones out and jumping in front of the car to web the bumper and (no more P.O.V) web rodeo it around then releasing it the shooting a web capture around the car. "You Menace"! "You Could've killed us all"! "Wow talk about a tough crowd." Spider-Man then swings away.

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RunDTC
RunDTC - 7/19/2011, 2:56 PM
First!

dude.....who says wacked?
RunDTC
RunDTC - 7/19/2011, 2:57 PM
and change your avatar! I called/dibbed/claimed/set it first.
canadianturd
canadianturd - 7/20/2011, 5:45 PM
As far as I know, there`s no rule about ownage of avatars around here. DarkDetetctive, if you want use TDKR teaser poster as your avatar you go right ahead!

If you are indeed 11, this is very good stuff!

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