The First Scene of The Web of Spider-Man

The First Scene of The Web of Spider-Man

The first scene is here. It is still a rough draft and will need some editing. Be sure to give feedback.

By munyman9 - Mar 04, 2013 04:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The Web of Spiderman script
[ /- change of scenery]
[//- new scene]
Scene 1
The Fire
Peter (narrate) - who am I? My name is Peter Parker. But believe me, you don’t want to know who I really am…
/
Quentin Beck- (studying notepad) okay Mr. Brown, good to see you again. Tell me have the exercises for your noise problem been working?
Brown- They’ve been working, but still noises like fire trucks, and car alarms set me off.
QB.- well, I guess that’s an improvement.
(cut to a man outside smoking. He throws his cigarette in the bushes outside the office.)
(cut back to QB. And Mr. Brown)
QB.- okay so today I want to try something new. I’m going to play some music, starting quiet, and progressively getting louder. I want you to tell me when it gets too loud for you.
(he turns on the music at a very low level.)
(cut to a trail of smoke slowly moving through a window in the office. It finds its way into an alarm which goes off.)
Brown- (starts to breath heavily.)
QB.-(runs over to brown) calm down, you can do this.
(Brown begins to shout. He suddenly lunges at Quentin. Quentin tries to shake him off, he finally does, beaten and scratched in the face with blood trickling down. The ceiling starts to creak as the fire starts consuming the room. QB looks up at the ceiling, it collapses, separating him and Brown, along with the window. Fire and ash rains down, he screams and passes out. Fade to black.)
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About The Author:
munyman9
Member Since 2/4/2013
I love writing and comic books, so I figured this is the place. I love Spiderman, Batman, Nightwing and X-Men.
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