THE WOLVERINE [Part 1]

THE WOLVERINE [Part 1]

Hey Bubs, this is my [the first part] vision of my new upcoming movie, if you don't like my vision it's your opinion, but if your comment is a little too crude, don't expect me to tolerate it...

By CyclopsWasRight - Apr 08, 2012 07:04 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

-THE SCREEN IS PITCH BLACK

1. "My name is Wolverine, I'm the best there is at what I do, but what I do, ain't very nice..."

-CUTS TO LOGAN SITTING ON A CHAIR, STARING INTO THE HALF EMPTY BOTTLE OF BEER.

2. *sniff* "Ugh! Can I get another round of this please?" "

-SHOT OF THE BARTENDER GIVING HIM ANOTHER BOTTLE OF BEER.

3."Is there something bothering you westerner? Are you drinking to forget?"
"I'm drinking to remember, bub.."

-SHOTS OF A FEW MEN GOING INTO A BAR, THEY LOOK SUSPICIOUS, ONE OF THEM IS CARRYING A KNIFE.

4."Hey you! What are you doing in our spot? Get out of here westerner!"
"Bub, I don't want any trouble, sit somewhere else.."
"I don't think you heard us! Get out!" SHOT OF ONE OF THE THUGS PULLING A KNIFE.
"I don't think you heard me.." *Snikt* *Snikt*

5." So that's how you want to play it huh?"

-SHOTS OF WOLVERINE GETTING OUT OF HIS SEAT, SLICING ONE OF THE THUGS ARMS OFF. AND GRABBING A DIFFERENT THUG BY THE HEAD, WITH WOLVERINE STABBING THE THUG IN THE FACE.

6. "Animal, I shall cut your throat for killing my friends!"
"You don't want to do that, bub..."

-SHOT OF THE THUG RUNNING TOWARD WOLVERINE, BUT BEFORE HE COULD ATTACK, WOLVERINE GRABS HIM BY THE NECK, STEPS ON HIS FOOT AND SLICES HIS BODY UPWARDS.

7. *Snikt* *Snikt* "Told you..."
"Who...Who are you?! Animal!!"
"My name is Logan, bub.."

-SHOT OF LOGAN GRABBING HIS BEER BOTTLE AND HEADING OUTSIDE THE DOOR..

-CUTS TO BLACK

-THE WOLVERINE.


-SHOT OF LOGAN WALKING OUTSIDE THE BAR, TOO DRUNK TO REALIZE SOMEONE IS WATCHING HIM FROM AFAR, THE SILHOUETTE IS GIGANTIC, WEARING ARMOR THAT IS OF A SAMURAI, HIS NAME, IS THE SILVER SAMURAI, HE IS SENT ON A MISSION TO ASSASSINATE LOGAN.

-"When will we get to attack, samurai?"
"Soon, do not worry. He is not getting far."

-SHOTS OF THE SILVER SAMURAI AND HIS NINJA CLAN JUMPING ON ROOFTOPS SILENTLY, WITH THEIR TRAIL ON LOGAN VERY CLOSE.

-*sniff* *sniff* SNIKT! SNIKT!
[I smell something familiar, it smells as though the blade were belonged to Shinigen, and I, Logan, am dating his daughter, Mariko. I turn around, not in surprise, but in excitement, because Shinigen is kind enough to let me slice and dice up his soldiers.]

"RAAAAGH, LET'S DANCE!!!!!!!"

-"Attack now!!!"

-SHOTS OF THE NINJA CLAN JUMPING DOWN FROM THE ROOFS, AND LANDING AROUND LOGAN.

-SHOT OF A SOLDIER RUNNING TO LOGAN, BUT ONLY TO BE GRABBED BY THE NECK, AND BEING SLIT IN THE THROAT. THE OTHER SOLDIER RUNS TO HIM, BUT LOGAN THROWS THE BODY TO THE SOLDIER, AND STABS BOTH OF THEM, PUSHING THEM TO THE WALL, WHILE YELLING, IN A MATTER OF MINUTES, BODY PARTS ARE BEING SLICED UP, AND LOGAN IS THE LAST ONE STANDING.. WITH A VICIOUS LOOK ON HIS FACE.

-"SHOW YOURSELF SAMURAI!!!!!!!!!!"
"Here I am, Wolverine."
"I'm gonna gut your insides out, and then I'm going to feed you to the dogs, how's about that?"

-SHOT OF LOGAN ABOUT TO BE ATTACKED, THEN HE GETS STOPS, ONLY TO SHOW THAT HE WAS HIT BY POISONOUS SHURIKENS, THE THROWER IS REVEALED TO BE A WOMAN, IN HER LATE 20'S, THE WOMAN'S NAME IS YUKIO.

-"Logan-San, gotcha!"

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TheGambitFreak
TheGambitFreak - 4/8/2012, 8:48 PM
Sweet. Man, I hope this film doesn't let me down. Come on Frank Miller's Tan and Brown costume!
CyclopsWasRight
CyclopsWasRight - 4/8/2012, 10:46 PM
@deadpoolbeatsall, Bub don't you remember? He has the dogtags, and Gambit told him his name at the end of the horrible Wolverine movie, his name is Logan.
TheSoulEater
TheSoulEater - 4/9/2012, 5:15 AM
Here's my "Opinion" and i don't mean this disrespectfuly, but you want it candidly, you'll get it candidly down to the nitpickiness of it.

He'd call the bar tender Bub, not friend, he wouldn't refer to him as bar tender either.

the opening is cliche' but would make sense if this were in Japan, that is where I'm guessing this is. And honestly while this scene shows a side of wolverine we WANTED to see in his own movie the first time, it should be more substantial a confrontation to just have him basically reinact what he does in Xmen 1 in front of Rogue. If he's going to take them out, have them be mobsters not only bossing him around but owning the place he happens to be in; again the setting of Japan would make it something new we haven't seen, and the threat of the foes would warrant Logan going gorey on them like that. I mean we've seen him slice a shot gun and a blade before in a bar fight, so just another knife is old hat.

Instead of him saying who he is, have him say his name is Logan when asked by the bar keeper, then Silver Samurai finishes "He's the wolverine....Login San..."

We see silver Samurai wielding his radiated sword because his family runs the thugs he just took out, THEN we cut right before they fight and the titles show wolverine.


Basically what I'm saying is, I see what your going for in terms of showing Wolverines savage side, but it needs to feel and look NEWER.

Thats all.

I hope this wasn't taken as crude.
CyclopsWasRight
CyclopsWasRight - 4/9/2012, 10:49 AM
on another note, Logan speaking to the bartender, he was speaking in Japanese...
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