My Superman Story

My Superman Story

This is how I think a great Superman movie can be made.

By The4thWall - May 01, 2010 08:05 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The film begins with the scientists of Krypton finding a large mass in the center of the planet. They remove it, which is a large, monstrous creature that they name Doomsday. Doomsday is able to destroy most of the planet, before he is captured and shot into space. Months later, Jor-El concludes that the planet will die from an unknown occurrence. When Krypton is being destroyed, Jor-El goes to the computer Brainiac and asks to prepare the escape pod for his newborn son, Kal-El. Brainiac asks about the other children of Krypton. Jor-El says that he wishes he could help them, but he needs to help his son. Kal-El is sent to Earth as Krypton collapses. Kal-El grows up as Clark Kent on Earth and becomes an editor at the Daily Planet. After all of these years, remains of Brainiac are found on a distance planet. Brainiac is reborn and he makes his way to find the blood of the last Kryptonian. Brainiac lands on Earth and takes on the body of local mobster named Milton Fine. Fine takes a job at the Daily Planet where he attacks Clark, revealing him as Superman to the world. Clark and Milton fight, where Clark is able to destroy the connection between Brainiac and Fine and kill him. Brainiac then goes in himself and fights Clark, but is overpowered by Clark. Clark, thinking he has won, takes Brainiac into space and throws him of into the distance. Brainiac flows aimlessly around space, where he is able to locate Doomsday (who escaped his prison), reeking havoc on Oa. The Green Lanterns fight him off before Brainiac is able to capture Doomsday with a shrinking ray he found on Oa. Brainiac returns to Earth, where he sees that Clark is having difficulty adjusting to life with the world knowing his secret. Superman goes to the Fortress of Solitude, where he finds Brainiac waiting for him. Brainiac unleashes Doomsday on Superman and they have a brutal fight, in which Brainiac constantly changes the hologram of where they are fighting (to confuse Superman about his surroundings and to give Doomsday more objects to hurt Superman with). Doomsday seemingly kills Superman. Brainiac leaves his body to rot in the Fortress while he and Doomsday slowly destroy Earth, in order to build a new Krypton, using Clark’s blood to create the new Kryptonians. Superman’s remains are taken by a robot servant in the Fortress, who was deprogrammed temporarily during the fight. The robot begins to nurse him back to health. All while this happens, Brainiac and Doomsday are destroying the planet, having destroyed Metropolis. Lex Luthor finds out that Brainiac has the blood of Superman, and intends to steal it. After months, Superman returns with long hair. In order to fully fight Brainiac and Doomsday together, Superman creates a black suit that will gather all of the force of the Sun into him. Superman confronts the duo and a large fight breaks out. Out of anger for everything that has happened, Superman kills Brainiac and Doomsday. Having lost much blood during the fight, Superman faints. When he comes to, he flies to Metropolis and sees all the destruction that has happened. He sees a newspaper on the ground that says politician Morgan Edge will help bring Metropolis back to its glory. Superman drops the paper and continues to look for any sign of life in the ruined city (mainly Lois Lane). The screen cuts to black as he begins to worry and shout out her name.

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Vafrous
Vafrous - 5/1/2010, 10:32 PM
Nice work,I enjoyed reading this....
The4thWall
The4thWall - 5/1/2010, 10:47 PM
@GambitAcesOfSpades thanks, man. it took some time
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 5/2/2010, 3:15 AM
Very very nice work @ 4TH Wall!!!

A hell yes to DOOMSDAY all the way, great read and thumbs up dude, kudos!

I like too how you brought GREEN LANTERN's into it!
Vafrous
Vafrous - 5/2/2010, 4:42 AM
LEE,Whats your avatar?...is it the Tic?
1chris2
1chris2 - 5/2/2010, 6:32 AM
parasite would also make a great villain for the films,but great job.
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 5/2/2010, 10:10 AM
Of course its the TICK?!?

: D

Spoooooooooooooooooooon!
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 5/2/2010, 10:34 AM
ANIL @ Pimping in other peoples FAN-FIC is taking it a tad too far lol!!! : P

And hey, you've got comments man, go 'n' look!
The4thWall
The4thWall - 5/2/2010, 11:18 AM
@Anil Rickly, thanks man. I do need to think about the other stuff and what you said does help out. Also, I'm going to check out your stories right now
anonymous
anonymous - 5/2/2010, 3:23 PM
Awesome story, absolutely fantastic. I also wrote ideas for four Superman movies. I know its a bit of a read but here it is...

Start of the first movie showing Krypton in its final days. It has been a time of chaos and panic. Recent earthquakes have caused devastating amounts of damage across the planet and many Kryptonians are in need of help. During this time, martial law was brought upon the Kryptonian people by the Kryptonian high council and the leader of restoring order to the planet is General Zod. However, Zod becomes corrupted and he and a group of radical soldiers under his control try to take over the planet by overthrowing the Kryptonian high council. Chaos ensues and battles are fought, but Zod is defeated and brought to trial. He is sentenced to be imprisoned for a set amount of time and is sent in a rocket capsule, where he is frozen briefly, into a ring orbiting around the planet to serve out his sentence, with a computer chip engrained in his forehead to rehabilitate him during the jail sentence. This is the set way that Kryptonians get rehabilitated and serve out jail time; it’s in the comics-before the phantom zone was built.

Jor-el is one of the leading scientists on Krypton and is a member of the Krypton high council. He decides to look into the earthquakes, while the rest of the council focuses on restoring order and peace to the planet. He does research into the core and landmass plates of the planet in the wastelands of Krypton and discovers that the core is unstable and will set off a chain reaction in a short amount of time and will destroy the planet. He comes back to the capital city of Krypton in his ship and tries to warn the high council about Krypton’s fate, but they will not listen to reason, since they do not want to cause anymore panic in the community after having experienced Gen. Zod’s rebellion and the earthquakes that took place, which they believe in simply the planet shifting its plates according to their computer system, Brainiac. Jor-el is forbade to interfere in these matters anymore or will suffer great consequences. However, he has secretly built an experimental space ship to be able to leave the planet, but has only been able to build one in the time and resources he had. He plans to send his son, Kal-el or Superman, away if his research proves true. Jor-el then travels to the central unit computer on Krypton in the capital city, which houses Brainiac in order to see why Brainiac disagrees with his findings. Jor-el discovers that Brainiac lied about the plate shiftings, so that he could gather all of Krypton’s information and escape the planet before it was destroyed. Brainiac is an artificial intelligence central computer that was built to store all information of Krypton and would control everything that ran on computer on Krypton. However, Brainiac planned to one day take over the planet for himself, using Krypton’s technology against the people and create android armies to rule over the people. Brainiac reasoned that his secret plans would not come to fruition and that the Kryptonians would leave him to be destroyed if they knew that the planet was going to explode and would try to save the people instead, so Brainiac sacrificed the planet’s citizens to save himself.

Brainiac then tries to call Krypton’s planetary police force to kill Jor-el, who escapes to his home and sends Kal-el in the spaceship to Earth before Krypton explodes. Brainiac downloads his memory into an android and gets into a spaceship he created to escape the explosion. Also, when Krypton explodes the prison ring orbiting around the planet’s equator explodes but General Zod’s capsule and a few other Krytonian prison capsules are knocked out of the prison ring and escape the blast when Krypton explodes.

Kal-el then reaches Earth, crash-landing into a field around Smallville, Kansas and is discovered by the Kent’s who are driving home. The Kents show compassion toward the boy and decide to take him in as one of their own, calling him Clark Kent. The next sequence shows Clark as a teenager going to high school trying to fit in, while discovering his secret powers, and saving people in danger along the way. He also briefly falls in love with Lana Lang, a friend of his in high school and whom he develops a relationship with. Clark later inquires about his powers and his parents relay to him that he is an alien, showing him his spaceship and a crystal that came with the spaceship in the process. Clark then decides to try and reason things out and discover who he truly is. He embarks on a voyage, leaving his family and Lana behind and ends up in the Arctic around the North Pole. He spends time there and dealing with the pressure of being an alien throws his crystal in anger towards the horizon. In a matter of moments, a giant fortress is constructed out of Krypton’s unique technology and metals that was used for the buildings of Krypton. Clark enters the fortress and finds all sorts of computer information and unique features in the fortress, which is later dubbed the Fortress of Solitude, and Clark activates a computer image of Jor-el, which tells him about his history and who he is.

Later, Clark travels to Metropolis and lands a job at the Daily Planet as a reporter and meets Lois Lane, who is just a friend to him at the moment. At night, he becomes a hero in red and blue tights with a big s, his family crest, on his chest saving people and fighting crime, since he decides to use his powers for good. The people of Metropolis give him the name, Superman, and praise him for his good works. It is at this time that Zod and Brainiac crash land on Earth. Brainiac gets Zod out of his capsule and both decide to come in league with one another to take over Earth. Both come into Metropolis and other parts of the globe and cause all sorts of damage. Superman eventually tries to stop them but is easily defeated. He then goes back to the fortress of solitude and asks Jor-el for advice in stopping them. However, Brainiac and Zod come to the Fortress and find out everything about Superman and who he is. They nearly kill him and destroy the fortress. Superman in his weakest moment is revived by Jor-el, who uses a Kryptonian healing crystal that he made and sent to earth with Superman to heal Superman.

Superman returns to the world after a period of training and preparing to defeat Zod and Brainiac after his last encounter with them at the fortress of solitude. Brainiac is destroyed by Superman and Zod and Superman have a tremendous battle on the streets of Metropolis. Zod is defeated and retreats to Smallville, where he kills Lana Lang, and tries to kill the Kents as well at their homestead. Superman, in a fit of rage comes close to turning to evil and almost kills Zod, but Jonathan Kent, Clark’s earth father, and Martha Kent, Clark’s earth mother, stop him from doing so and reason with him. Clark then takes another device that Jor-el built, a second dimensional generator, and places the weakened Zod into the second dimension, a prison dimension, known as the Phantom Zone, where Zod spends the remainder of his days. Clark then finds a second crystal hidden in his spaceship and goes back to the Arctic to repair the Fortress of Solitude. There were only two Kryptonian healing crystals in his spaceship when he was sent to Earth because Jor-el was only able to acquire two of them, since Krypton was about to be destroyed. Superman is hailed as a hero and is accepted into society and Clark starts to find love with Lois Lane after a period of time.

However in the second movie, a blood sample is found of Superman on the streets of Metropolis from the fight with Zod and and is brought to Lex Luthor who uses it to create a clone with stem cell research of Superman, known as Bizarro, which is in league with Luthor to try and control the world. He tries to use Bizarro to frame Superman and make him hated in the public eye, so he can come riding in on the emotions of the people and take over. Luthor also discovers Kryptonite and tries to kill Superman by those means as well. Superman and Lois Lane also fall in love and develop their relationship further. Later, Bizarro is defeated after many battles and Superman finds him a nearby planet for him to live on and Lex Luthor is sent to prison.

Then in the third movie, Superman fights Doomsday. Doomsday is General Zod’s son and wants revenge for Superman putting his father in the Phantom Zone. Doomsday then mortally wounds Superman, following the death of Superman storyline, but Lois who was brought to the Fortress of Solitude in the second movie by Superman, when he told the truth about himself, decides, under Jor-el’s instruction to use the final Kryptonian healing crystal to revive Superman, but this is the last time, since there are only two crystals in the spaceship that was sent to earth with Superman. Superman defeats Doomsday by constructing a Kryptonite bomb under Jor-el’s direction, which strips away all of Doomsday’s powers, and later becomes the earth’s hero forever.

Then in a fourth movie, some Kryptonians could come to Earth to bring back Superman to their homeworld of New Krypton. These could be some of the prisoners in the planetary prison ring that could have had their capsules survive Krypton’s explosion and have landed in different parts of different galaxies. These Kryptonians would band together and make a new home world their own, just like Krypton, and then search remaining galaxies for other survivors then finding Superman. He would leave and go to New Krypton, only to be confronted by Darkseid trying to take over the planet. Darkseid would take over and then Superman would band together with the other Kryptonians to free the planet. He would defeat Darkseid and later return to Earth, calling it his true home planet.
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