Spectacular Spider-man Pt 1

Spectacular Spider-man Pt 1

Part 1 of my Spider-man trilogy set within the MCU

By ComicalDisaster - Aug 21, 2011 06:08 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

So in my first article I wrote a short script for a Marvel post-credits scene that would set up Peter Parker/Spider-man in the MCU if the rights ever reverted back to MARVEL. Now I'm going to give a description of how I'd like a trilogy to go.

The Spetacular Spider-man

The movie starts in a SHEILD interagation room with 16 year old Peter and Nick Fury talking. Peter has come to SHEILD for help with Norman Osborn, who is threatining him and his aunt and girlfriend. Fury asks Peter to explain how he got his powers and in a few brief flashbacks of the spider biting a nerdy, spotty Peter at Oscorp industries, him discovering his powers (like climbing his bedroom wall, dodging Flash Thompson as he swings for Peter) Trying to earn money as a wrestler, letting the robber escape, the death of Uncle Ben, a quick swing after the robber, catching him and realising it was the guy he let go and then finally donning the proper suit and fighting crime. All this within the first 20 minutes.
Then Nick asks whats happining with Norman Osborn and then maybe another 10 minutes showing Osborn injecting himself with Oz and becoming stronger and faster but losing his mind and becoming insane. He knows Peter is Spider-man because the spider that bite him was genetically engineered with Oz. Osborn had been watching Peter to see how he developed and decided to use it on himself. 4 months after being bitten, Peter is called to Osborns Penthouse where Norman is waiting for him in his goblin costume with his new mode of transport, the glider. He tells Peter that he works for him now and will do what he tells him otherwise his family and friends would die. Peter leaves and is terrified and doesn't know what to do so finally asks for help. He sees the news footage of The Avengers and SHEILD fighting the alien invasion and decides to ask them for help.

It's at this point I should probably mention that Norman Osborn/Green Goblin would be a mixture of 616 and Ultimate version. To begin with he is akin to 616, donning a goblin costume, flying about on his glider, throwing pumpkin bombs and the like. But as he takes more and more Oz he starts to deform, develop the likes of horns and ridges on his back until before the final battle with Spidey he takes injection after injection until he's similar to the Ultimate version.



Anyway after those flashbacks, Fury tells Peter that he'll have to do this on his own, but that SHEILD and himself would be keeping a very watchful eye on him and whenever Osborn attacks, SHEILD would help within moments. Peter, frustrated but tired and kind of relieved, heads home. He swings across the NYC skyline and is almost hime when he sees somebody robbing a jewellry store.
He swings down to stop it when he notices it's Shocker. Shocker immediantly attacks with Spidey dodging and quipping all the way ("Who you supposed to be? 'The Vibrtor?'?" and "Wow, the only shocking thing about you is your awful dress sense, and those gauntlet thingys...")

One of the things the Ramni movies sort of ignored unfortunatly, was Spidey and his amazing wit and how he's piss off a lot of his enemies by cracking jokes and throwing mild insults at them. Love that about the comics and would love to see it on screen.

Like Goblin, Shocker is a mixture of Ultimate and 616. The costume is a rough version of the 616 and obviously made in a rush and he is usually defeated easily like in the Ultimate universe.



So after Shocker is dealt with and hanging from a lamppost by his feet, Peter heads home and Aunt May is waiting for him. It's 2:00am on a school night and she isn't impressed. Peter, unable to come up with a good excuse (Aunt May has called the Daily Bugle and Gwen to see if he was there), is grounded and set to him room, where he takes off the suit and packs it away in a suitcase under his bed, along with his web shooters.

Next morning, Peter is getting ready for school and is shown packing his suit and web shooters into his school bag. As he's eating breakfast, Aunt May tells him to be home by 9:00am and he's only allowed to go to school or the Bugle.

As he's walking to school he meets up with Gwen and they kiss. Peter tells her about last night and how he's now under watch from SHEILD and grounded.

Once they arrive at school and walking through the halls, Flash floors him and then starts laughing at him, calling him names etc. Beside him is Kong, also laughing and wearing a T-shit with spideys face on it.

In class, Peter has fallen asleep and the teacher wakes him up. The othe rstudents laugh as Flash fires a spitball at him from behind. Right now it's obvious Peter is miserable in school.

Outside the school during lunch, Peter and Gwen meet up with Harry Osborn. Harry invites them both around to his penthouse and tells Peter that his dad would like a chat with him. The pressure from meeting with Norman Osborn again, Flash bullying him at school, fighting crime as Spider-man and the lack of sleep he's been having recently all comes to the surface and then comes the final straw when Flash hits him on the head with a football. As Flash and friends laugh, Peter takes the ball and bursts it. Angry, Flash squares up to Peter and throws a punch at him. Peter dodges and gives him a right hook that sends him flying. As he lies on the floor crying and clutching his face, Peter realises what he's done and even tries to apologize to Flash as he's led off by a teacher to the Headmasters office. Gwen, Harry, Kong and the rest are shocked as the school nurse tends to Flash.

to be continued......

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dmm5
dmm5 - 8/21/2011, 9:55 AM
I like how Green Goblin goes from 616 to Ultimate through out the film, but I would love to see Osborn mentally change 1/4 or a tad bit more through film. Only Spidey needs a 10 to 20 minute recap of his origin, hell even recap as the intro music/credits are rolling. Good job!
fearlessmontano
fearlessmontano - 8/21/2011, 8:30 PM
i dont like the part were it starts of with him in the interrogation room of shield. you have to remember that all the marvel studios movies are tied into the avengers and the mcu but there movies are there own. iron man, thor, the incredible hulk, and captain america all had there own movies with little hints of a tie in. it would also be a good idea for spider man to accidently find the hella carrier, because if you remember in the comic books they didnt really want spider man on the avengers. thats why i want to see him in the mcu the most. he found out how much the avengers were making so he kept trying to apply but kept getting turned down until he followed them to a mission they were on and contributed to them finishing it. and on top of that i think spiderman could handle his own villains...just sayin, hes not a b*tch...
kong
kong - 8/22/2011, 3:53 AM
I like it it's original! It brings me back to the days where i would watch the 90's spidey show with the episodes when Spiderman would be in the helacarrier.
superotherside
superotherside - 8/22/2011, 2:59 PM
interesting... although I'd like the Goblin to be mostly 616 a bit more than you... as I'd like him to have his face slowly deform like the Goblin and so he gets Chameleon to create a mask for him... still good write up...
comiccow6
comiccow6 - 8/25/2011, 4:01 AM
Dude I had the exact same idea for the goblin. I swear it.
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