TMNT Movie - First Draft

TMNT Movie - First Draft

This is how easy it is to adapt TMNT from page to screen. Michael Bay take note.

By DukeAcureds - Mar 21, 2012 05:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Source: ComicBookMovie.com

This didn't take too long to do. After a couple of months of hard work, this could be a real script. It'd be fairly cheap to make, too. Get Zack Snyder to direct in Leibesman's place and bing-bang-boom. Instant TMNT. There's alot of stuff about them NOT being aliens in here.

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EdgyOutsider
EdgyOutsider - 3/21/2012, 11:13 PM
I like the idea but the way you wrote it is too adult oirented and should be focused towards the kids but keeping the darker tone. Shredder didn't fully feel like Shredder but all in all it was decent. This is coming from someone who doesn't care for TMNT.
DukeAcureds
DukeAcureds - 3/22/2012, 7:45 AM
Thanks for reading guys. You're awesome.
I had second thoughts about making Shredder more NY, but I couldn't resist the "you better not probe me" gag.
But I figured April should be what grounds us, like Sam in Transformers.
Again, thanks, guys.
Altair
Altair - 3/22/2012, 9:43 AM
At least they weren't aliens. Good work bro!
AutobotCommander84
AutobotCommander84 - 3/22/2012, 12:18 PM
I'd want a TMNT movie to have at least a PG-13. No PG or R.
AlexDeLarge87
AlexDeLarge87 - 3/22/2012, 12:45 PM
I concur what Altair said ;)
DukeAcureds
DukeAcureds - 3/22/2012, 6:31 PM
Cheers fellas. If I were to do a second draft, I would so have to censor it a lot more. It's more of a scriptment really. Thanks fortaking the time and for the comments.
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