A blinding white light welcomes you to the vast emptyness of space. You are soon comforted by the familiar sight of the moon reassuring you earth is near by. An egg shaped silver spacecraft gaining speed travels toward earth.
On Earth...
Luke: Give me my gun back.
John: I took it away for your own safety. You cant keep trying to rob people.
Luke: I haven't eatin in two days, i'll rob whoever i have to.
John: We don't do that...
(Luke is 20 wearing a red shirt with the number zero on it and ripped up blue jeans and his younger brother John age 17 a plain white shirt with black jeans)
Luke: And why the hell not everyone else on this damn planet is doing it.
John: Stop.
Luke: We gotta get home before it gets dark, we can't stop.
John: Look
(John points upward and points to what seems to be an asteroid drawing a line accross the sky)
Luke: What the hell is that
(The ground shakes as the object enters the forest ahead, John sprints towards the forest)
Luke: John we dont have time for this bullshit, we have to get home before nightfall.
John: And we will! I just have to see it!
Luke: It's probably just a damn rock!
(John and Luke run into the forest and soon begin to see fragments of metal scattered in leaves and stuck in trees)
Luke: What the...
(Luke stops to rip the piece of metal out of the tree as John stop)
John: Definitely not a rock.
(The boys get to a clearing where a pod shaped spacecraft layed damaged and sparking but somehow the core untouched)
John: Wow... what is it?
Luke: I dont know... stay away fro..
(The pod lets out a white smog and a clicking sound is heard faintly, the starteled boys fall down)
Luke: It's gonna blow up we gotta leave.
John: There's something inside of it
(The top unharmed core of the pod unlock and lift to reveal a baby fastened inside)
Luke: Oh my god...
John: Is that a baby?
(Luke grabs Johns head in order to gain his full attention)
Luke: John listen we need to leave now
John: Why
Luke: There's someone coming, give me my gun.
(John hands Luke his gun)
Luke: Let's go...
John: Wait what about the baby?
Luke: We can barely feed ourselves.
John: I'm not leaving him here.
(John takes out a knife to cut the straps holding the baby in the pod but soon realizes the blade of his knife is taking most of the damage)
John: What the hell...
(John looks around the pod and locates a button near one of the restraints)
Luke: Your gonna blow us up
John: Luke who would make a bomb with a baby in it.
Luke: Some sick people
John: Shut up
(John presses the button and the straps widthdraw into the pod, a sound of a branch breaking is heard in the distance, John grabs the baby and they both begin to run)
John: How do you know someone is..
(A gunshot is heard and Luke falls violently to the ground)
John: Shit Luke!!
(John notices the gunshot wound to Lukes right shoulder then holds the baby close and turns to the woods)
John: Whose there!!! Show yourself!!
(A man comes out of the woods)
Cannibal 1: Looks like dinners a bit fiesty tonight....
Luke: 'faintly' John run..
(John backs away in order to make an escape but is stopped by another man behind him)
Cannibal 2: And where are you going?
(Another man picks up Luke)
Cannibal 3: I'll carry this one.
(Cannibal 2 pushes John forward)
Cannibal 2: Start walking kid..
(They walk until they reach the road where a battered vehicle with the engine running is visible)
Cannibal 1: Get in the car.
(John stands his ground. The cannibal pulls a pistol out of his waist and presses it to the back of Johns head)
Cannibal 1: Get in the car.
(John and Luke are put in the back with one of the men while the other two are up front, they pull off and begin driving, John puts a seatbelt around him, the baby and Luke)
Cannibal 3: Ha ha safety first huh kid?
John: Yup
(As the car gains speed John reaches under Luke)
Luke: What are you doing?
John:Trust me
(Cannibal 3 notices John squirming)
Cannibal 3: Hey! Stop!
(John pulls out an automatic pistol from Luke's waist and fires three shots in the drivers seat)
Cannibal 2: Oh shit!
(Cannibal 1 swerves violently and flips the car twice before landing up right, everyone is unconsious Luke is awoken by the babys cries)
Luke: John get up!
(John wakes up and him and Luke both wounded exit the car the limp down the road.....*Thump* They look back and notice the body of Cannibal 1 has been tossed out of the car)
Luke: Ah shit!
(The babys cries grow unbelievebly loud)
Luke: Shut him up!
John: I cant!
(The car starts and Cannibal 2 screams and stomps on the gas racing toward John and Luke)
Luke: We gotta jump out of the way on three!
John: Ok!
Luke: One...
Luke: Two.
(The babys crying stops and suddenly John and Luke are thrown to the ground as a beam of blinding red light exits the babys eyes and to car causing the car to explode immediately on impact)
John: What just happened
Luke: Holy Shit!He just blew up the car!
(The baby faints soon after)
John: We have to take him to dad....
To Be Continued......
All feedback and tips are welcome as long as they're not rude. I've never done this before and i'm just trying it out, although I've been writing up this concept for quite some time in hopes to make it a comic one day, but please dont hesitate to give constuctive criticism or just give a compliment.
Thank You,
TheShadowOfSuperman.