In Blackest Night PT.1

In Blackest Night PT.1

Welcome To The Corps

By Ben100000 - Nov 25, 2010 03:11 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Green Lantern TRICKS Episode 1, Season 1

Air Force Base

A young pilot walks across a road
Pilot: Come on new job
An explosion is heard
Pilot: Oh man Jordan if thats your fault Ferris will kill me
Jordan runs up to a wrecked ship
Jordan: Oh my God
A body of an alien lays on the ground

THEME SONG

Wrecked Ship

Jordan: Are you ok
Alien: No but the ring has choosen
Jordan: Who
Alien: You
Jordan: What does it do
Alien: It is powered by willpower use it for good bring on the legecy of Abin Sur
Jordan: Yes i will
Jordan takes the ring
Jordan puts it on
A green tornado appears over Jordan
A suit is on Jordan's body
Jordan: Hal Jordan, Um uh The Green Lantern yah thats good

Oa

Sinestro and Killowog are shooting lasers
Killowog: I'm not letting POOZERS take me down
Sinestro: Even if that POOZER is Evil Star
Killowog: POOZERS are POOZERS
Evil Star: Green Idots i'll stop with ease
Sinestro: Well lets see
Sinestro & Killowog: In brightest day, in blackest night No evil shall escape my sight Let those who worship evil's might Beware my power Green Lantern's Light
They shoot Evil Star into the wall
Scar appears
Scar: Report to the Power Battery
They teleport there

Main Power Battery

Hal Jordan and Scar are there
Scar: Meet Sinestro your new teacher
Sinestro appears
Hal and Sinestro shake hands
Scar: First thing first Tattooed Man is stealing the first power battery orange
Hal: Great lets start
Hal and Sinestro teleport away
Scar: He's more powerful then ever

Coast City

Hal: I'm home
Tattooed Man throws Hal through the ground
Sinestro looks
A giant Hammer slams Tattooed Man
Hal flies up
Hal: Ow yeah les see taste chainsaw Tattooed Man
A chainsaw cuts the ground
Tattooed Man jumps
A dinosuar tattoo appears
It chases Sinestro
Hal: Taste... LASER
Hal shoots Tattooed Man
Sinestro: Let's go
They teleport away

Oa Temple

Scar: We have done it every species has a Green Lantern
Appa All Apsa: Well all except Human
Scar: We do now Hal Jordan
Ganthet: We will see him
Hal appears
Hal: Hey i was doing something
Scar: It's not important
Hal: What is it
Scar: Parallax is attacking Oa
Hal: Whats Parallax
Scar: A living being that feeds on fear
Hal: Wow

THE END ?

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DaenerysTargaryen
DaenerysTargaryen - 11/25/2010, 5:57 AM
I'm trying to decide whether your a troll or just an idiot. You obviously don't care about the quality of your fan fics and no matter how many times we try to help you you just won't listen. Do you like having people hate on you and your "fics". If you truly cared about trying to make good fics then you would have at least attempted to put some effort into this. This just makes it seem like you just don't give a damn about your writing. It kinda looks like your now intentionally making these horrible just to piss us off. Try harder next time.... But then again I have a feeling your next piece will look just like this. T_T
whysoserious1900
whysoserious1900 - 11/25/2010, 9:09 AM
Man this SUCKS!! This is my first day posting been
checking the site out for awhile this looks like
a 10yr.old wrote it! How did this get posted in the
first place?
whysoserious1900
whysoserious1900 - 11/25/2010, 11:07 AM
SuperDude001@ oh o.k.

Ben@ maybe you should take a little advice from the
older casters didnt realize you was so young you'll
get better..just listen and learn.
Rumblebeast
Rumblebeast - 11/25/2010, 11:29 AM
I didnt know you were so young either...ok i got a suggestion for you Ben 100000...buy a notebook of paper and write your ideas down first. Then organize them into an outline. When you get down what you want, do the same thing three times. After you got three stories or so then post it so people dont start getting mad that you keep posting and posting. So if you like to write, you keep up your writing work and then post it when you have more put together.
comics56
comics56 - 11/25/2010, 12:23 PM
Be 13 isn´t excuse people. I was 13 when I wrote Iron Man 2, it was really bad. But after read the coments I wrote a great [acroding to comments] Hulk fan fic. After that a Thor and an original ,also wrote the first part of the first season of an Ultimates Tv series. I got better because I heard your comments. He must get better with some things ,most of it: Take more than 10 minutes for write a fan fic, less childish histories and a bit [tinny bit] loyal to the comics, also try to make research. The Alien´s name is Abin Sur.
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