Spider-Man Reborn - Part One

Spider-Man Reborn - Part One

A ground-up reboot retelling of the Spider-Man story for (yet another) rebooted universe, hopefully with some surprising along the way. This is my take on the early years of Peter Parker. Written in standard screenplay format so you can read it as a comic, TV script, or film excerpt at your preference.

By Natman - Nov 19, 2015 07:11 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

ISSUE ONE: WITH GREAT POWER (PART ONE)

EXT. NEW YORK CITY SKYSCAPE – NIGHT.
 
 
It’s raining, the city is dark, but the bright, glossy lights make it almost appear like stars.
 
EXT. ALLEY - NIGHT.
 
The street, ground level, we can hear sirens. Two police cars zoom by.
 
LOOK UP
 
The side of the building, climbing higher and faster as we move along until we see a SILHOUETTE clinging to the side of the building.
 
A lot is still in shadow, but we can make out the glassy left eye of SPIDER-MAN’S mask.
 
Spider-man shoots out a web line and leaps from the building.
 
We follow along with THE POLICE as they speed toward their destination, as they drive we move in a circle until we are in front of the cars. There is a shape in the background.
 
SPIDER-MAN swings behind them, also on the prowl.
 
He shoots out another web to grab hold of. He is still a fairly darkened figure, though the passing lights help to reveal him to us in glimpses. Even when in darkness, his menacing eyes show through.
 
There are some characteristics we can notice. His suit is some form-fitting material, something that a man on his budget could have feasibly made. It is either red and black or red and dark blue.
 
The police cars below him take a sharp turn, Spider-man takes it with them, leaping from his web line to the roof of a building, then pouncing from one roof to the next, his gaze still focused on the cars below him.
 
Spider-man leaps into the air again, we follow along above him as he shoots out another web.
  
EXT. JULES’ JEWELERY – NIGHT.
 
 
We are looking down the barrel of a gun. There is a click. It is ready to fire.
 
The gun is pointed at a scared young woman. Her terrified eyes couldn’t be wider.
 

WOMAN

Okay… Okay. Just
Please, calm down.


Now we see the jewel thief. His gun is still pointed right at her, but he’s shaking. He's dressed in a padded yellow and brown outfit, something like a baclava on his face. There is something on his wrist as well, some metal contraption that’s fairly unsightly. 
 

THIEF

Just… Just hurry, d-dammit!

WOMAN

Just take what you need and
Get out of here!

She hands him everything in the register and he helps himself to some of the display items. As she turns away, she almost gives a slight grin.
 

WOMAN

Spider-man is so going to
Kick your ass. 

THIEF

Yeah. Sure. He can try.

The man rushes out of the store.
 
EXT. STREET – NEXT.
 
The man stands on the sidewalk and holds up his bag, triumphantly.
 

THIEF

Ha!

SUDDENLY something jerks him, he falls backward onto the sidewalk.
  
The man looks up to see…
 
SPIDER-MAN, visible for the first time, bathed in the glow of the street light. He’s looking down at the thief and holding his bag.
 

SPIDER-MAN

I understand not knowing what to
Get that special someone, but this
Is a little much. You don’t need
To take the whole store.

The thief rises to his feet, clanging his metal wristbands together. They seem to vibrate.
 

THIEF

You don’t know who you’re dealing
With. 

SPIDER-MAN

Uh-huh. Yeah, I’m just gonna go.
I was under the impression there
Was a threat in the area.

THIEF

What? Yeah, uh, I mean, I’m
The threat… pal. So you
Best back off, cuz I’m comin’
Down to, uh, to spider town.

SPIDER-MAN

You just wait for the police.
They’ll be along shortly.
They will take you somewhere
Safe.

THIEF

Ain’t nobody taking me nowhere!

SPIDER-MAN

I can't believe I left Panda Express to
deal with your nonsense. You at least
have a name, Quilt Guy?

The thief strikes a pose, trying to give the illusion of power.
 

THIEF

(dramatic tone) Yeah, call me…
The Shocker.

SPIDER-MAN

That’s just grossly inappropriate.

SHOCKER throws out his hands as if he’s about to punch Spidey, instead sending a mass of vibrations through the street. It’s like he's firing earthquakes.
 
Spider-man jumps out of the way with ease, landing in a crouched position behind Shocker.
 

SPIDER-MAN

Um, this is embarrassing, but your
obvious weakness is showing. 

Shocker raises his arms to fire another shot.
 

SPIDER-MAN

These are the source of your power,
right? 

Shocker’s grip tightens.
 

SPIDER-MAN

What happens if I do this?

Spider-man FIRES WEBBING at Shocker’s HANDS. Shocker fires once more, but the shock is directed at HIMSELF. He begins to convulse as if having a seizure, his eyes roll back in his head and he falls to the ground.
 

SPIDER-MAN

Well, it's a good thing that wasn't an enormous
waste of my time.

The police cars approach. Spider-man shoots a web into the air, leaping up and taking off into the night.
 
 
EXT. MIDTOWN HIGH – DAY.
 
Establishing shot of the high school.
 

MARY JANE (OS)

          Are you kidding me? 

INT. HIGH SCHOOL (HALLWAY) – NEXT.
 
 
Peter stands against his locker talking to Mary Jane.
 

PETER

          No, MJ. I am not kidding me.

MARY JANE

          How could you not have told me about
          This?

PETER

          I… I…

MARY JANE

          You’re taking a course at the University?
          Peter! This is so awesome for you!

PETER

Um, thanks? It's Connors' class, by the way.
Think I'll be in there with that friend you keep
telling me about. Felicia something?

 

MARY JANE

          How long has this been going on, Mr. Doesn’t
          Tell his best friend anything ever.

PETER

          It’s pronounced Parker. And this has been going
          On for a week, or a week tomorrow, technically.

 

MARY JANE

          Wow. How’s it going? 

PETER

          Pretty tough, actually. Well, obviously.
          But I think I can keep up, so far. Connors
          Seems like a pretty together guy. 

MARY JANE

          Oh, who is he? Feel like I know the name.

PETER

          Before our time. Before his accident, he
          Was one of the leading biologists in the
          Country. I’ve read most of his stuff. My
          Dad collected it, I guess. Kinda got left to
          Me.

MARY JANE

          Cool. He’s gotta be better than the teaching
          Staff we got around here.

PETER

          Well, yeah. For one, he’s stable.

 
INT. CONNORS’ HOUSE – NIGHT.
 
 
We are in a darkened room, there seems to be only one light source. We pass over a series of terrariums, making out the vague shapes inside. They are all reptiles, mostly lizards with a few snakes.
 
It’s a study, very messy, with one wall lined with cages filled with reptiles. In the center back wall there is a desk, a man sitting at it. This is DR. CURTIS CONNORS. He’s a silhouette, but from his dimly lit outline we can still see that his left arm is missing, he has messy brown hair, and he’s still wearing his lab coat.
  
The desk is very, very messy. There are dozens, maybe hundreds of notes.
 
Connors is scrawling away at the latest of his numerous notepads. He reaches out to take another drink.
 
The bottle is empty. He sets it back down next to an overfilled ashtray. We are not looking at the most stable of men.
 
There is a knock on the door.
 
INT. HALLWAY – NEXT.
 
Connors’ wife, MARTHA, knocks at the door, a vague look of concern on her face. For the most part, her face is blank.
 

MARTHA

Curt?

There is no answer from inside the room.
 

MARTHA

Curt, it’s late. Why don’t you
Come to bed?

Still no answer.
 

MARTHA

(softer)
Curt?

CURT

(mumbles)
Go away.

Martha closes her eyes, standing still, then nods. She steps away from the door.
 
INT. CONNORS' STUDY – NEXT.
 
 
Curt watches the door, perhaps seeing whether or not she will heed his warning, he turns back to his notes. After a moment, Curt runs a sweaty hand through his matted hair. He stands and moves toward the window, opening it. Curt looks out into the night, a look of complete hopelessness on his face.
 
He sees something out of the corner of his eye. A darting red object.
  
Spider-man, swinging casually, weaving his way between the skyscrapers. He checks his watch.

Connors, his brow furrowing. For a moment.
 
FLASHBACK
 
INT. EMPIRE STATE UNIVERSITY SCIENCE LAB – DAY.
 
 
A slightly cleaner, more well kept Connors teaches a fairly full lecture. He is giving some sort of demonstration.

A student, watching intently. His interest and glasses show him as a sciency type, but he is attractive, slender and muscular, tall and thin with dark brown hair. He is PETER PARKER.
 
Move to the student beside him, blonde, taking numerous notes where Peter takes none, and this student notices. From this one gesture we can clearly see that this young man, MAX DILLON, has a competitive streak.
 
Max’s eye goes wide as something EXPLODES.
 
The blast sends Connors back against the wall, the lab table quickly catches fire.
 
Max turns but Peter is GONE.
Much of the crowd is evacuating the room, it’s a mob as the fire spreads.
 
CONNORS
 
Sees his notes catching fire and rushes to save them, burning his remaining hand in the process. He growls in pain as SPIDER-MAN bursts in through the air vent in the ceiling.
 
He leaps through the fire and grabs hold of Connors, who smiles at him thinly.
 
He says something we can’t hear and Spider-man shrugs. Connors points, wide eyed as the fire spreads toward a group of beakers. A moment later, another explosion comes.
 
Spider-man shields Connors from the blast, but a piece of glass flies toward him, slicing at his elbow. He’s taken aback by the blow, but nonetheless he is able to escort Connors to safety.
 
He smashes out the window, allowing himself and Connors to escape to the street below. Spider-man leaves him on the street and swings away, his task done.
 
Connors looks down at a drop of blood on his arm that is not his.
 
END FLASHBACK
 
Connors smiles to himself and turns away from the window.
 

CONNORS

That’s it. 

He quickly moves over to the freezer and pulls it open.
 
Inside is a blood sample. SPIDER-MAN’S blood.
 
Connors takes the sample to his microscope.
  
We see the cells moving under the microscope.
  
Connors sighs, then cleans his glasses on his lab coat.
 

CONNORS

Come on, you bastard. What
Are you? What makes you so special? 

He pulls a tape recorder from his desk.
 

CONNORS

(into recorder)
March 13th. Another blood test today.
Am no closer to finding out what
Makes Spider-Man so... unique. There
Is a significant amount of radiation
In the blood, but I can’t see how it
Wouldn’t have just killed him. If I
Knew who this person was… But I suppose
Heroes have to have their secret identities.
Heroes. I think I knew some once. Um… Let’s
See here… the blood I’m looking at is a complete
Amalgamation of human and arachnid DNA.
It’s boggling, given that these are two
Extremes of genetics. But I suppose all life
Is connected, right? If I could figure out this last
Step of the experiment, I could combine my DNA
With that of a lizard, creating a natural healing
Process that could have unheard of potential. Immunity
To disease, uncharted regenerative capabilities.
But we're just not there. Not yet.

His voice trails off. He looks down at the stub of his left arm.
 
He turns the tape recorder off, then slams his hand down on the table.

INT. LECTURE HALL – DAY.
 
The students sit inside the large auditorium-style classroom. Peter may not be there, but there is another noticeable absence…
 
Everyone looks at the empty desk reading CONNORS.
 
MAX DILLON, Peter’s lab partner, smirking. He reclines back in his seat.
 
Peter rushes in and takes his seat next to Max.
 

MAX

         You’re late. 

PETER

          I noticed.

MAX

          It’s alright. He’s late too.

PETER

          Who?

Max points to the desk.
 

PETER

          Dr. Connors hasn’t shown up yet?

Max shakes his head.
 

MAX

          Another five minutes and we can leave. Again.

PETER

          It’s a shame.

 
Max looks around the classroom.
 

MAX

          Good luck convincing them. I swear it’s like
          They pretend they’re not even paying for this
          Class. We’re here to learn, people.

PETER

          Some of us a little too much.

Max raises an eyebrow.
 

MAX

          What’s that supposed to mean?

Peter shrugs, taking out his notes.
 

MAX

          No, seriously. What’s that supposed to mean?

But Peter’s distracted, something has caught his eye. Max notices, follows Peter’s gaze for a moment, then rolls his eyes.
 
He sees a beautiful young woman with platinum blonde hair. Clearly rich, but we can already tell there’s much more here than another preppy girl this city has far too many of. There’s a lot to this blonde girl, no doubt some mystery, and she’s already caught Peter’s eye. This is FELICIA HARDY.
 
She taps her pencil rhythmically against her knee. Peter’s gaze is frozen on her, but she doesn’t notice.
 

MAX

          Seriously? 

PETER

          What?

 

MAX

          We’re making preparations for the biggest
          Day in our college careers and you’re busy
          Looking at some girl.

 

PETER

          No, I… have a… well, I’m not sure. It’s…
          Max, chill out. Connors isn’t even here yet.
          You really think I’d just let some girl stand
          In the way of everything I believe is
          Important and beneficial to… well, yeah. Okay.
          Good point. Still, she’s cute.

 

MAX

          So what? Are you actually going to do anything
          about it or are you just going to sit here pining?
          This is why this is no place for high school kids.
          Seventeen-year-old hormone bucket thinking
          He's gonna sweep every girl he sees off her feet.

Peter looks down at that.
 

PETER

          I’m not… I don’t know.

MAX

          Uh-huh.

PETER

          It’s just not that simple, okay? I have…
          Relationship issues. 

Max laughs.
 

MAX

          Parker, your relationship issues have relationship
          Issues.

PETER

          Woah, and what basis do you have to go calling
          Me out on this?

Max shrugs.
 

MAX

          You just look like the type. 

PETER

          What type?

MAX

          The type that can’t look at the big picture
          When there’s a pretty girl in front of it.
          Who’ll let everything he’s worked on go for
          Something he can’t even know the outcome of.
          You ask me, it’s pathetic.

PETER

         Good thing  I didn’t. You saying you don’t like her? 

Max eyes her over, then turns away.
 

MAX

          Not my type.

 
The door swings open, slamming against the wall. Dr. Connors enters.
 
He looks strung out, kind of ragged, but does a good job of hiding it from the rest of the class.
 

CONNORS

          Uh, good afternoon, class. I’m late again.
          Let this be a lesson. 

They look at him, expectantly.

CONNORS

I don't really have a follow-up to that.

Peter shrugs, some of the class laughs. Connors just laughs to himself, almost pathetically.
 

CONNORS

          Well, no rest for the wicked. Sorry you
          Guys didn’t get to leave early, but you
          Are paying for the course. So we might
          As well make the best of it, right? 

MAX

(under his breath)
          Right.

CONNORS

          Parker. What were we scheduled to talk
          About today?

Peter skims his notes.
 

PETER

          We were going to get into… let me see
          Here… Ah. We were looking closer at
          Molecular biology with a focus on
          Genetic abnormalities.

CONNORS

          Ah. Yes. Right. Genetic abnormalities.
          God knows this city has enough of those.
          Thank you, Parker. I don’t know what
          I’d do without you.

Peter smiles.
 

CONNORS (cont’d)

          But. Before we get into this, there’s
          One thing I’ve got to talk to you guys
          About. Something important for the true
          Geeks amongst you. 

He starts writing on the board.
 

CONNORS

          There is a team from the Smithonian that
          Will be attending the university. We’ll
          Be having a sort of, well, contest if you
          Will. Think of it as the biggest damn
          Invention fair you can imagine.
          Some of the top
          Scientists in the country will be
          Judging your work. And, in case I
          Forgot to mention it, a cash prize.
          So don’t screw up, and I wish you
          All the very best of luck. 

We focus on Max, whose face seems lit up by the news.
 
INT. HALLWAY – LATER.
 
Connors locks up his office and steps out into the hall. Peter catches up with him.
 

PETER

          Dr. Connors?

Connors turns.
 

CONNORS

          Oh. Hi, Peter. You have a question? 

PETER

          Not really. And I’m… I’m sorry if I’m
          Overstepping my boundaries, but…
          Well, you haven’t really been here that
          Often from what I've seen and when you are… I’m really
          Sorry, but I was just wondering if
          Everything was okay.

CONNORS

          I appreciate your concern, Peter. Really.
          But everything’s fine. And you should be
          The last person to worry about this class.
          You’re the best student I have. Which is
          is very unfortunate, considering you're a high schooler.
          But your father would be proud.

PETER

          So would my mother. And my uncle. But yeah,
          I’m sure he would. I hope so, at least. 

Connors nods. He is silent, for a moment.
 

CONNORS

          I knew him, by the way.

 Peter is stunned, he says nothing. 

CONNORS

          Your father. I worked with him... over
          Twenty years ago, now. During the Gulf
          War. He was a great man. 

PETER

          How did you… 

CONNORS

          We were both working for Oscorp, research
          Division. We were partners. Went off into
          The field, the heat of battle, hoping to find
          a treatment for wounded soldiers. Something that
          would get them back on their feet immediately.
          Repair broken bounds, burned flesh, maybe even
          regrow limbs. As you can see, we never quite worked
          it out. All of that war, that mess and he 
          Took his wife with him. Hell of a honeymoon.

PETER

          But they died in a plane crash. If you were
          Working there… it couldn’t have been that
          Long, could it?

CONNORS

          I remember the crash, Pete. I was supposed
          To be on that flight. But then… this happened.

He gestures to his stump of an arm.

CONNORS

          And they kept me in the hospital a little
          Longer. I was supposed to be on that plane
          When it went down. But trust me, I knew your
          Father. Very well. While we were working together, he
          Was one of the best friends I’d ever had.
          One of the best men I’ve ever known. And he
          Would be damn proud of you, trust me. If he
          Can’t, I may have to be proud in his place. 

Peter wipes at his eyes, trying to hide that they are misting over.
 

PETER

          Well, sir, you have your own child to be
          Proud of, right? 

CONNORS

(almost bitter)
          Right.

He checks his watch.
 

CONNORS

          Well, Pete, I should get going. I’ll see
          You in class.

He takes off.
 
Peter stands alone, awkwardly, for a moment before heading off in the other direction.
 
INT. CONNORS' STUDY – NIGHT.
 
 
Curt steps inside and closes the door. There's something pinned to it, but it takes him a moment to register what it is. It's a note. Connors tears it down and steps further into the room to look at it in the light.

It reads: CURT, I'VE TAKEN BILLY TO MY MOTHER'S. I DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS JUST YET, BUT HE CAN'T SEE YOU LIKE THIS. PLEASE, PLEASE SORT YOURSELF OUT.
-MARTHA

He looks at the empty bottle on his desk. In an instant he lunges for it and THROWS it against the wall, shouting in rage. It shatters, broken glass flying all over his paperwork.
 
A lizard tilts its head to look up at him.
  
INT. THE PARKER HOME – NEXT.
 
Aunt May and Peter step inside. There’s a couch in the middle of the room. She steps around it. Peter looks it over for a second.
 

PETER

          How was work?

AUNT MAY

          Oh, you know. Same as always. I don’t
          Know. I’m just doing a little cleaning.

PETER

          Sure thing.

He steps over to the couch and picks up one end… a little too high and a little too easily. Catching himself, he fakes the effort, trying to make it look at least a little strenuous.
 

AUNT MAY

          I can’t get over what an able-bodied
          Young man you’ve become.

Peter smiles and sets the couch down against the back wall.
 

PETER

          Here okay?

AUNT MAY

          That’s fine.

He breathes a pretend sigh of relief and steps away from the couch.
 

AUNT MAY

          So. How was the university? 

PETER

          It’s been… well, things get a little
          Crazy. You know how it is in the
          City. It's tough to keep up with the college
          workload, get there and back and balance that
          course with high school classes. The professor's
          kind of out of it, too.

AUNT MAY

          You mean Connors?

Peter nods.
 

AUNT MAY

          Go easy on him. He’s had it rough,
          And he’s such a nice man.

PETER

          You’ve met him?

AUNT MAY

          Oh, now, I’ve been around forever.
          I’ve seen just about everyone in
          My time. 

PETER

          Come on now. You’re not that old.

AUNT MAY
(smiles)

          Thanks. I think.

He takes a seat.
 
May shrugs, sitting down in a worn recliner. Probably what used to be Uncle Ben’s chair.
 

AUNT MAY

          Everything’s fine, I suppose. It’s just…
          I don’t know… it’s quiet, I guess.
          I mean, well,I don’t really get out
          as much as I used to. 

PETER

          I’m sorry I haven’t been around as much as
          I’d like. I’ve just been really busy.
          Things just keep piling up before I
          Even have a chance to see them coming. 

AUNT MAY

          Nobody can see what’s coming, Peter.

 Peter pauses. There's clearly something else on his mind..

PETER

          Right.

AUNT MAY

          But I remember, I remember high school,
          You’ve had so much going on all of a sudden.
          It was like after Ben’s death you just…
          I don’t know… grew up overnight. 

PETER

          Something like that.

They hit an awkward silence.
 

AUNT MAY

          Would you like some tea? I was just about
          To make some for myself.

PETER

          Thanks, that would be great.

He looks at her, suddenly and almost accusingly.

PETER

          You knew Curt Connors. 

AUNT MAY

          I did, yes. I told you that.

PETER

          Why didn’t you ever tell me that he
          Worked with my dad?

Aunt May pauses, looking down, looking everywhere except for Peter.
 

AUNT MAY

          I guess after a while I just… forgot.

A hint of anger flushes through Peter’s face.

PETER

          Forgot? 

AUNT MAY

          I don’t know… it never occurred to me,
          Really. And what difference would it
          Have made if you had known, Peter?
          Tell me. How would anything be
          Different than it is now?

Peter takes a moment to come up with an answer.

PETER
(softly)

          I’d know. And I wouldn’t be… I wouldn’t
          Be alone. And right now I can’t think
          Of anything more different than that.
 

AUNT MAY

          Peter…

He goes upstairs. The bedroom door closes tightly behind him.
 
Aunt May stares at the door for awhile after he’s gone. In the kitchen, the teapot begins to whistle.
 
--END--

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oghalfrican232
oghalfrican232 - 11/26/2015, 3:32 PM
Dude this is pretty good! Would love to read more!!
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