The Flash Movie teaser

The Flash Movie teaser

This is I guess a possible teaser script for my Flash movie, id like to start off by saying that I am a huge flash fan and even though I love and respect the many origin stories that have been done with him, I am planning on changing certain things about the speedster in my story, not to say for the better but just my own version, also this is my first time doing anything like this so any feedback on what im doing right or where im going wrong would mean a huge lot to me thanks guys and hope you enjoy this little beginning.

By Karlel01 - Mar 08, 2012 04:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

The Flash
Prologue
We start in the year 1963 in a black and white flashback sequence, in this sequence we see Barry Allen’s numerous saves as the scarlet speedster from bank robberies to natural disasters, maybe these can be portrayed like front page articles shooting out from the screen however as the sequence comes to an end we get one or two more come up ten years later about the disappearance of the Flash and the Government concerned about his true agenda. We then get a dark screen and then the word ‘The Flash’ along with the logo.
(The idea for this is to introduce Barry Allen’s version of the Flash to the audience and gives a clear indication of how awesome this man really is).
We now are at a university with an older Barry Allen seen teaching a classroom of students and given a lecture on physics, as he continues his eyes wonder to his large audience and notices an empty seat and by his face expression he knows exactly who it is.

We then cut to our first real scenes of Central City in a sort of downtown part of the city, cars are packed on every road and all the drivers are suffering from road rage with constant beeping and yelling, then the cause of the problem is seen, a motorcycle carrying two passengers darting right and left between the traffic going so fast that it would be safe to say was breaking any speed limit, We then see that the person riding the motorcycle is a young woman, and on the back part screaming part laughing is our hero to the movie Wally West, the scene goes back and forth between Barry Allen giving his lecture and Wally on the motorcycle.

(This part should be very fun and very exciting to watch; maybe a song playing in the background when the motorcycle is racing between the traffic and maybe even a moment when the cycle takes off on a lowered ramp attached to a truck, a song like ‘Want You Bad’ from offspring just to give it that fun energy.)

As the song comes to an end we see the motorcycle pull up outside the university and Wally jumping of the back and running straight to the classroom, just as he is rushing through the halls of the university he notices a girl who walks by and quickly reaches into his pocket and pulls out a small sheet of paper with his phone number telling the girl that it’s for her, he then steals a quick kiss and continues and ‘that’s for me’, laughing he runs again through the corridors leaving the girl bewildered but smiling, he then bursts through the classroom door yelling ‘I’m not late’ only to be greeted by a room full of artists formed in a circle painting with a naked man standing in the centre posing. A startled Wally nervously retreats from the room but not before getting a quick look again at the naked guy and cried 'God dam' clearly not only is he late he's also in the wrong classroom.
The next scene sees Wally walking in the right classroom however the room is now empty with only Barry left tidying his desk.
When Barry notices Wally he stops what he's doing and just stares at him with a look of slight disappointment.

WW: ‘I know what you’re gonna say uncle Barry but I swear this time I really did try getting here on time’.

BA: 'Then why weren’t you Wally, this is the ninth time this semester, if you were any other student I wouldn’t think twice about failing you, you know that right'.

WW:’ Come on uncle Barry you and me both know that I’m way ahead of most of these other guys on advanced physics hell I’ve had you drumming your quantum theories in my head since I was two, so what if I don’t show for a few lessons, im only missing what I already know’.

BA:’ That’s not the point Wally, as part of my class you have a responsibility to show up like everyone else, by not showing up you show no respect for me and worse you give others the message that you think your better than them’.

Wally quickly replies jokingly ‘and theyed be sooooo right’.

Barry goes to leave ‘No Wally, you’ve got it in your head that you’re so far ahead of everyone else here, then how come you were the last person through my doors today’ and with that Barry leaves Wally in the classroom alone.

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shock
shock - 3/8/2012, 5:47 PM
Nice work! You don't sound like this is the first time you've done something like this. Seems that you have spent alot of time developing your story and it looks promising. I really like how Barry Allen will play a part in your story while introducing Wally West. Definitely interested to see the final version!
ftoons
ftoons - 3/8/2012, 10:20 PM
Awesome. I love Flash and I am looking forward to see more. Awesome, mate, awesome!
comiccow6
comiccow6 - 3/9/2012, 4:49 AM
I also love the Flash. In my opinion he's cooler than Batman. Your story looks promising, and can't wait to see the full story!
Karlel01
Karlel01 - 3/9/2012, 11:50 AM
Wow thanks guys for the comments was expecting maybe mixed reviews but seem to be positive so thank you so much for that part 1 should be ready real soon hopefully youll like it just as much :)
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