Legends of Eden - Red Lightning

Legends of Eden - Red Lightning

Completely new characters I made up (i dont know if i can post it here but oh well) please tell me what you think.

By HeavenlyDark - Oct 28, 2010 09:10 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Name: Red Lightning, Max Grant

Age: 13


Power(s): Can discharge, control, and become a special type of electricity that does not short out and replenish it without absorbing anymore electricity. Can enter any object that conducts electricity and can temporarily become intangible as well as magnetize objects.

Origin/ Story: The second son of the Grants he wanted to follow in the footsteps of his brother Harper Grant who was a leading scientist in a new form of energy. One day Max is brought to Harper’s unveiling newest and most promising energy source (after begging his mom and dad to take him) electricity that never runs out. (Ex: if you have your phone on and running it wouldn’t run out of energy because the battery is replenishing itself without any extra electricity) But during the demonstration of the new invention the experiment is released and begins to strike randomly around the room. Max’s parents are trampled to death by the scared mob leaving him alone inside as they escape. As he cowards in the corner and the electricity were striking randomly he saw his brother both get impaled by a metal pole and be electrocuted and it finally stroke him.
He wakes in a hospital where he figures out that he is in fact part alien in which the species can adapt to almost anything which allows him to survive but since he has no money to pay the bills and leave the hospital keeps him there as a prisoner (this hospital only cares about money and is corrupt) and is outfitted with a shock collar. One night one of the doctors to please his sick minded girlfriend proceeds to torture Max by turning on his shock collar when he realizes the shock doesn’t hurt him and finds out he can shoot the electricity that struck him and escapes the hospital. He finds out that when he was shocked he adapted and absorbed the electricity. But due to his misfortune he commits crimes until he finds out his brother is alive and changes his ways only to see his brother turn into a super villain and his all time nemesis.
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contrast
contrast - 10/29/2010, 12:29 AM
This has quite a bit of potential. This sort of reminds me of a character I was working on a while ago called Cardiac... he was a supervillain who used his electricity-based powers to induce heart failure on his victims.

You've got a great start as is, and as with any writing project, I'd suggest pounding away at pretty much any question that could come up about the character (so that you end up writing plots that the character will be challenged by, but not plots that back you into a corner and force you to have to pull some random fix out of thin air... it makes for stronger story.)
LEEE777
LEEE777 - 10/29/2010, 3:36 AM
Dude... course you can post it here?

Thats what Fan-Fic's for!

Very well done, cool concept!
airbeyonder18
airbeyonder18 - 10/29/2010, 7:41 AM
Awesome! I love it. Keep at it.
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