The Mob Returns

The Mob Returns

Batman TRX Episode 8, Season 1

Fan Fic
By Ben100000 - Nov 23, 2010 12:11 AM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Wayne Manor

Black Mask stands
A thug rings the bell
The door opens
Alfred: May i help
Black Mask punchs him
Black Mask: I'm here Batman
Bruce walks out
Black Mask: Now feel me
Black Mask shoots him
Black Mask laughs
Batman grabs Mask

THEME SONG

Wayne Manor

Batman flips Mask into the thugs
Dick Grayson walks in
Dick: Um does anyone know where Batman lives
Batman runs away
Dick walks in anyone here
Bruce walks out a door
Bruce: Dick nice to see you
Dick: Mr. Wayne have we met
Bruce: Can you keep a secret
Dick: Yeah
Bruce: I'm Batman
Dick: Um
Bruce: Follow me
Bruce walks away
Dick follows

Batcave

Bruce: The Batcave
Dick: Wow
Bruce: Stay here i'll be back

5 Hours Later

Bruce still isn't there
Dick: Hey cool suit
Dick runs up to a suit
Dick: Sweet

Crime Alley

A family stand behind a thug
Thug: Ok hand over the jewles
Man: Go though me
Robin: Oh yeah jackpot
Robin flips the thug over his back
Robin: Your safe
Child: Thanks for saving me
Robin: It's ok in fact call me Robin
The family walk off
Robin: Save... Batman

Room

Black Mask: Now die
Bruce is shocked
Black Mask: Your doomed
Robin swings in and kicks Black Mask through the wall
Robin unties Bruce
They run off

Half A Hour later

Black Mask is lifted away
Bruce: Good job
Robin: Thaks
Bruce: I signed some papers and now your my legal ward
Robin: Gee wilackes i'm mean cool i get to help Batman
Bruce: Yes you do

THE END

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airbeyonder18
airbeyonder18 - 11/24/2010, 6:39 AM
Somehow I knew it was you.

DaenerysTargaryen
DaenerysTargaryen - 11/24/2010, 6:39 AM
changing your username wont make your writing any better. Your writing still sucks ass. Havn't you realized that whenever you write like this rarely does anybody give you a positive comment.
thunderguy123
thunderguy123 - 11/24/2010, 7:16 AM
how can i put this..it's bad real bad!!

there's only a handful of people on here

that's good at writing,drawing,and doing

a proper fancast here's the names of a

few..hawk-good writer,shaman-drawings\sketches,

fancast-ror,leee,DDD,joshw,and a few more.

ask any of them and they'll probally tell

you it's time consuming that's why i only

comment. im thinking you should do the same..

comment only your writing sucks!!
DaenerysTargaryen
DaenerysTargaryen - 11/24/2010, 7:51 AM
I'm guessing this only took 3 minutes to make. Dude this isn't a race. You dont have to be the first person to put out a fan fic. Take some time, maybe read some other fans fics and help improve yours. This is not a race. Put some time and effort into your fan fics and then MAYBE you'll get more positive reviews.
Stumblin
Stumblin - 11/24/2010, 8:24 AM
I still don't get the TRX thing? Like the Ram truck?

Seriously man, like the others have noted you can change your name as much as you like, it's pretty easy to distinguish it's you. Just stop writing if you're not going to take your time.

If you want compliments then put effort into your writing otherwise stick to going to school and writing in your free time. Just don't post it here unless you actually put some visible work into it.
InSpace
InSpace - 11/24/2010, 9:23 AM
thunderguy123@hey what about me I thought i did some good casts,lml

Oh and yeah dude this sucks ,HARD.
Ibz
Ibz - 11/24/2010, 10:19 AM
seriously its just very cheesy even more cheesy then adam west batman and stop changing your name
Ibz
Ibz - 11/24/2010, 10:22 AM
http://www.comicbookmovie.com/fansites/THURSDAY17/news/?a=25480 go and read this, this is how you should do a fan fic, see how much effort the person put in to it and everyone should read this its pretty awesome
screenwriter614
screenwriter614 - 11/24/2010, 11:02 AM
i dont mean to be mean man, but u really need to put more effort into your work, i mean this is eppisode eight, but it is extremely small. if its format you need help with i would suggest using Celtx, its a good program, and free, im using it right now for my flash animated seires script. And about the effort, you really need to step it up, i mean im not even halfway through my first eppisode and it been at least a week and a half,if u dont have time then go at it in interavls.
thunderguy123
thunderguy123 - 11/24/2010, 12:11 PM
inspace

yea that's why i said there's others that i

didnt mention. you have done some good work

i just havent seen as much of your work as

let's say a leee or DDD.

butt: this was butt!!!
Ben100000
Ben100000 - 11/24/2010, 3:28 PM
SuperDude001@ TRICKS
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