Fanfic Preview: Marvel Parallels

Fanfic Preview: Marvel Parallels

A preview of my fanfic, about an alternate Fantastic Four

By TheNameIsBetty - Dec 24, 2010 12:12 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

To be honest, I am posting this 'teaser' because I want to test the metaphorical waters. In this preview I will explain the concept of my idea, "Marvel Parallels". The first one I am going to present to you, my peeps, is the Parallel version of Fantastic Four. Also, this is not the same thing as The Ultimate universe. Actually, I am looking to create drastic and radical differences.
In my defense, this is not the only idea I have. So if this is not well received I will not post it and I will post my other fanfics.




DISCLAIMER: NOT MY LOGO. THANKS TO GOOGLE IMAGES FOR PROVIDING THE LOGOS FOR MARVEL AND THE “PARALLELS” BRAND LOGO. I SIMPLY USED 'PAINT' TO EDIT THEM. FORGIVE THE SHODDINESS OF THE LOGO AND MY COPYRIGHT RULE-BREAKING FOR NOW, I NEED TO GET THE ADOBE CREATIVE SUITE.


Parallel Fantastic Four:

In this world, the Fantastic Four acquired their powers much earlier: during their high school years. The following changes to the characters have also been made:
*Reed Richards is nerdy, antisocial, and black. While solely a cosmetic change, its grounds for big differences.
*Ben Grimm is no longer a jock. He is a video-game nerd, and still Reed's best friend. He is an average looking guy instead of a huge football player.
*Johnny Storm is not a popular hothead. Now he is a troubled young man, and has a bigger body than the original Johnny Storm (more like The Thing).
*Sue Storm is pretty much the same, except she is now a brunette with some gothic tendencies.

First notable story differences:
*Victor Doom dies during the accident that gave the others their powers. After he is buried, his body ressurects itself fully, then the becomes Dr. Doom.

I am keeping the way they get their powers a secret for now, because it's vital to the plot. The actual fanfic I will be posting will be written as if it was an animated special, like the massive rush of animated DC films lately.
OR, if by request of commenters below, I can post it in the form of a comic-script. I write scripts and outlines for this kind of stuff for fun all the time, so it's whatever. I want to make it easy for the readers to read and appease their imagination as well. :)
I will not be offended if any of you say,
"What the [frick] dude this sucks why would you do that? Don't post this, you're a freaking noob, gtfo!"
Please tear me down if you think this sucks, I am open to constructive criticism. If not, I will gladly post it.
And if I don't post this, I will post other fanfics that I have.

Thank you very much.

About The Author:
TheNameIsBetty
Member Since 1/23/2008
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TheNameIsBetty
TheNameIsBetty - 12/24/2010, 12:02 PM
Originally I had this accidentally posted in the News section. I apologize.
Ibz
Ibz - 12/24/2010, 12:21 PM
dude i have seen a lot fan fics which are basicly just copies of an actual arc nothing new added, so its nice seeing some one try something you have my vote so go ahead dude. and are only going to be doing FF or other characters eventually. i think you shouldnt really change johnny's physique the same but i like the idea of him not being such a hot head. and it was pretty cool of you asking people not to get offended before you do it. but you have a thumbs up from me
AC1
AC1 - 12/24/2010, 12:48 PM
IMO I'm not loving the changes, although I think it would be worth developing these characters into a completely separate team, different names, different powers, possibly like a 'What if?' a different group became the Fantastic 4 or maybe another team altogether. The ideas are really unique and would work really well as new, modern team of Superheroes.
Like Ibz said, it's nice to see a unique fan-fic that doesn't reiterate an already published story arc.
Please don't be offended, this is my genuine opinion, I just think they'd work better as separate characters than a re-imagining of the F4.
TheNameIsBetty
TheNameIsBetty - 12/24/2010, 1:34 PM
Yeah. I'm intending it to be different and I appreciate that you realize what I'm trying to do.

As for them being in a team, my script is still in the early stages, so I haven't got them teamed up yet. So as of now, anything's possible!
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