The Spectacular Spider-Man Part 3: Becoming Spider-Man (Fan Fic)

The Spectacular Spider-Man Part 3: Becoming Spider-Man (Fan Fic)

Part 3 to my script, it includes a lot of action and some more awkward first dates for Peter.

By Khan - Jun 13, 2012 06:06 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

This is based on Ultimate Spider-Man Issues 1-4 (not counting the goblin of cause)

The next scene is Peter staring at his ceiling and wondering if he had just imagened all of the wall climbing Peter then gets up out of bed and makes sure Uncle Ben and Aunt May are asleep and then he sneaks outside the house, jumping from rooftop to rooftop and goes to place that his old friend Mary jane had found when they were kids. it was an abandoned warehouse. Peter found many things there like old cars, which he coudl lift without a sweat,
Peter: I am Hercules, I love that Fricken Spider
Peter continues to jump and climb the warehouse
Peter: WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO, This is officially the best thing ever WOOOO.
Peter then finds rope and he attaches them to parts of the roof and tries to swing on them. Peter looks at his watch and runs back home and sleeps for an hour longer and then wakes up ready to go to school.

Peter and Gwen go to the movies it turns out fine and they now are basiclly in love, Gwen then asks after the movie
Gwen: you now know that, if you are my boyfriend you have to meet my dad?
Peter: yeah i will meet your dad i mean he seems like a great dude.
Gwen: how would you know?
Peter: Aunt May said she knew him an she said he was a great guy.
Peter and Gwen are walking and Peter sees an advert the advert says "beat Crusher Hogan and win $25,000 dollars".
Peter takes it home and looks at it, he then gets out an old halloween suit, Red and Blue with a black mask.

Peter then tells Aunt May that he will be out tonight, says he has basketball training.
Aunt May: Peter, you dont play Basketball
Peter: Yeah, but me and some friends are playing later.
Aunt May: ok, go but get your Uncle to pick you up on his way home from work, ok?
Peter: yeah ok.

We then see a warehouse and it has the title on it "UCW spankdown"
Peter signs up and marches into the ring where he faces Crusher Hogan.
Peter: Wow, you are really big, how many KG's of Steroids do you take?
Hogan: wow, kid you already pissed me off and the bell has not gone ding ding yet.
Peter: cool do i get a fluffy toy for pissing off a insane drugged up nut job?.
Hogan: come here so i can teach you some manners haaaaaaa
Peter jumps out of the way of Hogans leap
Peter: i am sorry but was that meant to hit me or what because if that tried to hit me, then dude im over here.
Hogan tries to punch him again and again, but Peter keeps moving out of the way.
Peter: i am really tired, can i get a cup of tea and some cookies because by the time you hit me it will be Christmas.
Hogan tries to hit him again but Peter grabs his feet and flips him up and slams him on the mat of the ring.
Announcer: 1,2,3, WE HAVE A NEW WORLD CHAMPION, his name is, Bug dude.
Peter: what the hell is that, bug dude, please.
Announcer: you come up with something better?
Peter: easy, THE AMAZING SPIDER-MAN.
Announcer: i like it, give it up for Spider-Man.

Peter collects his money and waits outside the warehouse for an hour he keeps tring to call Uncle Ben but his phone is dead.
Peter then gets a taxi home and he sees, police cars outside his house. Peter runs inside.

Peter: Aunt May what the hell is going on.
Police Cop: Your Uncle Ben was shot, outside his office.
Tears form in Peter's eyes, he whipes them away
Peter: do you know where the killer is now?
Police cop: he is right now in a warehouse……
Peter: near here?
Police cop: i think so
Peter runs away from the cop upstairs into his room puts on his wrestling costume and jumps out side the building jumping from rooftop to rooftop trying to find the warehouse. He finds it.He climbs in, and starts searching for his Uncle's killer, he finds him it is…..
Peter grabs him and pushes him.
Peter: no, why is it you, it cant be.
The announcer from the wresting match is the killer.
Peter is in shock.
then the announcer grabs a gun and puts it to his own head and fires.
Peter: what the hell, oh my god you just killed yourself.
Cops are outside and they storm in and they see Peter and they try to arrest him.Peter runs away and goes to his house and gets changed and thinks about what had just happened he then goes and sits with Aunt May who is crying over the death of her husband.

The next day we see Captain Stacy on the news,
Captain Stacy:at 10:45 PM last night a man called Ben Parker was killed, 3 hours later the murderer was killed by a man in a red and blue suit about 5 feet 11 tall. If you see this man, we are calling him Spider-Man, if you see Spider-Man please call 911 and we will be there. As of this moment there is an arrest warent for the masked murderer known as Spider-Man from the NYPD. thank for your time and please return to your normal lives.
Peter is in shock.

Next scene
Peter and Gwen have a chat in Peter's room.
Peter: i have to tell you something
Gwen: what?
Peter: now it is massive but i have to let you know
Gwen: what the heck is it?
Peter: I am Spider-Man
Gwen: bullshit, you arnt spider-man you cant climb walls.
Peter: do you wanna see me show you.
Gwen: do it climb this wall right now.
Peter: fine
Peter climbs the wall and shows Gwen the suit.
Gwen: You killed that man?
Peter: no he shot himself the cops saw me and they saw his dead body on the ground and they must have thought i shot him.
Gwen: i believe you, but my dad has cops after you, and that means you could die or be arrested.
Peter: yeah i know that.
Peter says good bye to Gwen and Gwen reminds him that dinner is on friday, and he could bring Aunt May if he wants.
Peter looks at his wrists and wonders of he can shoot webs out of his hands, but he cant so then we see him create these things, called web-shooters, we then have a montage played to a song, showing how he creates the web-shooters.

Next scene
We see Doctor Conners talking to his wife and playing with his son. The door bell rings, it is Peter.
Dr Conners: Peter? is that you
Peter: yeah i wanted to hear about my dad, and why he and my mom had to leave when i was young.
Dr Conners introduces Peter to his wife and son. Peter and Conners go downstairs into Dr Conners's lab and Curt gets out all the files about Peter's dad.
Dr Conners: your father was brilliant, and young which meant he would be there longer than Octavious or Osborn.
Peter: why did he leave?
Dr Conners: i dont know i was asking the same thing.
Peter: what is this?
Conners:You know the science thing i was talking about at the field trip?
Peter: yeah
Conners: this is it, i will try it out tonight and see what happens, you better get going.
Peter: can i take these documents?
Conners: sure thing, good by Peter.
Peter: Bye sir.

The next scene is Friday night
Peter is dressed up well and wants to impress Gwen's parents.
Gwens mom and dad open the front door for him.
Peter: hello, Mr and Mrs Stacy
George Stacy: Peter, how are you doing, how is your aunt i told Gwen to tell her she can come to if she likes.
Peter: Aunt May is fine, she wanted to stay home tonight.
Gwen walks down her stairs and runs up to Peter and gives him a massive hug.
Peter: Hey Gwen
Gwen: Peter
the two smile and the George Stacy asks
Captain Stacy:shall we dine
Peter is eating and then Gwen asks if Peter likes the food.
Peter: Mrs Stacy the food is so good i love it.
Mrs Stacy: well at least some one tells me, hey George
George: honey you know i always love your food.
Gwen asks
Gwen: how is the hunt going dad?
George: what hunt?
Gwen: for Spider-Man?
George: (to Peter) she thinks that Spider-Man did not kill that man, what a load of rubbish.
Peter: well i have to agree with her, i doubt Spider-Man would kill a man. no matter what he had done.
George: what is wrong with teenagers these days?
George: Spider-Man has been silent recently has not done many things, in the past week.
Peter: maybe he is changing that ugly suit, or working out how to fly?
George: Great.
Gwen: Peter, tell us about your dad and mom.
Peter: well, my dad left when i was young and same goes with my mom, i have no idea why they left but they worked with Dr Conners over at Oscorp.
George: thats where you were bitten wernt you Peter?
Peter: yeah i was it hurt alot but im good now actually much better.
George: Gwen tells me you are quite the science wiz.
Peter: i think i am.
Peter and Gwen go upstairs into her room
Gwen: see that was not that bad.
Peter: i think your dad wants me dead.
Gwen: you or Spider-Man?
Peter: sadly both, any way i came up with a new design for the suit how do you think?
Peter shows her the new suit. the suit is exactly the same as the suit from Amazing Spider-Man comic books.
Gwen: i love it, much better than your old one.
Peter: i know right.

Thanks for reading guys, i will be making a Batman Beyond script soon, let me know who you would put as your Batman Beyond

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kong
kong - 6/15/2012, 5:46 AM
I think Gwen was convinced to easily and that the fight should've been longer, but otherwise really good! You're really good at writing Peter's dialouge.
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