TheRealTomServo Presents... Antonio Campos' ENIGMA Pitch

TheRealTomServo Presents... Antonio Campos' ENIGMA Pitch

Soon, The Joker will be getting his own origin story. Many have strong feelings either way on the subject, but I feel there's another Batman villain more deserving of a solo flick. Read on for details...

Editorial Opinion
By TheRealTomServo - Nov 04, 2017 12:11 PM EST
Filed Under: Batman

So, we're back at it again! One low-tier hero and an oft-forgotten sidekick later, I'm sure DCEU Rebirth is doing just fine for itself. After all, audiences would eat up movies about obscure characters in a cinematic universe that up to this point, has been critically malinged and split audiences down the middle. It really is just the model for success, isn't it? Oh, wait, no. That's a terrible path to take.

But this is fantasy land, so let's get back to pitching movies that will never, ever happen! My previous two pitches, Plastic Man and Roy Harper, Snowbird, seemed to be well-received enough. So I figured I'd really mix things up for this one. Instead of another pitch about a hero many keep on the sidelines, why not give a villain most people know as Ace Ventura, Carrot-Topped Pet Detective his own movie? What could possibly go wrong, right?

Right?




 


 

E  N  I  G  M  A


Directed by Antonio Campos
Written by Craig Shilowich and Trey Edward Shuts
Based on The Riddler by Bill Finger and Dick Sprang

***

Why Engima? Because Riddler is stupid, Edward is plain, and Riddle Me This sounds like a bad Platinum Dunes horror movie. Enigma captures the essence of the twisted mystique of the Riddler character better than any generic synonym or subtitile following "The Batman" ever could. Edward Nygma (simply named Edward here) is one of the most well-known, yet underrated, adversaries of the Caped Crusader, and a proper slow-burn feature film would finally give him his due.

There was a moment where I contemplated what purpose the movie should function. I knew from the getgo that I wanted Enigma to be more than your standard "villain goes after hero" movie. We see enough of those each summer. And while many give them grief due to the way they steer so far from the source material, The Dark Knight Trilogy showed us that the concept of the superhero, and conversely, the supervillain, could be taken to places of higher political and philosophical purpose. Not only what they are or the way they would function outside of the panels of a comic book, but their higher existential purpose and how they can represent the very world we live in. 

This was a direction I felt the narrative needed to go. Take the Riddler, and put him in a world where his message and motive would be poignant off the silver screen. I wanted a character less like Jigsaw and more like a blend of Gordo Moseley (if you haven't seen The Gift, change that now. I highly recommend it.) and Anton Chigurh in the way he operates and why he does what he does. More elaborate, more classy, and for a purpose greater than "I hate the good guy because he is good and I am not".

 

Living in the suburban outskirts of Gotham is Edward (Casey Affleck, Manchester by the Sea), a mentally ill hermit whose living expenses are paid for by the estate of his wealthy family. With his only communication with the rest of the world being through a computer screen, his ideas of society are warped by the toxicity of social media and tabloids. However, he carries a considerable admiration for Batman (Ben Affleck, Gone Girl), and an unhealthy antagonistic obsession with Bruce Wayne. When his fascination with both leads him to discovering they are one in the same, Edward sets up an elaborte scheme that scales Gotham City. The twisted game Edward leaves for the Caped Crusader may have repurcussions that throw Gotham into political turmoil, as well as expose the hero for what he is to the world. Enigma is a collaboration between the minds behind modern thriller masterpieces It Comes at Night and Christine, and carries a thematic resonance not seen in superhero cinema since The Dark Knight.
 

 

So, what are we thinking? Sounds alright, yeah? Also, I kind of spoiled some of the people involved with filmmaking duties. But hey, read on anyway.
 



Director

Antonio Campos

A man with a knack for directing methodical dramas dealing with dark themes and ideas, Campos was the only man I saw for the job. While not very known outside the film buff circle, Campos has a very small, yet respectable filmography. Campos' full-length debut was 2008's Afterschool, a quaint character piece about the Internet-obsessed Robert (played by Ezra Miller, aka The Flash) accidentally recording the death of two girls and being asked to put it together in a memorial video. It received love from critics, and was praised for its performances and ideas. His next film, Simon KIller, follows a man in Paris who befriends a prostitute and unleashes his dark side. It similarly garnered critical praise.

It's his most recent film, however, that cemented the fact that Campos is a rookie to keep an eye on. 2016's Christine recounts the real-life tragedy of Sarasota-Bradenton reporter Christine Chubbuck and the buildup to her on-air suicide via gunshot. It flew under the radar last year, but it made my top ten of 2016. The film is something of a ticking time bomb. Even if you hadn't known the story prior like I had, you feel for every second that something bad is going to happen, but the film keeps you in suspense as to when it will, no matter the inevitability. Campos' direction is slick and careful, as he recalls the essences of Kubrick and implements his slick direction into a story small and scaled-back. Rebecca Hall gave one of the year's best performances as the titular Christine, and was shamefully snubbed by the Academy.

It is a film that's stuck with me since viewing, with its near-perfect pacing and subtly-spoken message about the media that rings true now more than ever. Campos and Enigma are a match made in Heaven.
 



Screenwriter(s)

Craig Shlowich and Trey Edward Shults

Christine's screenplay was one of its strongest elements, with an appropriate amount of unease and tiptoeing. Naturally, bringing the screenwriter of the film, Craig Shilowich, on board to write Enigma was a perfect fit.

 
The other name, Trey Edward Shults, should be a little more familiar to those following the horror scene. Shults is responsible for the critically-adored experimental drama piece Krisha, which was based on his own short film of the same name that recounted a cousin of his relapsing at a family reunion. It made waves at the likes of Cannes Film Festival and New York Films Critics Circle, and one the Grand Jury Prize at SXSW. His follow-up, It Comes at Night, though unpopular with mainstream audiences because of its stylized approach to horror and misleading marketing campaign, received similar acclaim, and has made my top ten films of 2017 list as of the time of writing.
 
The screenwriters have very similar styles to one another, and the team-up would be perfectly complimentary to each. Their past history shows levels of talent that would make sparks fly when brought together.



 

Misc.
 
You already know what I'm gonna do here. This part is the one where I put in the least effort, and it shows. But I'm sure you don't care, and you know what, neither do I. Maybe I should stop announcing that, though. People might call me out for my hack fraudery and stop reading my articles.

 
Produced by Charles Roven, Deborah Snyder, Zack Snyder, Melody C. Roscher, and Craigh Shilowich
 
Music by Lesley Barber (Manchester by the Sea)
 
Cinematography by Mike Gioulakis (It Follows)
 
Edited by Sofia Subercaseaux (Christine)
 
Production companies
RatPac-Dune Entertainment  Not anymore, Brett Ratner. You sex pervert. 
DC Entertainment
Borderline Films
Atlas Entertainment
Cruel and Unusual Films
 
Distributed by Warner Bros. Pictures
 
Alright, so there we go. Very good, very good. The most annoying part is out of the way. Now I can rest easy. Kick back with my Frank Sinatra/Count Basie record, a cold glass of sarsaparilla, and--
 
-- oh, wait. No I can't. I'm not done yet. What did I get myself into?



 

The Cast
 
Ah, nice. This part is actually fun. I can get behind keeping on with this project if it means I get to play pretend casting director and piss you all off with the lack of Idris Elbas, Charlize Therons, Bryan Cranstons, and Tom Hardys. They can't play everyone, you know! I mean really. Get some imagination, will ya?
 
-Casey Affleck as Edward-
A mentally-ill hermit living in a suburban recluse paid for by his family. Socially inept, but intellectually gifted. Sheltered from the world due to his perceived dangerousness. Decides to subject Gotham to a cruel game after learning the truth behind Batman's identity and how it contradicts what he stands for.
Notable Works: Manchester by the Sea & The Assassination of Jesse James by the Coward Robert Ford
 
-Ben Affleck as Bruce Wayne/Batman-
Playboy billionaire owner of Wayne Enterprises by day, crime-fighting vigilante by night. When in the cape and cowl, an almost inhuman presence that terrifies criminals. Gets caught up in Edward's trap that puts both Gotham City and his own identity in and out of the suit at risk.
Notable Works: Gone Girl & Argo
 
-Lakeith Stanfield as Arthur Brown-
A criminal-for-hire bought off the dark web by Edward. Helps Edward set up traps and clues all over the city, and enacts the first event that sets off the chain reaction Edward was hoping for. Later detained by Batman, and after escaping, killed by Maggie Sawyer, for which Edward intended.
Notable Works: Atlanta & Get Out
 
-J.K. Simmons as Commissioner Jim Gordon-
The experienced, honest police commissioner of the GCPD. Is brought into the fold after Edward's plan leads to the death of Officer Crispus Allen, which Edward and Arthur Brown made it appear Batman was responsible for.
Notable Works: Whiplash & Thank You For Smoking
 
-Brady Corbet as Detective Harvey Bullock-
Hotshot detective taken under the wing of Commissioner Gordon. Known within the GCPD for his controversial methods and hatred for Batman. Pushes for pursuing him when he's framed for killing Officer Crispus Allen.
Notable Works: Thirteen & Mysterious Skin 
 
-Paul Dano as Lonnie Machlin/Anarky-
Online AntiFa activist with a staunch anarchist perspective. The controversy surrounding Batman and Officer Crispus Allen prompts him to rally others and riot, luring out Batman, which Edward planned for.
Notable Works: Okja & Swiss Army Man-
 
-Rebecca Hall as Officer Maggie Sawyer-
Officer Crispus Allen's partner, who witnessed his death and blames Batman. Convinces Commissioner Gordon to enact the investigation, but her own outside discoveries begin to put her on Edward's trail.
Notable Works: Christine & Professor Marston and the Wonder Women

-Jeremy Irons as Alfred Pennyworth-
Bruce Wayne's advisor and eye in the sky during his nightly patrols as Batman. Helps navigate through Edward's game from the Batcave, and offers Bruce his ideas and perspectives.
Notable Works: The Lion King & Dead Ringers
 
-Regé-Jean Page as Officer Crispus Allen-
A well-respected young officer in the GCPD who had a bright future in the force before his untimely demise. His death sets in motion Edward's plan.
Notable Works: Roots & Mortal Engines (upcoming)
 
-J. Smith-Cameron as Edward's Mother-
Edward's rich mother who is paying for his seclusion. Reveals to Batman and Officer Maggie Sawyer than Edward killed his father, but she hid him away and covered it up to cost their family shame and tabloid spotlight.
Notable Works: Rectify & As Bees In Honey Drown
 
***
 
Bonus
 
What was Edward's plan?
 
1. Arthur Brown attracts GCPD and Batman's attention
2. Arthur sets off explosion that kills Officer Allen
3. Arthur tampers with crime scene to frame Batman
4. GCPD launches manhunt for Batman
5. Batman's perceived racial profiling has public turn on him
6. AntiFa riots go violent, forces Batman to intervene
7. Batman's force against protestors sparks controversy
8. Arthur leaves clues for GCPD about Batman's identity
9. Edward leaks information about crimes to Maggie Sawyer
10. Maggie discovers Batman's innocence and seeks him out
11. Batman notices Arthur recurring at crime scenes, detains him
12. Arthur uses tech given to him by Edward to escape
13. Batman and Maggie go to see Edward's mother, who reveals the truth about Edward
14. Maggie stays and guards Edward's mother
15. Arthur arrives and kills Edward's mother, and Maggie kills Arthur
16. Batman finds Edward, who commits suicide with makeshift Batarang gun
17. Frames Batman for murdering a seemingly-innocent mentally ill man
18. GCPD arrive at crime scene, where Edward left evidence pointing to Bruce Wayne being Batman
19. Bruce Wayne forced to escape Gotham, retire Batman mantle
20. Maggie goes to share leaks with GCPD, but Edward had hacked her computer and deleted them before his death
21. Gotham thrown into political and social turmoil without a hero



 

So, what did we think? Better than the previous ones, or worse? That's all kind of subjective, but not really, because objective fact exists and there's a scale when it comes to grading good and bad art that people seemingly forget about when it comes to something they enjoy. This has honestly been my favorite of the lot, and I'm curious to know what you all think. So leave your comments down below!
 
Oh, crap! I got movie sign! Gotta blast! Cheers!
 


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FlixMentallo21
FlixMentallo21 - 11/4/2017, 4:22 PM
Now this is one crazy pitch. Were this made, it might prove a bit controversial.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/4/2017, 5:06 PM
@FlixMentallo21 - I definitely tried to ruffle some feathers with this one. Hopefully it's well-received on the whole, though.
noahthegrand
noahthegrand - 11/7/2017, 1:21 PM
@TheRealTomServo - I love Riddler as a character. Thank you.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/7/2017, 3:46 PM
@noahthegrand - Riddler is great.
DetectiveCinema
DetectiveCinema - 11/4/2017, 8:47 PM
Please keep this up, you've put such a fresh perspective on the CBM-genre with these. I got some Nightcrawler vibes reading this and would through Dan Gilroy's name into the ring for director and/or writer.

Your description of The Riddler, taking inspiration from Gordo from The Gift, is a brilliant choice. A social inept/removed man who is extremely intelligent would be a great direction to take the character in. Cannot fault your casting decision either in Casey Affleck, his performance in The Assassination of Jesse James by the Coward Robert Ford outshone Brad Pitt in the title role, and he [frick]ing nailed that role too.

Casey Affleck, Jake Gyllenhaal (Nightcrawler) and Walton Goggins (Vice Principals) would be my top choices for the role, probably in that order too. I like the inclusion of Ben Affleck's Batman / Bruce Wayne opposite his brother, I'm sure those two would play amazingly off each other.

In regards to the rest of the cast, most of them seem like great fits. However, your casting for Crispus Allen is a sticking point due to the fact you've cast him so young but I can see past it because of how it services the story. Having Allen as a young up-and-comer has a bigger impact.

What's next in the pipeline?
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 12:32 AM
@MrMurdock - Thanks for your feedback as always.

The Riddler was always a character I felt would benefit from a major reinvention. With The Joker playing such a similar role, and being the face of Batman's rogues gallery, it's inevitable that the former would get the shaft. Turning him into something much more real and close to home would make him a worthy villain in his own right, and one that maybe even surpasses the constraints of the CBM genre.

With Edward becoming less a Bond villain and more an introverted refuge, Casey Affleck just seemed too perfect. Had it gone the classic route with the take on him, Affleck isn't right for the part for sure. But this is a role Affleck has shown many times over he has the chops for, so utilizing those talents here seemed a natural fit.

I originally didn't plan on using Crispus Allen as the officer. But I love me some Spectre, and paying tribute to him was just something I wanted to do without turning it into forced universe expansion. As of now, I have no plans for Spectre. But the fans knowing Allen's fate is all they need.

I actually have a handful laid out for DCEU Rebirth.

- The Brave and the Bold (probably not what you're expecting from it, either)
- Wildcat
- Creeper
- Adam Strange
- Batman: Knightfall

I'm already beginning a second phase of pitches to follow these, so I'm gonna be busy at work.
DetectiveCinema
DetectiveCinema - 11/5/2017, 2:34 AM
@TheRealTomServo - [frick] yeah! The Brave and The Bold, Wildcat and Batman: Knightfall particularly peak my interests.

I’m hoping to get my Nightwing pitch up in a few hours I’m just struggling flesh it out to the extent that I’m happy with it. I’ll shoot you a message when it’s up and running?
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 8:14 AM
@MrMurdock - Deal.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 1:08 PM
@JaredRWebb12 @MikeZ @BakugoValentine @Elayem
JaredRWebb12
JaredRWebb12 - 11/5/2017, 3:19 PM
@TheRealTomServo - is this an invite to play in the sandbox?
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 5:08 PM
@JaredRWebb12 - An invite to read more than anything. But if you wish to play, you're welcome to it. Only thing is it can't interfere with Knightfall or Creeper (basically, Batman, Alfred, Joker, Bane, Guardian, Creeper, Anarky, and Catwoman are all off the table). If I like it enough, consider it canon. c;
JaredRWebb12
JaredRWebb12 - 11/5/2017, 5:22 PM
@TheRealTomServo - fair nuff. And I did read. Like the cast and concept and cast-especially Campos directing this thing(dude is way too underrated)
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 6:02 PM
@JaredRWebb12 - Thanks, man. I wanted another TDK-caliber Bats movie and thought this one would be the closest DC can get to that right now. Also, do you have any specific pitches in mind?
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/5/2017, 6:03 PM
@JaredRWebb12 - I'll send you a list of all my upcoming pitches so you know what to avoid.
JaredRWebb12
JaredRWebb12 - 11/5/2017, 6:03 PM
@TheRealTomServo - you right...unless they adapt Priest’s current Slade run
JaredRWebb12
JaredRWebb12 - 11/5/2017, 6:04 PM
@TheRealTomServo - Iight. Look forward to it
TheManWithoutFear
TheManWithoutFear - 11/6/2017, 9:10 AM
Great stuff. I love it when you guys put legit work into these.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 11:45 AM
@TheManWithoutFear - Thanks plenty.
MikeZ
MikeZ - 11/6/2017, 10:58 AM
So, I don't get it, is this just a solo Riddler film? I wouldn't mind it being part of the mainline Batman movie series.

A black Cluemaster? Makes me interested seeing who you'll cast for Stephanie Brown.

If you're going for the slender Earth One Harley Bullock, then I'm fine with your choice.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 11:51 AM
@MikeZ - It's more focused on Riddler than anything, with Batman being a supporting character who shares his role of a pawn in Edward's game with Maggie Sawyer, Harvey Bullock, and Anarky. His plan utilizes Batman for sure, but Batman is more of an outside force than anything. Very minimal dialogue and a more physical presence. Making him less of a character and more of an icon helps the deconstruction of him work.

No idea who I'm using for Stephanie Brown yet, but I know I'm retooling her to still be related to Arthur but not necessarily as a daughter. She'll be college-aged in a future pitch of mine: a Red Robin neo-noir film inspired by Brick.

And yeah, Earth One was the direction I was taking Bullock. Making him gluttonous and overweight seemed to make his seediness too on-the-nose.
MikeZ
MikeZ - 11/7/2017, 11:28 PM
@TheRealTomServo - Seems to all makes sense to me. Good job regardless.
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 11/6/2017, 7:00 PM
Very interesting, nice work once again.
Also, I LOVED The Gift and It Comes At Night
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 7:03 PM
@Elayem - Thanks plenty! And I don't get why people don't like those movies. It's a shame, because they're both perfect exercises in tension-fueled, anxiety-raising suspense. They, along with Warrior, also made me realize how perfect Joel Edgerton would be for Batman.
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 11/6/2017, 7:07 PM
@TheRealTomServo - The Gift is well liked by critics and audiences. And It Comes at Night is liked by critics but despised by audiences. I think it’s because it was marketed as a horror movie and not an art-house thriller.
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 11/6/2017, 7:08 PM
@TheRealTomServo - Joel Edgerton is a phenomenal actor but I personally can’t see him as Batman. My ideal Batman choice that I included in my DCEU Reimagined editorials is actually Edgerton’s Warrior co-star Tom Hardy.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 7:09 PM
@Elayem - I went to a Bronx high school, so everyone I know minus a few hated it. I actually address the audience backlash to It Comes at Night somewhere in the article here with the same reason you gave. Still pisses me off that that's the case.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 7:11 PM
@Elayem - I honestly avoid casting Tom Hardy in anything at this point. He's on a list of actors overcast in CBM fan pitches that includes...

Idris Elba
Bryan Cranston
Charlize Theron
Charlie Hunnam
Jon Hamm
Chris Pine

I pretty much avoid putting them in anything because of it.
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 11/6/2017, 7:16 PM
@TheRealTomServo - I think actors are overcast simply because they’re great actors, and there’s nothing wrong with wanting great actors.
With my DCEU Reimagined, I couldnt overcast an actor to too many roles when I cast like a 100 roles and they all have to be different haha.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 11/6/2017, 7:51 PM
@Elayem - Very true, very true. I don't know, man. I just try to differentiate my ideas as much as I can.
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