READ: Avengers72's New Feature Film: FIGHTER FOR THE BROWN

READ: Avengers72's New Feature Film: FIGHTER FOR THE BROWN

I'm sure I wasn't missed in my short absence from CBM, but while I was gone, I was busy writing my second film. Hit the jump to read and rate it! I love your input.

By SomTingWong - Mar 12, 2014 06:03 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic

Hello friends. I haven't posted anything on the site in about four months, and because of that, I am kind of empty. In that time I have been writing my first draft of my second film, and I was accepted to WhatCulture!.com as a contributor. I think it is time for me to start getting a little more active on posting my fan-fic ideas, so you can expect that from me in the next few weeks. Until then, I have below the first draft of a film called "Fighter For The Brown". It's a film mainly about two men, a former prizefighter on a quest for justice and the head of a wealthy company that also runs the local mob who can only watch as his organization crumbles to the ground. There are probably many errors both structure and grammar wise, but this is a first draft.
I will keep this on the internet for only a short while, after posting it, so I would be very appreciative if you guys would read it and tell me what you think. Coming from some of you, the ugly truth may be presented much more accurately than if some of my friends that know nothing about that sort of thing reviewed it. It's an astounding 247 pages long, but again, it's a first draft.

Fighter for the Brown

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MightyZeus
MightyZeus - 3/12/2014, 8:04 PM
I like it. It was an interesting read and i think it's great.
kong
kong - 3/13/2014, 5:03 AM
What with u and black people?
Pasto
Pasto - 3/13/2014, 5:58 AM
Hey hey hey, I missed you man.

*Hugs Avenger*
tvor03
tvor03 - 3/13/2014, 1:24 PM
Cut it in half. Spec scripts should be around 120 pages.
SomTingWong
SomTingWong - 3/13/2014, 4:09 PM
@RedHood13 I'm not sure what you mean by that.
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