A.I. - Artificial Ironman: An all original WHAT IF...

A.I. - Artificial Ironman: An all original WHAT IF...

WHAT IF... Iron Man had a dark and disturbed origin story? Murder, aliens, kidnappings and chaos... Check out my morbid reimagining.

By TheVandalore - Dec 18, 2024 02:12 PM EST
Filed Under: Fan Fic
Source: The Vandalore

In this brand new take on these classic MARVEL characters, Howard Stark and his young family have been kidnapped by a mysterious criminal organization for the nefarious purposes of taking over operations of a highly critical research project deciphering the contents recovered from an alien crash site.

Some type of "new" technology was salvaged, but was then immediately confiscated by force from the classified and quarantined site by a lethal team of hired professionals, and transported to the mysterious criminal organizations compound deep in an unknown sandy desert. After many failed attempts to learn the secrets of the seemingly locked alien tech, a scheme is then executed to abduct the infamous Howard Stark and his wife and young child. Howard is then forced into working on the stolen project.

But, very quickly into his time with the Alien tech, Howard is able to make enough progress to establish a connection with the main artifact embedded in the alien technology. Howard begins having visions which last several minutes inside of his head, but which actually transpire over mere milliseconds in real time. The first visions he sees are of destruction and chaos, fires burning and people screaming in terror. Howard doesn't know the meaning behind these visions but he is certain of the feeling they instill in him.

It's a warning.

Realizing only the horrific potential of this technology in the wrong hands, Howard understands that if he continues his work on this project, he will be responsible for unimaginable evil being unleashed upon the world he has spent his life improving with his inventions.

He makes the decision to reprogram his work on the alien technology, stalling for as much time as he can buy, while he attempts to use the technology to find some way to escape safely with his family.

Unfortunately, they know he is stalling for time and decide to make an example out of Howards wife. They blow her brains out, leaving Tony drenched in his own mother's blood.

Seeing this, Howard freaks out, which accidentally activates his mental link with the alien artifact. It transforms into a white and golden glowing goo like substance and begins killing everything with a pulse in the compound in a few short seconds, save for Howard and his horrified son. As the last bodies spill to the floor, a grenade held by a mercenary accidentally explodes, setting off a chain reaction which vaporizes the entire compound in a flash.

The next few frames show the blackened remains of Howard beside a lump of white and gold glowing metal roughly the shape and size of young Tony. With Howard's dying thoughts being only of concern for his son, the alien tech instinctively protected Tony.

Sensing Tony's panic, the glowing metal goo places him into a state of hibernation as it begins to solidify around him into a crude figure that roughly appears humanoid. The shifting mass of alien like tendrils writhe continuously in unsettling manners, when suddenly the alien technology bursts from the rubble of the flaming desert compound and into the sky.

As the shape shifting figure soars through the clouds with a sleeping Tony, a blue sigil of unknown meaning or design begins glowing upon Tony's forehead as his unconscious eyes burst open with a blue glow of their own. Still in hibernation, the shifting mass solidifies more and more, now forming a suit of white and gold armor. As the liquid metal hardens, the alien technology begins reading Tony's mind. It can see his memories and experiences them all within a nanosecond.

Suddenly, the suit smashes into the Earth in a massive crater rippling outwards, and a ploom of dust and debris shooting into the sky. Suddenly, red and blue lights can be seen reflecting off the dissipating cloud. As the view clears, it's shown that the crater is directly outside of a mansion that had previously been swarming with police activity.

The patio door to the mansion swings open, as a concerned looking Jarvis comes rushing outside, followed by a group of Detectives and police officers who had been working day and night on the Stark family kidnapping. As the dust clouds finally clear completely, a sleeping Tony is surrounded in the crater by detectives and police, as red and blue lights flicker on everything.

Tony never talks to anyone about what happened that day. Not even Jarvis. Not even on Jarvis's death bed decades later. Tony... Simply couldn't.

Over the years, Tony begins to open up to the world again. His childhood was rough, but as a teenager, he found comfort in his studies. Once he was old enough, he began learning everything he could about his father's inventions and research. He very much gravitated towards Howard's scientific lifestyle, but always had a bit of a troubled side that was unique to Tony.

Despite his delinquent behaviors, Tony had a good head on his shoulders, for the most part, but he did delight in showing off his intelligence. Attention was his favorite, no matter if it were good or bad. One day while thrill seeking, a freak accident causes Tony to plummet from the side of a mountain.

Suddenly, before Tony can even react, white and gold liquid metal leaks from every pore of his body, engulfing him in a gross texture that immediately makes Tony begin to scream in panicked horror. As he plummets, he begins pulling at the substance oozing all over him in an unsuccessful attempt to peel the freaky stuff off of him.

"CALM YOURSELF."

A voice speaks to Tony from within. Not from within the goo, but from within himself. A familiar voice. A voice that instantly comforted him. It was as if it were a combination of every person Tony had ever loved, spoken to him at once in a single voice.

Tony relaxed, and in an instant, he remembers. He knows, as if a memory was implanted into his mind. This suit was from the day his parents died. The suit that saved him.

A fraction of a second before hitting the mountain side, the suit activates, solidifies and blasts off into the sky. For a moment, Tony feels like he is in control of the suit.

But just as quickly as that realization sets, the suit plummets to the Earth. Tony begins to open his mouth to scream, but before he can even hear his own voice, the suit places him safely on the ground and disappears, seemingly back inside Tony's body.

After a second of pause, the scream finally escapes Tony's mouth.

After this experience, Tony has a new focus. His priorities shift and an obsession forms. Tony becomes hell bent on drawing out the suit. Experiment after experiment fails, no matter what Tony tries, he can't recreate the necessary variables which cause the suit to come out. Even at great risk to his own life, the suit stays hidden. Tony becomes more and more reckless, but seemingly no matter how close Tony puts himself to death, the suit doesn't save him.

While attempting one particularly dangerous experiment that Tony doesn't care if he survives or not, a drunken miscalculation sets off a chain reaction that instead puts one of Tony's assistants in danger. In a moment of genuine selflessness, Tony sacrifices himself to save her, and in that moment, the suit appears and protects them from the blast.

That is when Tony finally unlocks access to the suit.

The suit begins speaking to Tony. Over time, they develop a bond. But Tony doesn't like the voice the suit uses, it freaks him out. So the suit scans Tony's memories, adjusts his voice and asks to be called Jarvis.

Tony refuses to call him Jarvis, but the suit knows Tony appreciates hearing Jarvis's voice again, though he can't say it out loud. It comforts Tony.

Over an arc of a couple issues, Tony goes on several adventures with the suit. I imagine this series only lasting maybe 10 issues.

The final book would see the suit sacrificing itself to save Tony's life, fulfilling Howard's prime directive: SAVE TONY.

The final pages of the book show Tony working on his first mach one version of his fully Stark tech Iron Man suit, complete with an A.I. Jarvis inspired by his original alien suit. The final shot is him spraying the once Gold and White armor Red and Gold.

And that is... A.I.: Artificial Iron-Man.

I'm not certain yet of all the details, or the title. I still haven't settled on villains or anything meaty about the plot. Just basic story beats as of now.

But what do you all think? Do you have any ideas or suggestions you care to add to this brand new concept I'm developing? Do you hate it? Love it? Don't care at all?

Leave a comment below and let me know how I could or should develop this idea! Thanks for your time and I appreciate any feedback.

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slickrickdesigns
slickrickdesigns - 12/15/2024, 3:26 PM
I’d watch this or check out the comic if it was brought to fruition. 👍
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/15/2024, 3:42 PM
@slickrickdesigns - thank you! I appreciate your time and feedback!
McMurdo
McMurdo - 12/15/2024, 9:24 PM
This is fantastic!! Very detailed and well written. Loved the callback with the kidnapping and desert cave setting. Love the humor with Tony screaming after already being safe on the ground lol. Really well done.

Chandler. Take notes!
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/15/2024, 9:46 PM
@McMurdo - thank you very much! I really appreciate that!! Love the detailed feedback. Thank you 🙏
MurfDyson
MurfDyson - 12/16/2024, 5:47 AM
This is an intriguing take on the Iron Man mythos. Very different from the usual fare even the Ultimate universe isn't this bold with the take. This would be a great read or watch indeed. This is quite refreshing and seems like a character study as well into why Tony may be the way he is. I read in another comment section on here that you had written treatments for DC characters which I would like to see now that I've seen this.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/16/2024, 9:53 AM
@MurfDyson - thank you very much for the kindness and support. I do have stories cooked up for my own original take on the DC universe. Those aren't as radical as this WHAT IF... concept, rather they are very much faithful to the history of each character, I've just found an idea I like for how to arrange them all in an arc that I find more compelling than any version of the DC Universe I've read yet. And I'm very excited to share them one day.

I'm keeping those tightly guarded for now, but I have a few other works I intend to post here relatively soon.

One is a project ive been tinkering with on and off since college, which is a collection of short stories called "Rorschach's Prison Journal" detailing the few entries Walter Kovacs made in a new journal while he was briefly incarcerated in prison.

Another is an original comic universe I'm cooking up which would take an entire article to get into.

I want to get this fan fic section booming again on the site.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/16/2024, 9:55 AM
And I also intend to keep on developing Artificial Iron-Man and posting progress here.
MurfDyson
MurfDyson - 12/16/2024, 10:13 AM
@TheVandalore - That's really exciting news! This section has been dry as for a while and it's good to see idea/takes different from the mainstream. I'm glad to hear you have more in stock and look forward to what you have to offer.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/16/2024, 10:30 AM
@MurfDyson - heck yeah man! I really appreciate the positivity. I'd love to see others contributing again too!
bobevanz
bobevanz - 12/18/2024, 2:51 PM
AI is really going to change society as we know it, within 10 years the amount of automation and robotics will blow your mind
bobevanz
bobevanz - 12/18/2024, 2:52 PM
Also great fanfic! I love original content on this site, it reminds me of the good old days
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 3:00 PM
@bobevanz - thank you very much! I loved when there was a ton of writers contributing to the fan fic section back in the day and have been wanting to try to get a new wave of content going. Perhaps this will be a little bit of inspiration for others to share their work too!
bobevanz
bobevanz - 12/18/2024, 2:54 PM
Less made up rumors, and more original content! You hear that Mark and Josh?
ModHaterSLADE
ModHaterSLADE - 12/18/2024, 3:02 PM
This sounds awesome. If they ever reboot the MCU one day I wouldn't mind if they went with this direction with the mainline version of the character.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 3:12 PM
@ModHaterSLADE - this is seriously the best day of my life. Lol

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that 🙏
ModHaterSLADE
ModHaterSLADE - 12/18/2024, 3:37 PM
@TheVandalore - NP
harryba11zack
harryba11zack - 12/18/2024, 3:05 PM
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MarvelZombie616
MarvelZombie616 - 12/18/2024, 3:58 PM
@TheVandalore

I like the Alien tech original.
A.I. could also stand for Alien Ironman or Alien Intelligence.

The epilogue could also lean into the alien nature of the original armor, with a "death-signal" of the armor being sent into deep space.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 4:09 PM
@MarvelZombie616 - I actually initially called it Alien Iron-Man, that's how I first landed on calling it AI. Then I kinda liked Artificial so it was more of a link to Artificial Intelligence. And that the alien becomes his inspiration for AI Jarvis, and the Iron Man suit all together. But yeah, I'm still not certain which I like more. I must admit, I think Alien Iron-Man rolls of the tongue easier, but I like the thematic implications of Artificial Iron-Man. I'm not really sure which I prefer yet.

And as for the death signal, I like that. I definitely have ideas for telling more of the alien techs origins. Just haven't found an exciting or compelling enough entry point into exploring them. Yet.

Thank
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 4:10 PM
@MarvelZombie616 - oops, accidentally hit send before I finished thanking you for the feedback 🙏 I'm very grateful.
EducatedDefense
EducatedDefense - 12/18/2024, 3:58 PM
I’m sorry but i fall into wtf i this doing here? Also, considering the concept revolves around AI, i think it’s more than a little probable that AI was utilized in constructing this story, and i’m not interested in AI generated - or even partially generated- stories.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 4:13 PM
@EducatedDefense - lol the only AI that was used was in generating the banner image. The story was generated by my brain.

And the reason why it's here is because I posted it to the Fan Fic thread this website hosts, and @NateBest - in his infinite wisdom decided to promote my hard work to main.

But thank you for commenting. I appreciate your feedback.
EducatedDefense
EducatedDefense - 12/18/2024, 4:58 PM
@TheVandalore - I appreciate the reply. I’m glad to hear it about the non-use of AI!
thebamf
thebamf - 12/18/2024, 4:04 PM
Wow! Nice work! Very clever with the AI (Artificial Ironman) name and concept. Like @bobevanz stated, it too reminds me of the good old days of this site's fanfiction section.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 4:16 PM
@thebamf - thank you 🙏 it was a lot of fun to write. I plan on contributing more to the Fan Fic section soon, and I'm hopeful to see a few other people share their ideas. We have a fun community here with some talented people.
Malatrova15
Malatrova15 - 12/18/2024, 4:50 PM
This @thevandalore is more creative than Spielberg!
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 7:49 PM
@Malatrova15 - if I'm ever hired to direct this into a film, I'll probably cast Jonathan Majors as Tony.
Malatrova15
Malatrova15 - 12/18/2024, 8:27 PM
@TheVandalore - i mean.....Majors "crimes" are lesser than the ones that [frick]ed up Downey Jr's career back then . so it only makes sense
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/18/2024, 9:10 PM
@Malatrova15 - fair is fair.
bkmeijer1
bkmeijer1 - 12/19/2024, 8:12 AM
@TheVandalore - and there it is. Cool to see you're posting the ideas you talked about on here. It's definitely an intriguing direction. And where's the goo from!?

It's completely new, but recognisable as what I think are the core aspects (some more than others) of the character. And if you nail that's, it's a good interpretation imo.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/19/2024, 8:35 AM
@bkmeijer1 - thank you! I appreciate the supportive words.

17 minutes till the Superman trailer!!!!
bkmeijer1
bkmeijer1 - 12/19/2024, 9:02 AM
@TheVandalore - I didn't even pay attention to the time. You have a Superman story in store as well?
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/19/2024, 9:16 AM
@bkmeijer1 - I actually do. I have 2 ideas for adaptations for Superman. One is a long term plan for a full DC universe that I'll be working on for a very long time. Another is for a self contained Superman book that has a really interesting twist in how I intend to tell it. You think going into the book one thing has happened, but by the end of Superman's life story you realize you've been witnessing something else entirely that is 100% lore accurate, but you'll never see the twist coming if I do it right. That one I plan on writing up next and sharing here.
bkmeijer1
bkmeijer1 - 12/19/2024, 9:18 AM
@TheVandalore - sounds intriguing. I look forward to it. And now I know to expect a twist, so I'll be looking for hints.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/19/2024, 9:26 AM
@bkmeijer1 - challenge accepted lol I love a good twist, so I should write with the challenge that people who enjoy my work will be expecting them lol
ElricReturns
ElricReturns - 12/19/2024, 12:05 PM
This WHAT IF... I like it...

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TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/19/2024, 12:07 PM
@ElricReturns - holy shit! Hey old timer! Welcome back!

And thank you!!! 😁
ElricReturns
ElricReturns - 12/19/2024, 12:11 PM
@TheVandalore - idk if I'm BACK back. Logged in for the Superman trailer. Saw you were still causing a ruckus, and you are contributing now? Uh oh! Lol

Just wanted to give your story a click. Keep it up, kiddo.
TheVandalore
TheVandalore - 12/19/2024, 12:17 PM
@ElricReturns - hahaha I appreciate it, ye old bastard! Good to see you're still kicking around.

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