Robert Smigel On His Script For A Green Lantern Comedy With Jack Black

Robert Smigel On His Script For A Green Lantern Comedy With Jack Black

The screenwriter chats to Vanity Fair about his treatment for a Green Lantern comedy that never saw the light of day, much to the delight of many fans...

By MarkCassidy - Jun 20, 2011 12:06 PM EST
Filed Under: Green Lantern
Source: Vanity Fair

I'm sure most of you know about WB's plans to make a Jack Black starring comedy version of Green Lantern back in 2004. It's kinda become the stuff of internet legend, as it would seem that uproar from the fan community actually succeeded(at least in part) in making Warners rethink the idea and go with a more serious take.



Now Smigel(SNL, Late Night With Conan O'Brien) speaks to Vanity Fair about the whole thing. From where the original idea for a comedic take on the character came from, to Jack Black's involvement, to the movie WB ended up making with Ryan Reynolds that is currently diving opinion all over CBM. Here are some excerpts..

Asked whether Martin Campbell's movie has anything in common with his script, and where the idea came from to write it as a comedy came from..

I haven’t seen it, so I can’t speak to how the movie itself works. I know that when the idea was pitched to me to do a comedy about Green Lantern I did a quick review of the specifics of Green Lantern. And I thought, Well, of course this could be a comedy. Basically just the premise that the wrong guy gets the ring and can do all kinds of goofy visual jokes—because the visuals are so potentially ridiculous. What appealed to me about it on a comedic level was that, in order to be a superhero, this requires no physical skill or talent. All it requires is owning this ring. Automatically, that’s a comedic premise. I was told they’re doing it as a comedy, that’s the way they’re going, so I didn’t really think about whether this was a wrong thing to do. I just knew that this was the movie they were making, and when I thought about the potential as a comedy, I felt like, yeah, I can do this.


The first draft of his script ended up online and was torn apart by fans. Smigel talks about this as well as WB's decision to rethink things..

I wrote this first draft, which, unfortunately, is the one that’s online. A lot of it was in my re-write—the studio gave me notes and I did a re-write about a half-year later. The studio, when they gave me the re-write notes … at one point I had a long discussion about whether or not to make it Green Lantern or whether to create a make-believe character. They were already asking me, “What if it’s not Green Lantern? What if it’s very similar, but you change it and make it a fictional superhero so we can make that a straight comedy?” Maybe foolishly, I argued that I thought it was funnier to make it a real take on a real cartoon character. That was the first time I sensed that they were rethinking this, and I’d like to think that it wasn’t because they didn’t like my movie. And I totally get why they would rather make a serious superhero movie if [they] thought it could succeed. Because then it’s a tentpole and you can make sequels and all of that. The unfortunate part of it was … look, there were a lot of Internet angry reactions just to the idea of Jack Black.


Funnily enough(or not as the case may be), the version that did get made by Martin Campell does contain some fairly broad humor. And some of those funny construct ideas are kept too..

VF: Well, your script has Jack Black making a racecar bed to land on. Ryan Reynolds’s Green Lantern does save a helicopter by creating a racecar and a racecar track for it to land on.

Smigel: That’s kind of … interesting. Why did he create a racecar? Just for fun?

As in your film, Green Lantern’s best friend knows that he’s Green Lantern. Later his friend asks, “A racecar track?” and Hal responds, “ I saved them, didn’t I?”

Is his best friend a comic-book expert?

It’s a little different. Other superheroes aren’t mentioned like in your script. Although his friend does declare, “You’re a superhero!”

O.K., that’s different. That doesn’t seem … O.K., good. The Writers Guild sent me the shooting script and I didn’t even bother to read it. I was like, How could this possibly be anything like what I wrote? That seems like a staple of superhero movies. I don’t know, maybe I’m wrong. Maybe I should have read it. [Laughs.] I doubt I would have gotten any credit for two jokes or two ideas.


And finally, how did it all ultimately fall apart?..

I meet with Jack and the producer. Jack gives a long list of directors that he would be happy to work with … and then there’s just no traction. It just sort of petered out and we found out that they just changed their minds and wanted to do a serious Green Lantern. I never got a direct phone call about it. That’s sort of how Hollywood works.


For the full interview click the link below. It's good stuff.




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marvel72
marvel72 - 6/20/2011, 12:21 PM
this would of made the actual green lantern 2011 film look like the godfather.
FackMarvel
FackMarvel - 6/20/2011, 12:27 PM
Yea go figure Marvel butt pirate with something to say about GL.
Digitaria51
Digitaria51 - 6/20/2011, 12:51 PM
GL fans still mad about it LMAO. Lose.
write33
write33 - 6/20/2011, 12:56 PM
i think it's funny that fans were SO angry about this at the time and then WB went the other way, made a more "serious" GL film, and it tanks.

ah, irony......"You may find that having is not so nearly pleasing a thing as wanting". ... (go Spock!)
nuck82
nuck82 - 6/20/2011, 1:00 PM
yea go figure the guy named fackmarvel is talking shit out marvel fans
PaulRom
PaulRom - 6/20/2011, 1:02 PM
Man that sounds lame. Glad it didn't happen.

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Kaedus
Kaedus - 6/20/2011, 1:02 PM
Green Lantern was so bad I would much rather have watched a comedy version.
Niuhll
Niuhll - 6/20/2011, 1:18 PM
It would be a good idea as a parody short on Funny or Die or something, but never as a feature length film.
jazzman
jazzman - 6/20/2011, 1:21 PM
@write33

actually WB did not go the other way it still had a corny stuff in the movie it was not serious.

MarkCassidy
MarkCassidy - 6/20/2011, 1:25 PM
Honestly, now I wouldn't mind seeing it. Once it wasn't an established character. Like they say, there can be new Green Lanterns all the time. maybe this one is Jack Black! Once it was funny I wouldn't mind too much because we have seen what WB delivered with their "serious" take.
RockNRollCC
RockNRollCC - 6/20/2011, 1:27 PM
LOL! This would have been amazing! Green Lantern would have faught Parallax with an epic guitar solo! XD
marvel72
marvel72 - 6/20/2011, 1:29 PM
@ telavizion

no of course not what i'm saying is if they made this version & the ryan reynolds version.

the reynolds version would of looked like the godfather compared to this shit.

@ fackmarvel

having a username fackmarvel & i'm the green lantern hater.

even thou i read the tpb when they come out since rebirth but i'm still a marvel butt pirate.

i let you know mr butt pirate expert i've seen the film & its not all that really.

best bit hal jordan vs sinestro training session on oa.

so what are you trying to get at ? please tell me.

@ evilolive

thank you,i thought it was pretty straight forward.
CaptainPresley
CaptainPresley - 6/20/2011, 1:30 PM
A friend of mine in the business, read the script and said it was horrible. Even as a comedy. I'm completely happy how it all turned out. I love the movie.
WellDrawn
WellDrawn - 6/20/2011, 1:31 PM
Come on guys!!! Admit it, if the comedy version HAD been made, every person on this site would be bitching about there not being a serious Green Lantern movie.
At least the voices of the critics/fans have been heard, so any future sequels/reboots can only get better (I hope)
jaysin420
jaysin420 - 6/20/2011, 1:49 PM
Wow I never heard about this but it sounds perfect.

A big problem I had with the movie was the constructs made from the ring, I was into the movie and then he caught the plane on the tracks and like turned it into a train. I don't even know what happened honestly cause I couldn't stop laughing at that.

So yea, I think it'd be hysterical if they made a movie where the ring went to some a-hole and he made all kinds or ridiculous stuff with it.
jazzman
jazzman - 6/20/2011, 1:59 PM
@RorMachine

the movie itself was not much a serious take also
HelaGood
HelaGood - 6/20/2011, 2:01 PM
this wouldve been so much worse!!
elcaballerooscuro92
elcaballerooscuro92 - 6/20/2011, 2:12 PM
these should be good for a superhero movie sequel but without drake bell
HavocT
HavocT - 6/20/2011, 2:12 PM
Jack Black should stop being in movies...
vermillion
vermillion - 6/20/2011, 2:14 PM
I like Jack Black, but glad this never happened.

Jack Black could play Zeke from Infamous, or Seth Rogen could. :P Or just some fandom fat guy.
CapFan79
CapFan79 - 6/20/2011, 2:33 PM
I would have liked to have seen it!
marvel72
marvel72 - 6/20/2011, 2:49 PM
@ teabag

:D lmao,have you seen it yet.

the space scenes are the best & you've seen nearly all of them already.

i think its about 20 minutes max in space,maybe less.
ThePuzzler
ThePuzzler - 6/20/2011, 3:12 PM
I'm sorry but this would be so much better than what we got
CaptainDC
CaptainDC - 6/20/2011, 4:15 PM
Loved green lantern the movie, please never put Jack Black in this (laughing out loud)..... EVER
PirateOpossum
PirateOpossum - 6/20/2011, 4:27 PM
GL was outstanding across the board.. I don't see how any one could hate that film.
EarOne
EarOne - 6/20/2011, 5:34 PM
well..for those who've seen the ryan reynolds' film and hate it, maybe now this whole Jack Black idea ain't seem so bad, after all...if WB/DC's just gonna blow it in the end anyway....
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