TheRealTomServo Pitches Three Disney/Marvel X-MEN Films (Part One)

TheRealTomServo Pitches Three Disney/Marvel X-MEN Films (Part One)

Recently, a report dropped that Fox's merry band of mutants might finally tango with Marvel's box office kings, The Avengers. How do I think the X-Men should be integrated into the MCU? Read on below...

Editorial Opinion
By TheRealTomServo - Dec 13, 2017 06:12 PM EST
Filed Under: X-Men

(EDIT: X-Men pitches were the first articles I ever authored for this site. Some of the castings and plot points might seem familiar... because they are. I recycled some elements here and there. They were mine before I willfully took the articles down. Okay, that's all.)

 



Author's Notes

Alright, look. My feelings aside, it's looking like the Disney-Fox acquisition is almost definitely gonna happen. I personally feel the equality of the market is more important, but y'know, whatever. But hey, if this happens, and the X-Men (things aren't set in stone for the Fantastic Four just yet) come home to Marvel, how should it happen?

In place of the plot synopsis, unlike my usual format, I'll be writing out a summary of each film's major plot points, act-by-act. No specific scenes or details, so if the characters feel underdeveloped, well, I'm not sitting here writing out every dialogue exchange.

So uh, yeah, let's get to our first pitch!

 


 

T H E   U N C A N N Y   X  - M E N



Written and Directed by John Carney (Sing Street)

Starring

Dylan Minnette (13 Reasons Why) as Scott Summers/Cyclops
John Hawkes (The Sessions) as Professor Charles Xavier
John Malkovich (Dangerous Liaisons) as Max Eisenhardt/Magneto
Lucy Boynton (Sing Street) as Jean Grey/Marvel Girl
Lucas Hedges (Lady Bird) as Hank McCoy/Beast
Jharrel Jerome (Moonlight) as Bobby Drake/Iceman
Glen Powell (Scream Queens) as Alex Summers
Timothée Chalamet (Call Me by Your Name) as Warren Worthington III/Angel
Greta Gerwig (Frances Ha) as Lorna Dane
Jordan Peele (Key & Peele) as Jason Wyngarde
Charlotte Gainsbourg (Antichrist) as Moira MacTaggert
Devon Bostick (Okja) as Mortimer Toynbee
Marc Maron (Maron) as Warren Worthington II

Cinematography by Robert Yeoman (Moonrise Kingdom)

Music by Alexandre Desplat (Moonrise Kingdom)

Edited by Andrew Marcus and Julian Ulrichs (Sing Street)





Act One - Mutant and Proud

Scott Summers is a mutant that attends Saunders High School at the top of his class, serving as captain of the debate team, and is a frequent organizer of mutant rights rallies. His best friend, Hank McCoy, has a mutation he keeps at bay using an illegal X-gene suppressant. Bobby Drake, the local bully, often picks on Scott for his mutation. The bullying gets so bad that one day, Hank loses control and attacks Bobby, revealing his mutation to the entire school. Ashamed and embarassed, Hank runs off, and Scott follows. Bobby is almost unscathed by Hank's feral rage. In shock, he checks his abdomen and finds a defensive layer of ice over each area Hank tried to claw and gnaw at. He too runs home, scared for himself.

The publicized incident attracts the attention of Professor Charles Xavier, a renowned proponent of mutant-human coexistence. He and his mentee Jean Grey approach the duo one day, offering up enrollment into the mutant development school Xavier is opening, which boasts promises of a quality education and programs to help students master their own abilities. The two enthusiastically sign on.

Max Eisenhardt, a mutant terrorist living as a fugitive on the lost island of Genosha, approaches Alex Summers, the estranged brother of Scott who ran off after he discovered his powers, and Lorna Dane, Alex's girlfriend and proud mutant. He offers them refuge on the island and a chance to make something more of themselves and their kind. They agree, hoping to actually change the world for mutants.

Xavier and Moira MacTaggert, ex-SHIELD agent and Xavier's bodyguard, begin to mentor the trio, educating them on scholarly topics and partaking in exercises designed to personally suit each's skill set and help them master it. That night, Bobby makes his way to the school, falling unconscious. Scott sees him lying on the floor, though unsure of who he is due to the thick coat of ice surrounding every inch of Bobby's body. He takes him in and helps him thaw off. Bobby thanks them for their help and apologizes profusely to Scott and Hank, who forgive him.

Act Two - Merry Mutants

Xavier and the three are invited on a nationally-syndicated talk show, where Xavier markets his wishes for society's treatment of mutants, recounting the discrimination he faced growing up and the progress left to be made. The segment is bookended with promotion of Xavier's book. After filming, Scott and Hank talk on the side, citing the book pitch as odd and feeling general uncertainty about Xavier's true motivations. Jean overhears the talk. As she leaves to tell Xavier, Warren Worthington II, wealthy CEO of Worthington Industries, approaches her. He asks Jean for Xavier to consider his son, Warren Worthington III, who has been hiding his mutation, for enrollment. Jean agrees, convincing herself to let Scott and Hank's suspicions go unaddressed.

Jean tells Xavier, who in turn tasks her and Scott with going to visit Warren. When they arrive, Warren is sitting on his bed smoking pot, his wings spread wide. The duo summarize the concept of Xavier's school, and after much resistance, get reluctant agreement out of Warren to join, though with the condition Warren can leave if he doesn't warm up to it after a week.

Back on Genosha, Max has been successfully grooming Alex and Lorna into members of his Brotherhood, which also includes Jason Wyngarde and Mortimer Toynbee. Max has adopted a paternal role with the four, building a personal link with each. One day, Max gathers the Brotherhood and explains his plans to pull off a string of terror attacks across the United States in the name of mutant betterment, starting in Union Square. Lorna seems somewhat willing to comply, but Alex is more unsure. Trusting that sacrifices need to be made for the greater good, he eventually gives in.

That same night, Xavier gifts the five with a night in the city, with their destination being Union Square. The team, Xavier and Moira included, all begin to develop better friendships and bond, with Scott and Jean in particular spending time together. This is interrupted, however, when the Brotherhood arrive and begin their attack. The two factions begin fighting, though Alex stops once he and Scott notice each other on opposing sides. Scott, personally and politcally-hurt by his brother, instigates a fight that eventually stops once Max orders the Brotherhood to pull back. Jason briefly takes control of Jean, unleashing a powerful blast of psychic energy that rips through the entirety of the Square. Xavier notices this and kicks Jason out of her head. Both teams flee the scene.

Discouraged, the team returns to the school and head to sleep. Scott and Jean meet up in the courtyard. After Jean vents about her fear of her own abilities, for which Scott helps to comfort her, they further converse and generally bond, the romantic tension much more obvious. But when Jean leaves to get drinks, Scott notices a strange-looking door on one of the walls of the school. He sneaks in and finds the Blackbird and five combat suits, each tailer-made for the five students. This sets off an alarm, and the students and Xavier answer it. Scott demands to know the truth behind everything. Xavier reveals he and Jean had plans to assemble a combat unit to better relations with the public. They had known of Max's plans due to a machine called Cerebro, which Xavier shows them. He also discloses Max's past terror attacks that a SHIELD unit led by Moira MacTaggert helped to cover up in order to keep public fear of mutants from arising. Disgusted, Scott begins to leave the school, encouraging the others to follow suit. They stay behind, however, and Scott quits on his own.

Act Three - The Uncanny

Scott returns to Saunders, highly-regarded by his more liberal peers as a hero, and to his less accepting ones, more of a freak than before. Even still, he lacks the enthusiasm to return to his former roles in school, and his grades begin to plummet. He rejects Jean's apology when she shows up at his house to offer one up. In the face of Scott's absence and Xavier's exposed mendacity, the team struggles to work together when training in the Danger Room. As the school day ends, Jean confides in Moira her regret for deceiving Scott, who she grew to care for. Moira, though sympathetic, is genuinely unsure of how to help.

Back on Genosha, the Brotherhood begin to scope out their next target. Max decides to hit the opening day of the Iowa State Fair. After the meeting, Alex divulges to Lorna his doubts about Max's trustworthiness after manipulating them into pulling off what essentially amounts to a terror attack, and his questioning of whether or not he wishes to remain a part of the Brotherhood. Without his knowing, Lorna talks to Max about the Union Square attack and Alex's relationship to Scott. Max sternly tells her that during war, sacrifices must be made. She returns to Alex with a recount of Max's words, and the two agree to bail on the Brotherhood when they get to Iowa.

While in school one day, Scott sees students and staff gathered around the TV's in the cafeteria. On the screen is CNN, reporting the attack on the Iowa State Fair. Inspired to take action, Scott leaves the school and calls Moira, who takes him back to Xavier's school and rushes him into the team briefing. He makes amends with Hank, Bobby, and Warren, but is more hesitant to forgive Jean and Xavier.

They take the Blackbird to Iowa, and push forward in combating the Brotherhood. As the fight rages on, Alex and Lorna pull Scott aside and out of view, where Alex rushedly apologizes for leaving and choosing the wrong side. He tells Scott about the plan he and Lorna had to flee, and invites Scott. Seeing Jason set his sights on Jean, he refuses, and covers Alex and Lorna, letting them escape. After a tough fight and a hard effort to stop collateral, the team saves the day. The Brotherhood escape back to Genosha, utterly humiliated.

A few days after the Iowa Incident, with Xavier's objective met, Moira returns to her post at SHIELD. Warren decides to disenroll, not wishing to take part in superheroics. However, he promises to convince his father to invest in Xavier's school, so that one day it can expand and reach more mutants in need. Scott forgives Xavier, after agreeing that no future recruits will be tricked into joining the combat unit, and begins pursuing a romantic relationship with Jean. During a press conference, Warren Worthington II & III, the latter now public about his mutation, introduce the world formally to its next generation of heroes: the X-Men.

After-Credits Scenes

In a mid-credits scene, a man is hitting on a woman in a Canadian bar. She repeatedly rejects his advances. He gets frustrated, becoming increasingly aggressive and physical. Before he can pull her into the men's bathroom with him, a man (Luke Bracey, Hacksaw Ridge) knocks him out with a single punch. The woman thanks him, and unsure of how to address him, asks for his name. The man simply responds: "I don't know."

In a post-credits scene, Wanda Maximoff is watching a news report of the Iowa Incident. When a picture of Max flashes across the screen, she recognizes him, though unsure of where from specifically. The camera pans to her nightstand, where a picture of a much younger Max holding the then-newborn Wanda and Pietro in his arms sits.





So, what'd we think? Whether a good or bad pitch, do you feel it fits into the mold of the Marvel Cinematic Universe? Is there any alternative way you'd wish to see this done? As always, be sure to upvote, share, and leave your comments down below.

Anyways, it's been fun, but I've got movie sign! Cheers!



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FlixMentallo21
FlixMentallo21 - 12/13/2017, 9:43 PM
Some of the casting reminds me of another X-pitch I saw a while ago--one with Luke Bracey as Wolverine as well.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/13/2017, 9:56 PM
@FlixMentallo21 - That was mine. I took it down because it wasn't really up to standard. That's when my username was MovieCriticMike (or was it BillMurray?).
FlixMentallo21
FlixMentallo21 - 12/13/2017, 10:02 PM
@TheRealTomServo - I thought it looked familiar.

Nice job either way. If I could make a suggestion, if you plan to do a Sentinel story next, use Steven Lang instead of Bolivar Trask. Lang revived the program in the 70's X-comics.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/13/2017, 10:06 PM
@FlixMentallo21 - I actually have only two more of these planned before Batman: Knightfall and the three-film DCEU Rebirth intermission: The Wolverine and Avengers: House of X.
DetectiveCinema
DetectiveCinema - 12/13/2017, 11:42 PM
I like it. I definitely think your angle is the way to go, a team full of teenagers, especially with original 5. However, Luke Bracey strikes me much more as Victor Creed than he does as Logan.

John Hawkes as Xavier is the highlight.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/13/2017, 11:52 PM
@DetectiveCinema - Thank you, thank you. John Hawkes is super underrated.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/14/2017, 12:21 AM
@DetectiveCinema - I think Hawkes could really happen that shady, manipulative side of the character people often forget about.
DetectiveCinema
DetectiveCinema - 12/14/2017, 4:05 PM
@TheRealTomServo - Also, Malkovich seems like I really odd pick for me. Not saying he'd be terrible (he's a great actor), it's certainly unique and he would most definitely give an original spin on the character that's would set it apart from what Fox has done with the character.
ILoveStargirl
ILoveStargirl - 12/14/2017, 10:13 AM
That's a glaringly X-Cellent movie.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/14/2017, 10:35 AM
@ILoveStargirl - Thank you kindly!
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 12/14/2017, 10:41 AM
Really great pitch. The only issue I have is that this would be perfect for a first introduction to the X-Men, but since there have been 6 main X-Men movies already, I think this MCU reboot should be less of an origin story, and also integrate it into the MCU more clearly (like Homecoming did with Spider-Man).
Great read though as always.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/14/2017, 11:19 AM
@ELAYEM - True. I just thought that there's enough to differentiate this origin from the rest in terms of location, characterization, and general plotting.

Thank you though!
ELAYEM
ELAYEM - 12/14/2017, 10:43 AM
Also isn't Luke Bracey too tall, blond, and thin for Wolverine? After Hugh Jackman (who was great) I think people want a short stocky hairy guy.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/14/2017, 11:20 AM
@ELAYEM - Maybe. I just really can't see anyone else in the role, especially not one who looks close enough to an age where flirting with Jean isn't creepy.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/14/2017, 3:01 PM
@SimplyAz @dethpillow @noahthegrand @BakugoValentine @JaredRWebb12 @MikeZ @TheManWithoutFear @LivingWeapon @PrinceAwesome @IChangedMyName
TheManWithoutFear
TheManWithoutFear - 12/15/2017, 3:16 AM
Yeah not bad. The original 5 is definitely the way to go. Not sure about Magneto as the bad guy since he's been so consistently there in every FoX-Men film. I think i would choose Sinister and put the focus on cyclops (like you have here).

I also would like to have the team not know each other at all before getting to the mansion. I just like that formula better, that's just me. Also painting Bobby Drake as a bully seems out of character but i admit i have read nearly enough of Stan Lee's original X-Men.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/15/2017, 6:44 AM
@TheManWithoutFear - I tried to shake it up with the characters best I really could. That means changing a few characterizations around, but developing them into who we know them as now.

As much as I love Sinister, I definitely feel he's a more down-the-road villain. The Brotherhood have been done to death, but they're as perfect a jumping-off point for the series as it gets.
LivingWeapon
LivingWeapon - 12/15/2017, 3:53 AM
What a good pitch to see after being disappointed by Star Wars: The Last Jedi (probably going to get roasted for that). Mostly excellent cast, but because I'm an asshole, I have complaints, but I'll lay out my opinions on the cast one-by-one.

-Dylan Minnette: Pretty out of nowhere, but it really makes sense. It's like an NFL ugly sweater, no normal person would wear it out in public, but it's comfortable and it's got the Patriots logo on it, so it's good. What I'm saying is Dylan Minnette has the Patriots logo tattooed on his ass cheek.

-John Hawkes: Had no idea who he was before I looked him up. Apparently, he was the guy at the bar in From Dusk 'Til Dawn and the brother from Eastbound and Down that looks like the brother from Dexter. I saw a long clip from Winter's Bone with him in it, and he certainly has the dramatic chops for a role like Xavier, but I don't know if he has the levels of gravitas only held by Barack Obama and Patrick Stewart.

-John Malkovich: I like Malkovich, but much more as a crazy person, like his role in RED, than as a serious threat. Again, an unconventional choice, but I like where your head's at.

-Lucy Boynton: Ah, yeah, the sister from Murder On The Orient Express. Good at being weird. Not a big fan of her, but yeah, it could work.

-Lucas Hedges: Holy shit, has this guy been really good in some great movies, but he's never gotten the chance to really be a big star. Probably my second-favorite pick.

-Jharrel Jerome: Are you just putting him here because he was gay in Moonlight, and Bobby Drake is gay? That is gay-cist, my friend. Just kidding, yet another unconventional pick that like very much.

-Glen Powell: Godspeed, John Glenn. That's all I have to say, I thought the guy was good in Hidden Figures, but I also thought Miles Teller would win the Best Actor Oscar for Whiplash

-Timothee Chalamet: Best Actor on this list thus far, fantastic at banging Armie Hammer while underaged. Did well as a privileged asshole, would probably do well as a missing asshole with wings.

-Great Gerwig: Great actress, but I think after a little more practice, I'd like to see her direct her own Marvel movie. Not that Lady Bird was bad in any way, but it's just not the exact same as directing a superhero flick with assloads of CGI and a $200-million-plus budget.

-Jordan Peele: Another actor-director that should definitely direct a superhero flick in the near future. I liked him a lot in the Fargo TV show, so I'm interested in what he'd do with this role.

-Charlotte Gainsbourg: She was annoying in Independence Day 2, but that entire movie was annoying to me.

-Devon Bostick- Was that the kid in Diary of a Wimpy Kid, the skinny bitch? He was alright. I could see him as Toad.

-Marc Maron: That is one funny guy, love his comedy, podcast, and shows. I'd say you should have had Michael Stuhlbarg and Timothee Chalamet team up as movie father and son again, but at this point, I think what would be a relatively small role would be too small for the rising stardom of Stuhlbarg, if I may.

-Luke Bracey: I liked him in Hacksaw Ridge, but really seems more like a poor man's Charlie Hunnam, but maybe he could end up like Jesse Plemons, who basically was the poor man's Matt Damon, and then went to star in a wildly successful anthology show. Maybe it's the OJ one, maybe it's AHS, hell. maybe it's another season of Fargo. The point is I just don't think that he should be given such a massive role as Wolverine yet. I think the guy that takes over that role is going to have to be a bona fide A-lister to even begin to try to go toe-to-toe with Jackman.

A few picks of my own, if you will:

Cyclops: John Boyega- This is pretty controversial casting, but think he's got just the right amount of charisma and leadership, plus a shot of diversity that the normally white X-Men (excluding Storm) normally have. Also considered: Taron Edgerton, Asel Elgort, Jeremy Irvine, O'Shea Jackson Jr., Logan Lerman, Shameik Moore, Jack' O'Connell, Will Poulter, Dylan Minnette.

Jean Grey: Dakota Fanning- I like Fanning, and she's pretty underrated. Also considered: Lucy Boynton. It's a good choice.

Hank McCoy: Jeremy Irvine- He's always read as a really smart, really fun kind of actor. I think he could pull off the role of Beast pretty well. Also considered: John Boyega, Freddie Highmore, Logan Lerman, Dylan Minnette, Dev Patel.

Bobby Drake: Logan Lerman- Probably could have been Cyclops or Hank McCoy, but I think he'd pull off Iceman's attitude better than most. Also considered: Johnny Simmons.

Warren Worthington III: Kyle Gallner- I really think he'd be could with pulling off the whole "rich-kid" thing better than anyone else. I liked him a lot in Band of Robbers as an updated dated version of Huck Finn. Also considered: Chace Crawford, Penn Badgely.

Charles Xavier: Jeremy Irons- Traditionally a villain, I think Irons would really nail the role of Xavier as well as Stewart. Legally, as a DC actor, he can't act in a Marvel film until his contract with DC is bought out or expires, but it's nice to dream. Also considered: Mark Strong, Ruper Everett, Gabriel Byrne

Erik Lensherr: Christoph Waltz- It's a common choice, but I think it's most definitely the right one, due mostly in part to his role as Nazi officer Hans Landa in Inglorious Basterds, which is ironic considering Lensherr is Jewish. Also considered: Rutger Hauer

Logan: Tom Hardy: Another common, but correct choice. Tom Hardy is 5'9" which is certainly not even close to Wolverine's 5"2', but it is better than Jackman's 6"2'. I think he'd probably be lot more fun as a more savage Wolverine. Also considered: None

As for the other character, I really don't care about them as much as I do the one listed above.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/15/2017, 6:49 AM
@LivingWeapon - Speaking of Rutger Hauer, he was my original choice. But that's when I had Harvey Keitel as Professor X. And while those and your choices are great, I did try to cast younger, or cast those with the appearance of being younger. One thing Apocalypse (which I didn't hate, because I love me some good schlock) did right was try to capture the more youthful side of the team. But since the whole movie fell flat on its face (in the best way possible, though), I think the concept can be reused in the MCU.

Also, "What I'm saying is Dylan Minnette has the Patriots logo tattooed on his ass cheek." might be the greatest thing I'll read all week.
LivingWeapon
LivingWeapon - 12/15/2017, 11:07 PM
@TheRealTomServo - I totally understood where you were coming from with all of your choices. And thank you. "What I'm saying is Dylan Minnette has the Patriots logo tattooed on his ass cheek." might be the greatest thing I've written all week.
SimplyAz
SimplyAz - 12/15/2017, 8:54 AM
I enjoyed the story and fancast and would definitely watch it. Think it would translate well to the Marvel Cinematic universe.


Only casting I would change is have Viggo Mortensen as Magneto, he is five years younger than Malkovic, but would bring gravitas to the role and a certain masculinity.
Has the acting range to be able to essay Magneto's backstory and rage.
TheRealTomServo
TheRealTomServo - 12/15/2017, 10:12 AM
@SimplyAz - Mortensen would be great for a traditional Magneto, but the purpose of an oddball casting like Malkovich was to bring a fresh perspective to the character and do something really different with him.

Thanks for the read though! Much appreciated!
MikeZ
MikeZ - 12/17/2017, 2:44 AM
- I need to see John Hawkes bald before I can buy him as Professor X.
- I could get behind Malkovich as Magneto a bit. Maybe give him an accent as well?
- Honestly, I think Glen Powell would make a better Deadpool than Havok. Especially after this scene.



- A little unsure about Jordan Peele as Mastermind and Marc Maron as Warren Worthington Angel II. I mean, what?!
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